高三英语作文精品课课件
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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless
高三英语写作课课件
Dengfa Memorial Middle School
Li Jianping
Task 1 Enjoy pictures
Read between the lines…
Live like there’s no tomorrow.
Dance like no one’s looking.
Today a reader, tomorrow a leader.
Task 4 Go over key sentences and make necessary changes
1.You will be fined if you’re caught without a ticket valid for that journey. 2.Buying saver tickets online is always less than buying on the bus. 3. Having the right money can help keep the buses running on time and it does speed up boarding for everyone.
everyone’s safety & security
If you feel one of our staff has Helping us given exceptional service it’s good to to help know. Similarly, if you think we’ve let you you down we need to is to about it so we know help you. =Helping us can put things right!
Li Jianping
Task 1 Enjoy pictures
Read between the lines…
Live like there’s no tomorrow.
Dance like no one’s looking.
Today a reader, tomorrow a leader.
Task 4 Go over key sentences and make necessary changes
1.You will be fined if you’re caught without a ticket valid for that journey. 2.Buying saver tickets online is always less than buying on the bus. 3. Having the right money can help keep the buses running on time and it does speed up boarding for everyone.
everyone’s safety & security
If you feel one of our staff has Helping us given exceptional service it’s good to to help know. Similarly, if you think we’ve let you you down we need to is to about it so we know help you. =Helping us can put things right!
高中英语写作公开课ppt课件
PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文 字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
添加标题
使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避 免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造 议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密 说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确 应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇 和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学 生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读 字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色 文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局 文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力 图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高 图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解 色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的 单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的 语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点 和难点。
总结本节课所学的 写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。 作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。 上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。 奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。
高三英语作文《介绍信》(精品课件共36页PPT)
I intend to give you a lecture related to/ concerned with Tang Poetry. Tang Poetry, regarded as a national treasure, precisely reflected the social life of the Tang Dynasty, which, I think, will help you improve your language skills and increase your knowledge about Chinese culture. We’ll appreciate some classic Tang poems. To learn them well, you’d better have a brief understanding about the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will certainly contribute to your learning.
If you have any other question, don’t hesitate to tell me and I would like to have a further discussion with you.
活动项目介绍文体概述
定义: 活动项目介绍就是介绍某个项目，可以介绍一个运动项 目、一个组织、一个活动等。
活动项目介绍常用词块
11. 复杂的背景 complex background
12. 详细地描述…… give a detailed description of…
13. 按照时间/空间顺序 in order of time/space
If you have any other question, don’t hesitate to tell me and I would like to have a further discussion with you.
活动项目介绍文体概述
定义: 活动项目介绍就是介绍某个项目，可以介绍一个运动项 目、一个组织、一个活动等。
活动项目介绍常用词块
11. 复杂的背景 complex background
12. 详细地描述…… give a detailed description of…
13. 按照时间/空间顺序 in order of time/space
《高三英语书面表达》课件
Correction method
Read your text aloud to check for inappropriate language or expressions. Consider the reader's perspective and adjust your language accordingly.
03
Prepare students for advanced English communication in college and beyond.
01
Lecture
Provide students with background knowledge and essential concepts for written English expression.
Common errors and correction methods in written English expression in senior high schoolPractice and Improvement of Written English Expression in Senior High SchoolSimulated Test Questions and Analysis of Written English Expression in Senior High School
Reading and Writing
Read English articles and write summaries or reflections to improve comprehension and expression.
Dictation Practice
Listen to English audio materials and rewrite them, focusing on sentence structure and vocabulary usage.
Read your text aloud to check for inappropriate language or expressions. Consider the reader's perspective and adjust your language accordingly.
03
Prepare students for advanced English communication in college and beyond.
01
Lecture
Provide students with background knowledge and essential concepts for written English expression.
Common errors and correction methods in written English expression in senior high schoolPractice and Improvement of Written English Expression in Senior High SchoolSimulated Test Questions and Analysis of Written English Expression in Senior High School
Reading and Writing
Read English articles and write summaries or reflections to improve comprehension and expression.
Dictation Practice
Listen to English audio materials and rewrite them, focusing on sentence structure and vocabulary usage.
高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.3
表达感谢和期待回复
如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。
I would appreciate it if …; take my application into consideration/ account/ take account of/ seriously
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
Para.2
总结
具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的 说，我就是你要找的合适人选。
As is mentioned above；with；qualities
With all these qualities mentioned above, I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好
Dear sir or madam, __________________________________________ _______________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely , Li Hua
⑵递进关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺并列关系
高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）
（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least; at first; first of all; in the first place; at last; last of all; for one thing; for another thing; on the one hand; on the other hand; finally what’s more; besides; furthermore; in addition; additionally; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; for example; for instance; like; such as; as follows; take… as an example
史上最全高考英语作文讲解PPT课件(167张PPT)
英语高考任务型写作评分标准
一、 如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”
这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、 同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：
写作指导
写作步骤
一、分析材料 二、列出要点 三、补全信息 四、翻译句子 五、整合成篇 六、修饰加工 （添加合理信息，比如：具体时间、地点， 情感信息，喜欢，感激，等）
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响 理解。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连 贯。 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
高考专题书面表达写 作指导
Basic Writing & Task Writing
【基础写作】 15—13分：信息内容完整，句子结构准确，句 型多样，连贯性好： 12—10分：信息内容完整，句子结构基本准确， 注意到句型的多样化和连贯性； 9—7分：信息内容基本完整，句子结构基本准 确，有一些小差错，但意思表达基本清楚； 6—3分：信息内容不够完整，意思表达不清楚， 但是，有一些跟主题无目关的句子； 3一0分：仅写出个别与主题相关的句子：并有 一些语法差错； 每超出要求—个句子扣3分(本部分给分多作品有了中文译文，并被拍摄 成电影
列出要点：
1、狄更斯，英国小说家，出生，1812.2，逝 世，1870.6 2、少年时，家庭困难，被迫做童工 3、喜欢写作，创作……作品 4、受….影响， 作品反应……现实 5、依然受欢迎，翻译成中文，拍成电影
补全成句，翻译句子
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
一、 如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”
这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、 同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：
写作指导
写作步骤
一、分析材料 二、列出要点 三、补全信息 四、翻译句子 五、整合成篇 六、修饰加工 （添加合理信息，比如：具体时间、地点， 情感信息，喜欢，感激，等）
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响 理解。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连 贯。 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
高考专题书面表达写 作指导
Basic Writing & Task Writing
【基础写作】 15—13分：信息内容完整，句子结构准确，句 型多样，连贯性好： 12—10分：信息内容完整，句子结构基本准确， 注意到句型的多样化和连贯性； 9—7分：信息内容基本完整，句子结构基本准 确，有一些小差错，但意思表达基本清楚； 6—3分：信息内容不够完整，意思表达不清楚， 但是，有一些跟主题无目关的句子； 3一0分：仅写出个别与主题相关的句子：并有 一些语法差错； 每超出要求—个句子扣3分(本部分给分多作品有了中文译文，并被拍摄 成电影
列出要点：
1、狄更斯，英国小说家，出生，1812.2，逝 世，1870.6 2、少年时，家庭困难，被迫做童工 3、喜欢写作，创作……作品 4、受….影响， 作品反应……现实 5、依然受欢迎，翻译成中文，拍成电影
补全成句，翻译句子
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
高考英语作文课件ppt
要点二
Writing
Keeping a diary in English, writing English compositions, etc. to improve writing ability
要点三
Speaking
Practicing English conversation with teachers or classes, joining English corners, etc. to improve English listening and speaking ability
On site response and time management strategies
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Time management
Mastering the time management skills of the exam, dividing the time for each question, and not spending too much time on one question
The content criteria include the relevance and depth of the content, as well as the logicality and coherence of the ideas expressed
The structure criteria include the organization and development of the ideas, as well as the clarity and coherence of the overall structure
01
Overview of English Composition
高考英语真题作文PPT
高考英语真题作文PPT1. Well, let me tell you about my experience in the English exam. It was quite challenging, to be honest. I had to answer multiple choice questions, write essays, and even do some listening and speaking tasks. It was a real test of my English skills.2. One thing that really stood out to me was the time pressure. I had to think quickly and make decisions on the spot. It was a bit stressful, but I tried to stay calm and focused. Time management was key in making sure I could finish all the tasks on time.3. The reading comprehension section was particularly tough for me. I had to read long passages and answer questions about them. Sometimes, I had to infer the meaning of words or phrases based on context. It required a lot of concentration and attention to detail.4. Writing the essays was another challenge. I had tocome up with ideas, organize my thoughts, and express myself clearly. It was a test of my writing skills and creativity. I tried to use a variety of vocabulary and sentence structures to make my essays more interesting and engaging.5. Overall, the English exam was a test of my language proficiency and critical thinking skills. It pushed me to think outside the box and communicate effectively. It was a valuable experience that helped me improve my English abilities and prepare for future challenges.。
精品高三高考英语作文复习PPT课件
二、表解释：
that
is to say, in other words, or rather Eg. These animals are all used to their environm ent; that is , they have learned how to live succe ssfully in their habitat. Eg. We stayed at my friend’s house , or rather at my friend’s parents’ house.
Just as the saying goes#34;.
As the proverb goes: “Every coin has its two sid es”. 正像谚语所说：“任何硬币都有两面”.
第一步，审题。
拿到题目后，手中拿铅笔，手脑眼嘴并用， 开始审题.看题目的要求是什么，要点是什么， 特殊要求是什么,最好用铅笔划下来，以免出错
三、表示“反意见”：
but,
however, still, yet, after all, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand等 Eg. Jim is intelligent but lazy. Singapore is not a big country.On the contrary, it is very small.
第二步，草稿。
1.结构就是你打算分几段写，每段都写什么？哪段转哪段承 哪段起合？心里都要是有谱的。 2.关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文 可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会 忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。
高三英语介绍写作PPT教学课件
Describe yourself to your net friend (about 120 words)
第七课
幽默与智慧
• 同学们是否喜欢看漫画？
• 你们都看过什么样的漫 画呢？
漫画作品欣赏： 欣赏角度：
1、造型 2、主题 3、创意 4、意义含义,表现手法
漫画的分类和功能
一、分类：
English is a (an) i_n_t_e_re_s_t_in_g_ language. (Adjective) English is the most interesting language in my opinion. The _f_a_l_li_n_g__ leaves look like _f_ly_i_n_g__ butterflies. (Participle) The doctor was operating on the _f_r_ig_h_t_e_n_e_d_ soldier. The students _w__h_o_s_k_i_p_b_r_e_a_k_f_a_s_t __ cannot concentrate in class. (Relative Clause)
English is the most interesting language in my opinion. The _f_a_l_li_n_g__ leaves look like _f_ly_i_n_g__ butterflies. (Participle) The doctor was operating on the _f_r_ig_h_t_e_n_e_d_ soldier.
ATTIBUTIVE
He __c_a_re_f_u_l_ly_ picked up the sleeping child. (Adverb) _H_a_v_i_n_g__b_e_e_n_b_e_a_t_e_n_b_y__m__y_f_a_th__er_, I decided to work har (Participle phrase) The children climbed the mountain __a_t_m__id__n_ig_h_t____. (Prepositional phrase) _W__h_e_re_v_e_r__th_e_r_e_a_r_e__c_o_m_p_u_t_e_r_s_, there is Microsoft software. (Adverbial Clause)
高中英语作文(32张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
表起始的过渡语有first of all，to begin with，in my ／our opinion，according to，so far， as far as等。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
2021/10/10
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内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
2021/10/10
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
表时间的过渡语有at first，then，later， firstly, secondly, meanwhile，in the end， finally，after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
2021/10/10
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
2021/10/10
1
内容
行文 2021/10/10
homework
语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求，而新标准除要求内容要点外，还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分，除要覆盖所有要点外，还要尽量覆盖次重点，并且要少写或不写无关内容。
2021/10/10
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏；
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡：量
语应言用的语好法坏结；构应多样，力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富，忌重复用词。
语言错误方面，对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错：误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平，更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样，力避单调。
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for a college entrance English composition?
The ideal length is typically 200-300 words, depending on the specific requirements of the exam
Conclusion Writing
04
Sample text analysis
An in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples
Through in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples, students will understand how to construct story plots, shape character images, and use language skills to express emotions and themes.
What are the common mistakes students make in English composition?
Common misses include poor grammar, weak vocabulary, unclear organization, and lake of origin or depth in analysis
Grammar Control
Correctly use tensions, sense structures, and punctation
Fluent Expression
Write in a smooth and coherent man with proper transitions
高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件
Summary
• To avoid dull and repetitive language, we can use: • 1. pronouns • 2. synonyms • 3. different sentence patterns •…
Have a try！
Doing sports is a useful way to reduce
stress. Doing sports helps you forget the trouble and makes you refreshed. Talking with your friends is also a useful way to reduce stress.
Summary
Improve the writing
What can be done if your writing…？
• does not have enough supporting details for each key point; • is not cohesive or coherent (衔接连贯) • does not have varied language (dull and repetitive重复的)
高三作文专题课
Learning objectives
At the end of this class, you will be able to: 1. identify problems related to supporting details, cohesion & coherence（衔接与连 贯）, words and sentence variety in a passage; 2. know how to improve a passage by adding details, making it more cohesive and coherent and varying the language; 3. improve a passage with some problems.
高三英语复习写作课说课课件 (共46张PPT)
2.表转折关系： but, yet, while, however等 3.表因果关系：first, second, later, finally, at last等 4.表顺序： for, so, because of, thanks to 5.表解释说明：such as, for example，and so on等 6.表递进关系： what’s more，besides等 7.表总结：in short, in brief, in a word, in general等 8.强调: indeed(确实)，above all(尤其), even so等。
③Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; ④ Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching!
Pre-writing：
1、审——仔细阅读写作要求及注 意事项；
2、定——确定体裁，人称和时态 及篇章结构；
Writing：
3、列——列出要点，重要词组及句型；
4、连——整理成篇，行文连贯；
Rewriting：
5、美——润色丰富要点； 6、改——查错改错;
③Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; ④ Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching!
Pre-writing：
1、审——仔细阅读写作要求及注 意事项；
2、定——确定体裁，人称和时态 及篇章结构；
Writing：
3、列——列出要点，重要词组及句型；
4、连——整理成篇，行文连贯；
Rewriting：
5、美——润色丰富要点； 6、改——查错改错;
高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)
Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
高考英语作文讲解 ppt课件(完美版)
As he is seriously ill,
Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. (Seen)
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学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
• 7、分数与百分数作主语
• In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are
• and
to
well
All the best,
•
Li Hua
2022/3/22
实例写作
(2010 全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。 你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3．工作量：
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• 提炼文章要点 • 理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正
确表达方式。 • 形成文章。
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•范文
Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.
①Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.
9、连词出错
that
Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.
My suggestion is we try for a second time.
Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. (Seen)
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学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
• 7、分数与百分数作主语
• In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are
• and
to
well
All the best,
•
Li Hua
2022/3/22
实例写作
(2010 全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。 你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3．工作量：
2022/3/22
• 提炼文章要点 • 理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正
确表达方式。 • 形成文章。
2022/3/22
•范文
Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.
①Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.
9、连词出错
that
Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.
My suggestion is we try for a second time.
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• 2．补加语句
•
根据行文走向，适当增加一些与主题相关的语句，或
由要点衍生的句子，既能起到前引后联的作用，又能补充
一些相关信息，帮助读者理解所写内容。
•
每一支参赛队伍都非常出色，为比赛做好了准备。
(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)
• Every participating team is great and ready for the game. It can be predicted that this is a close match（势均 力敌的比赛）.
2．阅卷老师次抓要点
阅卷老师对语言内容描述全面与否要求严格，答题时应找准 找全写作要点。同时，要注意文章需条理分明，逻辑结构 合理。
3．阅卷老师紧盯误
①主谓不一致、动词形式(时态和语态)不对、词组搭配不当、 句子结构错误、词序不当、关键词用错等都属于大错；
②小错主要是指常用词的拼写错误，介词、冠词、标点等的 错用；
增加了词数，而且使表达更清晰、准确，主题更突出。
• 住在中国十六年，一直学英语。(2019·高考全国卷Ⅰ)
• First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial to introducing Chinese paintings.
through history，and the most influential artists in each
period of its development.Additionally，I'm crazy to learn
how to appreciate western paintings，and it can't be
better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint.
• 话题：学生体育运动情况 (2018·高考全国卷Ⅲ)
• I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
• 5．内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥 不予扣分。
板块三 写作板块—— 应用文写作 读后续写/ 概要写作 二、提升作文档次的技巧——让作文靓起来
• (一)要点呈现多样化，适当扩充要点
• 1．追加成分
•
在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语
(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。不仅
• 3．添加过渡
•
根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增
加过渡词语，甚至过渡句，可以使文章浑然一体，同时能
充实文章。
first and most important; what's more; in addition; last but not least
•
话题：对西方绘画艺术感兴趣的原因(2019·高考天津
③3个小错等于1个大错。虽然有些错误被界定为小错误，但 却影响得分档次。时间再紧也要认真复查，尽量减少词汇 和句式错误。
4．阅卷老师眼中的满分卷
书写整洁漂亮；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；词汇丰富，文笔 流畅，衔接连贯。
同样的内容，卷面整齐至少多给3－5分；如果写得整齐美观 而且条理清晰，再多给几分；如果开头和结尾句式高级就 可以稳拿满分！
板块三 写作板块—— 应用文写作 读后续写/ 概要写作 一、满分写作不可不知的阅卷老师的秘密
阅卷老师的关注点
1．阅卷老师首看卷面
你必须明白，你的考卷是给阅卷老师看的，让老师看得舒服、 方便、清楚，这是非常重要的。不可书写过小、过密或过 稀，更不可字迹潦草，乱涂乱改，标点不清。在高强度阅 卷中没有谁会辨认书写得乱七八糟的内容，所以你应该呈 现一份美观清晰的答卷。
阅卷老师的评分要求
1．按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章内容和语言表达初 步确定所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量文章，确定或 调整档次。
2．评分时注意的主要内容：内容要点、词汇应用、语法结 构是否准确、上下文是否连贯以及语言是否得体。
3．如书写较差，影响识读，其得分将降低一个档次。
• 4．拼写和标点符号是影响分数的一个方面。英式英语和 美式英语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
• All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
• 4．不忘收尾
•
书信中“适当的结尾”也是必需的，它不仅符合书信
习惯，而且还可增加词数。缺失就会影响文章结构，从而
影响得分。书信常用的结束语如下：
卷)
•
Personally ， I'd want to learn about western
painting.Several reasons may account for my
preference.For one thing，I'm interested to learn how
western painting has developed into what it is today
• To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built, which has become the new landmark in our school. As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.