英语写作例证法

The teacher who impressed me most was my maths teacher. Compared with other teachers, he was careful in choosing his way of teaching. He tried various ways to make his classes lively and interesting. Instead of giving us answers immediately, he encouraged us to think by ourselves whenever he put forward questions. Besides, he also paid equal attention to all the students, whether they had good marks or not. Although I did poorly in maths, I never felt ignored because he always gave as much guidance as he could to students like me. Never will I forget my maths teacher and his lively classes. From my experience, I firmly believe that a qualified teacher should be one like him.
例证法2
The writer tells us that after his father died, his single mother gave a lot of help to him, which led to his great success in spite of a lot of hardships and failures in his life.
例证法1：I will Never Forget My Teacher 注意文体和写作目的！ Outline: (From this story we can learn how important …) As far as I’m concerned, a good teacher has a positive influence on his students while … 具体一两点“好” _____________ ________________________ I’m a lucky one to have such a good teacher such _________________________________________. There was a time when I _____________ __________________________________________ 选取恰当事例证明你的观点， 叙述过程 ______. From my experience, I firmly believe that 重复观点，而不是借机表达感激 __________________________________________.
例证类文章写作模板：
1. Title 2. Summary [About the original passage ( About 30words)] 3. A transitional sentence 4. An opinion (表达观点只需用两句话左右） 5. An example ( a narrative to support the above opinion ) （本部分为主体，应占body部分的60%以上） 6. An ending paragraph (emphasis the opinion) （本部分为附属，只需用2-3句话即可）
例证法1
When the student was upset, the teacher told him about his own attitude towards life and encouraged him to face bravely pains and gains in life, which helped him finally defeat his depression.
------叙事类文章的概括
叙事类文章的主要信息点
叙事类文章的内容包括“主题、 情节和主旨”三个方面，其中情节是主 要部分，“主题”和“主旨”有时藏于 “情节”之中。但在写摘要时，不能仅 仅描写情节，必要时要点出“主题”和 “主旨”。
如何写概括?
阅读材料若是记叙文体裁
A ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ummary of an event
The Good Teacher In My Eye The writer lists the best qualities of a good teacher, including love of students, a good knowledge of his subject, devotion to the job, and skills in helping students’ learning. He also points out that being well-balanced is also important. I quite agree with what the author says. In my opinion, besides what the author mentions above, there are two things that I think can be added to the best qualities of a good teacher. One is that he or she should treat the students fairly. The other thing is that he or she should be able to make the class lively and interesting.
例证类文章的写作注意事项：
• 审题 就“ ……”主题发表你的看法， 根据你的亲身经历，简述… 通过你的经历/一两个例子来说明…… • 功能 例证类作文属于议论文，举的例子应为论点服务。 • 例证的类型 1. 具体的一件事情。 2. 一种经历（广泛的）。
3. 不要忘了举例完后，要点题，再次点 明论点。
The writer lists the best qualities of a good teacher, including love of students, a good knowledge of his subject, devotion to the job, and skills in helping students’ learning. He also points out that being wellbalanced is also important. <写作内容> 就“我心目中的好老师”这主题发表你的看法， 包括以下要点： 1 你对好老师的看法是什么？ 2 结合自己的经历，介绍你的一位好老师。
默写
1.sinopec 2.subconscious 3.subway 4.audience 5.police substation 6.submarine 7.subtitle 8.semi-manufactured 9.bimonthly 10.tricycle 11.triangle 12.suburban 13.auditorium 14.transfer 15.transform 16.transmit 17.transplant 18.thermometer 19.thermos 20.automatically
如果给定的阅读材料是一则故事，应该用最简练 的语言来说明故事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水讲细 节，而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道 理。比如说，
This story tells how a teacher’s word saved a shy and unconfident child and helped him find himself and hold on to his dreams.(故事讲述 了什么)It tells us that teachers’ words can make difference to a child’s life.(故事给你的启示
或道理)
记叙文体裁
归纳
1. This story is mainly about +名词词组 .+其 他细节 2. This short passage tells us a story that … （故事的主要内容）
3.This passage mainly describes /concerns （谈及） …; …(例如：the interpersonal relationships in our society.）+具体细节
4 结尾点题句
Only with courage/ interest/ confidence /bravery / perseverance can / will we overcome difficulties/ face challenges Well / get over obstacles / achieve our aim/ realize our dream/ fight against misfortune/create miracles/ succeed/feel happy, … … Only by keeping trying / working hard … can we … … Only when … can we … Only if … can we … It is / was … that results in / leads to …
例证类body部分的写作框架： Summary和body部分衔接语： 1 We often ……in our daily life. 2 Unfortunately this is just what I used to do. 3 I quite support what the boy thought. 4 I used to … 5.There was once a time when I 6.The simple but instructive story reminds me of my own experience. 7.After reading this short story, I have learned that …….Therefore……..
Summary Samples
阅读材料若是记叙文体裁
This story is about +名词词组 e.g This story is about a father with nobleminded ethics. The father would rather spend more money than tell a lie that his son is less than six. …
8. After reading the story/ passage, I am /was deeply impressed/ moved/ inspired/ encouraged / depressed (by)… 9. I can’t help complaining / regretting /… 10. It’s a fact / it’s true that …