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精品文档2007-2015 江苏高考英语满分作文2007 年江苏高考英语满分作文2007 年 4 月 29 日上午 10 点到 11 点，全国万学生阳光体育活在各地大中小学校同行。
江省 1100 万学生极参与了活。
教育部倡学生：每天一小·健康工作五十年·幸福生活一子你根据以上提示，用英准一份言稿，向同学述一下阳光体育活的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小，你的看法及理由。
注意：1.言稿包括以上所有信息，要有适当。
2.数： 120 左右。
言稿的开和尾已写好，不入数。
3.参考：阳光体育活— a national student sports program; 教育部— the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,Thank you! 参考范文：Good afternoon, everyone,On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students fromprimary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sportsprogram. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program.The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hopethatthey will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.Personally,I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although wetake an hour a day for exercise,it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our bodyand keep acl ear mind. Therefore,we can work more efficiently.Thank you!2008 年江苏高考英语满分作文有效的沟通，建立良好的人关系，不要善于言表、更要学会听。
2019高考英语写作高分攻略精讲(课件+讲义)：第14讲 议论文的写作
第14讲议论文的写作一、陈述观点类近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议。
假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。
请根据下面的提示完成作文。
1.列举不文明行为；2.指出其影响；3.提出建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇本题要求写一篇陈述观点的议论文。
此类议论文一般采用“三段式”写法：第一段：开头——提出一种现象或某个观点作为议论的话题。
第二段：主体——全文的主要部分，对提出的问题进行分析，运用材料对观点进行论述，列出2～3个赞成或反对的理由。
第三段：结尾——对主体部分进行概括，用一两句话来阐明自己的观点，构成“总——分——总”结构。
本题要求考生以李华的身份就“中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议”这种现象发表自己的观点。
可以分为三段：第一段：提出问题——作为导游，对中国游客在海外的不文明行为感到羞愧。
第二段：列举这些不文明行为的具体表现，说明其恶劣影响。
第三段：表明自己的观点，提出解决问题的方法——教育游客，出台有关法律文件进行约束。
修订提升As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find that it is so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.(改为简单句：1.I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.)They speak loudly in public places，carve characters on tourist attractions，throw rubbish，spit everywhere，and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights.Such bad behavior overseas has harmed(用含有damage的短语替换：2.caused/done damage to) the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.Measures should be taken to stop this.First，tourists should be trained to obey social and public orders.Besides，laws should be made to punish badly-behaved people in public places.(用含有定语从句的复合句改写：3.Besides，laws should be made to punish those who behave badlyin public places.) I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.即时训练下面的漫画反映了北京的雾霾情况。
【教海拾贝】《英语学习》：葛文山成长案例对英语教师发展的启示
【教海拾贝】《英语学习》：葛文山成长案例对英语教师发展的启示【教海拾贝】《英语学习》：葛文山成长案例对英语教师发展的启示赣三中徐英北京外国语大学《英语学习》2014年第9期（教师版）编者按：17年前，葛文山毕业于武汉测绘科技大学，既没有受过正规的师范教育，也没有学过系统的英语课程。
他唯一的奢求就是能站稳讲台。
17年后，他成长为全国优秀外语教师、江苏省梁丰高级中学副校长，“原点教学”获得江苏省人民政府教学成果特等奖、教育部国家教学成果奖。
他的35名高二学生高分通过大学英语四级考试，18人优秀。
他的近百篇论文在《中小学外语教学》等全国核心期刊发表，其中十篇被人大书报资料中心全文。
他的个人专著《做最好的英语老师》在当当网上畅销，一年之内，印刷两次，得到《中国教育报》的大力推荐，被复旦大学高等教育研究所选为研究生“英语学科基础与前沿”课程的教材。
他开始走出去传播自己的教学思想，应省教研室、北京教育学院、徐州师大、福建师大、苏大、上海外语教育出版社、译林出版社等单位的邀请，在全国各地做近百场原点英语教学讲座。
主动上门参观学习的人也络绎不绝，30多位上海特级教师工作室成员、70多位福建省英语学科带头人等单位或个人纷纷来张家港上门与葛文山老师研讨学习原点英语教学。
葛文山老师从一个“门外汉”华丽转身成为英语教学的行家里手。
这一路，他是如何走过来的？葛文山老师用“三堂课”概括了这其中的心路历程：达标课、评优课和展示课。
这既是三种公开课的名称和类别，也是记录葛文山教师在专业化发展历程中不断进步、逐渐攀高的三个里程碑。
教师人生的三堂课——葛文山成长案例对青年英语教师专业化成长的启示达标课、评优课和展示课，既是三种公开课的名称和类别，也是记录青年教师在专业化发展历程中不断进步、逐渐攀高的三个里程碑。
回望我的成长之路，发现自己就是这样一路且歌且行走过来的。
一、走向合格教师的达标课1997年大学毕业，随着女朋友一起来到张家港教育局来报到，一位领导跟我开玩笑：“你女朋友华中师范大学本科毕业，英语专业八级，是我们张家港最想要的大中华香烟，而你像一包顺道搭过来的火柴。
高中英语好作文的步骤
英语好作文——从苏派名师展示课谈起(2012-11-22 19:06:45)转载▼标签：教分类：英语好作文育葛文山高考英语教学《中小学外语教学》葛文山专栏序言：板凳须坐十年冷，文章不写半句空。
但，我们总显得有点急躁，指望听几场专家报告，就能醍醐灌顶，想到医治聋哑英语的灵丹妙药；指望读一两本英语教学专著，就能融会贯通，架起横跨理论和实践的桥梁；指望听几堂优秀教师的示范课，就能茅塞顿开，找到放之四海而皆准的教学模式；指望读几篇别人的发表论文，就能笔下生花，写出令人叹服的好文章来。
这一切的一切，都是因为我们太急功近利，慌不择路间，没有找到属于我们中小学英语教师自己的行走方式和表达方式。
笔者想通过本专栏，与大家一起探讨如何找到质点，研究我们的教学、学生以及我们自己，如何回到原点，表达身边的案例、故事和成长心路历程，如何耐下性子来，坐十年冷板凳，无怨无悔，做真实有效的教学研究，真情流露，写实实在在的文章，不说半句浮华的空话。
第一篇：英语好作文：高考写作训练指导——从第三届全国“苏派名师”展示课谈起刊发于《中小学外语教学》（中学篇）2013年第3期2012年11月30日，应江苏省苏派名师研究中心和张家港教育局的邀请，向来自全国的高中英语老师上了一节高考英语作文训练指导课，深得与会专家和听课教师的好评，现把它总结成文，想借助于《中小学外语教学》杂志这个更大的平台，奉献给更多的读者。
一、布局谋篇在动笔之前，学生需要先审题，了解题目的要求，对文章的体裁和结构有一个整体的宏观规划。
一般来说，高考英语作文是一篇100—150字的英语小短文，通常由两三段构成，构建语篇的篇章结构有以下四种基本方法[1]：㈠列举描述法在讲故事时，我们常常使用列举描述法（collection/description），通过时间顺序或空间顺序，罗列一些事实观点、事情的细节、特征等零散的信息。
在报刊杂志中，记者往往采取新闻写作法（journalistic writing style）来构思行文，一篇新闻报道必须包括五个W，也就是who, what, where, when and why.例如2012年北京高考卷的作文题：假设你是红星中学高三1班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展续写雷锋日记活动。
江苏省2019高考英语 第三部分 写作层级训练 第一步 循序渐进,提升写作技能 第八讲 巧夺天工的连篇技巧(讲
第八讲巧夺天工的连篇技巧李仕才有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“开篇、承接、转折、总结”四个方法使文章流畅自然，是考生在书面表达题目上争创高分的非常重要的条件。
一、开篇——创造良好开端1.常用表达“开篇”的过渡词语(常用在段落或文章的开头)first，first of all，at first，in the first place，firstly，to start with，recently，now，at present，in recent years，in general，generally speaking，at present，lately，currently等。
2.常用表达“开篇”的句型(1)It is often said that...(2)As the proverb says...(3)It goes without saying that...(4)It is clear/obvious that...(5)Many people often ask...Firstly I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.(陕西卷)It’s often said that all work without play makes Jack a dull boy.As the proverb says，no pains，no gains.(北京卷)二、承接——顺势承上又启下1.常用表达“承接”的过渡词语secondly，in addition，besides，moreover，what is more，what is worse，for example，in other words，especially，particularly，obviously，at the same time，no doubt meanwhile，as a consequence等。
江苏高考英语读写类作文讲评讲稿PPT课件
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• 概括叙事性(narrative)文章主要内容一般应包括四个方面的内容： 1. 什么人？(Who) 2. 发生什么事情？(What happened) 3.目的如何/原因是什么？(Why) 4.结果如何/什么启示或教训？(Consequence/Inspiration/Lesson)
▪ 参考2 ▪ A tragedy in which at least 36 people died
during New Year celebrations in Shanghai raised people’s awareness of the security of public places. And the author analyzed the causes of the tragedy. （33字）(杨天一)
• Lack of awareness over safety risk behind public gatherings and loose control at the scene contributed to the tragedy. The disorder at the scene also exposed the deficiency in emergency exercise and safety education. A profound lesson should be learned from the incident. For those areas with high safety risks, the authorities should have special emergency response plans and make sufficient analysis and assessment, including the arrangement of police, volunteers and supporting measures.
江苏省高三英语 写作专题指导 图表类作文公开课课件
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... accounts for % of the total ...
上网占总业余爱好的36%。 Surfing the Internet accounts for 36% . of the total hobbies . 扩展润色句子 第二受学生欢迎的活动是上网，占总业余 爱好的36%。 The second popular activity for the students. is surfing the Internet, which accounts for 36% of the total hobbies.
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12%自主学习 或完成作业
38%在家看电视
41%上网聊天 或玩游戏
假如你受某报社的委托，对你校高流中三程个图年级学生的
近视情况做了个调查。请你根据下图三个年级各一个
班的抽样调查信息，写一篇文章，介(f绍lo相w关数据，并
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。 学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿
（2013江苏高考） 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解, 以"Actions Speak Louder than Words"为题,
。 用英语写一篇作文
• 参考词汇: banner (横幅) stump (树桩) • 你的作文应包括以下内容: • 1.简要描述两幅图的内容; • 2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解; • 3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 • 注意: • 1.可参照图片适当发挥; • 2.作文词数150左右; • 3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何 信息,如校名、人名等。
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江苏英语高考作文题目及范文解析
江苏英语高考作文题目及范文解析全文共6篇示例，供读者参考篇1Jiangsu High School English Exam Essay Topics and Model EssaysHi everyone! My name is Xiao Ming and I'm a 5th grader. Today I want to talk to you about the essay section of the Jiangsu high school English exam. The essay is super important because it tests how well you can write in English. Let me share some of the common essay prompts and break down what makes a good essay response.One type of prompt asks you to discuss an opinion or make an argument. Like this one: "Some people think social media is mostly harmful, while others believe it is mostly beneficial. What is your perspective? Use reasons and examples to support your view." To do well on this, you need a clear thesis statement taking a strong stance, like "Social media is more harmful than beneficial." Then give two or three reasons backing up your view with examples from life, studies, or readings.For example, you could say social media is harmful because it wastes time, ex: surveys show teens spend 3+ hours per day just scrolling feeds instead of studying or exercising. Another reason is it exposes people to dangers like cyberbullying and predators trying to exploit kids online. But be sure to also discuss the other side, like how social media lets people stay connected with distant family/friends. Having counterclaims and rebuttals makes your position stronger.The second type of common prompt is more open-ended, asking you to discuss a general topic from multiple angles. For instance: "What impact has the rise of artificial intelligence had on society?" Here, you can't just take one position, but need to analyze the issue's many effects, both positive and negative.A good approach is to first define any key terms, like "artificial intelligence refers to computer systems performing tasks normally requiring human intelligence, such as visual perception, speech recognition, and decision-making." Then have a few body paragraphs examining different stakeholders and impacts, like: AI increasing workplace productivity and automation in some industries, but also causing worker displacement; AI used for beneficial services like medical diagnosis and tutoring, but also raising privacy concerns; and soon. Be sure to use facts, data, and concrete examples to illustrate your points.The last main type of essay asks you to respond to a quote or short reading. Like: "In his famous 1963 'I Have a Dream' speech, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. declared: 'I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.' What did King mean by this quote, and do you think his dream has been achieved in modern society? Why or why not?"For this, you'd first rephrase the core idea of the quote, showing you understand it - something like "King dreamed of a future where people are not discriminated against due to race, but judged as individuals based on their inherent worth and moral character."Then, provide your analysis on whether that dream has been realized. A balanced essay could acknowledge progress made in reducing institutionalized racism, like through civil rights laws and diversity initiatives, while also examining how racial discrimination and inequities persist in areas like the justice system, hiring practices, education, etc. Using specific facts and statistics makes this type of essay stronger.No matter the prompt type, all good essays follow the same basic structure: an engaging introductory paragraph with a clear thesis statement, 2-3 body paragraphs developing your ideas with evidence and examples, and a conclusion paragraph reinforcing your main points and leaving a final impression on the reader.Other universal tips are to have error-free grammar, use advanced vocabulary words accurately, vary your sentence structures for clarity and flow, and make sure all paragraphs are tightly unified around their main idea. And of course, be sure to respond to all aspects of the prompt thoroughly!Writing a high-scoring essay in English takes lots of practice, but mastering this skill will serve you incredibly well in academics and life. Getting into the habit of analyzing topics from multiple angles, crafting a logical and well-supported argument, and expressing complex thoughts clearly and concisely in writing are invaluable abilities.So keep on practicing, using the model student essays as guides. With enough quality writing experience under your belt, you'll emerge as a true jockey when it comes to mastering essay exams! Thanks for listening, and I hope these insights into theJiangsu English essays are helpful. Let me know if you have any other questions!篇2Sample Jiangsu High School Entrance Exam Essay Question:Some people believe that schools should teach students not only academic subjects, but also important life skills like cooking, budgeting, and basic home repairs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Support your position with specific reasons and examples.Essay Analysis by an Elementary Student:Wow, this is a really interesting essay question! It's all about what we should learn in school besides just math, science, reading and all the normal subjects. The question wants to know if I think schools should also teach us useful everyday life skills like cooking meals, managing our money, and fixing things around the house.That's a super important topic because knowing skills like that can help us a lot when we grow up and have our own homes someday. If we don't learn that kind of stuff, it will be really hard to take care of ourselves properly as adults. Like, if you can'tcook at all, you'd have to just eat fast food or frozen meals all the time, and that's not very healthy. And if you don't know anything about budgets and money management, you could end up wasting all your hard-earned money and going into debt. No thanks!So in my opinion, I totally agree that schools should teach useful life skills in addition to academics. Having basic cooking abilities can help you eat nutritious home-cooked meals instead of just junk food from restaurants. And budgeting skills let you save money, avoid debt, and be more responsible with your finances as a grown-up. Home repair abilities are great too because then you can fix broken things yourself instead of paying a professional tons of money every time something needs repairing.Maybe schools could have optional after-school classes or week-long seminars teaching budgeting, cooking simple meals, changing air filters, patching drywall, and other handy skills. Or they could integrate some life skills units into existing classes - like practicing meal-planning and budgeting in a math class, or learning about nutrition and healthy cooking in a science class. As long as schools make an effort to teach BOTH academics andessential life abilities, students will be much better prepared for independent adult life after graduation.I know I would feel so much more confident and capable going out into the world if I had a solid foundation in life skills like managing finances, cooking, and basic home repairs. It's just as important as academic knowledge, in my opinion. Schools shouldn't only focus on textbook subjects, but also give us practical real-world skills we'll actually use every single day as grown-ups. That way, we can all become successfully independent and self-sufficient adults! So in conclusion, I 100% agree that life skills should definitely be part of what schools teach us. It's a hugely valuable type of education.篇3My Big Sister Is Taking the Gaokao English Exam!Hi friends! My name is Xiaoming and I'm 8 years old. I'm in 2nd grade at Yangzhou Primary School. My big sister Xiaohua is in her last year of high school and she has to take the Gaokao exams soon to try to get into a good university. The Gaokao is super important in China!One of the tests my sister has to take is for English. She has been studying English really hard. I see her reading Englishbooks, writing English essays, and listening to English audio lessons a lot. Sometimes she looks stressed out. I try to help her relax by telling her jokes or giving her hugs.My mom showed me one of the practice English essay prompts my sister has been working on. The prompt said: "Some people think social media websites like Facebook and Twitter are good ways for people to connect and share information. Others think social media causes more harm than good by wasting time, spreading misinformation, and making people addicted. What is your view?"That seems like a really hard question to write about! I'm just a little kid so I'm not sure what I think about social media yet. But I'll try to write a practice essay answering the question, just for fun.Social Media: Good or Bad?I think social media websites can be both good and bad. On the good side, social media does allow people to connect with friends and family all over the world. My aunt lives in America and my grandma can see pictures of her new baby on WeChat. Social media also lets people share news and information really quickly.However, there are some bad sides to social media too. Some people spend too much time on social media instead of studying, playing outside, or spending time with their family in real life. The internet also has lots of fake news and misinformation that can confuse people. And some kids and teenagers can get addicted and obsessed with getting likes and comments on their posts.In conclusion, I think social media is a tool that can be used for good things or bad things. It's up to people to control their social media use in a balanced, healthy way. People should limit their time on social media, only follow reliable sources, and spend most of their time on productive activities in the real world. Social media is not all good or all bad - it depends how you use it.Phew, that was hard to write! That's just my eight-year-old view though. I'm sure my sister's real Gaokao English essay will be much better. She has been studying different types of English essay prompts and learning techniques like:• Analyzing the key words and re quirements in the prompt• Brainstorming relevant ideas and examples• Structuring the essay with clear introductions, body paragraphs, and conclusions• Using appropriate transitions and cue words• Varying sentence structures• Utiliz ing precise vocabulary and grammarMy sister's English teacher also emphasizes having a clear thesis statement responding to the prompt, supporting the thesis with logical reasoning and evidence, addressing counterarguments, and wrapping up with an insightful conclusion.I got a peek at one of her practice essays and it looked really professional, with multiple detailed paragraphs, precise word choice, and smooth writing flow. No wonder she is finding it challenging!I really admire how hard my sister is working to prepare for the all-important Gaokao English exam. Even though the essay prompts seem super difficult to me now, I know if I study diligently like her when I'm older, I can become a strong English writer too.For now though, I'll just focus on the simple stories and poems we read in my English classes at primary school. I'm tryingmy best to build a solid English foundation for the future. I hope my little practice essay gave you an idea of what Chinese students have to work towards for the high-stakes Gaokao English test.Wishing my sister and all test takers success on this crucial English exam! Let's all keep studying and improving step-by-step. Jiayou!篇4Jiangsu English High School Entrance Exam Essay Topic and Sample AnalysisEssay Topic: My Favorite AnimalHello everyone! Today I want to share with you all about my favorite animal. Let me tell you why I love it so much!My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are so cute and cuddly. They have black and white fur, which makes them look like they are wearing a tuxedo. Don't you think that's adorable?Pandas are also篇5题目：My Dream Vacation范文解析：大家好！我是一名小学生，我要告诉你们我的梦想假期。
江苏英语作文训练书
江苏英语作文训练书：提升英语写作能力的秘密武器In the dynamic world of education, where the importance of language skills is constantly emphasized, the English essay writing books from Jiangsu have emerged as a secret weapon for students aiming to enhance their writing proficiency. These training books, with their unique blend of structured guidance and real-world applications, have captured the imagination of students and teachers alike, making them a top choice among the vast array of writing resources available online.The allure of these Jiangsu-based essay training books lies in their comprehensive approach. They start with the basics, covering grammar, sentence structure, and paragraph development, but they don't stop there. These books delve deeper into the intricacies of essay writing, discussing techniques like transitional phrases, argumentative strategies, and the art of storytelling. This combination of fundamental skills and advanced strategies ensures that students are equipped to handle a wide range of writingtasks, from simple descriptive essays to complex argumentative pieces.What sets these Jiangsu essay training books apart is their emphasis on practical applications. Unlike some other writing guides that focus solely on theory, these books are filled with real-world examples and exercises that help students apply what they learn to real-life scenarios. This hands-on approach not only makes the learning process more engaging but also ensures that students are better prepared to handle the challenges of academic writing.Moreover, these training books are designed with a student-friendly approach. The language is clear and concise, making it easy for students to understand and follow the instructions. The exercises are designed to gradually increase in difficulty, allowing students tobuild their confidence and skills gradually. This gradual progression ensures that students don't feel overwhelmed or intimidated by the writing process.The impact of these Jiangsu essay training books is already being felt across the educational landscape. Teachers are reporting improved writing skills among theirstudents, who are now more confident and competent when it comes to expressing their ideas in English. Students, too, are finding that with the help of these books, they are able to tackle writing tasks more efficiently and effectively.In conclusion, the English essay writing books from Jiangsu are a valuable resource for any student seeking to improve their writing skills. With their comprehensive coverage, practical applications, and student-friendly approach, these books are a surefire way to enhance English writing proficiency. By arming students with the tools and techniques they need to succeed, these training books are paving the way for a new generation of confident andskilled English writers.**江苏英语作文训练书：提升英语写作能力的秘密武器** 在强调语言技能重要性的教育领域中，江苏英语作文训练书已成为学生们提升写作能力的秘密武器。
怎样提高高考英语写作档次市公开课获奖课件省名师示范课获奖课件
较高级旳语法构造
1.On hearing the bad news of his death, she went
pale with sorrow.
较高级旳词汇、短语
• 4.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
Thanks to the good weather , our journey was comfortable.
• 5.In our school, there are twenty–six classrooms.
4. To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things.
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
5. Only in this way can we achieve our goal .
I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
丰富旳语法构造
• 3. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.
较高级旳词汇、短语
高考英语满分作文点评与解析
安徽高考英语满分作文点评【试题回放】假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。
请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。
请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l 表示赞成。
l 提出你喜欢的栏目。
l 简要说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。
3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4. 参考栏目：栏目—columnDear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。
怎样使学生英语作文获高分
怎样使学生英语作文获高分发表时间：2010-04-17T03:26:39.467Z 来源：《试题与研究(教学论坛)》作者：葛文改江苏省运河高等师范学校[导读] 笔者对于英语教学有很多的心得体会，尤其是对高中英语作文的体会颇多。
笔者对于英语教学有很多的心得体会，尤其是对高中英语作文的体会颇多。
下面欲对高中生英语作文中的困惑，存在问题的根源，解决问题的办法，以及如何应付高考作文，进行一下探讨。
一、缺乏语感英语的句子结构以动词为中心各有特定的搭配，学生在写作时感到缺乏表达思想的语感，经常有汉英翻译对字硬译的现象，加之英汉两种语言表达在文化思维方面有相当的差异，也造成英语书面表达的一定难度。
要培养学生英语表达的语感必须注意平时口头和笔头整句表达习惯的建立和加强听力理解。
二、词不达意，错误百出从生理和心理方面看，高中学生已相对成熟，而他们所能用的英语语言体现在书面表达上就是想说的话很多，意思也很好，但使用的语言形式却词不达意，错误百出。
为此要尽可能使学生接触大量和他们的生理发展相适应的英语语言材料，以便于他们吸收和丰富自己的英语知识。
三、谓语动词使用不准确汉语谓语无字形变化，而英语谓语变化多，对于时态、语态、语气的语法概念和英语动词变化之间的关系，写作应用起来不明确、不熟练，加之英汉在动词意义上有差别，用英语写作时就很容易出错。
显然这是以汉语为母语、英语为第二语言学习的学生在谓语动词学习应用中出现的负迁移。
我们有必要反其道而行之，加强英语谓语动词变化的训练。
那么，高中生如何培养自己的写作能力呢?在高考中如何能得心应手地写出一篇好作文呢?我觉得首先要解决好以下三个问题：一、打好扎实的基本功1．要调动学生主动学习的积极性。
有的学生对写作弱项报舍弃态度，情愿把精力放在其他方面，也不愿花过多的时间和精力来提高自己的写作能力。
所以要先教书育人，把外语学习与理想和目标教育联系起来教育学生，使他们充分认识到学好外语是时代的要求，是培养跨世纪人才的需要；只有学好外语，才能更好地运用这一交际工具为祖国现代化服务，从而使其树立为国、为民而学的远大理想和奋斗目标，产生持久的动力，保持长久的、旺盛的精力。
英语好作文----苏派名师公开课-葛文山
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What makes a good composition?
英语好作文
张家港外国语学校 葛文山
Coming up next….
1. Structure a text； 2. Develop a paragraph; 3. Have proper dictions.
1.Structure a text
Collection
（列举法）
In order of time/space; Journalistic writing (who/what/where/when/why) causes and effects
(1) Extend a sentence
方法二：添加名言警句
God helps those who help themselves.
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
Life is like playing cards. you can't control the cards you're dealt, just how you play the hand.
Reasons for choosing arts/science Elements
your interest your dream others’ influence characteristics of arts/science
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2．你对大学扩招的看法。 From my point of view，this tendency should be continued，as we need more capable people to contribute to the fastgrowing economy.
• 17、儿童是中心，教育的措施便围绕他们而组织起来。2021/7/312021/7/312021/7/312021/7/31
• 2、Our destiny offers not only the cup of despair, but the chalice of opportunity. (Richard Nixon, American President )命运给予我们的不是失望之酒，而是机会之杯。二〇二一年六月十七日2021年6月17日星期四 • 3、Patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet. (Jean Jacques Rousseau , French thinker)忍耐是痛苦的，但它的果实是甜蜜的。10:516.17.202110:516.17.202110:5110:51:196.17.202110:516.17.2021 • 4、All that you do, do with your might; things done by halves are never done right. ----R.H. Stoddard, American poet做一切事都应尽力而为，半途而废永远不行6.17.20216.17.202110:5110:5110:51:1910:51:19 • 5、You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. ----Charles Chaplin人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。-Thursday, June 17, 2021June 21Thursday, June 17, 20216/17/2021
2015江苏苏州高三英语二轮复习作文专题---读写作文之概括(议论文)市公开课课件共29张PPT
In today’s educational environment, teachers are positioned to be the authority figure for learning instead of also becoming a good friend in the lives of students.
1 argumentation议论文 2 Narration记叙文
3 Exposition说明文
第3页，共29页。
How to write a good summary of an article
1.An argumentation :
The topic sentences the supporting sentences the writer’s conclusion
Yang Xiong, director of the Juvenile Research Institute, said the educational system which focuses on examinations should be held to be substantially responsible.
As only students with good marks in exams are considered the “apples in the eyes” of the teachers, most students think their teachers to be partial(偏心).
第7页，共29页。
第8页，共29页。
1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea):
Getting up early /a good habit
【最新制作】江苏省高考英语作文范文评析老师推荐
高考英语作文高考英语作文日记例题假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生陈明，校报英文版正在开展"续写雷锋日记"活动。
，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。
注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。
2.词数100左右。
【范文赏析】Saturday, June 2FineThis morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No. 20, which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help greatly. Before long, the bus came. We waved goodbye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.高考英语作文建议信写作注意事项与方法1. 建议信写作注意事项建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。
观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
2. 写作方法① 首段：a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：a. 提出具体建议；b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
【全力打造】江苏省高考英语作文范文评析名师资料
高考英语作文高考英语作文投诉信写作范文假定你是陈明，你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，他给了你重要的人生启迪。
请写信向他表示祝贺与感谢。
注意：1.词数1000左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文赏析】Dear Peter,Congratulations to you on your winning first place in the Chinese Speech Competition held recently. You deserve the honor. The past years have seenyour devotion, persistence and strenuous efforts, eventually your rapid progress in Chinese learning.To be honest, what I admire most is your diligence and determination. It’s from you that I have learned a valuable lesson, that is, "No pains, no gains." Therefore, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you for what you have taught me.Wish you greater achievements in your study!Yours,Chen Ming高考英语作文推荐信真题国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讨论活动,正面向全球中学生征集话题。
假设你是新华中学的学生陈明，经常访问该网站。
现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。
内容包括：1•自我简介；2•写信目的；3•话题：我们应该感恩(thankful)；4•推荐的理由；5•预祝活动成功。
【精心制作】湖南省高3英语满分作文赏析名师资料
高考英语作文高考英语作文日记例题假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生陈明，校报英文版正在开展"续写雷锋日记"活动。
，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。
注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。
2.词数100左右。
【范文赏析】Saturday, June 2FineThis morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to themand asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No. 20, which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help greatly. Before long, the bus came. We waved goodbye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.高考英语作文道歉信题目与范文假如你是陈明。
你和外教Christina原定于本周六上午一起参加＂中国传统文化日＂活动。
但因故你不能履约，请根据下面的写作提示，用英语给她发一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1.告诉她不能履约；2.解释爽约的原因；3.希望她谅解。
【优秀范文】Dear Christina,I am Chen Ming. I’m writing to apologize to you for not being ab le to part icipate in the ＂Chinese Traditional Culture Day＂ activity to be held on the Saturday morning with you as we planned last week.To be honest, I wish I could join in the activity, but I am afraid I will not be available because I was informed yesterday that I would have to go toBeijing for a contest on the morning of Saturday. That is why I can’t go with you. I am awfully sorry for breaking my promise and I apologize for any inconvenience it brings to you. I hope you can understand me.Wish you a good time there.Yours,Chen Ming高考英语作文道歉信写作注意事项写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实、委婉，语气要诚恳、真挚，解释要详细明了。