如何写好高中英语作文
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3)用好连接词,注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。 要做到所写文章层次分明,思路清晰,文字连贯, 就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁, 而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。
4. 注意逻辑 (Logical 1. It is hard to learn English well. I won't give up connection)
3. 表示因果关系
因为,因此,所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;
4. 表示条件关系
如果,只要: if ; on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless
5. 进行举例说明
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In a word,with my great effort,my high school life will be excellent.
I'm very sorry that you are addicted to surfing How to Spend a Meaningful ? the Internet. and find it hard National to give it Holiday up.
2. 构思 (Structure design)
3. She went to Australia in order to study music.
(purpose) She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music. 4. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the 比较级,the 比较级)
1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外,还有: what’s more, besides,
in addition, not only…but also…
2. 表示转折关系
但是, 然而, 相反:
but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary.
4. I will welcome to you. →Welcome to China. ◆“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、 冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如: Under my teacher and classmates all help to me ,……. →With the help of my teachers and classmates,……
例如,比如: for example, for instance, like; such as , that is to say, and so on, believe it or not,
6. 用于陈述事实
实际上: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth
5. 检查修改 (Check and correct)
增强书面表达效果的技巧
1. 使用较高级的词汇
词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少,也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少,从而使 整篇文章因此而生辉 。 使用恰当连接词,对写一 篇有“英语味”的文章很 重要,能使文章上下衔接 自然、紧凑。
亲爱的同学们,你们的高中生活已经 开始,请以”My school life”为题写一 篇100字左右的文章,谈谈你对高中生活 的设想(努力学习拿高分,培养自己的兴 趣爱好如阅读,运动等,交往更多的朋 友...)不能出现真实班级和姓名。
Tips:
• • • • • • • study hard; achieve high greads ; develope interests; reading more meaningful books; enrich our knowledge take exercise keep healthy
意,确定文章的中心思想、主题,并围绕中心思 想组织材料。 Jim is addicted to surfing the Internet. He wants to give up but doesn't know how. He has written to you to ask for advice. Please write him a letter back to give him advice.
3. If you get to China that have time, me with you look my hometown.
→I hope you’l l get a chance to come to China and I’ll show you around my hometown if you are free .
purpose First of all,I think the best way to my goal is to study and .What'more,I should develop more interestes such as reading some meaningful books to our knowledge,taking more exercise to keep healthy,which are of great help for body me.Last but not least,it is important for me to make more friends.
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要留时间通读全文,修改可能出现的错误。检查上 下文是否连贯,句子衔接是否自然流畅。检验的标 准主要是句子是否通畅,该用连词的地方用了没有, 所用的连词是否合适,是否有语法错误,主谓是否 一致,动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确, 词组的搭配是否合乎习惯,是否有大小写、拼写、 标点错误等,还有就是注意卷面整洁。
learning it. ● Even if it is hard to learn English well, I won't give it up. 2. He spent his holiday studying. I spent my holiday doing exercise. ● He spent holiday studying while I (spent holiday) doing exercise. 3. I don't know what had happened to them. I don't care about what had happened to them. ● I neither know nor care about what had happened to them.
题,千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。展开的 方式包括:顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、 说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。可 以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。
3. 扩展成文 (Content development) 1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一
致性。只有这样,才能保证所写段落不偏题、不跑 题。 2)要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排,避免段落内 容的交叉。
审好题、立好意后,就要写提纲,打造文章 的骨架。文章布局要做好几件事:安排好层 次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾。
Para1. Purpose of writing; Para2. Your points; Para3. Conclusion and expectation;
3. 扩展成文 (Content development) 根据字数多少扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主
7. 表示结果:
thus, therefore,so, so that as a result, luckily, unfortunately 8.对一个话题进行总结 总而言之,总的来说:
on the whole, in short, in a word finally, in conclusion, in the end
6、各种状语从句
Time passed quickly before we knew it.
Conclusion:
写作常用语法结构:
1. 适当的被动语态
3. 三大类复合句
2. 并列句
4. 非谓语动词
5. With 复合结构
7. 虚拟语气 9. 感叹句等
6. 强调句
8. 倒装句
III.常用的连接词
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.
II. 丰富的句式:(常用到的句型结构) 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增 加文章的文采。
1.感叹句
How happy I was when I received your letter! It was this young boy who helped the old granny.
samples of student work
字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息,不得分。
samples of student work
Bad sample
次卷 不面 清不 整 得洁 分涂 改 较 多 语 言 错 误 多 层
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影响书面表达得分的因素:
◆①语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误”
3.省略句
2.强调句
They read while walking or riding on a bus.
4、with短语
I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.
5、定语从句
Let’s come to the main teaching building, the windows of which are blue.
◆ ②书写是否工整清晰
也会影响答卷得分。卷 面不整洁,涂改多;大
小写;标点符号;书写不 清,得分会很低!
◆③审题不认真,要点有所遗漏 注意:
1. 彻底理解题意,看准答题要求 (包括字数要求)。 2. 把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。
3. 连词成句,连句成文。
4.成文后认真检查,确信无一遗漏。
1. 审题 (Understanding of the topic) 审题是做到切题的第一步。所谓审题就是要看清题
“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中 式英语等,如: 1.My hometown had big change, build many houses, …… 2. My hometown has great changes. →Great changes had taken place in my hometown there. For example, many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.
技 巧
2. 使用较丰富的句式
3. 使用恰当的连接词
I. 怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. We all think he is a great man. (评价很高)
We all think highly of him . 2.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. (occur) A good idea occurred to me.