浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习 概要写作专练(一)至(二)训练

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2019年高考英语二轮复习《概要写作二》专项精练卷及参考答案

2019年高考英语二轮复习《概要写作二》专项精练卷及参考答案

2019年高考英语二轮复习《概要写作二》专项精练卷及参考答案1、阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

While numerous studies have looked at how individual habits may extend or shorten a person's life, far fewer have tried to quantify the benefits of practicing a number of healthy habits together, especially for people who begin only later in life. This was the focus of a 2007 study published in The American Journal of Medicine. The trial examined whether newly adopting a healthy lifestyle in middle age could still produce significant benefits, in terms of lower risk of heart disease.A group of 15,792 older men and women living in four different communities in the United States were tracked from 1987 to 1998. Aged 45 to 64 years, the subjects were examined for their weight,height,dietary intake,smoking habits and exercise.The researchers noted they did not include moderate alcohol consumption, because the study aimed to assess the effect of adopting new healthy habits, and beginning to drink in middle age is not widely recommended.Interestingly, at the beginning of the study only 8.5% of the subjects were practicing all four healthy habits. After 6 years, an additional 970 people had adopted all four of the primary habits. The most common switch was to begin eating at least 5 fruits and vegetables each day.The researchers examined the ‘‘successful switchers’’,and concluded that the subjects most likely to change habits for the better were older,female, those with a college education, higher income and without a history of high blood pressure.After four additional years of follow-up the healthiest lifestyle switchers enjoyed a 40% reduction in the risk of death from any cause, and a 35% lower chance of heart attack or strokes.2、阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

【浙江专版】2019高考英语二轮复习与策略讲练 专题1 读后续写 含解析

【浙江专版】2019高考英语二轮复习与策略讲练 专题1 读后续写 含解析

专题一读后续写读后续写作为浙江英语高考新题型,是一种常见的“给材料作文”,它要求学生在阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后,根据所给出的开头语和关键词语把这篇未写完的文章补充完整.读后续写要紧扣文章前文所述,去推想之后可能出现的情况,要展开合理、充分的想象,构思适当的情节,写成一篇完整的文章.读后续写有助于培养学生的想象能力、创新思维能力和语言表达能力.[选材特点]1.所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;2.多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强.[评分参考]阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;2.内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;4.上下文的连贯性.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右(词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分);2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.[写作步骤]1.精读文章,确定文章线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这有利于“顺藤摸瓜”.2.仔细审题,明确续写要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等,做到“心中有数”.3.回扣原文,想象续写内容.快速回读短文,揣摩文章的思路,结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容.4.拟写草稿,修改错词病句.结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,上下文的衔接.5.标出所使用的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语,最后誊写文字时,务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”.[方法技巧]1.在读懂原文的基础上,紧扣原文中心,以原文的结局为起点,写出故事情节的发展和变化.2.对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想,打开思路.多角度地想象出几种情况或结局,并从中加以最优选择.3.要注意前后照应,符合逻辑,防止自相矛盾.必须与上文紧密联系,使上下文融为一体.4.原文的主要角色,续文中都要安排“戏”,但不要引进影响事件结局的新角色.注意确保四个一致:1.要与原文的主题或作者的本来意图保持一致.2.要与原文的体裁、结构、写作手法保持一致.3.要与原文的语言特点和叙事风格保持一致.4.主要人物的思想行为、性格特点要与原文保持一致.[写作要求]阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldn't get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like you've got a problem,”Arthur said.“I'm afraid so.I'm in a big hurry and I can't start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said,“Thanks.If you're sure it wouldn't be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all.I'd be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other,“What happened?” But everyone had a different answer.Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase!She thinks I'm the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened,and without another thought,he started to run.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur【经典范文】【范文一】As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”And also at the moment,Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber.So Arthur didn't stop,but continued to run until he saw a taxi.He stopped it,jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver,“Go to the police station,please.The man shouting behind is the bank thief!”The taxi raced away like the wind.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened.Obviously,the police had already learned about the robbery.They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside,as Arthur had expected.Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other ter,with the information,the police caught the robber.The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.(Words:153)【范文二】As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”Thinking of the way the young man had behaved,he realized the young man might be the bank robber.So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi.The moment he got into the taxi,he told the driver the man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him todrive to the nearest police station.The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police,he heard a voice outside,“Help!Help!” To the surprise of Arthur,it was the young man.He had followed Arthur in another taxi.It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes.Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words:158)【范文点拨】原文所给关键词分类:地点:Park Avenue,the bank人物:The young man,people,the bank thief事件:suitcases,in the back seat,loud noise of an alarm,robbery,the shouts 在续写时,除了注意原文给出的关键词,还需要注意以下线索:1.Why did the young man look worried?2.What happened?But everyone had a different answer.3.Arthur became frightened and without another thought,he started to run.A(2016·嘉兴一中质检)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the street.It was a cold,silent winter night.His mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her operation.Jack had sold everything he had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the people and banks he could.But the real world is cruel.A large amount of money was still needed.To Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack saidto himself.Then he went to the bank,his workplace,again.For several days,he observed the bank and planned a theft.The next day,he went to work as usual.Everything seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always did.But no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always carried.At 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone home.However,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn't notice him,of course.When the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and everything turned dark,Jack came out from the bathroom.He first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his new suitcase.He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 ing a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the safes.The bank's security system wasn't very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of money.Several minutes later,Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.Paragraph 2:But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.【写作指导】本篇读后续写是一篇记叙文.主要叙述了Jack作为银行工作人员,利用职务之便,为了筹钱给妻子动手术,成功地偷走了银行的钱.根据第一段提示,此段应描写银行和社会对此事的反应;根据第二段首句提示,银行经理成为了最不幸的人.尽管Jack为妻子治好了病,但心理上也发生了很大的变化.【参考范文】After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.The police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one there.The next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspaper and TV reporters covering the strange theft.The clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including Jack.The police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet.But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.He seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his position.At last,with enough money for her operation,Jack's wife was saved.However,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the bank.He could not forget what he had done to the old man.His guilt deepened as time went by.Finally,he turned himself in to the police and accepted his punishment.【导学号:85602000】B阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.It was Mother's Day and I was shopping at the local supermarket with my son who is five years old,Tenyson.As we were leaving after finishing our shopping,we realized that only minutes earlier an elderly woman had fallen over at the entrance and hit her head on the ground badly.Her husband was with her,but there was blood everywhere and the woman was embarrassed and clearly in shock.Fortunately,a lot of people stopped to help out.While we were walking towards the scene,Tenyson became very worried about what had happened to the elderly couple.He said to me,“Mom,it's not much fun falling over in front of everyone.”Seeing that there was a flower stall(摊位) at thefront of the supermarket,he added,“Why shouldn't we buy the lady a flower?It will make her feel better.” I was amazed that he'd come up with this sweet idea who was only a five years old boy.So we went over and told the flower seller what we wanted.“Just take it,”she replied.“I can't take your money for such a wonderful deed.”By now medical staff had arrived,and were looking after the injured woman.There we saw the old man was also in great horror,but he tried to comfort his wife and held her hands tightly to encourage her to be strong.We gave the flower to the woman's husband and I told him it was from my son.At that,the old man started crying and said,“Thank you very much.”He then turned to me,“You have a wonderful son.Happy Mother's Day to you.”The man bent down and gave his wife the flower,telling her who it was from.Regardless of being badly hurt,the old lady looked up at Tenyson with love and appreciation in her eyes and gave him a little smile.And my son went down his body to the injured lady and tenderly said,“Happy Mother's Day to you,too.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:After a moment,the elderly lady was taken into an ambulanceParagraph 2:One year later,【写作指导】本篇读后续写根据文中所给的关键词,故事情节以及每段开头语可推知,续写内容为老妇人被送往医院.此处还应描写儿子的心理活动,以使文章内容、情感更加充实.根据第二段开头语可知,此处要讲述一年以后的事情,为了使故事情节更加完整,学生可以将事件回归到母亲节,作者母子在超市购物与老夫妇重逢的情形.在写作时,学生可以适当运用下列表达方式:worriedly,It seemed that...,there is (are)...等.【参考范文】After a moment,the elderly lady was taken into an ambulance by medical staff and was sent to hospital.The crowd gradually scattered.Tenyson and I went home.On our way home,he asked me worriedly,“Mom,will the elderly lady be OK since she was too old and she had badly fallen over?”I looked at him and said.“The elderly lady would be fine since there were so many people coming to help her.And you did a wonderful deed,my boy.”One year later,it was Mother's Day again.As last year,I went shopping,at the local supermarket with Tenyson.Suddenly,Tenyson said excitedly,“Look,Mom.It is that old woman.”I looked that way and saw the elderly lady and her husband.It seemed that she had recovered from her injury.We walked towards them and they were happy to meet us,too.The elderly lady hugged my son and whispered to him.“I will never forget the flower you give me,my sweet boy.”C(2016·金华一中模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.Jim was walking down a dimly lit street late one evening,hoping to see his lovely children as soon as possible.As he was walking quietly,Jim heard muffled(低沉的) screams coming from behind some bushes.Alarmed,Jim stopped to listen carefully.He realized that what he was hearing was the unmistakable sound of a struggle.Thinking of the danger,he became frightened.Only yards from where Jim stood,a girl was being attacked.Jim didn't know what to do.Should he get involved in it?He was worried about his own safety and regretted having suddenly decided to take a new route home that night.He was afraid of becoming another victim.He was wondering whether he should just run to the nearest phone and call the police or went to fight with the attacker to save the unknown girl.As he struggled from within,the girl's cries were growing weaker.Jim knew hehad to act fast.Yet he knew he couldn't just walk away from this.He realized that he could not turn his back on the fate of this unknown girl,even if it meant risking his own life.Now,Jim was not a brave man,nor was he athletic.Even he himself didn't quite know where he found the moral courage and physical strength.However once he was determined to help the girl,he became strangely transformed.He ran behind the bushes and pulled the attacker off the girl,who panicked very much.Seeing Jim prevent him,the attacker became crazy and began to fight with him.Jim became fearless and they fell to the ground,where they wrestled for a few minutes until the attacker jumped up and escaped.Jim felt very tired and he couldn't catch the attacker.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150词左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:Watching the attacker run into the darkness,Jim thought of the girl.Paragraph 2:“Dad,is that you?”asked the girl in wonder and amazement as she【写作指导】本文是一篇记叙文续写.一天晚上Jim在回家的路上听到争斗的声音,考虑到危险,他有点害怕.经过激烈的思想斗争后,他还是挺身而出.结果,他救的是自己的女儿.所续写的内容要积极向上,富有正能量,能够给读者以启迪并激发出读者强烈的社会责任感和维护正义的决心.【参考范文】Watching the attacker run into the darkness,Jim thought of the girl.Breathing hard,Jim rose from the ground and walked towards her.The girl wassitting behind the bushes,sobbing.Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly,he could certainly sense her trembling shock.Not wanting to frighten the girl further,Jim at first spoke to her from a distance.Jim said soothingly that the attacker had run away and she was safe.There was a long pause and then he heard some words from the girl.“Dad,is that you?”asked the girl in wonder and amazement as she walked from behind the bushes.To Jim's shock,there stood Jim's youngest daughter,who began crying.Hugging Katherine,Jim also cried.After the police arrived,they told them about the attacker in detail.He felt it was a right decision to rush to fight with the attacker.Now in his children's eyes,Jim is a brave man and a hero without fearing any danger.D阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.A friend of mine whose name was John Smith had a bad memory,which made him famous.He was so forgetful that he sometimes forgot what he was talking about in the middle of a sentence.His wife had to constantly remind him about his meetings,his classes—even his meals!Once he forgot he had eaten breakfast twice,at home and at school.His wife liked to remind her neighbors,“If John didn't have his head tied on,he would forget that too!”Since Smith was a professor at a well-known university,his forgetfulness was often an embarrassment to him.It wasn't that he was not clever,as some critical people tended to say,but just very,very absent­minded.One hot summer day,professor Smith decided to take his children to a seaside town about a three­hour train ride away.To make the trip more interesting for his young children,he kept the name of the town a secret.However,by the time they arrived at the station,Smith forgot the name of the town he was planning to visit.Luckily,a friend of his happened to be in the station.He offered to take care of the children while Smith hurried back home to find out where he was going.The professor's wife was surprised to see him again so soon.“Oh,my dear,I forgot the name of the town.”“What? You forgot the name? Maybe one day you will forget my name!NowI'll write the name of that town on a piece of paper,and you put it in your pocket and please,please don't forget where you put it.”Satisfied that she had solved the problem,she sent her husband off again.Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:“What is the matter now?”asked his wife.Paragraph 2:Hearing the cry,out rushed their neighbors,trying to find out what had happened.【写作指导】本文属于记叙文类读后续写.主要讲述了发生在一个健忘的教授身上的故事.内容上,根据记叙文的特点,故事要有曲折性,学生可以从故事情节和人物心理这两个方面进行写作.记叙文通过人物的动作来发展故事情节,学生可以在写作时尝试使用非谓语动词结构和倒装句式来表达动作的多样性.值得注意的是,续写的内容不能一味追求故事的离奇性而忽略文章的逻辑性.【参考范文】“What is the matter now?” asked his wife.“I just can't remember why I come back and where I am supposed to be going on such a hot summer day,”replied the professor.However,the real reason was that he forgot where he had left his children.Sensing something wrong,Mrs Smith didn't believe his words,because whenever he told a lie,he would blink his eyes usually quickly.“Tell me the truth,”ordered his wife.“As you told me,I didn't forget where I put the name of that town,but I forget the station where I left our children!” whispered the professor,his voice trembling.“What a bad memory!” shouted the wife.Hearing the cry,out rushed their neighbors,trying to find out what had happened.A fight between the couple was about to start when the professor's cell phone began to ring.His friend,whose patience had worn thin,phoned to complain.The professor apologized,got into his car and drove away,leaving behind a bunch of people outside the house.Being afraid that he would make matters worse again,Mrs Smith decided to follow him,who then called a taxi.By the time she caught up with her husband,the children were already back home safe and sound.【导学号:85602001】。

【浙江专版】2019高考英语二轮复习与策略专题限时集训4-概要写作-训练2-含解析

【浙江专版】2019高考英语二轮复习与策略专题限时集训4-概要写作-训练2-含解析

专题限时集训(四) 概要写作训练2A阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要.Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago,he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was purchasing it,the salesgirl said,“Oh,look,the game box hasn't even been opened yet.That might be worth some money.”Peter examined the box and,sure enough,it was completely covered in factory ­sealed plastic.And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.“You should put that up for auction(拍卖) on the Internet,and see what happens,”the salesgirl said.“Yes,you're right.People like something rare,”Peter agreed.“I can't imagine there being very many unopened boxes of this game still around 40 years later.”“Don't forget to tell me if you sell it,”the salesgirl smiled.“No problem,”Peter said.After he got home,Peter went online to several auction websites looking for his game.But he couldn't find it.Then he typed in the name of the word game and hit search.The search result was 543 websites containing information about the changes of the game.Over the years,the game had been produced using letters in different sizes and game boards in different colors.He also found some lists of game fans looking for various versions of the game.Peter emailed some of them,telling them what he had.Two weeks later,Peter went back to the shop.“Hello.Do you still remember the unopened word game?”The salesgirl looked at him for a second,then recognized him and said,“Oh,hi!”“I've got something for you,”Peter said.“I sold the game and made $1,000.Thank you for your suggestion.”He handed her three $100 bills.“Wow!”the salesgirl cried out.“Thank you.I never expected it.”【写作指导】通读所给文章可知,本文属于记叙文.首先要点一应表明主人公Peter一个月前买到了一款稀有的文字游戏;要点二要交代在售货员的建议下,Peter将此款文字游戏挂到网上拍卖;要点三讲的是故事的结果:文字游戏卖了1 000美元,Peter拿出300美元给售货员作为答谢.由于本篇短文为记叙文,只需按照故事的情节发展进行写作即可.写作时要把握好要点,全面准确地呈现短文内容,并注意语法结构和词汇的准确性.【参考范文】One month ago,Peter bought a word game and found it was made about 40 years ago and hadn't been opened yet,which means it was rare and valuable.(要点1) He followed the salesgirl's suggestion and put it for auction on the Internet.(要点2) The word game was sold at $1,000 and Peter gave the salesgirl $300 in return.(要点3)【导学号:85602029】B(2016·宁波市镇海中学质检)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要.Why do parents have such a difficult time to communicate openly and honestly with their teens? For this,there are many reasons but most of them stem from not being able to properly understand their teens.It is a dangerous gap because parents will have to communicate with their teens about a wide variety of issues during the most important years of their lives.Thus,parents must know how to communicate openly and honestly with their teens.Here are a few tips to make communication easier between parents and teenagers.As parents,you should listen to what children said carefully and pay muchattention to it.Make them feel as if their views really matter,which not only helps your discussions with your teen but brings you closer to him.Meanwhile,try to remember some of the negative feelings you experienced as a teenager and apply it to your teen's situation.Never make negative remarks to your teen about what she has said or done.Remember how much courage it would have taken for your teen to come and talk to you about his personal issues.So listen respectfully.If your teen is unusually angry,it may be time to spend a bit of quality time with your teen to determine what is wrong and where it is coming from.It is,therefore,necessary for parents to strive to keep lines of communication open at all times with their teens.Try to remember what it was like to be a teenager and how vulnerable(脆弱的) you felt.Then you will be well on your way to helping your teen communicate more openly and honestly.【写作指导】本文首先提出问题:很多家长不会和孩子公开、诚实地沟通.接着就该问题提出几点建议:认真倾听孩子的心声;学会联系自己儿时的经历和孩子换位思考;学会尊重地倾听.最后总结:学会倾听,和孩子好好交流.【参考范文】There are various reasons for a difficult communication between parents and their teens.(要点1)Here are some tips:Try not to talk down to your teens.Imagine what it would be like to be a teen.Listen respectfully to your teens.Don't ignore your teens' feelings.(要点2)As long as you keep lines of communication open and remember what it was like to be a teenager,you will be well on the way to communicating with your teens.(要点3)C阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要.During all kinds of holidays,millions of people will buy gifts for loved ones.Which is great—except that tons of those people will make the same glaringmistake,and buy the wrong gift.What's going on?Gift buying has become a deceivingly selfish pursuit.We don't actually look for things people want to receive.Instead,and to many of our gifts' detriments,we tend to look for things that we want to give.It's a subtle,but pretty significant problem.Research has shown that givers tend to value the gifts they buy considerably more than recipients.Gifts are valued roughly 10 to 33 percent less by recipients than what givers paid for them,Joel Waldfogel noted in Scroogenomics:Why You Shouldn't Buy Presents for the Holidays,his 2009 book on gift­giving.The discrepancy seems to come from a simple misplaced belief that thoughtful presents are the best presents.They are not.In fact,they might just be the worst presents.The more thought you put into a present,the more likely you are to stray from buying what the person you're buying the present for actually wants.In other words,people let their gift­giving egos get in the way of great presents.Especially when the recipient is someone they want to show they know really well.Fortunately,the answer to our collective insistence on guessing what people want is simple:stop it.If that's too callous,or impersonal,there's another helpful rule of thumb.Instead of buying restrictive gifts,like gift cards for specific stores,buy gifts that allow for flexibility,like gift cards that can be used more broadly (or,better yet,cash).People tend to prefer gift cards to actual gifts,and cash to both,Steffel explained.Steffel's latest research,which focuses on gift card giving,points to exactly this point—that versatility is the key to better gift giving.【写作指导】通读全文可知,本文是一篇议论文,按照提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的顺序来组织文章.文章第一段提出问题:许多人会买错礼物;第二至四段分析问题:购买礼物者往往只会考虑自己的感受而忽视接受礼物的人的感受,考虑得越多则越容易买错礼物;最后一段提出解决问题的方法:礼物的灵活性和多用途性是解决问题的关键.写作时,学生应当全面呈现这些要点,确保不遗漏.【参考范文】Although many people will buy gifts during holidays,some of them may buy the wrong gifts.(要点1) They buy what they want to give,instead of what the recipients requires;(要点2) they tend to value the gifts they buy considerably more than recipients do.(要点3) The thoughtful presents might be the worst presents,and we should stop it.(要点4)Instead of buying restrictive gifts,we are supposed to buy flexible ones—versatility is the key to better gift giving.(要点5)【导学号:85602030】D阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要.Is there a way to turn back the clock on your age? A new study says yes.Exercise can make you younger.At least it can lower your fitness age—that is the measure of how well your body works.A study of athletes in the National Senior Games found that their fitness age was more than 20 years younger than their chronological age.The games took place in the Midwestern state of Minnesota.Tony Diamond took part in the games.Every morning he went to a local park and walked fast for an hour.Then,the retired navy captain ran for an hour.Two or three times a week,he went to a gym for muscle training.Mr.Diamond won three medals at the 2015 National Senior Games.“My current age is 86 years old,and my fitness age is 44.I think I have such a good number because I do a lot of exercise during my life.I have been exercising since I was a little boy.”Helen White is a basketball player.She also teaches the sport to senior groups.And she plays pickleball.She won a sliver medal in pickleball at the 2013 National Senior Games.“I'm 62 years old and my fitness results showed that I was 32 years.”Ms White and Mr.Diamond are some of the 5,000 Senior Games participants who took part in the fitness age study.Pamela Peeke was an assistant professor of medicine at the University of Maryland.She worked on the study with Ulrik Wisloff at the Norwegian University ofScience and Technology.Mr.Wisloff developed a fitness calculator.An online calculator is available for anyone to use for free.Ms Peeke says there are benefits from using this test.The National Senior Games take place every two years.It is a competition for athletes older than 50.The games are a variety of sports.This year the average age of the people competing was 68,but their average fitness age was 43.【写作指导】本文是一篇议论文.议论文通常包括论点、论据和结论,因此写议论文的概要时,最重要的是要找出主题句(the topic sentences)、支撑句(supporting sentences)和结论句(conclusion sentences),找准主题句尤其重要.本文第一段中出现了主题句,提出锻炼的益处.后面几段涉及到的是论据.【参考范文】Exercise can lower one's fitness age.(要点1) A study of athletes in the National Senior Games found that their fitness age was more than 20 years younger than their chronological age.(要点2) Mr.Diamond looks younger than his chronological age because he goes to a gym regularly.(要点3) Ms White is 62 years old but her fitness age is 32 years old because of regular exercise.(要点4)。

浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习 写作组合限时练(一)至(四)训练

浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习 写作组合限时练(一)至(四)训练

写作组合限时练(一)(限时50分钟)Ⅰ.应用文写作假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的传统文化,想去文化底蕴深厚的城市旅游。

请你给他写一封电子邮件,推荐一些他可能感兴趣的景点。

内容包括:1.推荐地点;2.推荐原因。

注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适应增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考范文:Dear Jack,I’m more than pleased to learn that you’re coming to China for a visit. And I’ll recommend some historic places.The first city you can’t miss is, of course, Beijing. There’re many royal gardens in Beijing, of which the Summer Palace is the most famous. Besides, the city of Hangzhou, known for its historic relics and natural beauty, will never fail to attract you with its West Lake, near which are scenic places such as Leifeng Pagoda and Lingyin Temple. Other historic cities are Xi’an, Kaifeng and so on.I hope my advice will be helpful, and wish you a good trip.Yours,Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

I had much practice climbing drainpipes (排水管) as a teenager, when I forgot my keys. It wasn’t a skill I expected to need again on a sunny bank holiday.I’d arranged to meet my wife in the beer garden of a local hotel. As I approached, I could hear raised voices. I thought maybe some people had drunk, but as I walked into the garden, I saw everyone looking up, including my wife. Following their sight, I saw a child on top of a roof sticking out from the hotel.I realized the people in the garden had arranged themselves underneath, in the hope that one of them would be able to catch him if he fell. From the other side of the roof, I heard a woman’s voice begging him to sit down and keep still. It was the boy’s mother, who had tried to climb up to him and become trapped halfway. The child ignored his mother’s voice and his every movement brought a fresh gasp (倒抽气) of anxiety from onlookers. The firemen had been called, but no one knew how long they’d take. I imagined the firemen working their way across the city, slowed by holiday traffic. The thought of looking on helplessly as the boy lost his footing made me feel sick. Scanning the side of the building, I quickly worked out the quickest way up and made for the drainpipe.It was old and looked as if it might break away from the wall, but I managed to quickly climb onto the roof. Above me, the child paid me little attention and didn’t appear to be frightened at all. He was no older than two. I realized I’d be unable to predict his responses. My only choice now was to keep climbing. The roof narrowed as it rose and I planted myself as firmly as I could on the edge, caught the boy and helped him on to my lap.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

【高考英语满分作文】2019 浙江卷(概要写作)

【高考英语满分作文】2019 浙江卷(概要写作)

高考英语满分作文:2019•浙江卷(概要写作)一、试题展示(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, "We’ve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict." By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they’re building their children’ confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that’s insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents’ praise has put them.Still, don’t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging a giving too much. Kids will feel like they’re not good enough or that you don’t care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praiseis sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward."We should especially recognize our children’s efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal," says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing to remember is that it’s the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he’s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate (相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it.二、思路点拨本篇概要写作是浙江新高考改革中的亮点,延续了2018年11月浙江英语考试试卷中的概要写作题型。

浙江专版2019高考英语二轮复习专题2概要写作讲练

浙江专版2019高考英语二轮复习专题2概要写作讲练

浙江专版2019高考英语二轮复习专题2概要写作讲练概要写作作为浙江英语高考新题型,就是对所读过的文章简要概括,写出文章的中心大意,也称之为摘要。

写概要时,读者要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来,而不是抄袭文章的原句,更不是把细节性信息作为中心,而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换,对文章的具体信息进行概括,再用合适的语言表述出来。

这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力,同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。

因此,概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达的,是二者的有机结合体,是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。

[选材特点]1.所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;2.所选材料体裁没有限制,以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。

[评分参考]阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;3.上下文的连贯性;4.对各要点表达的独立性情况。

注意:理解准确,涵盖全部要求,完全使用自己的语言,准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇,得分相应比较高。

相反,如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象,得分档次将会大大降低;所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。

[写作步骤]1.仔细阅读原文,掌握文章的主旨大意。

在阅读过程中,要注意搜寻要点,如议论文中的论点、论据,记叙文中的发展、高潮、结局等。

2.列出文章的要点和各段落的主题句。

可以用下划线标记,也可做笔记,将要点逐一列出。

3.分析原文的内容和结构,将内容分项扼要表述,并注意在结构上的顺序。

4.写出初稿。

根据列出的要点和对原文的理解,用自己的语言组织内容,尝试写出概要。

5.修改、定稿。

认真阅读初稿,对照原文,检查是否漏掉重要内容。

检查并确定拼写、语法、标点正确无误。

检查是否符合规定的词数要求。

[方法技巧]在掌握一定的解题步骤后,为了顺利完成概要写作,学生在写作时还需要注意以下方法技巧。

浙江省2019届高考英语二轮复习 写作提升练二 应用文 含答案

浙江省2019届高考英语二轮复习 写作提升练二 应用文 含答案

试题习题、尽在百度写作提升练(二) 应用文1假定你是李明,上个月,你校学生会组织了一场“校园歌手大奖赛”,受到同学们的欢迎.请你给校园英文报写一篇80词左右的报道.活动内容包括:1.各班选拔;2.学校决赛;3.评奖颁奖.2假如你叫李华,你的好友李林发QQ向你询问如何写好英语作文.请根据以下提示回复.内容包括:1.收集好词好句并记忆;2.背诵范文;3.经常练笔.注意:1.词数:80左右;2.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;3.可适当发挥,注意行文连贯.Dear Li Lin,Glad to receive your message.At present I am writing to tell you how to attain a highly readable composition.仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度Look forward to hearing from you.erely,Yours sinc Li Hua3你校王伟同学昨天下午在放学回家的路上看到一位老校报英文编辑李华,假如你是光华中学的你决定将此事发布到使老奶奶得到了及时救治.他立刻将她扶起来,同时拨打了120,奶奶摔倒在地,:.内容包括校报英文版并倡议全校同学向他学习4面对这.,但今年学生却没有表现出像往年的兴趣和热情一年一度的校园文化节又拉开了序幕上周末你班也进行了一这引起了同学们的讨论.,一现象,有人提出校园文化节还要不要举办的问题.,请你根据下面所提供的内容对讨论结果做一总结场讨论.大多数同学都支持校园文化节:支持的原因; 1.给学生创造了展示自我才华的舞台; 2.有利于提高学习兴趣. 活跃校园气氛3.丰富校园文化,:注意;左右词数:801.; ,不计入总词数题目和开头语已给出2..,以使行文连贯3.可适当增加细节ornot To becontinuedThe annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again,but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before.仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度5向为环保”为题,为响应国家厉行节约的号召,请你以“厉行节约——为资源,假设你叫王平.: .该英文信应包括以下内容某英语报社编辑写信,表达你对厉行节约的看法; 1.节约与资源的关系;2.节约与环保的关系;3.举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约.4.倡导社会保持节约的优良传统: 注意;左右1.词数80.以使行文连贯2.可适当增加细节,6演.上周末英语俱乐部组织了一次英语演讲比赛.请你给学校英语报写一篇报道假定你是李明,:讲内容包括文明行为 3.1.环保 2.东西方文化差异; ,题目已为你写好:1.词数80词左右注意. 以使行文连贯2.可适当增加细节,Club English OurofContestSpeech English仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度7)(2017·浙江台州一模内容应包Thank-you Note.毕业在即,,请你用英文给你的英语老师杨老师写一张假设你是李华:括; 表达对老师的感谢1.; 陈述老师对你的帮助和影响2.. 表达对老师的祝福3.:注意;右80左1.词数.以使行文连贯可以适当增加细节,2.8)(2017·浙江五校联考请你回国.作为成员之一,,刚刚访问完英国的姐妹学校Morley College假定你是中学生李华:内容包括Mr.Declan写一封感谢信,Morley College给的校长; 感谢对方的热情款待1.; 2.你的收获. 邀请对方来访3.;左右词数注意:1.80仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.参考答案写作提升练(二) 应用文1Campus Singer Grand ShowLast month,the Campus Singer Grand Show was finished successfully.The grand show roughly went through two stages.First,a competition is held in each class,after which the best ones were entered for the final competition of the school.After the competition,the competitors were ranked and prizes were presented to the best singers. The show has received positive comments from the students,who say it has provideda good chance for us students to refresh ourselves from our daily studies.2Dear Li Lin,Glad to receive your message.At present I am writing to tell you how to attain ahighly readable composition.First and foremost,an effective way,to the best of my knowledge,is to collectclassic words and sentences,processing them over and over until you bear them in mind.The more vocabulary you accumulate,the more freely you can apply them when writing.What's more,reciting fantastic possible versions and sentence structures worth imitating can get you to make enough preparations in st but not the least,it is a good reward to practise writing.Only by exercising can you put to use what you have gathered.Look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度3Dear classmates,I'm more than pleased to share with you Wang Wei's story.On his way home yesterday afternoon,Wang Wei noticed an old lady fall to the ground and didn't hesitate to help her.After helping her to safety,he dialed 120 and the granny got timely treatment in hospital.I was deeply impressed by what Wang Wei had done.There is no doubt that such a deed should be encouraged.People nowadays seem to be getting more and more unwilling to help others.Actually,it is our duty to make our world a more harmonious place.I strongly advocate that everyone should learn from Wang Wei.That's all.Thank you.4To be continued or notThe annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again,but thisyear students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before.Manystudents believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents.Apart from helping students promote their interest instudy,a series of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active.In addition,more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions.On the other hand,students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can't be found in the book.5Dear editor,I'm Wang Ping.I'm writing to offer your newspaper an article “Trying to SaveBoth for Natural Resources and the Environment.”Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day.Meanwhile,saving can help us avoid producing waste.As students,we should make ourcontributions.For example,we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books.In this way,more trees would be saved.We Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame,so we call for everybody's action to save what we can to make our beautiful life last forever.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Wang Ping6English Speech Contest of Our English Club仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度Last weekend,the English Club in our school held a speech contest,which covered a wide range of topics.On top of the list are speeches about environment protection,in which we talked about ways to protect our environment.Next come those about the differences between Chinese and Western cultures.And finally,a lot of our contestants talked about what accounts for good behavior,especially for us students.The speech contest received high praise and is seen as a chance to promote our English studies.7Dear Ms.Yang,I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for what you have done for me.I'mlucky to have you as my English teacher.English is never as an easy subject for me.And I'm not a smart or confident guy who can manage all the difficulties with your patience and devotion.I hope in the future I can do the same for others,always ready to reach out.With the note is a sweet chocolate bar.Wish you a happy and sweet life.Sincerely,Li Hua8Dear Mr.Declan,I'm writing to express our sincere gratitude for your hospitality and generosity during our stay in Britain.It was so nice and considerate of you to have prepared us so many cuisines of British flavor!We were also deeply impressed by the comfortable accommodation you arranged for us!And the activities you organized not only broadened ing.We now have a deeper insight our horizons but also promoted our mutual understand into British culture.Thanks again for all your efforts!We hope you can come to China and visit us in the near future!Best regards!Yours sincerely,Li Hua仔细审题、认真作答.。

浙江省2019年高考英语二轮专题复习写作提分特训(一).doc

浙江省2019年高考英语二轮专题复习写作提分特训(一).doc

浙江省2019年高考英语二轮专题复习写作提分特训(一)写作提分特训一第一组第一节应用文写作满分15分为配合学校开展的垃圾分类工作,学生会向全校学生发出了“垃圾分类,从我做起”的倡议。

请你代表学生会,用英语写一封倡议书,内容包括 1.垃圾分类的做法; 2.垃圾分类的益处; 3.呼吁全体学生一起参加。

注意1. 词数80左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇垃圾分类garbage classification;残羹剩饭leftovers;废旧电池used batteries Dear fellow students, Our school has started a program of garbage classification. One possible version Dear fellow students, Our school has started a program of garbage classification. Different kinds of garbage are required to be sorted out and placed in different dustbins. Paper can be recycled,while leftovers can be collected as food for pigs or processed as fertilizer for plants. Above all,such harmful things as plastics and used batteries should not be mixed with other wastes. The program is of great benefit. We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable garbage and harmful things will not pollute our environment after special treatment. Let’s work together for a better campus第二节读后续写满分25分阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

浙江省2019届高考英语二轮复习 写作提升练一 应用文 含答案

浙江省2019届高考英语二轮复习 写作提升练一 应用文 含答案

试题习题、尽在百度写作提升练(一) 应用文1(2017·11浙江)假定你是李华,得知外教Mr.Hall寒假不回国,你想邀请他到你家过春节.请给他写一封信,内容包括:1.时间;2.家人;3.活动.注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.2(2017·浙江金华高三9月十校联考)假定你是李华,暑假参加了某微信公众号(WeChat official account)举行的英语原版书阅读活动,并写了一篇书评(a book review).现你用英语给外教Sam写一封信,希望他能帮你当面批改书评,信的内容主要包括:1.简要介绍活动;2.提出请求;3.提议见面时间.注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度3(2017·浙江高三“五校联考”第一次考试)假定你是李华,最近你发现有学生将共享单车停到了校园内并且上了私锁.请你就此现象,写一份倡议书发表在校英文报上,倡议同学们文明使用共享单车.内容提示:1.共享单车带给人们的便利;2.如何正确使用共享单车.注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.参考词汇:共享单车:shared bikesLi Hua4(2017·吉林长春一模改编)假设你是李华,校学生会主席,想邀请外教Henry先生一起参加学校举办的中秋节晚会.请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.介绍写邮件的目的;2.晚会时间、地点:9月30日晚6点、学校报告厅;3.晚会内容:同学们表演节目、吃月饼、赏月.注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度5(2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试二次仿真模拟)第一中学校委会要招聘一位课外活动老师,请你写一则招聘启事.内容包括:1.年龄不大于40岁的男教师,至少有3年的工作经验.2.计划、组织高一学生15:00至16:00的课外体育活动.3.每周3次,报酬面议.4.联系人:刘莉(Tel:130********)注意:1.80词左右;总词数不含已给部分;2.参考词汇:课外活动extracurricular activity;体操physical exercises;联系contact Extracurricular Activity Teacher NeededThe Committee of No.1 Middle School6(2017·浙江台州期末)假定你是李华,一位热衷中国文化的美国朋友James来信想了解你最近参加的一次校园“诗词大会”(Poetry Conference)活动.请用英文给他写一封回信,内容包括:活动目的 (走进中国诗词,感受传统文化……)活动内容 (诗歌诵读、古诗词欣赏……)活动体验 (……)注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度7)(2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试三次仿真模拟因你很需要这份工作,40岁以下的销售经理,假设你是王伟.你从电视上获悉某公司要招一名:要点如下,此写求职信一封; 年龄及教育背景1.; 工作经历及能力2.; 爱好及特长3..性格特点4.)不计入总词数开头和结尾已给出,:1.80注意词左右(master's degree;北京外贸大学商学院硕士学位销售经理marketing manager;2.参考词汇:Business School of Beijing Foreign Trade UniversityJune 8Dear Sir/Madam,Your early reply will be appreciated.Yours ever,Wang Wei8请你你校学生会组织学生举办了一次“海报设计创新赛”,受到同学们的欢迎.假定你是李明.: 活动内容包括.给校园英文报写一篇报道; 体现创新意识反映校园生活,海报内容1.:. 2.同学们积极参与:注意;题目已为你写好左右词数1.:80,仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.Creative Design of Posters参考答案写作提升练(一) 应用文1Dear Mr.Hall,I'm writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19.It's traditionally a time for family reunion,so my parents and my brotherwill all be there.We'll make dumplings together and have a big dinner.We'll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.You may even get a gift from my parents.If you're able to come,I'll go and pick you up at your place.Best,Li Hua2Dear Sam,I'm writing to ask for a favor from you.As a bookworm and English lover,I signedup for a reading activity on a WeChat official account this summer,where I was expected to read some English books and submit a book review.Now I have written one on Wonder Boy,which you highly recommended last term.But I am not sure whether I havegot my ideas across,so I really hope you can help me to correct the mistakes and giveme some advice on writing.If possible,can I come to meet you on Sunday afternoon? Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua3仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度My dear fellow students,Recently I've noticed shared bikes,such as Mobike and ofo,parked in ourcampus,and even own locks are put on them.Shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “last mile” problem.Hence,shared bikesshould be left in public for next users.It is morally wrong that we take possession of one for our own selfish interest.I advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this service.Li Hua4Dear Mr.Henry,I'm Li Hua,Chairman of Students' Union.It's a great honour for me,on behalf ofmy fellow union members,to invite you to attend our party.The Mid-Autumn Festival is around the corner,which is a time for family members and loved ones to get together.To celebrate this Chinese traditional festival,a party will be held at thelecture hall of our school at 6 pm on Sep.30th.At the party there will be a lot of performances and we will enjoy a variety of delicious foods,includingmooncakes,watermelons,grapes and so on,while admiring the fullest and roundest moon. We can' t wait to see you!Yours sincerely,Li Hua5Extracurricular Activity Teacher NeededThe Committee of No.1 Middle School hopes to employ a man under 40 as an extracurricular activity teacher next term.His duty is to plan and organize extracurricular activities,such as playing all kinds of games,doing physical exercises,and even doing some running,from 15:00 to 16:00,3 times per week.The applicant shall work continuously as an extracurricular activity teacher forat least 3 years.If you show interest,please contact Liu Li at 130******** for an interview,during which the salary will be talked about.The Committee of No.1 Middle School6Dear James,Glad to share with you my latest participation in School PoetryConference.Basically,the activity aims to offer us a further approach into Chinese poetry and help us form a better understanding of the traditional Chineseculture.During the activity,we chanted and appreciated the charming Chinese poems in various ways.Meanwhile,we enjoyed the great fun from our close interaction.For me,it 仔细审题、认真作答.试题习题、尽在百度was a meaningful experience,which turned out to be a fantastic journey into the world of Chinese culture as well as the inner world of ourselves.Yours,Li Hua7June 8Dear Sir/Madam,I learn from an ad on TV that your company needs a marketing manager under 40.The position interests me very much.I think I'm qualified to gain it.I'm 35 years old and have a master's degree from Business School of BeijingForeign Trade University.I've been head of marketing department in the WAL-MART Harbin branch for 4 years.I'm not only good at communicating but also show a great talent for organizing,expressing and creating.Shopping is my hobby.I'm honest and reliable.I'm ready to help anyone in trouble.Your early reply will be appreciated.Yours ever,Wang Wei8Creative Design of PostersRecently organized by the Students' Union of our school,we have carried out a competition of creative design of posters.Hundreds of students have handed in their designs,all of which are closely related to their school life.The collections have shown their creative thought through various designs.The event has received warm applause from the students,who say that they viewthis as a good chance for them to think in different new ways.仔细审题、认真作答.。

【浙江专用】2019版高考英语二轮训练题 写作组合练 训练2 含解析

【浙江专用】2019版高考英语二轮训练题 写作组合练 训练2 含解析

写作组合练训练2(对应学生用书第201页)Ⅰ.应用文写作(2017·浙江金华名校4月统练)假如你是李华.来自澳大利亚的交换生Kenton首次离家来中国读书,因生活上和语言交流上有困难,他萌生了回家的念头.不知如何是好的他在某网站上发帖求助,请你据此给他回帖.注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.Dear Kenton,I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 【写作指导】本题要求给一位在中国求学并遇到困难的外国交换生回帖.根据提示,文章要有以下几方面的内容:表示对他的情况的理解,鼓励他坚持下去,帮助他学习汉语等.写作人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主.写作时可用到的表达:1.表示理解:It is natural that...;Everyone will...when they first go abroad等. 2.鼓励求学(即求学的好处):It is a good chance/opportunity to...;You can become more independent等.3.愿意提供帮助:It is my pleasure to help you...;I am willing to help you out of trouble;I would like to make friends with you等.4.要跟人交流:Only by communicating can you...;Your Chinese may be improved while you are communicating with the locals等.【参考范文】Dear Kenton,I am sorry to hear you have difficulty with life and communication abroad,and I'm willing to help you out of trouble.Actually,it is natural that you encounter difficulties and want to go home.But personally,I think studying abroad alone is a good chance for you to be more independent.You can call your parents more often instead of giving up your study.If you don't mind,we can chat online frequently,which may improve your Chinese a lot.Only by communicating with others can you overcome your difficulties.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua Ⅱ.读后续写【导学号:38144076】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.When she was 22 years old,Pat Jones decided to travel around the world and see as many foreign places as she could while she was young.When she finished college at home in Britain,Pat chose to visit Latin America first,so she managed to get a job as an English teacher in a secondary school in Bolivia.Pat spoke a little Spanish,so she was able to communicate with her students even though they did not know much English.A sentence she had once read somewhere stuck in her mind:if you dream in a foreign language,it means that you have really mastered it.Pat repeated this sentence to her students and she hoped that someday she would dream in Spanish and they would dream in English.One day,Tim,one of the worst students in her class,came up to her and explained in Spanish that he had not done his homework.He said that he had gone to bed early and had slept badly.Pat was quite angry with him,for she did not think that his explanation had anything to do with his homework.But Tim told her that hedreamed all night and his dream was in English.“In English!” Pat thought.She was greatly surprised,since Tim was such a bad student.She was also secretly jealous.Her dreams were still not in Spanish,but she decided to encourage her student and asked him to tell her about his dream.“All the people in my dream spoke English,”Tim said.“And all the signs were in English.All the newspapers and magazines and all the TV programs were in English.”“But that's wonderful,”said Pat.“What did all the people say to you?” she asked.“I'm sorry.Miss Jones,That's why I slept so badly all through the night.I didn't understand a word they said.It was a nightmare!” Tim answered.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.Paragraph 1:After hearing the boy's w ords,Pat,Paragraph 2:In order to inspire her students to speak English,Pat【写作指导】本篇短文是一则小故事,推动故事情节发展的是Pat对于语言学习的理念.那么该理念就是学生发挥的着眼点.学生在续写时,要抓住所给开头语的题眼,推动思维.此外,学生还应尽可能地使用一些高级句型,以使文章结构更严谨、表达更地道.【参考范文】After hearing the boy's w ords,Pat,the English teacher,began to shake her belief in the sentence stuck in her mind.Her jealousy had all gone.Staring into the boy's eyes,Pat sensed something wrong hidden there.Obviously,the boy was telling a lie.Seeing the negative effect his behavior would have on her students,Pat decided to teach the boy a lesson.Though she knew only a little Spanish,she decided to scold him using the language.In order to inspire her students to speak English,Pat arranged for several people in the secondary school to have weekly talks,their topics ranging from travelling around the world to language learning methods.After several weeks,many of her students came running to her,telling her that they finally dreamed in English.This time,instead of being jealous,Pat felt proud of them,saying she would also try her best to learn Spanish so that one day she would also dream in Spanish.Ⅲ.概要写作(2017·浙江杭州质检二)【导学号:38144077】阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要.As is known to all,sports stars earn large amounts of money every year.LeBron James,the famous American basketball star,for instance,earns an income of more than 20 million dollars a year.Some people hold the view that these stars do not deserve the high pay that they are getting.Some even argue that sports stars do nothing to society apart from entertaining people.Their contributions to society are much less than those made by doctors,firemen,scientists,professors,etc.But I can never agree with that.While sports are for entertainment,it does not mean that they are not important to people's life.Why do so many people go to see football matches and NBA games?It is because they enjoy the games,and they are willing to pay to watch theperformances.Because of the sports stars,our life becomes more exciting.Some sports stars gain honor for their countries,and their countrymen are proud of them.They contribute to the spiritual well­being of their people.What's more,sports stars usually are at the top level in their fields.In this world,you have to pay if you want the best.It is the same with sports.Skills in sports are like the skills in works of art.People will not say that Da Vinci's painting Mona Lisa was bought with too much money.Most stars are skilled in their own field not only because of their talents but also because of their hard training.They have to keep performing at their peak to earn that good income.Their influence on the national economy can not be overlooked.Take NBA in America,for example.The stars help to support not only the basketball industry,but also other related industries like sportswear and sports equipment.Sports stars also make constant appearances in advertisements.Since they are well known in the world,they attract many people's attention,which often leads to an immediate boom in the sales of the products that are advertised by them.I hope one day their accomplishments will be fully recognized.【写作指导】本文是一篇议论文,主要讨论了体育明星高收入的问题.此类文章在写概要时,首先要抓住文章主旨和关键词;其次,要对每一段的主题进行总结和概括;最后在各个信息要点中,加入适当的连接词,使上下文连贯,过渡自然.【参考范文】Different from some people's views,the writer believes sports stars' pay is not too high but reasonable.(要点1)First,sports stars' performances bring people excitement and spiritual well­being.(要点2)Besides,they are the best in their fields thanks to their talents and hard training.(要点3)Lastly,sports stars like these in NBA contribute to the national economy by benefiting basketball industry and otherindustries such as advertising industry.(要点4)。

浙江省2019届高考英语二轮复习完形填空提升练一记叙文79

浙江省2019届高考英语二轮复习完形填空提升练一记叙文79

完形填空提升练(一) 记叙文A(2017·6浙江)Alia Baker is a librarian in Iraq.Her library used to be a 1 place for all who loved books and liked to share knowledge.They 2 various matters all over the world.When the war was near,Alia was 3 that the fires of war would destroy the books,which are more 4 to her than mountains of gold.The books are in every language — new books,ancient books, 5 a book on the history of Iraq that is seven hundred years old.She had asked the government for 6 to move the books to a 7 place,but they refused.So Alia took matters into her own hands.8 ,she brought books home every night,9 her car late after work.Her friends came to 10 her when the war broke out.Anis who owned a restaurant 11 to hide some books.All through the12 ,Alia,Anis,his brothers and neighbours took the books from the library,13 them over the seven-foot wall and 14 them in the restaurant.The books stayed hidden as the war15 .Then nine days later,a fire burned the16 to the ground.One day,the bombing stopped and the17 left.But the war was not over yet.Alia knew that if the books were to be safe,they must be 18 again while the city was 19 .So she hired a truck to bring all the books to the houses of frie nds in the suburbs(郊区).Now Alia waited for the war to end and 20 peace and a newlibrary.1.A.meeting B.workingC.personalD.religious2.A.raised B.handledC.reportedD.discussed3.A.worried B.angryC.doubtfulD.curious4.A.practical B.preciousC.reliableD.expensive5.A.then B.stillC.evenD.rather6.A.permission B.confirmationC.explanationrmationrge B.publicC.distantD.safe8.A.Fortunately B.SurprisinglyC.SeriouslyD.Secretly9.A.starting B.parkingC.fillingD.testing10.A.stop B.helpC.warnD.rescue11.A.intended B.pretendedC.happenedD.agreed12.A.war B.nightC.buildingD.way13.A.put B.openedC.passedD.threw14.A.hid B.exchangedC.burntD.distributed15.A.approached B.eruptedC.continuedD.ended16.A.restaurant B.libraryC.cityD.wall17.A.neighbours B.soldiersC.friendsD.customers18.A.sold B.readC.savedD.moved19.A.occupied B.bombedC.quietD.busy20.A.dreamed of B.believed inC.cared aboutD.looked for〚导学号44994051〛B(原创)This March,the 90th annual National Spelling Bee will feature its youngest competitor in history,5-year-old Edith Fuller of Oklahoma.Edith qualified (有资格) for the national competition when she 1 her regional competition on Saturday,beating more than 50 other elementary and middle school2 .She3 spelled 37 words,including “perestroika”,“nisei”,and her final winning4 ,“jnana”.Edith’s mom,Annie Fuller,told Tulsa World she only learned of her daughter’s5 skills last summer,when she correctly spelled “restaurant”6 having never been taught how.“We knew there was something7 there,” Fuller said.8 that,Edith and her mom began9 for the bee,looking up words she misspelled along the way to 10 their spellings and meanings.“Learning the wordswas so 11 .She was able to learn about 12 countries and cultures and different kinds of food,” Fuller said.Despite her13 spelling genius,Fuller said she was simply14 that Edith was able to 15 the four-hour competition.“The 16 is that she likes to move around,” Fuller said.“I’m 17 she sat still for so long.” “It’s fun to 18 her with everyone.I knew she’d be a novelty,so I’m 19 she held her own,” Fuller said.And the 5-year-old champion is feeling pretty great about the coming20 ,too.1.A.won B.missedC.watchedD.copied2.A.teachers B.parentsC.studentsD.workers3.A.hardly B.correctlyC.impossiblyD.immediately4.A.chance B.planC.resultD.word5.A.writing B.spellingC.listeningD.speaking6.A.in fear of B.because ofC.in spite ofD.in c ase of7.A.special B.interestingC.importantD.valuable8.A.After B.BeforeC.AboutD.Above9.A.lo oking B.caringC.walkingD.preparing10.A.recognize B.learnC.findD.understand11.A.exciting B.movingC.generalcational12.A.similar B.difficultC.differentD.foreign13.A.daughter’s B.son’sC.husband’sD.student’s14.A.disappointed B.madeC.impressedD.takene out B.stick outC.break outD.give out16.A.question B.reasonC.factD.idea17.A.frightened B.delightedC.puzzledD.surprised18.A.share pareC.helpmunicate19.A.strange B.unbelievableC.proudD.confident20.A.future petitionC.successD.progress〚导学号44994052〛C(原创)Sarah Wehner,an American woman born in the 1980s,has been developing Chinese acupuncture (针灸) for 10 years in the state of Maryland.She hopes that she can some day 1 views with real masters of acupuncture in China.Wehner is from Baltimore,Maryland.She has been an experienced acupuncturist 2 she has never been to China before.Her father is the one who 3 her to acupuncture.He was 4 of a mental illness through acupuncture, 5 many other therapies (治疗方法) failed.“My father is a pers on whose job is 6 and repairing wooden things.He can create a lot of things with only simple tools.He 7 me and I decided to learn acupuncture.I think I can help others with the 8 ,” ex plained Wehner.Wehner and her colleagues uploaded videos9 different acupuncture therapies on social media in order to take away patients’ 10 .They also write a two-page 11 to TCM terms.Since treatment fees for acupuncture are relatively 12 in the U.S.,Wehner organized a group of medical students,acupuncturists,patients,community clinics and sponsors to 13 an acupuncture community,hoping to 14 more people receive the therapies,coordi nate(协调) job opportunities for acupuncturists in the U.S.,and 15 lower the price of the treatments in America by 2020.“I treat 70 to 100 16 from different ethnic groups and 17 from 2 to over 80 every week.They all like this traditional 18 therapy and feel 19 after treatment,” said Wehner.She added that she hoped to continue improving her 20 skills and would love to speak with Chinese acupuncture masters in the future.pete B.exchange2C.supportpare2.A.because B.ifC.whethe rD.though3.A.introduced B.gotC.forcedD.took4.A.tired B.foundC.curedrmed5.A.after B.beforeC.untilD.while6.A.carrying B.buyingC.sellingD.making7.A.stopped B.inspiredC.lovedD.served8.A.tools B.needlesC.resultsD.medicines9.A.introducing B.learningC.teachinging10.A.pains B.sadnessC.concernsD.injuries11.A.letter B.bookC.sentenceD.guide12.A.low B.highC.expensiveD.cheap13.A.set up B.keep upC.pick upD.build up14.A.help B.allowC.expectD.agree15.A.slightly B.impossiblyC.importantlyD.significantly16.A.customers B.patientsC.studentsD.persons17.A.frightened B.injuredC.agedD.moved18.A.American B.BritishC.ChineseD.French19.A.satisfied B.disappointedC.worriedD.puzzled20.A.physical B.basicC.specialD.medical〚导学号44994053〛参考答案完形填空提升练(一) 记叙文A【语篇导读】艾莉雅·贝克是一位伊拉克的图书管理员,图书馆就是她和图书爱好者们交流探讨的地方。

2019高考英语(浙江专版)二轮复习与策略专题限时集训2 读后续写 训练2 Word版含解析

2019高考英语(浙江专版)二轮复习与策略专题限时集训2 读后续写 训练2 Word版含解析

专题限时集训(二) 读后续写训练2A阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was a cold winter day.A woman drove up to the Rainbow Bridge tollbooth(收费站).“I'm paying for myself,and for the six cars behind me,”she said with a smile,handing over seven tickets.One after another,the next six drivers arriving at the tollbooth were informed,“Some lady up ahead already paid your fare.”It turned out that the woman,Natalie Smith,had read something on a friend's refrigerator:“Practice random kindness and senseless acts of beauty.” The phrase impressed her so much that she copied it down as soon as she got home.Judy Foreman spotted the same phrase on a warehouse wall far away from home.When it stayed on her mind for days,she gave up and drove all the way back to copy it down in her diary.“I thought it was beautiful,”she said,explaining why she'd taken to writing it at the bottom of all her letters,“like a message from above.”Her husband,Frank,liked the phrase so much that he put it up on the classroom wall for his students,one of whom was the daughter of Alice Johnson,a local news reporter.Alice put it in the newspaper,admitting that though she liked it,she didn't know where it came from or what it really meant.She really wanted to find out the originator(创作者) of this phrase and know about the story of it.Two days later,Alice got a call from Anne Herbert,a woman living in Marin.It was in a restaurant that Anne wrote the phrase down on a piece of paper,after turning it around in her mind for days.The restaurant was decorated in a simple style and the owner had a kind heart.He regularly handed out food to the beggars nearby,which left a deep impression on Anne.Then Alice asked her what her idea was.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

浙江省高考英语二轮复习概要写作专练(一)至(二)训练

浙江省高考英语二轮复习概要写作专练(一)至(二)训练

概要写作专练答案提供详尽解析,旨在指导考生拓展写作思路,提升写作能力。

概要写作专练(一)A(2018·浙江省名校联盟第三次联考)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Some years ago, writing in my diary used to be a usual activity.I would return from school and spend the expected half hour recording the day’s events, feelings, and impressions in my little blue diary. I did not really need to express my emotions by way of words, but I gained a certain satisfaction from seeing my experiences forever recorded on paper. After all, isn’t accumulating memories a way of preserving the past?When I was thirteen years old, I went on a long journey on foot in a great valley, well­equipped with pens, a diary, and a camera. During the trip, I was busy recording every incident, name and place I came across. I felt proud to be spending my time productively, dutifully preserving for future generations a detailed description of my travels. On my last night there, I wandered out of my tent, diary in hand. The sky was clear and lit by the glare of the moon, and the walls of the valley looked threatening behind their screen of shadows. I automatically took out my pen ... At that point, I understood that nothing I wrote could ever match or replace the few seconds I allowed myself to experience the dramatic beauty of the valley. All I remembered of the previous few days were the dull characterizations I had set down in my diary.Now, I only write in my diary when I need to write down a special thought or feeling. I still love to record ideas and quotations that strike me in books, or observations that are particularly meaningful. I take pictures, but not very often — only of objects I find really beautiful. I’m no longer blindly satisfied with having something to remember when I grow old. I realize that life will simply pass me by if I stay behind the camera, busy preserving the present so as to live it in the future.I don’t want to wake up one day and have nothing but a pile of pictures and notes. Maybe I won’t have as many exact representations of people and places; maybe I’ll forget certain facts, but at least the experiences will always remain inside me. I don’t live to make memories —I just live, and the memories form themselves.一、试题详解1.核心内容本文是一篇记叙文,全文共四段。

2019浙江高考英语概要写作范文

2019浙江高考英语概要写作范文

2019浙江高考英语概要写作范文In the 2019 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination, the English writing section is a crucial part of the test that requires students to demonstrate their language proficiency and writing skills. In this document, I will provide an overview of the types of writing tasks that may appear in the exam, along with some sample essays to help students prepare for the test.One common type of writing task in the Zhejiang high school entrance exam is the argumentative essay. In this type of essay, students are required to present a clear argument or opinion on a given topic and support it with relevant examples and evidence. For example, students may be asked to discuss whether technology has a positive or negative impact on society, or whether it is better to study abroad or in one's home country.In order to write a successful argumentative essay, it is important to carefully analyze the prompt and identifythe key points that need to be addressed. It is also essential to structure the essay in a logical and coherent manner, with each paragraph focusing on a specific aspect of the argument and providing supporting evidence.Another type of writing task that students may encounter in the Zhejiang high school entrance exam is the descriptive essay. In a descriptive essay, students are asked to describe a person, place, or event in detail, using sensory language to create a vivid picture for the reader. For example, students may be asked to describetheir favorite holiday destination or a memorable experience from their childhood.When writing a descriptive essay, it is important to use descriptive language that appeals to the reader's senses and creates a strong emotional impact. By usingvivid imagery and detailed descriptions, students can bring their writing to life and engage the reader's imagination.In addition to argumentative and descriptive essays, students may also be asked to write narrative essays in the Zhejiang high school entrance exam. In a narrative essay, students are required to tell a story or recount a personal experience in a compelling and engaging way. For example, students may be asked to write about a significant eventthat changed their perspective on life or a memorable encounter with a stranger.When writing a narrative essay, it is important to create a strong narrative arc that captures the reader's interest and builds towards a satisfying conclusion. By using descriptive language, dialogue, and pacing techniques, students can create a compelling story that resonates with the reader.Overall, the English writing section of the 2019 Zhejiang high school entrance exam presents students with a variety of writing tasks that require them to demonstrate their language proficiency and creativity. By carefully analyzing the prompts, structuring their essays effectively,and using descriptive language to engage the reader, students can succeed in this important part of the exam. Good luck to all the students preparing for the exam!。

浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习 读后续写专练(一)至(四)训练

浙江省2019年高考英语二轮复习 读后续写专练(一)至(四)训练

读后续写专练答案提供详尽解析,旨在指导考生拓展写作思路,提升写作能力。

读后续写专练(一)A(2018·金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on December 25.Quiet, that is, except for those who were standing around the nurses’ station complaining about having to work Christmas Day. I was triage nurse that day and had just been out to the waiting room to clean up. Just then five bodies showed up at my triage desk, a pale woman and four small children.“Are you all sick?” I asked suspiciously.“Y es,” she said weakly and lowered her head.But when it came to descriptions of their present problems, things got a little vague. Two of the children had headaches, but the headaches weren’t accompanied by the normal body language of holding the head or trying to keep it still. Two children had earaches, but only one could tell me which ear was affected. The mother complained of a cough but seemed to work to produce it.Something was wrong, but I didn’t say anything. I explained to the mother that it might be a little while before a doctor saw her. She responded, “Take your time; it’s warm in here.” She turned and, with a smile, guided her children into the waiting room.On a hunch (call it nursing judgment), I checked the chart after the admitting clerk had finished registering the family. No address — they were homeless. The waiting room was warm. I looked out at the family huddled by the Christmas tree. The smallest one was pointing at the television and exclaiming something to her mother. The oldest one was looking at her reflection in a decoration on the Christmas tree.I went back to the nurses’ station and mentioned we had a homeless family in the waiting room.The nurses, complaining about working Christmas, turned to compassion for a family just trying to get warm on Christmas. Then our team went into action, much as we do when there’s a medical emergency.But this one was a Christmas emergency. A special Christmas party was to be held.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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概要写作专练答案提供详尽解析,旨在指导考生拓展写作思路,提升写作能力。

概要写作专练(一)A(2018·浙江省名校联盟第三次联考)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Some years ago, writing in my diary used to be a usual activity.I would return from school and spend the expected half hour recording the day’s events, feelings, and impressions in my little blue diary. I did not really need to express my emotions by way of words, but I gained a certain satisfaction from seeing my experiences forever recorded on paper. After all, isn’t accumulating memories a way of preserving the past?When I was thirteen years old, I went on a long journey on foot in a great valley, well­equipped with pens, a diary, and a camera. During the trip, I was busy recording every incident, name and place I came across. I felt proud to be spending my time productively, dutifully preserving for future generations a detailed description of my travels. On my last night there, I wandered out of my tent, diary in hand. The sky was clear and lit by the glare of the moon, and the walls of the valley looked threatening behind their screen of shadows. I automatically took out my pen ... At that point, I understood that nothing I wrote could ever match or replace the few seconds I allowed myself to experience the dramatic beauty of the valley. All I remembered of the previous few days were the dull characterizations I had set down in my diary.Now, I only write in my diary when I need to write down a special thought or feeling. I still love to record ideas and quotations that strike me in books, or observations that are particularly meaningful. I take pictures, but not very often — only of objects I find really beautiful. I’m no longer blindly satisfied with having something to remember when I grow old. I realize that life will simply pass me by if I stay behind the camera, busy preserving the present so as to live it in the future.I don’t want to wake up one day and have nothing but a pile of pictures and notes. Maybe I won’t have as many exact representations of people and places; maybe I’ll forget certain facts, but at least the experiences will always remain inside me. I don’t live to make memories —I just live, and the memories form themselves.一、试题详解1.核心内容本文是一篇记叙文,全文共四段。

第一段讲述作者小时候喜欢写日记,每天忙着把各种日常生活及感受记录在本子上,积累记忆,保存过去。

第二段讲述作者13岁时的一次旅游经历,山谷的美丽使她/他意识到,应该学会当时当地去欣赏和体验世间万物,而不是一味地记录。

第三段主要讲述了作者写日记的方式发生了改变,现在只把自己特殊的想法或情感有选择地写在日记中。

第四段是作者对生活的感悟:把握现在,感受今天;生活,重在感受而不是为了回忆而记忆。

2.写作思路(1)理清文章脉络,概括段落大意。

该文第一段围绕着首句“Some years ago, writing in my diary used to be a usual activity.”讲述几年前,作者每天忙于记录日常生活感受,事无巨细等。

第二段讲述作者在写日记一事上的转变,全段没有主题句,因此可围绕change一词将本段大意概括为“The author’s attitude towards the diary changed after a trip to a valley.”。

第三段围绕首句“Now, I only write in my diary when I need to write down a special thought or feeling.”详细讲述作者改变写日记方式后的相关情况,她/他开始有选择地在日记中记录自己的感想体会。

第四段是作者的感悟,即“I don’t live to make memories —I just live, and the memories form themselves.”。

(2)确定表达要点,灵活准确表达。

要点1是对第一段内容的归纳,同时为使句意更加完整清晰,可适当补充细节,例如,写日记是为了储存记忆。

要点2是对第二段内容的概括,即作者写日记方式变化前后的对比。

要点3承接着要点2,是对作者改变写日记方式后的具体描述,可以使用thus衔接。

要点4是最后一段中作者的感悟。

二、参考范文The author had made it a routine to keep a detailed diary of her/his everyday life to store memories.(要点1) That changed after a trip to a valley, where she/he realized breathtaking scenery was meant to be felt with heart rather than written down mechanically.(要点2) Thus, she/he has become selective about what to put in her/his diary, (要点3) focusing on the present instead of busying herself/himself with recording memories for the past or the future.(要点4)三、范文解析要点1中,“made it a routine”准确地表达了作者每日像例行公事般地记日记的状态,用目的状语“to store memories”补充信息,使要点信息更全面。

要点2中,非限制性定语从句“where ...”的使用明确了作者改变写日记方式的原因,同时用breathtaking替换原文的dramatic,避免词汇的重复。

要点3由Thus一词引出作者现在写日记的方式,即“become selective about what to put in her/his diary”,同时通过非谓语结构“focusing on ... instead of busying ...”把要点4准确地表达出来,使得句与句之间衔接紧凑,语言精练。

B阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Group singing is a sound that begins inside you, shares it with a roomful of people and it comes back as something even more thrilling: harmony. So it’s not surprising that group singing is on the rise.As the popularity of group singing grows, science has been hard at work trying to explain why it has such a calming yet energizing effect on people. What researchers are beginning to discover is that singing is like a filling of the perfect tranquilizer (镇静剂), the kind that both eases your nerves and lifts your spirits. The high spirits may come from endorphins, a hormone (荷尔蒙) released by singing, which is associated with feelings of pleasure. Or it might be from oxytocin, another hormone released during singing, which has been found to ease anxiety and stress.Oxytocin also strengthens feeling of trust and bonding, which may explain why still more studies have found that singing lessens feelings of depression and loneliness.The benefits of singing regularly seem to be accumulative. In one study, singers were found to have lower levels of stress. Another investigation suggesting that our heart rates may keep pace with each other during group singing could also explain why singing together sometimes feels like a guided group meditation. Study after study has found that singing relieves anxiety and contributes to quality of life.It turns out you don’t even have to be a good singer to gain the rewards.According to one study, group singing “can produce satisfying and therapeutic feelings even when the sound produced by the mouth is of average quality”.Singing groups which vary from casual affairs to serious, professional or a vocational ones will all work.Group singing is cheaper than medical treatment, healthier than drinking, and certainly more fun than working out. It is the one thing in life where feeling better is pretty much guaranteed. Even if you walked into the group exhausted and depressed, by the end of the night you’ll walk out high as a kite on endorphins and good will.一、试题详解1.核心内容本文是一篇说明文,全文共分五段。

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