读写综合参考答案

专项六读写综合《考试大纲》中书面表达的“评分原则”及“各档次评分范围与要求”。

评分原则与方法：①采用总体评分法：考生能否根据写作提示，较好地把阅读文章中与写作相关的内容进行归纳、提炼、运用来完成书面表达任务。

评分时，先确定所属档次，然后以该档次的要求进行微调，最后给分。

原文照抄的，只能在第5档中调整；但正确引用原文少数句子且运用得当的，不扣分。

②注重内容的完整及语言表达的准确；语法、单词拼写和标点符号错误，每处扣0.5分。

③少于或多于规定词数15个的扣0.5~1分。

④对于在完成任务前提下的适当发挥，最多加分不超过1分。

评分档次和要求：第一档：13~15分要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。

第二档：10~12分要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少数语言错误。

第三档：8~9分要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。

第四档：5~7分要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少量正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。

第五档：0~4分只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性，错误很多。

提示：同学们在平时的练习中可以自己根据评分细则给自己的作文打分，也可以同桌之间互评，也可以让老师评价，不断在实践中理解中考的要求，领悟书面表达的要领，这样才能真正提高自己的书面表达能力。

一味的练习而不去反思和总结，练习的效果就会大大减弱，只有在平时的练习中不断的评价自己，不断的总结自己的不足，然后有针对的去练习这样才能在中考中取得好的成绩。

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