人教版高中英语选修七 Unit5writing 公开课课件

In spite of the language barrier, attending schools abroad has many
advantages. Firstly, by looking at our own country from outside, we can widen
our vision and broaden our minds. Secondly, it will be an approach to the
体裁
A letter
人称
The first
时态 要点 框架
the present tense
the language barrier widen our vision make friends with visit scenic spots the second language
共 _3___段:__o_p_e_n、ing____b_o_d、y ___e_n_ding
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Tell your intention directly
Dear Linda, I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I've been
thinking about the question you asked me. I suggest you should study abroad after you finish your studies.
I‘m very glad to have received the letter you sent me Ctwhoinwgeeliksshago. I
hear that you are to finish your studies and consider whether to go abroad to
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审题
体裁_______________ 人称__________________ 时态_______________ 结构__________________ 段落_______________ 要点__________________
famous scenic spots and making friends with the local people. Thirdly, as we are
using the foreign language in our daily life ，our ability in the second language
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two
continue to study or not. You ask for my opinion and meet with my suggestions.I think you can consider the follow things；
First, although language barrier will make you not eiallsoygtoicaadal pt to study for a
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
can help you a lot. You can have a good commmand of a foreign Language.
Looking forward to your reply.
dull(单调的）
Best wishes,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
while,there are many advantages for you.In this way,you can have a wider eyesight
and you can enjoy the beauties of local.Besides, you can make more friends who
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes,
开门见山，表明写作意图。
在本段中，写信人应该先简单
介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信
的目Y的o及ur原s 因si。ncerely, Li Hua
Rewrite the opening of Sample 2
too wordy
1 too subjective
2 too wordy
Errors of ougropordactical
writing
3 Chinglish
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illogical
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dull
Good? Errors?
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Sample1
Dear Linda,
too subjective (武断的)
基于过程-体裁教学法的微话题写作 ---出国游学
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writing
Unit 5 Travelling abroad
How to produce a good Gaokao writing?
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Fuzhou No.4 Middle School
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two
weeks ago. I've been thinking about the question you asked me. IIn msuygogpeisntioyno, u
you should study abroad after you finish your studies.
may be improved quickly. On the whole, it is good to study abroad.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Sample2
too wordy
Dear Linda,