2020英语写作高分必备：取悦阅卷老师的6个高分亮点

2. 用心锤炼高级词汇, 力求语言的生动美

1. 词汇华丽变身:替换常用简单词

(1)动词变身

简单词汇高级词汇

say, believe,

think

figure, hold the view that, assume that, I am convinced that improve promote, enhance, strengthen

never give up stick to it, insist on doing, persist in, adhere to

should be supposed to do, It is wise/sensible/ makes sense to do, nothing could be better than. . . , It’s worthwhile to do, deserve doing, find it rewarding and enjoyable to do. . .

like

have a passion for, be fond of, fall in love with, have an

affection for

come approach, around the corner, up-coming

make enable, allow

thank appreciate, be grateful to, convey my heartfelt

help

do sb. a favor, go/come to one’s aid, with the assistance of,

give sb. a hand

use gain access to, be accessible to

(2)形容词、副词、介词变身

简单词汇高级词汇

more and

increasingly popular

more popular

big enormous, tremendous

very extremely, remarkably, overwhelmingly, pretty, perfectly famous accomplished, have a high reputation, distinguished

good amazing, unbelievable, incredible

bad disgusting, awful, terrible

important significant, vital, essential, fundamental, crucial

all kinds of a variety of, various, diverse

about concerning, relevant, related

输入经典

①On the one hand, too mu ch praise might lead to children’s lack of enthusiasm to explore new things, for they are afraid they won’t meet parents’ expectations. ②Considering the enormous benefits, which we can earn steadily from tennis practice, including preventing us from getting shortsighted and keeping physically healthy, we are lost in training course.

输出佳句

①The special day allows people to show their love and affection for(对……表达爱和情感) their fathers.

②It’s advisable/wise(是明智的)for people to use their cell-phones more appropriately/properly(更恰当地).

③Without sufficient preparation(没有充分准备), you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly and obtain satisfactory marks, let alone be admitted into a desirable university(梦想的大学).

④Tracy said she had already informed Susan of(通知Susan) the change of the appointment.

⑤People generally thought it impossible for the Chinese team to win the championship in the Rio Olympic Games, but they overcame many hurdles(克服许多障碍) and eventually worked miracles/wonders(最终成功).

⑥Drama Night is scheduled to (预定)be held on the evening of next Friday in the theatre hall.

⑦Additionally(此外), having been awarded scholarship twice in our school, I have excellent academic performance(极好的学术成就).

⑧This phenomenon has become a concern/focus (成为焦点)we must face today because of many serious consequences (许多严重后果)caused by improper use of cell-phones.

2. 变化所用词的词性

在作文中, 可以通过改变一个词的词性, 使文章富有变化, 让阅卷者感受到考生对词汇各种用法的掌握水平和灵活运用的程度。常见的变化词性的策略有名词变动词、动词变名词、形容词变名词等。

(1)名词变动词