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Some people think schools should only teach students academic subjects. Others think schools should also teach students how to discriminate between right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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句1 School always be believed as a place where can increase knowledge and expand work skills of young people..

错：主句没有谓语动词；从句没有主语

正：Schools are normally seen as the place where the next generation can increase knowledge to improve employability.

句 2 In my opinion, academic courses are very important, but students do not know how to distinguish between right and wrong, they are difficult to success in their future works.

错：人不能说are difficult to；success是名词；work 不可数

正：I n my view, academic subjects are important to one’s career achievement, but students who do not learn the difference between right and wrong cannot succeed in their working lives.

句3 Many teachers think that students should give top priority to major courses, as those courses can be a key factor which can decide whether they can enter to university in the future.

错：enter是及物动词；a key factor which can decide whether也非常的多余

正： Many teachers suggest that students should concentrate on core subjects, because the performance in these courses can determine whether they can enter the university in the future.

句4 the knowledge which learned from these courses can lay a firm grounding for university and find a better job in the future..

错：which learned少了一个助动词is

正：What students can learn in academic courses can provide a firm grounding for university and help them find decent jobs.

句5 For instance, If they study math well in middle schools, they can build models to analyze data in college and maybe become financial analysts or engineers..

错：analyze是美国拼写，最好改成英国拼写；maybe是个副词，应该改成情态动词may 正： For example, students who acquire mathematical skills at school can build models to analyse data at university and work as financial analysts and engineers after they graduate.

句6 If students need to spend time on studying ethics and behaviors, they are may not able to focus on core subjects.

错：spend time in doing something才是正确的表达；are助动词和may情态动词不能连用，这种错误都是低级错误

正：They are less likely to focus on key disciplines if they are required to spend time in studying moral principles and behaviour norms.

句7 Schools can impart some important virtue into students, which enable these students to make good use of their knowledge and become active members of the society.

错：定语从句的谓语动词单复数不对，如果修饰前面整句话，那么谓语动词应该用单数正：Schools can impart some important virtues into students, which enable them to make good use of their knowledge to contribute positively to society.

句8 If someone knows loyalty, they are not able to sell important documents of this company to other competitors.

错：someone和They两个代词不搭配；not able to也不恰当，这些人永远是“有能力”去出售，只是“去不去”出售

正： If one understands the value of loyalty, he or she will not sell confidential documents of his or her employer to other companies.

句9 If a engineer meet his or her social responsibility, there will be more products that are safe to use available to consumers.