高考英语作文专题复习-图表类说明文

实： 践演练
下图是我国近10年私人汽 车拥有情况,反映了人 们生活水平的变化.
[写作内容] 99 00 01 02 03 04 05 06 07 08 09 请根据以上数据,写一 篇短文，包括以下内容:
1. 近10年我国私人汽 车拥有量增加了5倍多;
2. 增加的理由是：经 济增长快；节约时间。
3. 你对此现象的看法。
高考英语基础写作 复习系列
图表类说明文的类型
一是以表格形式,将统计的 数据或被说明的事物直 接用表格形式体现出来,
即统计表（table） 。
Item Food
1994 1995 1996 1997 1998 65% 60% 48% 42% 35%
clothing 8% 9% 12%l 15% 17%
remain, for…
范文剖---析- 07年高考基础写作
[写作内容] 根据以上数据,写一篇短 文,包括以下内容: 1.调查时间,调查问题,以 及调查对象; 2.男女生在以明星为偶像 方面的差异; 3.”父母”在男女生偶像 中的排序差异; 4.男女生在以伟人为偶像 方面的异同; 5.你的偶像及理由。
1.The graph/chart/table above shows… 2. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen
that... 3. As (正如) is shown in the graph, ... 4. It has been shown from the table that…
表示下降的动词: fall，decline，decrease，drop， go down, …;
表示下降的名词: fall，decline，decrease，drop, …；
表示平稳:
remain steady/unchanged…
常用句型：（ Facts）
1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in…
that… ５. ….is the key factor (因素)in… ６. It is because of … _t_h_a_t__ …
第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。
常用表达：
1. in a word,/ in short,（简而言之） / _g_e_n_e_r_a_lly speaking（总的来说）
（在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式 或对比式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由）。注意层
次。 即 facts and reasons学科网 zxxk
增长/减少的表达:
表示上升的动词: rise，increase，climb，go up , …；
表示上升的名词: rise，increase, …;
Possible Version: As can be seen from the graph, great changes in car ownership have taken place in China in the past ten years. The number of private cars increased more than 5 times from nearly 3 million in 1999 to over 15 million in 2009. It’s mainly because the economy of China has developed so rapidly that many Chinese people want to own private cars. Besides, in modern society, many Chinese need a car to do business so as to save time. In my view, as the car ownership constantly increases year by year, a large number of social problems, such as traffic jams, will turn up in nearly every city throughout China.
2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in…
3.The rate dropped slightly from 38%in…to 31% in…
4. By comparison with…,it decreased/increased/fell from…to…
B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的柱状图（ bar chart / graph ）;
C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图 （ pie chart ）
图表类说明文的写作步骤
第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题, 即conclusion.
常使用的词汇有:
（图表/数据）：table, chart, graph，figure（数据）… ； 动词： describe， tell, show, represent … 常用句型：
篇章结构:
1.Conclusion 2.Facts and reasons 3.Your own opinion/
suggestions
Try to finish your passage within 10 minutes.
[checklist] 1.是否只用了5句? 2.要点是否齐全? 3.是否符合图表类说明文的篇章结构? 4.有无语法或拼写错误? 5.是否用上了高级词汇或高级结构? 6.有无过渡性词语,使文章更连贯?
2. In summary, it is important… 3. From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion(得出结论）that… 4. Obviously/_A_p_p_a_r_e_n_tl_y__（很明显地）, if we want to…, it is
范文剖析
a. Conclusion/fact/reason/your opinion? b.数据的表达?
1._C_o_n_cl_u_si_o_n Last week，we did a survey among 2， 600 students on “Who is your idol”. 2.__F_a_c_t The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols，while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. 3.__F_a_ct_ As the data shows， “parents” rank the second for the girls， but the fpoeurrctehnftoargteheofbtohyes.bo4y._sF_ac_ch_to_oHsionwge“vegrr，eatthfeigures” is the same as that of the girls.Y5o.u_r_o_p_in_io_n__ As for myself， Thomas Edison is my idol， because his inventions have greatly changed our life.
[写作要求] 1. 只能使用5个句子表
达全部内容; 2. 标题 :Car
Ownership in China。
写作指导
人称: 第三人称
时态: 现在完成时& 一般现在时
要点:
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1. 近10年我国私人汽 车拥有量发生了巨变；
2. 2009年私人汽车拥 有量比1999年增加了5 倍多; 3. 理由1：经济增长快; 4. 理由2：节约时间; 5. 你对此现象的看法。
5. Statistics show a 20% rise/reduction in traffic accidents compared with last year.
6. The population owning mobile phones increased by 10% in 1999.
倍数的表达:
necessary… 5. T_h__e_re__is__n_o_d__o_u_b_t_t_h_a_t (毫无疑问) attention must be paid
to… 6. Is_u_g_g_e_s_t(建议)the government take effective measures
to … 7.P_e_r_s_o_n_a_l_ly, I think(就我来看) the “golden week” should
Homework
Learn by heart the useful expressions we learnt today.
知识回顾 Knowledge Review
Recreation 3% 5% 7% 8% 10%
Others 24% 26% 33% 35% 38%
Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格
二是以图形形式 A 表示数据变化的ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu线图（ graph ）;
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表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图
Reasons:
1. The reason why/for …is that… 2. One may think of the change as a result of…
3. The change in … largely results _fr_o_m__
the fact that… ４.This brings out the important fact
1.The number /rate has nearly _d_o_u_b_l_e_d （是．．．的两倍）, as against that of last year.
2.The number is five times as many as that of…. （是…的5倍)
=The number is four times more than in…(比．．．多４倍)