雅思7分作文集
雅思G类七分范文
Page 1 of 1 General Training Writing Task 2 Serial DramasGeneral Training Writing Task 2 Serial DramasWRITING TASK 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Many serial dramas on TV (e.g. ‘soap operas’ or ‘soaps’) play animportant social role.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.Task 2 Serial Dramas Script GPage 1 of 1 Comments on Script GExaminer Comments on General Training WritingTask 2 Serial Dramas Script GBand 7This is a thoughtful and considered response that addresses all parts of the task. Ideas are developed and supported, though some could be more clearly focused on the social role of serial dramas. Nevertheless, the approach is germane to the issue under discussion and the conclusions drawn are clear and relevant. The answer flows well and the progression of the argument is logical throughout. There are lapses in paragraph development and occasional awkwardness in referencing that limit the rating. Cohesion is otherwise handled well. The candidate uses a wide range of vocabulary and skilfully incorporates less common words and phrases. There are occasional errors in word choice and spelling. Overall, grammar is well-controlled and a range of sentence types is used with confidence. Errors in articles, agreement and verb phrases are more than occasional and punctuation is faulty at times.。
IELTS考试范文精选集（包含小作文）_雅思_
IELTS考试范文精选集(包含小作文)范文1Nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, tobacco is more harmful than drug to people’s health, therefore many people think that smoking is legal that is a direct andprimary reason to induce this kind of problem. The above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.The main reason is that tobacco is a silent killer to smokers. Tobacco is known to be the probable cause of some 25 different diseases, and for some,such as lung cancer, bronchitis and emphysema, it is the main cause. According to a WHO report four million people die yearly from tobacco-related diseases, that is one death every eight seconds. Tobacco is significantly becoming a greater cause of death and disability than any other single cause.Another reason is that more and more young people are under 18 years old who smoke cigarette have been blinded by the deceit of tobacconists. Tobacco among adolescents remains stubbornly persistent. Smoking among adolescents rose in the 1990s in several developed countries，such as China,Vietnam and Thailand . While new markets are being opened by the tobacco industry actions, old markets have not been closed. Tobacco is a global threat.Last but not the least reason is the increase in cigarette smuggling. Becauseof tobacco smuggling, the legal retailing and distribution systems are badly affected, and faced with increased lawlessness and heavy tax losses. This behavior severely affectsthe economy.In conclusion, the tobacco should be considered illegal. Perhaps a pack of cigarettes is less harmful than another drug, but tobacco is actually the biggest killer of all the drugs.===================================== ============范文2Advertisements of tobacco and those of“smoking is harmful”are often seentogether. But there has been an on-going argument about whether or not tobacco should be forbidden and made illegal. I have always believed that smoking should be illegal for the following reasons.First, smoking does great harm to human health and causes many diseases. It is reported that more than 70% of lung cancer sufferers are smokers, andthe average life-span of smokers is seven years less than that of non-smokers. Moreover, it hurts not only smokers, but also the ones around the smokers. Many researchers claim that breathing“second-hand smoke”maybe even more harmful than smoking.Second, many social problems and disasters can be attributed to smoking. For instance, many wives cannot bear their husbands’smoking all the time,which causes many quarrels, or even divorces. Furthermore, the biggest firedisaster in China, the Daxinganling fire disaster, was caused by a burning cigarette end, and the cost of the resulting loss was st, smoking tobaccos is a main source of air pollution.A magazine said thatfor every cigarette smoked each day,a whole tree is needed to clean the air.In other words, smoking one less cigar every day equals planting a tree. It is a brilliant contribution to the earth we are living on.In a word, all the above demonstrate that smoking harmsyourselves as wellas your neighbors, pollutes the air we ourselves are breathing, and even agitates the social peace. So, in my opinion, tobacco should be strictly forbidden, and smoking should be made illegal.范文3there has long been controversy over the legality and apparent acceptance of tobacco in society .some hold that cigarettes and other tobacco containing products should be banned, that is, treated as narcotics.personally,i agree with this point of view for the following reasons:although cigarettes do not offer as intense an effect as drugs like heroin and cocaine,they rank higher in the level of dependence it creates in the user.thousands of smokers try to rid themselves of cigarettes but cannot,because of the physiological dependence they developed,chiefly imputable to its chemical nicotine.this explains why smokers continue their habit despite the numerous health warnings. furthermore,medical science has now proved beyond a doubt that smoking kills.with all the other causes of preventable deaths such as alcohol,illegal drugs,aids,suicide,road accidents,fire,and guns,cigarettes still account for more preventable deaths than all of those combined.more disturbingly,whilst the use of heroin is dangerous solely to the users,the use of tobacco endangers those who are in their vicinity as well. this phenomenon, known as passive smoking, nulls the counter-argument that putting one's own health at risk through smoking should be up to one's own individual choice.reports have shown that the amount of second-hand smoke inhaled by a typical nonsmoker is equivalent to one cigarette smoked per day,and what is more,passive smoking can increase a nonsmoker's chance of getting cancer by ten to thirtytwo per cent.there are those who will say that the black market created by outlawing tobacco will produce deadlier cigarettes because the product standards of the bootleggers are not as high.however,we should all bear in mind that legal cigarettes cause roughly four hundred thousand deaths a year.it is hard to imagine the limited distribution provided by the criminal underworld could compete with this tragic figure.to sum up, the harm visited upon our society by tobacco usage is substantial.there will be no solution other than to control tobacco much in the same way that the government now controls drugs which could allow people to remain attentive to the seriousness of the effects of these substances,and hopefully to prohibit their usage.范文4Apparently, it would seem that tobacco is totally different substance from drugs, and it can be used freedom by public. In fact, however, our authority should make tobacco illegal as well as drugs, and using of tobacco should be controlled strictly.Tobacco only can be used for research and medical purpose. As far as I am concerned, as a kind of dope, tobacco has been widely used to help patients alleviate their pain in surgery. At the same time, ordinary people should not be allowed to access it legally for two main reasons.Among countless factors which influence my inclination, there is a most conspicuous one: it is harmful that smokers addict to tobacco. Many decades ago, scientists have already found that there is a definite link between smoking and bronchial troubles, cardiac disease and lung cancer. More seriously, it not only has negative influence for smokers, but others living or working insame surrounding, even the next generation of a smoking pregnant women may be harmed by so-called“second hand smoking”. Research shows that sometimes“second hand smoking”is more dangerous than smoking directly, because, at least smokers can get the protection from filter tips to some extent. Thus, compared to the hazard of drugs, tobacco can involve more other innocent people and harm their health unknowingly.The second aspect relates to the problem that our natural resources and money are wasted senselessly during the course of planting, transporting and manufacturing tobacco. In light of a statistics, China consumes nearly 1,000 tons of wood fibers to produce cigarettes annually. Besides, the investment absorbed by tobacco manufacturers every year, is enough to solve all financial troubles that higher education have to face. Obviously, if tobacco is banned by our governments, it means that considerable money will be saved.In summary, judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that tobacco should be forbidden as well as drugs except for a few special purposes, such as research and medicine.补充With the development of society, our life and working pressure are greater and greater. In this way, a lot of people have become smokers. Tobacco, as a kind of drugs, prevails in the society. Some people hold the opinion that tobacco should be given freedom be use, but others, in contrast, deem it should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs and that is also my point.Medical science proves that smoking can cause the heartdiseases, lung cancer, and the immune system diseases. These diseases are all mankind's healthy enemies. The statistics have showed that people who die of the lung cancer, over 90% are smokers. In these smokers, 85% are chain smoker. So, obviously, there is enormous danger to the human health in smoking.In addition, smoking not only dangerous to smoker, but also do harm to people at smoker's side. The tobacco contains a large number of noxious substances, such as nicotine. Just as a famous physician says, smoking is equivalent to commit suicide chronically.However, the cigarette can really relax our nervous nerve, within short time. People, especially, who have heavy working pressure, are prone to produce sense of relying on to cigarette. Moreover, as everyone knows, a lot of countries impose the heavy taxation to tobacco manufacturer and seller, thus, if the tobacco business is considered as the illegal activities, the revenues of the country will be reduced correspondingly.In a word, the danger to people of cigarette is obvious. Though it can help us flee away from pressure, this to use health as cost. Our government should forbid the production of the tobacco, make our world fresh and nonpoisonous.With the development of society, our life and working pressure are [getting] greater and greater.In this way, a lot of people have become smokers. Tobacco, as a kind of drugs, prevails in the society. Some people hold the opinion that tobacco should be given freedom [to] be [used, but others, in contrast, deem [that] it should be made [as] illegal as the same way as other drugs and that is also my point.Medical science proves that smoking can cause the heart diseases, lung cancer, and the immune system diseases. [all ofthese diseases are enemies of mankind's healthy] . The statistics have showed that people who die of the lung cancer, over 90%, are smokers. [Among] these smokers, 85% are chain smokers. So, obviously, there is enormous danger to the human health in smoking.In addition, smoking not only dangerous to smokers, but also [does] harm to people at smoker's side. The tobacco contains a large number of noxious substances, such as nicotine. Just as a famous physician says, smoking is equivalent to commit suicide chronically.However, the cigarette can really relax our nervous nerve, within short time. People, especially, who have heavy working pressure, are prone to produce sense of relying on to cigarette. Moreover, as everyone knows, a lot of countries impose the heavy taxation to tobacco manufacturer and seller, thus, if the tobacco business is considered as the illegal activities, the revenues of the country will be reduced correspondingly.To sum up, the danger to people of cigarette is obvious. Though it can help us flee away from pressure, this to use health as cost. Our government should forbid the production of the tobacco, make our world fresh and nonpoisonous.Although it is a freedom to use tobacco{烟草} while some people think it should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree？What’s your opinion?A:Tobacco should be made illegal, I agree with this idea personally. I hope most drugs can be made illegal, because, as far as I know, they are bad to our health. However, currently most countries still keep it free to use tobacco, and this situation seemsto be very hard to change in a short time.From my own experience, using tobacco is not a good thing, especially using is for a long time. It will lead to many kinds of diseases, more importantly, many of them are fatale. One of my friends died from using too much tobacco, and it is believed there are many more people like this. The other thing that I am concerned of is, if a country doesn’t make using tobacco illegal, many young people will have a chance to use it, i.e. students. It is very dangerous, because if someone gets addicted to this when he is very young, he will then almost surely have a big health problem when he is old.I am happy to see that, although it is free to use tobacco in many countries, most of those countries still somehow try not to encourage people using it. For example, tobacco advertisement is banned in many countries, and for many countries, smoking is banned in public places. Overall, most countries are trying to stop the use of tobacco, though it will take sometime. In my opinion, it is essential to limit the use of tobacco, and I hope everyone doesn’t use.。
雅思7分作文范文
雅思7分作文1．The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions onthis?The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite therisk of social isolation—a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world--- most of us have benefited greatly from e-mail and internet chat programs like MSN Messenger. These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.Equally importantly, though, the Internet has placed the entire world (and all of the information in it) at our fingertips. In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful---there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs. Nonetheless, I would contend thatthis free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modernlife because of its influence on communication and the flow of information.2．Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel thatthis is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of fast food. Some laud its convenience and relatively low cost; however, in this essay I intend to argue that this kind of food is detrimental both to the individuals that consume it and to society at large. There are two primary reasons for this.First of that, it is an undeniable fact that consuming fast food to excess results in serious health problems. Foodssuch as fried chicken, hamburgers and chips---which are incredibly high in fat and salt---are responsible for such ailments as high blood pressure, obesity and heart disease. Moreover, although I certainly agree that fast food isboth affordable and convenient, the cost and inconvenience of treating the illnesses it causes in later life are significant. In order words, while fast food is beneficial in the short term, its long-term effects are generally negative.Further and even more importantly, though, some fast food chains deliberately attempt to attract children in order to shape their future eating habits. One particularly good example of this is the character Ronald McDonald---the bright clothes and smile of the McDonald clown are a beacon to children. Having grown up eating in McDonald restaurants, people are likely to continue eating there throughout their adult lives. It is also interesting to note that McDonald provides playgrounds and frequently holds children’s birthday parties in order to attract young children and their parents.By way of conclusion, I believe that fast food will continue to become more popular as the pace of life increases. Given the health risks associated with this trend, I believe that public education campaigns warning people aboutthe dangers of fast food would be warranted.3．International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a position trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?The past 50 years have seen a considerable increase in global tourism. Despite the undeniable economic prosperity it has brought to many host countries, I would argue that the overall impact of international holidaymaking has in fact been negative. Two of the primary drawbacks associated with this trend are as follows.First of all, global tourism tends to export many negative aspects of western culture. Since it is only the wealthy who can afford to travel abroad, developing countries like Thailand and Indonesia have become the playgrounds of tourists from more affluent ones. In many such nations, this influx of mainly western tourists has brought with it problems such as prostitution as well as alcoholism and drug abuse. Admittedly, international tourism does have the potential to foster greater understanding and tolerance between people of different cultures. However, this is unlikely to occur while it remains such a potent symbol of western cultural domination and moral decadence.Even more disturbing, though, is the environmental degradation that international tourism has caused in many parts of the world. One particularly salient example of this is the Great Barrier Reef in Australia --- the countless boats, divers and snorkelers that have visited the reef over the past few decades have gradually destroyed vast sections of coral. Similarly, world renowned Kuta Beach in Bali has become heavily polluted in recent years. In order to be sustainable, greater regulation of global tourism is required.In conclusion, the challenges presented by the booming international tourist industry are numerous and complex. Although they are by no means insurmountable, it is highly unlikely that they will be resolved in the foreseeable future.4. Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?These days, it seems that more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. This raises certain questions about the integration of newcomers into society. Although there are valid arguments to the contrary, inthis paper I will argue that it is the responsibility of immigrants to adapt to accepted rules of behavior in their adopted country, both written and unwritten. The reasons for this are twofold.Firstly, it is vitally important that newcomers observe the laws of their adopted country for the sake of social order. Imagine the chaos that would ensure if people refused to drive on the same side of the road. It is, therefore, necessary for all immigrants to ensure that they observe the law in their new country regardless of any differencesto laws in their home country. Two further instances of practices which are permitted in some countries but prohibited in orders are the possession of firearms and gambling.Secondly and more importantly, though, in order to maintain societal cohesion it is essential that newcomers respect the social norms of their adopted country. Of course, having a mixture of different cultures and traditionsgives a country colour and vibrancy; however, I would contend that too much cultural diversity undermines a society by alienating people from each other. It is my belief that similarities unite people, whereas differences havea tendency to divide. A strong society is a homogenous society with shared values and goals.By way of conclusion, I believe that this issue is likely to become even more important in the future as borders between countries become increasingly blurred. It, therefore, demands our further consideration.5. Men and women are difficult in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason,some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?These days, it seems that more women are entering “male occupations” than ever before and vice vers some still hold to the conservative view that certain jobs are better performed by men and others by women, it ismy personal belief that people of either sex are capable of doing any job effectively. The reasons for my positionare as follows.First of all, I believe it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the characteristics of menand women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Although there are certainly traits which are typical of menand others which are typical of women, there are exceptions to every rule. Not all women are physically weak, justas not all men are poor interpersonal communicators; conventional gender roles are not appropriate for everybody.If a man or woman desires to pursue a career which is traditionally reserved for the opposite sex, I believe he/sheshould be provided the opportunity to prove him/herself capable.Secondly, I would contend that the presence of both males and females in a workplace brings a sense ofbalance. Men and women frequently, though by no means always, have different methods of doing things. Ratherthan judging these differences to be weaknesses, I feel that we should view them as opportunities for innovationand the discovery of more effective and efficient work practices. A person’s weaknesses can thus be transformedinto strengths.In summary, I once again reaffirm my position that both male and female employees are an asset to anyindustry and as our stereotypes about men and women are not always appropriate, we must not discourage anyonefrom choosing an occupation simply because of his/her gender.6. Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In theinterest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do youagree or disagree?There are widely differing views on the issue of whether tobacco should be banned or not.Some people would suggest that it is their right to smoke and that prohibiting cigarettes would be aviolation of their civil liberties; however, I personally believe that tobacco should indeed be madeillegal. There are two principal reasons for this.One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that tobacco is a drug. Themajority of governments around the world take a prohibitionist approach to the problem of substanceI believeabuse. If governments wish to be consistent in pursuing their “war on drugs”, therefore,they must ban tobacco as well. This is particularly heroin and marijuana---have legitimate medical applications, while tobacco has none.However, perhaps the strongest argument in favor of banning cigarettes and other tobaccoproducts is that of public health. It is an irrefutable fact that smoking leads to lung cancer and othersuch potentially fatal diseases. Pro-smoking groups would no doubt argue that each individual hasthe right to determine what goes into his/her own body. Nevertheless, I would suggest that theinterests and rights of society at large must override those of the individual. The medical treatmentthat smokers require is often incredibly costly, and it is frequently governments and society thatcover these costs rather than the individual smoker. Hence, I feel that laws prohibiting smokingwould be entirely justified.In reality, of course, the widespread prohibition of smoking is unlikely in the near future. However, given the seriousness o f the problems that it causes, I believe that this should be theultimate goal.7. Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree?The issue of whether we should attempt to save endangered species from extinction or not is certainly a contentious one. Despite the arguments of some people that such animals serve no useful purpose and should be allowed to die out just as many others (including the dinosaurs) have in the past, it is my personal belief that they should in fact be preserved. Two of the principal reasons for this are as follows.Firstly, it is vital that we appreciate the importance of endangered species in maintaining the balance of nature. Ecosystems are delicate arrangements where plants and animals all depend on each other for survival. The disappearance or introduction of any animal species disrupts the balance and negatively impacts upon other plants and animals by breaking the food chain and altering the habitat in which they live. Such imbalances frequently return to haunt us in unexpected ways. Just as rabbits that were introduced to Australia soon after European settlement now compete with native species for food and destroy farmers’ crops, the extinction of a predator can cause plagues by allowing its prey to multiply unchecked. Therefore, since ecological change constitutes a potential risk to us and our environment, it is clearly I our own interests to protect endangered species.Yet, perhaps the strongest argument in favor of preserving endangered species is that all life has intrinsic value; even if endangered species are not useful to us in any practical way they should be preserved nevertheless. Further, given that we humans are responsible for destroying the natural habitat of many endangered animals, we should make every possible effort to save them.In conclusion, I once again restate my view that saving endangered species is worthwhile. Not only do theyhelp to maintain the balance of nature, but they also have value in and of themselves.8. With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago. Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail. This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society. In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solutions to it.Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle. Today’s parents have to work harder than those of previous generations to support their families. Traditionally, one parent assumed the role of breadwinner, while the other---typically the mother----acted as the homemaker. Recently, though, double income families have become the norm. Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless environment. Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated. Another contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern forms of entertainment.In order to resolve this sense of alienation within families, I believe we must first address its root causes. Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial incentives to parentswho choose to remain at home and take care of their families. Admittedly, such incentives would probably not full compensate couples for lost income; however, they would at least soften the hardship of living on a single incomeand provide an alternative for parents who would rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints. One further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in the community through public education campaigns.In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that to no solution is likely in theshort term. However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.。
英语考试作文-8日雅思写作真题及7分范文：垃圾处理问题
英语考试作文8日雅思写作真题及7分范文：垃圾处理问题9月8日场的雅思考试已经结束，下面为大家带来本场雅思写作大作文真题回忆及范文，题目为：We have developed a “throw-away”society and are filling the environment with many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. What measures should be taken to combat the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.本周考的是一个环境类的老题目。
我们现在的社会是一个浪费型的社会(a throw-away society)，随处可见被扔弃不用的东西。
本题要求分析这个现象产生的原因及解决办法。
就原因而言，大家可能想到的生活水平提高了，物质太丰富了，这是老雅经常谈到的物质层面上的原因。
如果我们再往下想一想，可能就想到，我们乱扔东西，可能还有一个心理层面上的原因：出于方便(out of convenience)。
除此之外，当然还有一个社会层面的原因，即消费社会鼓励大家扔弃旧东西，换新时尚。
在这类分析原因类的考题中，大家都可以按照这三个层面去思考，就容易写得更有逻辑一些。
就解决办法而言，无非也就两条：一是国家层面，制定法规，让大家对垃圾进行分类回收，二是个人层面，提高大家垃圾回收的意识。
我们在构思任何一篇雅思作文的时候，都应该写出层次，这是雅思作文批判思维的基本要求。
各位烤鸭应该在这方面积累经验。
雅思写作范文Ours is a “throw-away” society strongly influenced by consumerism as we value convenience over environmental protection. We throw away out of convenience, and societal conventions have us move on to the next fad or technology. For example, we are dumping large quantities of thrash, such as plastic bags and diapers, that we cannot fully dispose of. Likewise, we are discarding televisions, cell phones, computers and other used items in exchange of new ones that unsurprisingly will become our future garbage. Under these circumstances, environmental pollution is the cruel price we have to pay for the consumerism culture in the age of mass production. Even though our society as a whole is increasingly aware of the environmental pollution, more has to be done to prevent the problem from worsening.我们的社会是一个受消费主义强烈影响的“浪费型”社会，因为我们更看重方便而不是环境保护。
剑桥雅思真题7-写作(Test 2 附高分范文)
剑桥雅思真题7—写作（Test 2 附高分范文）Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.参考范文1：The graph illustrates changes in the amount of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979, beef consumption reached the highest point, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were consumed in similar quantities about 150 grams. However, fish consumption hit a low of 50 grams.Yet, the consumption of beef and lamb dropped sharply to nearly 100 grams respectively. There had been a stable pattern at 50 grams in the consumption of fish.In contrast, the consumption of chicken showed an upward trend,transcending that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. Then this figure rose to a peak of about 250 in 2004.Overall, the line graph clearly showed the consumption of chicken rised rapidly while other foods decreased during this period.参考范文2：The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), whilemuch less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams). However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable. The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.参考范文3：The given line graph compares the fish and meat consumptions by the people of a European country from 1979 to 2004.As is presented in the graph, the consumption of chicken increased over the time while meats of different types were more preferred by people in the given European country than the fishes.According to the graph, more than 200 grams of beef was consumed daily by each person initially in 1979. In this year, each person on an average ate 150 grams of chicken and lambs while the consumption was just over 50 grams in this year. Over time people preferred chicken and the consumption kept on increasing and reached to over 250 grams per day by each person. The consumption of beef, lamb decreased over time and finally in 2004 the average consumption of these two meat types decreased to around 100 grams per person in a day. The amount consumed for fish remained almost same throughout the years and slightly decreased over time.In summary, people started consuming more chicken than beef and lamb and the fish consumption remained almost the same.Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.参考范文（Band 7.5）：Fixing punishments for each type of crime has been a debatable issue. There are many arguments supporting both views, those for and those against fixed punishments.On the one hand, fixed punishments will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime, will reconsider committing this act in the first place.This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crime committed.If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of a reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This wouldresult into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.On the other hand, taking the circumstances of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity.A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next. In my opinion, an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity.There have to be fixed punishments for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and a maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions.An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is Completion Law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime.As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thiefs stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger.Also, a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment.考官评语：This is a thoughtful and well-argued response to the task. The candidate examines the opposing views of the topic and gives a clear opinion that is well developed and supported. To reach the highest band a more clearly-signalled conclusion would be needed. The argument is well organised and linking is well managed throughout. The development of the answer is not helped however, by poor control of paragraphing which sometimes confuses the links across different sections. This is a weak feature of the script which limits the overall rating. In contrast, an excellent range of vocabulary is used with a sophisticated level of control and only rare slips. The range of structures is also wide and most sentences are accurate and precise, but there are some errors and omissions. These, however, are only minor and do not affect communication.。
剑桥雅思真题7-写作(Test 3 附高分范文)
剑桥雅思真题7—写作（Test 3 附高分范文）Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.参考范文1：The chart gives information about the percentage change in average house prices in five different cities located in five different countries over 12 year period between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.According to the chart, during the period from 1990 to 1995 the average prices of houses in three cities decreased significantly by five percent in New York (USA) and about 7.5 percent in both Tokyo (Japan) and London (UK). While the average house prices increased slightly in two cities Madrid(Spain) and Frankfurt(Germany) by about 1.5 percent respectively.As far as the next period (1996-2002) is concerned, it is clear that the average house prices decreased only in Tokyo (Japan) by 5 percent. In contrast the average house prices increased in the rest of cities. In New York it increased consideraply by 5 percent, in Madrid it increased slightly by 4 percent, in Frankfurt it increased by 2 percent.London has the largest increase in the average house price over the 6-year period from 1996-2002 as it increased dramatically by 11 percent.All in all, there are a wide differences in house prices between the five cities which illustrated in this chart. These differences may be a result of the number of population or the number of houses required in a certain city.本文得分6.5。
雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析
雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析雅思7分大作范文批改和解析雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5)问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners.解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出国留学可不仅仅是上大学，而该同学认为出国留学就是去上大学的(因为她可能就是去上大学的，所以觉得所有人也都如此)，偏激。
此外，第四句论述变成了英语环境了(因为大家都去英语国家，所以主观认为，所有出国的人就是去学英语的)，再次带来了内容偏激。
雅思大作文写作7分范文
雅思大作文写作7分范文雅思写作对于一些同学来说是难点，今天给大家整理了雅思作文真题优秀范文，希望能够帮助到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。
2018年11月10日雅思大作文写作7分范文：职场社交能力重要性大作文写作题目是：Nowadays, many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?雅思大作文解析今天的考题是一个旧题，重复的是2012年1月14日的考题，不过由于过于久远，想必很多同学都没有复习到。
但这个题目的问题，我们多数同学都应该思考过，即到底文凭重要，还是社交能力重要?就这个问题，我们的思考方向依然是三种：A. 双边讨论：认为两者都很重要B. 一边倒讨论：只认为文凭更重要，或社交能力更重要C. 批判思维：对某些工作而言，文凭更重要，而对其他工作而言，社交能力更重要。
考生可以在以上思维方式中任选一个进行写作。
以下是老雅的高分范文。
本范文中，老雅遵从主流意见，认为文凭和社交能力都重要。
本题还应注意的是，要结合“招聘”来讨论问题。
老雅认为，在招聘的时候，文凭很重要，因为文凭背后代表的是求职者具有某种能力，而没有文凭，应聘者可能连面试的机会都得不到;同时，社交能力也很重要，因为这种能力意味着求职者可以和各种人和谐快乐地相处，从而提高工作效率。
请大家认真阅读范文，看老雅是如何把以上思路落实到具体文字表达的。
It is important for job seekers to highlight both their professional qualifications and social skills. Employers are looking to hire those who have the right mix of professional qualifications as hard skills and social skills as soft skills.(1) 本段开门见山，直接表明观点，即专业资质和社交能力同等重要。
雅思大作文突破7分总结（背景引入-题目改写-撰写观点）
雅思大作文突破7分总结（背景引入-题目改写-撰写观点）（利弊）讨论型1.People nowadays are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Some people believe that advertising has more negative than positive influences on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2.As global trade increases, many goods, even some daily goods, are exported to another country, which includes long-distance transport during shipping. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks?观点对比型3.Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion4.Nowdays the trend of fashion changes very rapidly, and gradually people become the slaves of it. Some people think that a person should choose comfortable clothes he or she likes, regardless of fashion.5.Some people think rich countries should help the poor countries by giving money directly. Others believe that there are more effective forms of international aid.原因-结果型、6.The range of technology is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree?7.Today advertising can be seen everywhere in daily life. It has influenced what people think is important, and sometimes has negative effects on our life. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?手段方法型8.Riding a bicycle is the best way than other transportation methods. Do you agree or disagree.9.Some people believe that become successful in adult life, it depends on the way parents bring up their children. Do you agree or disagree.趋势或者现象讨论型10.It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree?11.Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare trainning courses.。
雅思c7t1小作文例文
雅思c7t1小作文例文英文回答：The given prompt is about the IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 example essay for a band 7 candidate. The task requires writing a response to a given graph or chart in at least 150 words. In this case, I will provide an example response to a bar chart.The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people in three different age groups who use smartphones in a particular country. Overall, it can be observed that the younger the age group, the higher the percentage of smartphone users.According to the chart, among those aged 18-24, approximately 90% of them use smartphones. This percentage drops slightly for the 25-34 age group, with around 85% using smartphones. The lowest percentage of smartphone users is found in the 35-44 age group, with only about 70%using smartphones.中文回答：这个柱状图展示了一个特定国家三个不同年龄组的人使用智能手机的百分比。
雅思写作范文
（七分范文）Some people believe that study ing atuni versity or college is the best route to a successful career , while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion.Whenthey finish school , teenagers face the dilemma that whether to get a job or con ti nue their educati on. While there are some ben efits to gett ing a job straight after school , I would argue that it is better to go to college or uni versity.The option to start work straight after school isattractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning mon eyas soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent , and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career , young people who decide to find work , rather than continue their studies , may progress more quickly. They will have the cha nee to gain real experie nee and lear n practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promoti ons and a successful career.On the other hand, I believe that it is more ben eficial for students tocontinue their studies. Firstly , academic qualificati ons are required inmany professi ons. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor , teacheror lawyer without hav ing the releva nt degree. As a result , uni versity graduates have access to more and better job opportunities , and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications.Secondly , the job marketis becoming increasingly competitive , and sometimes there are hun dreds of applica nts for one positi on in a compa ny.Young people who do not have qualifications from a uni versity or college will not be able to compete.For the reas ons men ti oned above , it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.以上就是这篇雅思写作7分范文的全部内容，字数足够。
雅思大作文写作7分范文鉴赏
雅思大作文写作7分范文鉴赏虽然今年6月的雅思考试已经结束，但我还是想为大家带来本场雅思写作大作文真题范文及解析，目的是为了让大家更好地学习。
本期写作话题为：增加年轻人对本国历史人物兴趣的方法。
Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country.Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?今天许多年轻人对国际流行音乐和电影明星的了解比他们国家历史上的名人还要多。
这是为什么呢?怎样做才能提高年轻人对本国历史上名人的兴趣?范文来自网络：As the globalization of entertainment industry, a great number of foreign celebrities has dashed into our lives, especially for the youth; fascinating super stars is becoming a trend, and even being idolaters has been a lifestyle for many young people. Gradually, more people start to worry about the inheritance of local traditional culture, which is worth considering around the society.随着娱乐产业的全球化，大量的外国名人闯入了我们的生活，尤其是年轻人;吸引人的超级明星正在成为一种趋势，甚至成为偶像已经成为许多年轻人的生活方式。
雅思写作Task1 7分范文
The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in2002.Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category -2002The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products andservices in five countries in 2002.It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco.On the other hand,the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.Out of the five countries,consumer spending on food,drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey,at 32.14%,and Ireland,at nearly 29%.The proportion of spending on leisure and educationwas also highest inTurkey, at 4. 35%, while expenditure onclothingand footwear wassignificantly higher in Italy,at 9%,than in any of the other countries.It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure forfood/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear,at nearly 16%and just over 5%respectively.Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories,but the lowest figure for leisure/education,at only 1.98%.The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture,industry and homes around the world,and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used.We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.In 1900,around 500km³of water was use d by the agriculture sector worldwide.The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount.By 2000,global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km³, industrial water use had risento just under half that amount,and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km³.In the year 2000,the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176million and 5.2million respectively.Water consumption per person in Brazil,at 359m³,was much higher than that inthe Congo,at only 8m³,and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265times more irrigated land.(184words,band 9)The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between1990and2002compared with the average house prices in1989.The bar chart compares the cost of anaverage house infive major cities over a period of 13years from 1989.We cansee that house prices fell overall between1990 and 1995, but most of the cities sawrisingprices between1996 and 2002. Londonexperienced by far the greatest changes inhouseprices over the 13-year period.Over the 5years after 1989,the cost of average homes in Tokyo and London dropped by around 7%,while New York house prices went down by 5%.By contrast,prices rose by approximately 2%in both Madrid and Frankfurt.Between 1996and 2002,London house prices jumped to around 12%above the 1989average. Homebuyers in New York also had to pay significantly more,with prices risingto 5%above the1989average,but homes in Tokyo remained cheaper than they were in 1989.The cost of an average home in Madrid rose by a further 2%,while prices in Frankfurt remained stable.(165words)The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in1999.The table gives informationabout poverty rates amongsix types of household inAustralia inthe year 1999.It is noticeable that levels of poverty were higher for single people than for couples,and people with children were more likely to be poor than those without. Poverty rates were considerably lower among elderly people.Overall, 11% of Australians, or 1,837,000 people, were livinginpoverty in1999. Aged peoplewere the least likely to be poor,with poverty levels of 6%and 4%for single aged people and aged couples respectively.Just over one fifth of single parents were living in poverty,whereas only 12%of parents living with a partner were classed as poor. The same pattern can be seen for people with no children:while 19%of single people in this group were living below the poverty line,the figure for couples was muchlower, at only 7%.(150words,band 9)The map below is of the town of Garlsdon.A new supermarket(S)is planned for the town.The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.The map shows two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket in a town calledGarlsdon.The maindifference betweenthe two sites is that S1 is outside the town, whereas S2 is inthetown centre.The sites can also be compared in terms of access by road or rail,and their positions relative to three smaller towns.Looking at the information in more detail,S1is in the countryside to the north west of Garlsdon, but it is close to the residential area of the town. S2 is also close to the housingarea,which surrounds the town centre.There are main roads from Hindon,Bransdon and Cransdon to Garlsdon town centre,but this is a no traffic zone,so there would be no access to S2by car.By contrast,S1lies on the main road to Hindon,but it would be more difficult to reach from Bransdon and Cransdon.Both supermarket/sites are close to the railway that runs through Garlsdon from Hindon to Cransdon.can use "compared to", "compared with" and "in comparison with" in the same way. For example:• Prices in the UK are high compared to / with / in comparisonwith (prices in) Canada andAustralia.• Compared to / with/ incomparisonwith(prices in) Canada and Australia, prices inthe UKare high.When writing about numbers or changes, I find it easier to use "while" or "whereas":•There are 5 million smokers in the UK, while / whereas only 2 million Canadians and 1 millionAustralians smoke.• Between 1990 and 2000, the number of smokers in the UK decreased dramatically, while whereas the figures for Canada and Australia remained the same.The following bar chart has a total of 24 bars. It's impossible to describe 24 pieces of information in only 20 minutes, so you need to select .The bar chart compares consumer spending on six different items in Germany,Italy,France and Britain.It is clear that British people spent significantly more money than people in the other threecountries on all six goods. Of the six items, consumers spentthe most money onphotographicfilm.People in Britain spentjust over £170,000 on photographic film, which is the highest figure shown on the chart.By contrast,Germans were the lowest overall spenders,with roughly the samefigures (just under £150,000)for each o f the six products.The figures for spendingontoys were the same inbothFrance and Italy, at nearly £160,000.However,while French people spent more than Italians on photographic film and CDs,Italians paid out more for personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes. The amount spent by Frenchpeople on tennis racquets,around £145,000,is the lowest figure shown on the chart.The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.The diagrams show how house designs differ according to climate.The most noticeable difference between houses designed for cool and warm climates is in the shape of the roof.The designs also differ with regard to the windows and the use of insulation.We can see that the cool climate house has a high-angled roof,which allows sunlight to enterthrough the window. By contrast, the roof of the warm climate house has a peak in the middle and roof overhangs to shade the windows. Insulationand thermal buildingmaterials are used incoolclimates to reduce heat loss, whereas insulation and reflective materials are used to keep the heat out in warm climates.Finally, the cool climate house has one window which faces the direction of the sun, while the warmclimate house has windows on two sides which are shaded from the sun. By openingthe two windows at night, the house designed for warm climates can be ventilated.The picture illustrates the way in which water passes from ocean to airnatural process known as the water cycle.Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean water evaporates,eventually runs back into the oceans again.to land during thefalls as rain, andBeginning at the evaporation stage,we can see that 80% of water vapour in the air comes from the oceans. Heat from the sun causes water to evaporate, and water vapour condenses to formclouds. At the second stage, labelled p‘recipitation’onthe diagra m, water falls as rainor snow.At the third stage in the cycle, rainwater may take various paths. Some of it may fall into lakesor return to the oceans via ‘surface runoff’ . Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reachingthe impervious layer of the earth. Salt water intrusionis shownto take placejust beforegroundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.(156 words, band 9)The first picture shows the layout of an art gallery, and the second shows some proposed changes to the gallery space.It is clear that significant changes will be made in terms of the use of floor space in the gallery. There will be a completely new entrance and more space for exhibitions.At present, visitors enter the gallery through doors which lead into a lobby. However, the planis to move the entrance to the ParkinsonCourt side of the building, and visitors will walk straightinto the exhibition area. In place of the lobby and office areas, which are shown on the existingplan, the new gallery plan shows an education area and a small storage area.The permanent exhibition space in the redeveloped gallery will be about twice as large as it is now because it will occupy the area that is now used for temporary exhibitions.There will also be a new room for special exhibitions. This room is shown in red on the existing plan and is not currently part of the gallery.(178 words, band 9)The table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities.The table compares the six networks in terms of their age, size and the number of people who use them each year.It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems.The London underground is the oldest system, havingopened in 1863. It is also the largestsystem, with 394 kilometres of route. The second largest system, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 kilometres of route. However, it serves more people per year. While only third in terms of size, the Tokyo system is easily the most used, with 1927 million passengers per year.Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 126 kilometres of route, compared to only 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.(185 words)The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years.Total electricity production increased dramatically from 1980 to 2000 in both Australia andFrance. While the totals for both countries were similar, there were big differences in the fuel sources used.Coal was used to produce 50 of the total 100 units of electricity inAustralia in1980, risingto130 out of 170 units in 2000. By contrast, nuclear power became the most important fuel source in France in 2000, producing almost 75% of the c ountry’selectricity.Australia depended on hydro power for just under 25% of its electricity in both years, but the amount of electricity produced usingthis type of power fell from5 to only 2 units inFrance. Oil,onthe other hand, remained a relatively important fuel source inFrance, but its use declined inAustralia. Both countries relied on natural gas for electricity production significantly more in 1980 than in 2000.(170 words)Read my full essay for the chart below. How have I organised the information? What languageThe chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008.Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007.In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood atjust under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and itremained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004.After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians,and research and development spending in developing and developed countries.Figures are given for 1980and 1990.It is clear from the charts that the figures for developed countries are much higher than those for developing nations.Also,the charts show an overall increase in participation in education and science from 1980to 1990.People indevelopingnations attended school for anaverage of around 3years,withonly aslight increase in years of schooling from 1980to 1990. On the other hand, the figure forindustrialised countries rose from nearly 9years of schooling in 1980to nearly 11years in 1990.From 1980to 1990,the number of scientists and technicians in industrialised countries almost doubled to about 70per 1000people.Spending on research and development also saw rapid growth in these countries,reaching $350billion in 1990.By contrast,the number of science workers indevelopingcountries remained below 20 per 1000 people, and researchspendingfellfrom about $50billion to only $25billion.(187words)The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.The figure illustrates the process used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the weather.There are four stages inthe process,beginningwiththe collectionof informationabout theweather.This information is then analysed,prepared for presentation,and finally broadcast to the public.Looking at the first and second stages of the process,there are three ways of collecting weather data and three ways of analysing it.Firstly,incoming information can be received by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo.The same data can also be passed to a radar stationand presented ona radar screenor synoptic chart.Secondly,incominginformationmay be collected directly by radar and analysed on a radar screen or synoptic chart.Finally, drifting buoys also receive data which can be shown on a synoptic chart.At the third stage of the process,the weather broadcast is prepared on computers.Finally,it is delivered to the public on television,on the radio,or as a recorded telephone announcement.The line graphcompares the percentage of people inthree countries who used the Internetbetween 1999and 2009.It is clear that the proportion of the population who used the Internet increased in each country over the period shown.Overall, a much larger percentage of Canadians and Americans had access to the Internet in comparison with Mexicans,and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage.In1999, the proportionof people usingthe Internet inthe USA was about 20%. The figuresfor Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively. In2005, Internet usage inboth the USA and Canada rose to around 70%of the population,while the figure for Mexico reached just over 25%.By 2009, the percentage of Internet users was highest inCanada. Almost 100% of Canadiansused the Internet,compared to about 80%of Americans and only 40%of Mexicans.The graphshows changes inthe number of cars per household inGreat Britainover a periodof 36years.Overall, car ownership inBritainincreased between1971 and 2007. Inparticular, the numberof households with two cars rose,while the number of households without a car fell.In 1971,almost half of all British households did not have regular use of a car.Around 44%of households hadone car, but only about 7% had twocars. It was uncommonfor families toown three or more cars,with around 2%of households falling into this category.Theone-car household was the most common type from the late 1970’s onwards,although there was little change in the figures for this category.The biggest change was seen in the proportion of households without a car,which fell steadily over the 36-year period to around 25% in 2007.In contrast,the proportion of two-car families rose steadily,reaching about 26%in 2007, and the proportion of households with more than two cars rose by around 5%.(180words)。
新雅思7分范文(推荐十五篇)
雅思7分范文(推荐十五篇)5雅思7分范文(篇一)Although we can easily acquire knowledge from modern media like television and internet,I think it is not enough to prove that the teachers will lose their position in the future. Indeed,people can absorb a lot of knowledges from television and example ,some students now can watch many teaching videos on television and internet and they do not need to get these knowledge from modern software can even help students to make a suitable study is obvious that students do not need to listen to the fixed content in the classroom. However,are all students have the chance to get the knowledge that they want from television and internet?Many poor students cannot afford the cost of television or internet and some elders do not know how to use these various of knowledge from teacher is the best way for learning needs time to make the student cannot learn the new course if the courseware has not completed by the teacher. Even if television and internet can meet some needs of students but they cannot completely perform the effects of the fact, children also need to learn the method of communication and how to become a good this aspect,teachers play an important role during the learning computer cannot completely achieve the teaching goal. To sum up, modern technologies can replace some of teachers' job. but considering other important parts in education, I do not believe this development can make teachers useless in the future.雅思7分范文(篇二)You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Families are not as close as before. Give reasons for this change, and suggest some ways to bring families closer.You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.In the past, family was a very important concept in people’s minds, and it was the center of many people’s lives. Nowadays, however, the relationship between family members is not as close as before. But as to what factors contribute to this phenomenon, different people have diverse opinions. As far as I am concerned, it results from the following reasons.The first reason is that people spend more time on their study and work. Compared with the past, people face fierce competition and suffer from great pressure. Therefore, they have to devote more time and energy to their careers. Some people are too occupied to spare time for their family. What is more, many jobs require people to work in other cities and many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As time passes, these people become emotionally estranged from their parents.Another reason is that there are more entertainment forms available. Nowadays high technology brings us more interesting things which can easily attract people’s attention, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet or plating video games. As a result, people are indulged in these activities, totally neglecting the feelings of other family members.To bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions. Firstly, never bring your work home and leave it in your office. We should spare more time with family members no matter how occupied we are. Secondly, try to squeeze some time for a regular family dinner because dinner time is a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas. Last but not least, we should teach the children the sense of family when they are still young.Family is the basic unit of a society. It plays a significant role in our lives. In order to enjoy a harmonious family life and maintain a stable society, we should take efforts to create a close family relationship. (342 words)雅思7分范文(篇三)题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?范文：It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have aboutlife are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.雅思7分范文(篇四)Nowadays, there are several channels to get news, such as radio, TV, newspaper and internet. I think internet is the best among these. In my essay, I am going to explain why.Since its invention, the Internet has been keeping booming as a prospective industry. Not only because it is a combination of texts, audios and videos, but also due to its convinience. It has threatened the domination of spreading news of the traditional media, and, I would say, is about to take control.We can find everything we want on internet – latest news, books, songs, movies, cartoons… whatever. With radio, we can merely hear. Compared with newspaper, radio and TV can provide the lastest information. For instance, it was immediately availalbe of the breaking news of the Americans’ attacking on Iraq, as we ll as thatthe Twin Towers of New York were destroyed on September 11, 2001. __ However, we just cannot carry TV 24/7.Internet is a convinient way of getting information, as long as your mobile phone is connected or you possess a laptop. When I am on a vehicle, I usually have my cellphone connected to internet, then browse what happend in the past few hours, or log in MSN to begin a conversation with my friends. Reading newspaper is also a good way to kill time, but for me, a youngster, it is not so modern as “surfing online while being transported”.The traditional media will never disappear, though internet has taken a big advantage in the competition. And definitely, there is still a long way for internet to go. Anyway, internet benefits me the most, and I highly appreciate it.雅思7分范文(篇五)题目：Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?范文：Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on theprotection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no placein the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists onlyfor the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right toallow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, thereis no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in orderto feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs ofconservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.雅思7分范文(篇六)Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise school work. If they have experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the greatest plus point to go to the famous well-known high school. Moreover, there are four big school exam and twonational examinations to test students’ level of studies. Generally, only the highest 40% can go to the good quality highschools and colleges children learn as much as they can, to win the competition to obtain good quality schools.On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and study individually with their own tutors, there are problems. They become selfish. They become careless and don’t help others a lot if it is about studies. There will be no co-operations for them. Then, why are there companies for many people to work in? each of them are clever, however, there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. Toco-operate is to improve this part. People talk and listen to what others thinking of and learn. That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher.In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each other. therefore, I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-operation, not compete and ranking them.雅思7分范文(篇七)现在小伙伴们都知道雅思baba的写作套路了么？那既然已经知道写作有题库，同学们是不是应该对雅思写作真题重视起来市面上的很多资料都是有题目不完整、没范文、没高频词汇的情况，对童鞋们来说其实用处并不大。
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雅思考试写作范文1there has long been controversy over the legality and apparent acceptance of tobacco in society .some hold that cigarettes and other tobacco containing products should be banned, that is, treated as agree with this point of view for the following reasons:although cigarettes do not offer as intense an effect as drugs like heroin and cocaine,they rank higher in the level of dependence it creates in the of smokers try to rid themselves of cigarettes but cannot,because of the physiological dependence they developed,chiefly imputable to its chemical explains why smokers continue their habit despite the numerous health warnings. furthermore,medical science has now proved beyond a doubt that smoking all the other causes of preventable deaths such as alcohol,illegal drugs,aids,suicide,road accidents,fire,and guns,cigarettes still account for more preventable deaths than all of those combined.more disturbingly,whilst the use of heroin is dangerous solely to the users,the use of tobacco endangers those who are in their vicinity as well. this phenomenon, known as passive smoking, nulls the counter-argument that putting one's own health at risk through smoking should be up to one's own individual have shown that the amount of second-hand smoke inhaled by a typical nonsmoker is equivalent to one cigarette smoked per day,and what is more,passive smoking can increase a nonsmoker's chance of getting cancer by ten to thirty two per cent.there are those who will say that the black market created by outlawing tobacco will produce deadlier cigarettes because the product standards of the bootleggers are not as should all bear in mind that legal cigarettes cause roughly four hundred thousand deaths a is hard to imagine the limited distribution provided by the criminal underworld could compete with this tragic figure.to sum up, the harm visited upon our society by tobacco usage is will be no solution other than to control tobacco much in the same way that the government now controls drugs which could allow people to remain attentive to the seriousness of the effects of these substances,and hopefully to prohibit their usage.雅思考试写作范文2Nowadays, the gap between the city and the countryside becomes more and more overt, which arouses colossal concerns. To understand t he solution, let’s take a closer look at the causes of the gap at first.The main reason of the gap is the unequal investment between city and rural area. China is a typical example. While more and more money is being invested to the coastal areas and big cities, such as Beijing and Shanghai, the lack of investment barriers greatly the society development of rural area and western regionsThe low education level partly sharps the gap. There is no doubt that the prime force of productivity is education. However, because of poverty, thousands of people go to work without graduating from primary school. The poorer, the few children go to school. This bad cycle finally leads to the dream of rich becoming a dream that is hard to realize.Moreover, the rural area is short of people with high quality. A survey proved that most of university students, whether they come from city or countryside, choose big cities instead of poor areas to work. The rural area can neither adept talent man nor attract talent man. No wonder the gap is increasing largely.Hence, The government ought to knock itself out to decrease the gap as soon as possible. First, balance the investment between city and rural area. In addition, the education level should be improved, especially pay attention on raising high quality people. Besides, let more people realize the latent capacity of rural area in order to attract talent and investment. The set up of CCTV channel12-western region channel is a good example.Only when the ways mentioned above are realized step by step, can the gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged.雅思考试写作范文3the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our the past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,cars can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars bring great benefit to all of as proverb goes:no garden without is not exception.owing a car has a lot of one thing,car provide us the most convient way of can get around freely without spenting a lot of always found driving is so another,its the comfortable to drive a always can stay warm and dry even in rainy whether,in addition,drivers are usually safe in their cars when they are out at night.Cars bring the human merits,their side-effects graudually come to the run a car need a lot of oil,which is getting less and increasing number of cars contribute the lacking of more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which lead to the serious social problem--traffic addition,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of carbon monoxide into make the air of cities unbreathabe,it strip people contact with frensh air.therefore,the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars under heavier traffic can be solluted!雅思考试写作范文4Private cars vs Public trafficAs traffic problems become more and more serious in many cities of developed and developing countries, their governments have to try hard and loads of money and energy have been spent to deal with them.Firstly, it is not efficient for the commuters to use their private cars to and back from their workplaces. Occasionally we can see they have to sit on the wheels wasting time and fuel in a heavy traffic jam. At the same time, through burning the fossil fuels, green house gas CO2, CO1, acid rain gas SO2, fumes and dusts are being released into the atmosphere, all of which heavily overload the environment. Thirdly, with the increase of private cars, the road trafficaccidents are also rise dramatically. For example, in a city with 5000 cars, there will be at least 250 accidents happening everyday, which also burden the public healthy services.On the contrary, expected public traffic may be an ideal solution to these problems. For example city buses and railways are widely used or being constructed by many cities. People can take buses easily, which can be found every 10 minutes or less in the peak time. Actually, Nottingham Transport Company is building its own light railway in the city, which is announced by the speak man of the company, “It will be completed in the next year, the tickets will be very competitive and at the same time the travel will be very safe and comfortable.”On the other hand, public traffic had its own disadvantages. Usually it cannot provide door-to-door service. It is inconvenient to go shopping by public vehicles. Sometimes you must wait a long time for the train. And quite a lot of people prefer to enjoy driving.In conclusion, developing the public traffic is a useful approach to deal with these difficulties. One possible way, if not the best, is to taxi private cars heavily and use these revenues to provide citizens cheaper public traffic services.雅思考试写作范文5Nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much debated as inour society. Nowadays, tobacco is more harmful than drug to people’shealth, therefore many people think that smoking is legal that is a direct andprimary reason to induce this kind of problem. The above point is certainlytrue; this essay will outline three reasons.The main reason is that tobacco is a silent killer to smokers. Tobacco isknown to be the probable cause of some 25 different diseases, and for some,such as lung cancer, bronchitis and emphysema, it is the main cause.According to a WHO report four million people die yearly from tobacco-related diseases, that is one death every eight seconds. Tobacco is significantlybecoming a greater cause of death and disability than any other single cause.Another reason is that more and more young people are under 18 years old who smoke cigarette have been blinded by the deceit of tobacconists. Tobacco among adolescents remains stubbornly persistent. Smoking among adolescents rose in the 1990s in several developed countries， such as China,Vietnam and Thailand . While new markets are being opened by the tobacco industry actions, old markets have not been closed. Tobacco is a global threat.Last but not the least reason is the increase in cigarette smuggling. Becauseof tobacco smuggling, the legal retailing and distribution systems are badlyaffected, and faced with increased lawlessness and heavy tax losses. This behavior severely affects the economy.In conclusion, the tobacco should be considered illegal. Perhaps a pack ofcigarettes is less harmful than another drug, but tobacco is actually thebiggest killer of all the drugs.雅思考试写作范文6travelling to a different culture can be an overwhelming,indeed,even an intimidating is very easy for misunderstandings to occur,and tourists are often deterred from places of cultural interest through fear of offending the indigenous would argue,it is up to the locals to accomodate visitors by speaking their language,serving their cuisine,and generally making them 'at home'.without doing this,local perple can be considered as unfriendly and viewed with suspicion by they are dissuaded from staying,which is ultimately detrimental to the local community,as the tourists take their spending-money with them.the counterview argues that acting naturally does not necessarily equate with being a local person wishes to live their life as his or her ancestors have done for centuries then visitors should show respect and allow them to do fact,many would argue that immersing one's self in a different culture is vital in order to truly appreciate is gained bytravelling,potentially,thousands of miles to experience the same language,food and culture that could have been found a few miles down the road from one's is a waste ofmoney,nothing is learned from the experience,and the memories saved will be less vivid. this is the point of view i it is vital for many countries' economies to welcome tourists,it does not have to imitate them so as to encourage their travellers have the right mind-set and show respect,all they need to do is to let the locals carry out their day-to-day lives to gain many insights into the this way,visitor and host can mutually benefit each other,through an increased income,and an enriching experience,respectively.雅思考试写作范文7Recent years, because traffic is convenient day-by-day, people have a more chance to travel around the world. The plane can make us reach any corner of the earth in a short time. Some people think visitors to others countries should imitated local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome culture different.As the a famous saying goes: Do as they do at Rome. The knowledge of local custom can help outside person adapt to the new environment rapidly. Moreover, each place has the own unique culture, may keep in touch more ideology and culture through the local folkways and customs. For instance, a Chinese people came to Britain, he can imitate British life style. Inthis way, He can understand British habit more thoroughly, thus, make himself live a more comfortable life in Britain.On the other hand, the outside thought has a lot of positive influence on local culture too. For example, the outside thought could bring the new theory and inject vigor into local culture. The exchanges of outside thought and traditional culture can help people to find out about the culture of other areas and countries.Making a general survey of human history, it is a positive trend that the nationality has been merging all the time. So, we should not only propagate local culture for the outside people but also study outside culture and custom. In this way, the earth would become a family, all the people would get along harmoniously.雅思考试写作范文8nowaday,the culture shock exists between the tourists and host people consider should try to model themselves on the local culture and totally agree with the above point.firstlly,by abserving and understanding of local culture,the tourists can reduce the chance of offending the locals and misunderstanding consiously and manchu area of china,people think the dog is their you come there,you must always show respects and love to dog,otherwise it will lead to the embarrassment and conflict.secondly,understanding and following the activites of local people can show our respects to doing things with their way,we will be easy to establish the good relationship with local residents often feel friendly when their culture are imitated and are unconsiously bring us into the members of them.in addition,imitating can let us gain insigts into other not only can know whats people's life is like in other counties,we also can be enlarged our knowledge and broaded our horizon,which will be cherish wealth in our life.to sum should adjust themselves adapt to the local habits and customs,which will make them fully enjoy their travel and live in harmony!雅思考试写作范文9Along with the mass use of computer technology in education circles, we are delighted to witness the uncountable conveniences be brought by computer. Some people even argue that teacher will not be important in classroom any more. Is this reasonable? Personal speaking, I oppose holding such a ridiculous conclusion.In the first place, the feature of teaching defines teachers as an essential part in education. It is well known that teaching is a process of mutual-communication: firstly, teachersimpart/initiate knowledge or ideas to students, then students should promptly transfer their feedback to teachers, moreover, teachers will give students the final interpretation according to their specific requirement. Besides, teachers also can (teach students in accordance of their aptitude). In contrast, what computers can do is merely to display materials which havealready stored in their EMS memory or mechanically execute operator’s commands. We actually can not image what our education will being if computers substitute teachers totally. As to another reason, it seems that teacher’s role as a supervis or is more and more overt. Computer is indeed a controversy, it not only can be an efficient education assistant, but also can become an addiction which includes too much violent and (pornographic propaganda). Youngsters do not mature fully in psychology, therefore, without teachers' supervision, many children would spend hours playing computer games or surfing unhealthy websites, which are regarded as a waste of valuable time and intelligence, instead of trying to have a good command of knowledge and skills.We never deny that computers are absolutely an available education implements, furthermore, the combination of teacher and computer technology will greatly improve our education quality. However, from all of the grounds of argument mentioned above, we can safely draw a conclusion that teacher will not be replaced by computer in the classroom. 雅思考试写作范文10Which element between nature and nurture plays the major role in children’s personality and development is always a controversial problem. Of course, which you prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. Here, I would like to illustrate my point of view about it.Admittedly, different nature determines people have distinguished starting points in their lifetime. To beginning, i n light of medical research, a person’s blood type has considerable influence to his character. General speaking, for example, a person whose blood type is A means that his personality is amiable and tender probably. Besides, the physical condition, even a ppearance may influence a person’s development. Statistics shows that beautiful people are more confident than others, because they do not need to worry about the prejudice from public. Obviously, some parts of our personality have been decided when we born.On the other hand, although nature is important during the course of shaping personality, we cannot ignore another essential element, nurture. There are many factors which affect the development of children, both parental support and education being vital influence. It is reported that the kid whose parents are divorced is more likely has psychological troubles than those with a harmonious family. By contrast, as we all know, good education will positively cultivate a person’s personality and improve his self-restraint in a big way.In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that partly because of different nature, partly because of different nurture, people have their unique personality.雅思考试写作范文11The computer is widely used in education and some people think teachers are not playing an important role in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?With more and more extensive use of computers in education, some people claim that the importance attached to teachers has been jeopardized. Therefore, computers will replaceteachers in the classroom. However, it seems quite clear to me that learning from teachers is the most important way that cannot be substituted for students.Naturally, some people maintain that computer should instead of the old way of education. They hold that the strong function of the computer offers a new mode of education, which is more interesting, more vivid and more acceptable by children. The students will not face to the serious teachers and calm classes any more, which are replaced by a brand-new world offered by the Internet. In addition, this can decrease the investment on the foundational education and save the human resources and material resources.As an assistant, computers do help teachers with their work, but they can never replace the important role of a real teacher. The main functions of any computer are storage and calculation. It cannot think on its own anyway. All the teaching data stored in computers are the essence of teaching experience generalized by many teachers during their work. Hence, to assist education, what a computer can do is just to repeat the contents summarized by real teachers.In addition, each student has different talents and different defects, and accordingly, they may come across various problems during their study. Computer programmer designing the software, however, cannot predict these problems. Therefore, a single computer can never solve these problems without a teacher’s guidanceFurthermore, if the significance of teacher has been weakened, the number of teachers may be decreased, that is to say, many teachers may be laid-off. If such a case comes to reality, series of social problems will break out, such as the drop of working opportunity which will surely make the burden of whole society become heavier and heavier.In conclusion, although computer-aided-education has spread widely, teachers still play s crucial part in the classroom, which cannot and will not be replaced by computer.雅思考试写作范文12In this IT age, computers are widely used in the classroom in order to enrich the methods of teaching. This phenomenon gives some the illusion that the thing teaching students is no longer the teacher but a computer. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.As another machines, computer doesn’t enable to control itself. Though computers are capable of learning from their mistakes and improving on their performance, they need details instructions from human being in order to be able to operate. They can never, as it were lead independent lives, no mention teaching students. In case a computer lacks the control of a teacher, there is no difference between a computer and waste.Not only this, but computers, unlike a teacher, can’t solve a variety of new problems. Everything is developing in today’s society, including education. For example, a student suddenly asks a creative question that the computer isn’t programmed for, it can do nothing, while teacher can explain clearly though abundant teaching experience.Last but not least, the computer can’t communicate with students from emotion. Such as an eyesight or gesture of teacher can transfer his or her idea and feeling to students. In this way,students can feel more human touch in the class. In comparison, the computer is too dry and dusty to understand.All in all, no matter how nice a computer is, it can’t take the place of teacher. Of course, I don’t mean that computer is useless. In contrary, I believe it will become the most powerful assistants to teacher in further.雅思考试写作范文13Computer, the most exciting and significant invention in 20 century, will reshape our lives and our world. As a result, some people proclaim that computers should be involved into our classroom, and replace the roles of human teachers. However, I cannot agree with their point of view.Admittedly, as the useful tools, computers can become the optimum assistants for human teachers in the classroom. To beginning, vivid pictures shown on screen can motivate students’ interest and curiosity dramatically. Moreover, the combination of computers and Internet can provide children the abundant information. Although computers enjoy considerable merits, they cannot compare with human teachers for two main reasons. Among countless factors which influence my inclination, there is a most conspicuous one: computers are not as qualified as human teachers in academic fields. As we all know, students can get the final result of a mathematic question under the help of computers, however, they are still confused on the whole computing process. By contrast, our human teachers’ performance is much better in those cases. They not only can teach students how to analyze and compute the question, but also can remind them what are the possible errors that they may meet. Thus, human teachers are more adequate than computers in academic aspect. The second advantage of human teachers is they can guide students to deal with some psychological problems that they meet in schools. In China, sometimes, teachers even burden many responsibilities that students’ parents have. For example, as for the student with rebellious spirit, the important duty for teachers is to prevent the student from campus violence, even crime. Obviously, computers cannot do that.In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that the positions of human teachers are unshakable, and computers cannot take the places of them.。
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雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇1Nowadays some people have the anti-social behavior and are lack of respect to others. What are the reasons? What are the solutions?Today there is a large increase in anti-social behavior, such as stealing, robbery and bullying, in almost every country. Also, irresponsibility and disrespect to others are common. The reason for the anti-social behavior are both complicated and varied.One possible reason for people to show anti-social behavior is that they may be dissatisfied with certain policies made by the government, so they choose an extreme way to express their dissatisfaction. For example, a local government does not punish the businesses that cause pollution to the environment just because these companies pay a large sum of tax every year. As a result, some people intentionally hurt employees working for these companies as a warning. Another reason is that some people lack education in learning how to respect and how law works when they were young, so they fail to realize what harm their behavior would cause to others. I think this explains why they appear harmful to the society.To address this problem, the government should listen to public opinions with an open mind, taking the benefit of all parties into consideration before making policy, and make every effort to meet people’s demand in fields like living environment, price index and working benefits. Public media should broadcastnoncommercial advertisements to convey the importance of showing respect to others and obeying the law. Also, schools and parents ought to put emphasis on cultivating law-abiding consciousness and let youngsters know that only respecting others can obtain others’ respect.In sum, any anti-social behavior is regarded as a threat to social order. Mostly , the ones that misbehave lack a good understanding in manners and law. So the government media and education institutions need to join hands to solve this problem.雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇2In recent years, young people in many countries choose to live by themselves. What are the reasons and is it positive or negative for the development of the society?Traditionally , young people often lived with other people. Now , more young people are choosing to live by themselves. Some people question whether this trend will have a negative or positive impact on the development of society.Some people are choosing to live by themselves for convenience purposes. Maybe they have a lengthy commute back and forth to work and it is no longer reasonable to live such a distance away. They want to live close to where they work and a roommate or someone to live with is not an option. Some people choose to live alone because they dislike the inconveniences of cohabiting with someone who has different living habits. Other people choose to live alone simply because they are introverts and they do not enjoy social contact.Although a person should certainly have the right to determine whether they live alone or not, it is important to note that human contact and social interaction remain important to aperson’s development and well-being. Human beings are social creatures and studies have shown that we can all benefit from social interaction. Many of us think that we can enhance our lives with computer time, television time, or smartphone time, but face-to-face interaction can still be beneficial and enriching.It remains to be seen if there will be any long-term effects from the current trend of people living alone, but there is a possibility that this trend may have a negative impact on people’s ability or interest in social interaction.雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇3An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative?Some people wonder why career changes are becoming more prevalent and whether those more frequent changes are having a positive or a negative effect. Although one can certainly argue about the positive or negative effects, I believe that these changes can be positive, if the person making the career change is doing so for the right reasons.Admittedly, companies come and go in our fast-paced world economy. So it is probably no longer realistic for a person to think that they will be able to start and finish working with the same company. Along the same lines, it should be noted that many companies and employers do not value loyalty as much as their counterparts from previous generations.This trend can be positive if people change jobs for the following purposes. First, they make career changes in an attempt to find more satisfaction or fulfillment with their new career. Second, they made a mistake in the previous career they chose for themselves but it is no late to pursue a more suitable one. Lastly, some people make career changes in search of a moredesirable lifestyle, more career advancement or a higher income.If people choose a different career path so they can be happier or more fulfilled in their career. I support them to do so. Happy and fulfilled employees are more productive and their employers will be benefited. Everyone deserves the chance to have a better career development. If career change is the key to their future success, they should not hesitate to make the change.雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇4Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people maintain that their governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and disease.It is obvious that environment pollution can create widespread illness. Studies have shown that poor air quality can create illness, including cancer, and those illnesses can reduce our quality of life and our lifespan. The same can be said for water pollution, as many disease and illnesses are a direct result of poor water quality. Unfortunately, in many countries the water and air quality is already poor due to years of abuse or negligence. Government efforts to ensure air and water quality can be quite expensive, as a lot of cleanup is required.In regards to a lack of quality housing, that can result in similar health problems and concerns, as people who are homeless or living in the street are certainly more prone to disease and illness.That being said, a government cannot spend all of its financial resources in curbing pollution or creating affordablehousing. The government has other priorities and problems to consider, including transportation, education, employment and health care. If these priorities are ignored, other problems will arise. Bad roads or bad bridges may impact the economy. Uneducated and unemployed citizens are also sure to have a negative impact on the economy. If a society is unable to care for its sick population, the society will also suffer.With this in mind, it seems that the government is best served in establishing a balance in determining which problems and areas to focus on. Although they may never be able to solve all of those problems at ones, maybe they can make enough progress so that someday those problems will be in the past.雅思哥写作干货：7分范文篇5Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because it has more influence that other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people claim that the latest information is mostly from newspapers, but I would say television is a better way to get news and other information.立场：不赞成纸媒体不能及时把新闻信息第一时间传播出去纸媒体好处：更多细节，读者可以反复阅读电子类媒体：更新及时，视频的方式报道，让人们更直观的了解到事件的进展On behalf of newspapers, newspaper stories are generally more detailed and more in-depth than other media accounts of the same stories. A television or radio newscast has limited time in which to tell a news story. If the television news is only 30 minutes or 60 minutes in length, the television network can use only a limited amount of time for each story. Newspapers, on the other hand, often have more time and space to offer for a specificstory. Also, newspaper stories are written instead of spoken like television or radio stories. If a person is reading a newspaper story and they are unclear about some of the facts in the story, they can go back and read the story again.On behalf of other forms of media, it is important to point out that printed newspapers are usually printed only once a day. Although some newspapers now have internet sites where they can disseminate news as fast as other forms of electronic media. Electronic media such as television, radio and internet news sources have the ability to deliver news much more quickly than newspapers. As a medium, television and radio offer unlimited video and audio accounts of news stones, but printed newspapers lack these forms of accounts.Although newspapers have traditionally been a main source for information. Other electronic media, especially television, are now challenging newspapers in this role. Television can provide news immediately while it is happening. Besides, television can do so with video and audio presentations that are not available in newspaper.。
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雅思写作7分范文雅思写作7分范文第1篇：国家差异消失的优缺点Nowadays we can enjoy the same films, fashions, brands, advertisements and TV channels. The evident difference between countries is disappearing. To what extent do you think the disadvantages overweight the advantages of this?Globalization creates conditions for widening international exchanges, strengthening mutual understanding between nations, expanding cultural, educational, and scientific cooperation between nations and countries, enjoying the cultural achievements of people around the world which encourages the process of modernization and the enrichment of national culture.However, these conditions also create the possible danger of diminishing the national culture with a negative impact on the pre123vation of national identity. Through globalization and an open door policy, erroneous concepts and a lowering of ethical standards, a selfish and individualistic lifestyle and harmful cultural products can easily be imported into the country. At present, modern information technology which in the main is controlled by US is hourly and intensively disseminating US ideology, way of life, culture and films across the world. Even US food is promoted so that some people consider globalization as global Americanization.During the process of economic globalization, inequality between developed and developing countries has been increasing and the gap between the rich and the poor has become wider, most of the result of globalization go to assist developed countries. Globalization does not pose equal interests and risks to all nations. With an overwhelming advantage compared to most of the developing countries in terms of finance and the level of science and technology, developed ca123alist countries control the situation of economic globalization.For these reasons, globalization is a fierce and complicated struggle in both cultural and ideological fields. We take the initiative in international economic integration but also have to take the initiative in fighting to keep our distinct culture resisting pro-foreign and cross-bred phenomena, and overcoming the psychology of preferring money over ethical values.雅思写作7分范文第2篇：说谎有没有必要Telling lie is usually looked upon as an evil, because some people try to get benefit from dishonest means or try to conceal their faults. On the other hand,honesty is widely recognized as the best policy.Parents always try to prove the benefits of being honest when you are a little child. A good story in this regard is .One day the childWashington chop down his farther s favorite cherry tree; although knowing he would deserve to be punished, he told his father the truth. Unexpected, his farther apprised him rather than executing a punishment; moreover, he was encouraged to maintain the good manner all the time. As known to all, the honest boy eventually became one of the greatest presidents in American history.However, telling lie,despite its negative effects, sometimes is essential in our daily life. First, the liar itself will benefit from the lie by escaping from the pressure of unnecessary embarrassment. On the other hand, the listener will feel more comfortable by reasonable excuses. For example, if a little girls farther died in an accident, her mother would comfort her by saying farther has gone to another beautiful land. In such cases, a lie with original goodwill is like a naught angel who might make the cruel nice. Furthermore, To some extent, the skills of telling lie can be regard as a capacity of creation and imagination.Taking all those factors into consideration, we can definitely come to the conclusion that whether telling lie is harmful depends on its original intention and the ultimate result it will bring. If one is honest with oneself, one always learns from mistakes, can correct a concept or a hypothesis and work further, and reach the goal finally.雅思写作7分范文第3篇：环境问题In a world today of immense technology, increasing population and flourishing economic , investigations have shown that the global economy was outgrowing the earths ecosystems. The whole industrial process which makes many of the goods and machines we need and use in daily lives, is bound to create a number of waste products which upset the environmental balance.As mass production is the core principle of industrial economy, mass consumption and mass abandonment become the core principle in industrial age. Many of these waste products can be prevented or disposed of sensibly, but clearly while more and more new goods are produced and made more complex, there will be new wastes to be disposed of. The rise of wastes has led to an unparalleled debate between environmental protection and economic development.However, they often ignore that the real victim of pollutions is not the citizen, because the rubbishes usually be gathered together and moved to an area far from the cities. As a result, in these areas the usable fields will be destructed, the air will be polluted, wild life, including both plants and animals will be put at risk, moreover, many inhabitants will be weaken on account of the waste despoil with poisonous materials from industrial companies.Whatever its underlying effects, there is no doubt that much of the pollution could be controlled if only companies, individuals andgovernments would make more effort.Globally, we can replace the automobile-based, fossil-fuel-centered, throwaway structure with a renewable-energy-based economy that reuses and recycles materials and has a stable population. Individuals, on the other hand, can help to solve by cutting out unnecessary buying,excess consumption and careless disposal of the products are use in our daily lives.雅思写作7分范文第4篇：幸福是什么Without any discussing, the key to happiness, in my opinion, is a harmonious relationship with the people in our lives.It is the people in our lives who bring us the most happiness. Family, friends and co-workers, who are part of our inner circle, share our experiences, hopes and dreams, successes and frustrations, joys and pains. Too often, many of us get on the fast track of life and take each other for granted. As a new millennium approach, more people disregard their passion and interests and choose careers based on job security, pay and professional promotion. As a result, they find themselves isolated and without friends. Loneliness is a common tragedy that destroys lives.Actually we were old enough to remember the old saying Money doesnt buy happiness, yet we strive for the material objects and pay a high price. The essence of happiness is the unconditionallylove we have for the people in our lives and their unconditionally love for us. To live life only for ourselves will bring us nothing but sadness and misery.A self-centered life is an unhappy life. Selfishness is a major block to happiness. Our feelings of insecurity and low self-esteem cause us to be takers rather than givers. Our selfishness is often a mask for fear. If we dont think too much about ourselves, we have a lot of work to do in order to enhance our self-worth. We must live for something greater than ourselves. To be happy, we must get out of ourselves. An unhappy person must turn outward, not inward, to find happiness.I truly believe that the happiest people are those who love many things. They love children, family and friends. They love sunrises and sunsets. They love life. They have even learned to love pain and despair rather than viewing them the opposite of happiness.雅思写作7分范文第5篇：计算机Globally, we have moved from a culture centered on network television, cable, AM and FM radio and telephone into a digital society with mass media,streaming information, intelligent computer. To shift to a digital economy, best demonstrated by the explosive growth of the Internet, is transforming everyday products and practices. Ideas expressed in soft wares, chips, communicationsystems, financial institutions and mass media have enormous leverage worldwide. Beyond emails and online shopping, the Internet promises to change dramatically huge spectrum activities. Its benefits can be well illustrated in the following aspects.In the first place, it contributes to escape us from laborious work, save our time, facilitate our lives. Secondly, with computers extensive reach into every corner of the world, a perspective of human life can be shown only with a single keystroke. No matter where we are, in school, business workshops, operating rooms, labs, banks of halls of government, the Internet appears to reflect a perspective of human life. Furthermore, computer profits us by relaxation and entertainment it provides.But on the other hand, some people debate that it is also inconvenient, waste the time, isolated us from people only with the company of computers, and make our lives more complicated. Some people repair the most sophisticated computer but cant mend a pair of socks. Yet in fact, computer collapse the distances and demolishes all boundaries. Whether computer is a blessing or a curse, depends on different circumstance and the way you use it.As a new millennium approach, we look forward to constructing a new fantasyland by combination with the wealth this new age will bring and the high technology it will provide.雅思写作7分范文第6篇：体罚的坏处Parents usually expect too much while raising their children. As a result, when it comes to discipline, most of them let temper flare out of control by executing physical punishment to their children. They believe bitter pills have wholesome sweet and they always in a panic that down to crime for youngsters is easy without pain tastes. Investigations showed that half of parents use punishment once or more, no matter their ethnicity, age, and socieconomic groups. However, despite the benefits it will bring, physical punishment is a hazard, which affects not only children, but also the parents themselves.On the first place, punishment can exert a bad impact on children by experience of serious reprocessing, with its evident contribution to childrens mental illness. Several studies showed that most frequent physical punishment with maltreatment maybe lead to depression, juvenile crimes and even suicide. Thus, most countries have already passed laws banning disciplinary action that inflicts physical suffering on a child.On the other hand, parents might also affect by their punishment behavior. When they lose them temper with their kids, they might feel irritated, sometimes even worse than children do. Moreover, the physical punishment, regardless its original intentions,has a negative impact on the bond between parents and children, on the account of frustrations, misunderstandings and even tears it will bring.Taking all those factors into consideration, I would argue that law are not the key to a violence-free, psychologically healthy upbringing, communication is. While Parents are establishing a bridge with a child during dialogue and equally exchange, they will both profit from it. Remember, serious punishment add sorrow and pain to our life, on the contrary, communication is the only remedy for better family relationship.。
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Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?The World Cup football match and the Olympics are held worldwide with great national support and expectations. As a fan of those competitions, I agree with the idea that sporting events can be necessary for international relations and national unity. In this essay, I will think about the effects of these popular sporting events.First of all, the World Cup, Olympics and other international games work for easing tensions among different nations. For example, South and North Korea have football games regularly which give two nations a chance to understand each other deeply. In the mid 1990s, a hundreds of North Korean supporters came to South Korea with the footballers and they were very excited during the sporting events. Even if it sounds ridiculous, many South Koreans were quite surprised at that moment when North Koreans shouted and cried during the match. We all realized that they were very normal sports fans even though they were occasionally very secretive. Through the sports, two divided nations could reduce their political and ideological tensions and could feel the patriotic unity.On the other hand, some sports matches can make international relations worse. For instance, football or baseball games between Korea and Japan are always big matches in two countries where full of tensions overflow. Sometimes, after the matches, the two rivals blame each other and their patriotic emotions explode in an aggressive way. Even much worse scenario is that the troubles caused by losing games affect the players directly. As far as I know, a couple of Korean players in Japan are suffered from invisible discrimination after the match between two countries.In conclusion, I think that international sporting occasions can be one of the good ways to ease tensions or to release patriotism safely. However, I believe that games can not be the fundamental ways for the sound patriotism or peaceful international relationsSome people say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?In today?s world _ due to the advancement of technology new inventions are coming into existence. It is a certaintythat ?necessity is a mother of invention?. _ Internet is just like a wonder box, which contains every type of information. Besides it has also proved as a very important tool to connect people with each other.In today?s modernized era nobody has sufficient time to write letters to their loved ones. Moreover it also takes longer to send or receive any information. But through an internet it is an easiest way to send massages to our loved ones. Either it can be in the form of an e- mail or by text messages from internet to cell phones. We can send and receive messages straight way.In other hand today?s youth generation mostly prefer to do chatting on () internet. Through this chatting we can write messages and straight way can get their reply. Moreover voice chatting is going to be very popular day-by-day.As it is a reality that advantages and disadvantages are like both sides of a coin, which usually runs parallel. So like other things internet also have some downsides, like people are facing some health problems for example, poor eye-sight, back ache, migrane. Today?s teenagers usually prefer to spend their time on internet rather than to participating in other physical activities, so that?s why they are going to be weaker in their physical health.To conclude, I would like to say that internet is one of the most modernized and most successful tools, not only for communication, even to get most relevant information regarding every field in a very short period of time.This is a great essay, well done! Remember ?the Internet? is a proper noun, currently, there is only one. Pay attention to your punctuation – many commas are missing after linking words. Otherwise, the essay is well argued and set out.With all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other things.Nations after nations, everyday, every year, celebrate their achievements in space exploration . However, it is now time to question how meaningful these blasts are. This essay aims to explain why it is questionable.First, until all urgent and important matters in this globe have been solved, money bumped on space exploration is of no meaning. It is not a common sense at all to invest million dollars researching and producing foods for astronauts (for space exploration purpose), while everyday thousands of people are starving. Furthermore, the discovery of outer space only serves a minor group of people if the majority are even not well-educated. Those in rural areas or third-world nations do no even know how to prevent common threatening diseases like AIDS and lung cancer.Then, some may argue that the purpose of space exploration are to discover new lands, new energy resources or to deter potential threat to globe. Nevertheless, is it effective to do so while other alternatives are available? Lands on earth are no yet effectively used. New energy resources (e.g. solar and nuclear energy) have not yet been widely-used. Threats of plagues have not yet been deterred. All these ?not- yets? need money. That is why costly space discovery programs are a waste of money.In the nutshell, people should only invest in space exploration providing that () early-mentioned urgent and important matters have been solved. Also, purposes of space exploration campaign should be studied carefully and other alternatives should be considered before money is wasted.In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?Freedom plays a mandatory role in everybody?s life. We can see in today?s modernized era nobody likes to get some restrictions upon them, whether it would be a child or an adult. Some people think that there should have some strict rules of behaviour for children, but I disagree with this statement.Wherever it is a reality that sometimes more restrictions can cause more frustration in children, which leads to many other mental diseases as well. Morever they can be, behave like a stubborn. Sometimes they feel themselves under pressure, which can be a main reason for their poor performance in their field. In some cases children would be crazier to do these things from where we?ll try to keep them away.In other words _ we have to look for other aspects as well, like if we usually ignore our children?s bad habits, then they can?t be good human beings in their future life. Moreover_ if we never draw attention upon the children?s main activities then they may be acquiring bad company. They can know regarding the value of respect for their elders. They can know the importance of relationships. They can know regarding their cultural values as well.In a nutshell, I would like to say that children should be teach regarding the value of their customs, rituals and respect towards their elders for their future life, but most of the extra restriction should be being avoided. It would be better to make them good human beings in their coming future.A good essay, set out well. Some sentences are too short and could be combined together to create more complex structure. There are also some repetitions of the same words, that should be avoided. Overall, nicely done.Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?I think wealthy nations should be required to share their wealth among poorer nations. But their helping should only stop at providing such things as food and education because of three following reasons.Firstly, citizens of both wealthy nations and poorer nations are human beings. Therefore, we can not look at, hear of, and talk about people who lack food, education, etc… without compassion and sympathy. Sharing wealth among poorer nations is not only a good deed but also a task itself.Secondly, many nations in Africa and Asia are very very poor. Famine, diseases, crime and illiteracy are killing their citizens. In the contrary, a lot of nations in Europe and America are too rich. If there are no actions taken, this inequality will increase dramatically. Poor countries will become more and more poorer while rich countries will become more and more richer. As a result, poorest countries will be slaves of richest countries. So, sharing wealth is an useful way to prevent people from that bad future.Thirdly, although sharing wealth among poorer nations is very necessary but this helping should only stop at providing such things as food, medicine and education. Or else, poor nations may depend on aid. They won’t have enthusiasm to build theircountries by themselves. Moreover, rich nations can take advantage of sharing wealth to interfere deeply in poor nations’ governments. This can’t be considered humane action and should be prevented.In my opinion, sharing wealth among poorer nations has both bad side and good side. What we have to do is avoiding its bad side and practicing its good side.This is an excellent essay, your arguments are convincing and very well presented. There are only a few minor mistakes, read and consider the comments. Very well doneShould wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?I think wealthy nations should be required to share their wealth among poorer nations. But their helping should only stop at providing such things as food and education because of three following reasons.Firstly, citizens of both wealthy nations and poorer nations are human beings. Therefore, we can not look at, hear of, and talk about people who lack food, education, etc… without compassion and sympathy. Sharing wealth among poorer nations is not only a good deed but also a task itself.Secondly, many nations in Africa and Asia are very very poor. Famine, diseases, crime and illiteracy are killing their citizens. In the contrary, a lot of nations in Europe and America are too rich. If there are no actions taken, this inequality will increase dramatically. Poor countries will become more and more poorer while rich countries will become more and more richer. As a result, poorest countries will be slaves of richest countries. So, sharing wealth is an useful way to prevent people from that bad future.Thirdly, although sharing wealth among poorer nations is very necessary but this helping should only stop at providing such things as food, medicine and education. Or else, poor nations may depend on aid. They won’t have enthusiasm to build their countries by themselves. Moreover, ric h nations can take advantage of sharing wealth to interfere deeply in poor nations’ governments. This can’t be considered humane action and should be prevented.In my opinion, sharing wealth among poorer nations has both bad side and good side. What we have to do is avoiding its bad side and practicing its good side.This is an excellent essay, your arguments are convincing and very well presented. There are only a few minor mistakes, read and consider the comments. Very well doneShould the same laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin be applied to tobacco?Recently, a hostile debate arouse when a few well reputable health organizations suggested the application of a similar act of heroin selling and usage prohibition _. In this assay, I will analyse why the adoption of such a law could be a breakthrough in ouryoungsters safety, according to my vision.Firstly , tobacco does not differ much from heroin when it comes to the later addictive effect. Nicotin , the active ingredient in tobac co, exerts its effect by acting directly on smoker’s brain cells. Numerous experiments carried out by scientist on animals, specailly rats, proved that this toxic chemical does lead by time to dependency, just similar to the effect experienced with herion.Secondly, restriction on cigerattes selling will surely show an instant decline in tobacco smoking. ” Having an easy access t o cigarettes puts a tremendous pressure, specially on teenagers,to resist such a temptation” Dr.Hisham , head of Pschycology depar tment at Alexandria Medical college , states firmly. “Giving the new generation the sense that the severity of smoking is equivilant to other lethal drugs usage woulod be a life saving step,they will thank us for() as they get older.” he continues.To reca pitulate, applying of a futuristic law as the suggested one will definetly have a positive impact ,not only on young people’s health but on our society as a whole.Well done! This is a very good essay but take care of your spelling.Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone?s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.Many people wonder about advertisement. Some people think that it has negative impact in our life. However, others said it has been playing as positive effect in this world. This is not an easy essay to be answered, but I will look at this issue.Why advertisement has been playing a negative effect in our life ? Of Course for several reasons: firstly, it motivates the psychological point in every body especially women. They will run to buy this advertised product especially if it’s from cosmetic roof, just to show their beauty to men, which will leads to more offender and raped cases. Secondly, you can sit comfortably with your family and suddenly the telephone is ringing, nothing important, rather than one of the companies try to convince you to buy one of their products. It is a real intrusive example of advertisement. Lastly, sometimes you do not have the financial ability to buy something, but with these new methods of advertisement, you will run to buy it, which will affect your budget.On the other hand, there are some good things. Such as, it compares the prices of the most of companies which benefit the consumer. Beside, it really opens our vision to see more products which we do not knowit unless TV and Radio show these things. In addition to, it cut down our daily routine to see new faces and know more language with daily update for their method of advertisement.In conclusion, as we can see there are many aspects to this essay. I feel that there is no benefit at all from advertisement, it plays on minds of people buy more thing that they do not need it at all.Your arguments are good and the paragraphs are well set out but you must be careful making definitive statements, eg ?it motivates the psychological point in every body?, how do you know all advertisements motivate me, for instance?Overall, a very good essay, well done.We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?In the last two decades cybernetics have experienced a major breakthrough .This led to the utilization of computers at nearly all parts of our daily life, from personal computers to complicated surgery performing. Surely the uptake of this technology facilitates a lot of difficult tasks but is this excessive dependance ripping the warmth of our lives? In this essay, I will outline how the availability of computers affects our lives.Most of the daily tasks an individual experiences are time and effort consuming. These two fundemental qualities could be tremendously saved by the use of computers. The average period required to prepare a decent meal for a middle-class family is around an hour to and hour and a half when using traditional methods. This time could be literally reduced to half if computerized decivesare used instead. Moreover, a busy businessman is enabled to easily close a profitable deal just with a touch on this highly programmed laptop while enjoying his family vacation and not having to exert an extra effort of traveling long distances just to sign a deal.On the other hand, new generations are growing remarkably dependent on these modern utilities, which make them handicapped when it comes to preparing a cup of tea. Inaddition, psychologists suggest that one of the main reasons for sucidal rate increase is recent electric inventions. This is due to that humans by nature stay emotionally healthy through socializing, but due to the importance of modern technology to maintain a financially satisfying standard of life they gradually isulate themselves. As time passes by each of these individuals gets stuck in a vicious circle of loneliness that eventually leads to suicidal attempts specially among youngsters.In conclusion, similar to every other invention computers has its benefits and drawbacks, I personally think it all depends upon how we use the given tools . Moderation is the key here to keep the balance and allow us to live in harmony.Good essay, nice vocabulary, a little too long (340 words instead of 250), a few grammatical mistakes. The topic is not fully covered (what about the “things will they be used for in future” part?).Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?Some people believe that internet access creates problems. There are several possible reasons why it can happen.First, some data may be unverifiable. For example, everytime they search for a data, there would be lots of choices that would appear on the screen. They would not be sure if the data they are reading has accurate information. Some sources have even outdated informations. Second, some sites may be unreliable. For instance, people sign up on one site that sells goods using online purchases. The goods would be paid for by credit card but the purchaser would not receive anything. And finally, not everything is available through the net. When my friend had tried to research for some pictures of 18th century paintings, he did not find any results. Then he was told by his teacher that it would only be available in the library.Others believe that internet is very useful and these are the justifications. First, it is hard to get data, that is available in the net by other means. For example, if directory information could not give me the accurate address and contact number of the place I want to visit, I normally check that information from the Internet. In just one click, I would get all the details of that certain company. Second, research becomes more comprehensive. For instance, I do not have to buy lots of reading materials to complete my research. Most of the needed information can be found if I have Internet access. And finally, data is easily compared and contrasted. I remember, my cousin researched the study about overweight children a decade ago and at present. He was able to finish his research in just one day, as compared to week if he would not use the Internet.In conclusion, let me reiterate that the Internet plays a big role in our life, because it makes data retrieval and comparison easier.It?s a good essay, the arguments are clear, the language and the grammar are also good. Structure needs to be improved little bit – make paragraphs smaller, re-divide so there would be 5 paragraphs instead of 4. In case it is argument essay ? give your opinion in the conclusion only. In case of opinion essay ? give your opinion in the introductionShareThisSome businesses now say that no one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.Most of the firms, organization and companies as well as Government make restrictions to smoke in work places and public amenities respectively. It has become fashionable in the world today to blame smoking. However, although I feel that smoking can be harmful, but I don’t think it should be forbidden completely. I would also argue that people should have the right whe ther they smoke or not.Let me deal with the three positive sides of smoking. Firstly, smoking certainly helps many people to relax. For some, it even improves concentration. If someone is upset owing to debt or they have exam, like to smoke to reduce the pressure or tension. Most of the people like to smoke when they are relaxing with friends. Secondly, governments throughout the world make hugeprofits from taxes on cigarettes. The income obtained from taxes provide funds which are used for building school, hospital and public places such as parks, gardens, sports ground and foot paths. Thirdly, tobacco industry also employs tens of thousands of people all over the world, particularly in poorer countries like Zimbabwe or India. Without cigarettes, these people would have no jobs.Despite these positive effects there are lots of negative effects of smoking too. Initially, smoking has been proven to be too dangerous for health. As one cigarette contain more then 4000 chemical substances, therefore, it causes for many injurious diseases like heart attacks, asthma, bronchitis, lung cancer and cough. According to the current report, in Britain about 3,500 people are killed each year in road accidents and 120,000 are killed by smoking. Furthermore, smoking costs government millions of dollars because of the large number of people who need treatment in hospitals for smoking-related problems. Moreover, there is also concern today about passive smoking. Recent research shows that non-smokers can suffer health problems if they spend long period of time among people who do smoke. In UK children whose parents are smoke are three times as likely to start smoking themselves _.In short, I think the world would be a better place without cigarettes. However, the decision as to whether _ smoke or not should be for each individual to make. I suggest people should not smoke in a room or place where there are non smokers but surely they should be free to smoke elsewhere.This a very good essay, you have made your arguments well and set the paragraphs out as required. However, take care with your use of definitive statements e.g. Without cigarettes, these people would have no jobs. Maybe they would gain employment in another industry, we cannot be sure. Over all, well done!Some businesses now say that no one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.Most of the firms, organization and companies as well as Government make restrictions to smoke in work places and public amenities respectively. It has become fashionable in the world today to blame smoking. However, although I feel that smoking can be harmful, but I don’t think it should be forbidden completely. I would also argue that people should have the right whether they smoke or not.Let me deal with the three positive sides of smoking. Firstly, smoking certainly helps many people to relax. For some, it even improves concentration. If someone is upset owing to debt or they have exam, like to smoke to reduce the pressure or tension. Most of the people like to smoke when they are relaxing with friends. Secondly, governments throughout the world make huge profits from taxes on cigarettes. The income obtained from taxes provide funds which are used for building school, hospital and public places such as parks, gardens, sports ground and foot paths. Thirdly, tobacco industry also employs tens of thousands of people all over the world, particularly in poorer countries like Zimbabwe or India. Without cigarettes, these people would have no jobs.Despite these positive effects there are lots of negative effects of smoking too. Initially, smoking has been proven to be too dangerous for health. As one cigarette contain more then 4000 chemical substances, therefore, it causes for many injurious diseases like heart attacks, asthma, bronchitis, lung cancer and cough. According to the current report, in Britain about 3,500 people are killed each year in road accidents and 120,000 are killed by smoking. Furthermore, smoking costs government millions of dollars because of the large number of people who need treatment in hospitals for smoking-related problems. Moreover, there is also concern today about passive smoking. Recent research shows that non-smokers can suffer health problems if they spend long period of time among people who do smoke. In UK children whose parents are smoke are three times as likely to start smoking themselves _.In short, I think the world would be a better place without cigarettes. However, the decision as to whether _ smoke or not should be for each individual to make. I suggest people should not smoke in a room or place where there are non smokers but surely they should be free to smoke elsewhere.This a very good essay, you have made your arguments well and set the paragraphs out as required. However, take care with your use of definitive statements e.g. Without cigarettes, these people would have no jobs. Maybe they would gain employment in another industry, we cannot be sure. Over all, well done!Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another.A global village, that is certainly what the world feels like nowadays. With the help of the world wide web, you can reach out and get to know people you might never meet in person. Articles can be coauthored, business deals can be finalized, degrees can be earned and at times even medical advice can be given?and all of this is just a click away.Electronic mail, instant messages, web cameras and microphones; all these gadgets and programs make the presence of the other the person more real. Who knows; with the help of visual reality you might even get a 3-D image of the speaker! I believe that the internet is one the best inventions of the last century, you can hardly get to miss anyone and nobody is really out of reach. You will get to keep the channels patent with your friends, and will be able to do your work from your bedroom in your pajamas!However, the internet can also be a major source of harassment. Spammers and hackers can invade your privacy and get personal/confidential information, which otherwise they will never get access to. You are never out of anybody’s reach, unles s you make a conscious decision of not checking your email, there can be always more work waiting for you in your inbox and you might never have a moment for yourself. Worse, if you were a workaholic, you might never experience that stress-free vacation ever again in your life?simply, because you have your mobile workplace with you.As a romantic, I will always look forward to getting an occasional letter in the snail mail. A personal letter, where I can sense the mood of the writer by the slants in his/her handwriting and get to know him/her better. But as a type A personality person, the。