写作导学课

写作导学课

四级写作要求考生根据所规定的题目以及所给出的提示写出一篇短文，长度不少于120词。写作部分的分值比例为15%。考试时间30分钟。

根据全国大学英语四、六级考试委员会公布的《全国大学英语四、六级考试大纲（2016年修订版）》，四级写作考核的语言技能及要求如下：

1. 考核的要求

要求考生能用英语描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等；能描述简单的图表和图画；能就熟悉的主题发表个人观点；能写常见的应用文；能根据提纲、图表或图画等提示信息作简短讨论、解释和说明。中心思想明确，结构基本完整，用词恰当，语句通顺，语意连贯，能运用基本的写作策略。能在半小时内写出不少于120词的短文。

2. 考核的技能

写作部分考核学生就熟悉话题和情景用英语进行书面表达的能力，要求考生在规定时间内根据所给提示用英语写出一篇短文。

A. 思想表达

1) 表达中心思想

2) 表达重要或特定的信息

3) 表达观点、态度等

B. 篇章组织

4) 围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，重点突出

5) 连贯地组句成段，组段成篇

C. 语言运用

6) 运用恰当的词汇

7) 运用正确的语法

8) 运用合适的句子结构

9) 使用正确的标点符号

10) 运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等）

D. 运用写作策略

11) 运用合适的写作策略帮助表达

为了帮助大家更直观地了解四级写作评分标准，现将《全国大学英语四、六级考试大纲（2016年修订版）》附录中的评分样卷提供给大家参考，并且对各主要分数档的范文作简要点评，大家可以据此进行分析，看看自己目前处于一个什么样的水平。

全国大学英语四级考试作文评分样卷

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.

【14分档范文】

As is demonstrated in the picture, despite his mother’s angry face, the kid is unwilling to go to school, arguing that since he can get everything he wants to know through his phone, there’s no need going to school and acquiring them in class. It’s not uncommon to hear such argument among young students nowadays.

However, this kid’s understanding of going to school can be potentially harmful for following reasons. First, more than merely acquiring knowledge, going to school is also an act to get involved in society. We’ll learn how to build friendship and develop interpersonal skills, which is valuable experience in our life that cannot be learnt from phones. Besides, school also teaches us how to think, how to pursue knowledge actively, which cannot be replaced by cellphones because we can only gain knowledge passively from cellphones.

For reasons above, it’s high time that young students realized the value of school. Put down their phones and interact with others, and a bigger world is waiting for us to explore.

【范文点评】

范文紧扣主题，思维清晰，论证充分、恰当，而且结构严谨，分段合理，能够运用各种衔接手段让文章通顺、连贯。在语言表达方面，选词用词非常贴切，句式十分灵活多变，基本上没有错误。

【11分档范文】

This picture describes a conversation between a child and his mother. The child thinks it is not necessary to attend school because almost all information can be obtained from cell phone with Internet. That seems make sense, whereas, in my perspective, it is still essential for us to go to school.

We live in an information age when books and articles are available to everyone on the Internet. Knowledge becomes public. If we want to learn something such as mathematics, we can easily find some related books online. However, knowledge online isn’t your knowledge. You will need to learn it and turn it to your own knowledge. Schools, or maybe teachers, can conduct you how to learn well. Actually, they develop your study habits and tell you some methods when dealing with new difficult problems. How to learn is absolutely more important than what to learn. Although there are huge amounts of knowledge online, we still need to know how to master it. That’s why we go to school.

【范文点评】

范文能做到基本的切题与扣题，文字较为通顺、连贯，但是在段落安排上缺少一个总结段，论证过程有时略显牵强，并且还有少量的语言错误。注：红色标记的地方即为错误或不恰当之所在。