高考英语增分秘籍-《描述活动和过程》的典例及仿写

高中作文写作指导--描述《活动与过程》

【典例1】万一计划失败,我们将采取其他的措施来解决这个问题。If the plan were to fail,we would adopt other measures to solve the problem.

If the plan should fail,other measures would be taken to deal with the problem.

Should the plan fail,we would take other steps to settle the problem.

If the plan to solve the problem failed,we would take other measures. [仿写]要不是妈妈心不在焉,我们就会省去一遍遍回去的麻烦。(1)If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.

(2)Had mom not been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.

(3)Mom was absent-minded,otherwise it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.

积累:

if+主语+should/were to do 表示对将来情况的假设

【典例2】我们怎样克服这些困难呢?

How is it that we get rid of the difficulties?

How shall we overcome the difficulties?

How shall we smooth away the difficulties?

What measures/steps should we take to overcome the difficulties?

What is it that we should do to get over the difficulties?

[仿写]我们怎样解决自行车停放场地的问题呢?

(1)How is it that we solve the problem with the parking place for bikes?

(2)What measures/steps should we take to solve the problem with the parking place for bikes?

(3)What is it that we should do to solve the problem with the parking place for bikes?

积累:

How/What is it that...?为强调句式

take measures to do sth采取措施做某事

【典例3】他突然想起一个好主意。

Suddenly he hit on/upon a good idea.

Suddenly a good idea came to his mind.

A good idea suddenly flashed across his mind.

He suddenly thought out a good idea.

A good idea suddenly struck him.

A good idea suddenly occurred to him.

[仿写]徒劳地驾驶了一段时间以后,母亲突然有了一个好主意。

(1)After driving in vain for some time,Mum suddenly hit on/upon a good idea.

(2)Suddenly a good idea came to her mind after she had driven in vain for some time.

(3)A good idea suddenly flashed across her mind after she had driven in vain for some time.

(4)A good idea suddenly occurred to her after she had driven in vain for some time.

积累:

hit on/upon a good idea想起一个好主意

a good idea comes to sb’s mind 某人想起一个好主意

flash acr oss sb’s mind在某人的脑海中闪过

a good idea occurs to sb某人想起一个好主意

【典例4】他正在努力实现他的目标。

He is making every effort to achieve his goal.

With great efforts,he is struggling to achieve his goal.

He is sparing no effort to realize his aim.

He is doing everything in his power to realize his aim.

He is doing/trying his best to achieve his goal.

He is doing what he could to make his goal come true.

He is doing as much as he could to realize his aim.

[仿写]父亲和我非常努力地沿着河流走,以便于找到保罗叔叔的农场。

(1)Dad and I made every effort to follow the river,so that we may find