读写任务型-材料概括型作文-写作训练-高三英语

“读写任务式作文”写作训练

Focus: 30词的摘要怎么写？

（限时训练十五作文）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.

The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.

One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.

以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。【忌照抄原句！忌添加自己观点！30词左右！】

1. 以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写，内容包括：

（1）自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况；【第一人称，过去时】

（2）“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因；【乘客主体是农民工，不懂购票；系统本身不够先进。其实这两点可以从阅读材料中找到，但是必须用不同方式来表达】

（3）给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。【针对上一段提出的两方面问题来写】

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读

材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语句连贯。

【请你练习】划出每段关键词；替换成不同表达方式；关键

词：transport during the Spring Festival period”，solutions，selling tickets on-line， However, passengers，blame

范文：Although it is as crowded as usual during the “transport during the Spring Festival period”, many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many passengers are

附：广东高考概括部分评分细则：1．完全糊涂地照抄原文，连人称都不改的，得0分；2．机械死板地照抄原文，只改人称的，得1分；3．稍微灵活地抄原文，改主语，宾语、原文词序的，得2分；4．创造性地抄，改主语，宾语、原文词序还有句子结构的，最多得3分。5．结构、用词，词性变化比较好的4至5分。st year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear.Reasons for the problems of buying tickets on-line are divided. For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to cope with difficult situations.To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available.

一、读写任务所提供的短文体裁多样包括：议论文、记叙文(如用一个故事引出一个话题或道理)、新闻报道/说明文（说明一种现象）等。题材多为当今社会热点问题，难度不会太高。用大约30词来概括这篇短文的意思，不能抄袭原文中的句子。要求概括精炼、到位。

二、概括部分包含几种能力1、看清文章的体裁和结构，反映出原文中作者的观点。2、具有意义筛选的能力，学会区分事实和观点、重要和次要、普遍与特殊、相关与不相关、原因和结果等复杂的逻辑关系。3、有用英文解释英文的能力，用自己简单的语言解释比较复杂的语言文字，不能抄袭原文。

3、 不同文体的概括方式1、议论文----找出论点、结论， 再补充论据 议论文的要点：①论点 ②论据 ③结论有的议论文是对两种不同观点或相反观点的论说，我们在作文时要把两种观点的内容都概括进去。第一篇

More and more students are doing part-time jobs in holidays. There are many advantages in students’ doing part-time jobs. For example, earning some money can support them. They can also learn a lot which can’t be