高中英语---读后续写素材：人与动物精彩描写

读后续写素材：人与动物精彩描写

关于狗的神态描写

How to make the dog in your writing vivid and eye-catching?

1.Upon his master’s arrival, the dog leapt to his feet ，snorted happily and bounded forward.(高兴狗狗)

2.The dog curled into a wet lump and lay shivering on the ground. (可怜狗狗)

3.Aware of the immense danger, the crippled dog was doing impression of a corpse. （胆怯狗狗）

4.He stretched, shook himself and circled several times before dropping to the ground.（伸个懒腰抖抖身，保证有个好睡眠）

5.With pricked ears, he watched for a moment and then yawned. （警觉狗狗）

6. Lying on the ground，the dog kept his eyes wide open, ears flat,a vibrating growl deep in his chest.（别惹我，后果自负）

7.The dog wandered off to rest her noses in her paws.（我想静静，不想理你）

8. Dogs take much pleasure in rolling and rubbing their necks and backs with their paws.（调皮狗狗）

9.Seeing the meat in the master’s hand, the little dog wagged its tail and watched with hopeful eyes.（馋狗狗）

10.At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog watched him, ears

up, head slightly cocked. （高度戒备狗狗）

11.The dog, when intently watching and slowly approaching the prey, kept one of

its fore-legs doubled up for a long time, ready for the next cautious step.（伺机一扑,成败在此一举）

12.Little puppies enjoy playing growling and biting each other’s faces and legs.（天真烂漫小可爱）

13.The dog got worried, crawling up around the old man’s feet as if to seek for safety and warmth. （好怕怕，别过来）

A heroic dog

Like most dogs whose homes are situated on large plots of land，one New Zealand dog regularly went off exploring through the farmland around his home for hours at a time.

But as Louie，a sheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy，got older，his trips got shorter and shorter.Now that Louie is 12 years old，he chooses to stay close to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more，which is why his family was so worried when he

recently disappeared and didn't return home as usual.

“My mother was a little upset as he had stopped his wandering，” said Marolyn Diver，whose parents own Louie.“We were very concerned that he might forget where his home was.” But thankfully，Louie turned up at the house a few hours later.“He looked so tired and had basically just collapsed(崩溃)，”Marolyn said.“We were concerned that someone might have hurt him.But then we realized there was a small note attached to Louie's collar.After reading the note，I felt complete relief and relaxed，and then my heart melted.”

“Louie is the hero of the day，” read the note，which was written by a neighbor about a mile away.“He led me to Maddy in distress stuc k under a pile of branches．Cheers，Rob．” “According to Rob，Louie was waiting for him at his house and demanded to be followed.Rob said that he was 100 percent sure that Louie knew what he was doing，and leading him to Maddy was his pure focus，” Marolyn expla ined.

注意：

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1：

Once Rob found Maddy, Louie helped him dig her

Paragraph 2：

“That night we were very worried about Louie，” Marolyn

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