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雅思背范文(通用十三篇)

雅思背范文(通用十三篇)

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If you want to learn about different sample formats and writing methods, please stay tuned!雅思背范文(通用十三篇)雅思背范文(篇一)With the adoption of the quality-education policy, many advanced teaching methods have been introduced to China,Meanwhile,many middle schools still find a good way to publicize to scores and ranks to introduce good candidates to key universities fairly.Competition is part of our modern life.If I know the eXact position where I am, I will spare no effort to catch up with others.Besides, we will face the pressure that making scores publicized applies to us.We, Senior Three students, have no choice but to adapt ourselves to all the pressure, which helps us develop our full personality.Though no one is to blame eXcept myself if the ranks are made known, test scores are private.In many eXperts’ eyes,individual student should have his own right of privacy.It’s time for education authority to create a better environment to promote quality-education, where every student can really improve himself.雅思背范文(篇二)You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Some people think the university education is to preparestudents for employment,others think it has other functions.Discuss and say what the other functions are?You should write at least 250 words.You should use your own ideas of knowledge and eXperience and support your arguments with eXamples and relevant evidence.Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment.While we admit that preparation for employment is an important function of education, it is not the only one.We should see this issue with an all-sided view.In the perspective of society,education is for improvement.Students make use of what they have learned to create new theories and tools.This is the way in which our human society develops.And also, through education, government can teach people how to be appropriate citizens, thus in this way,people’s moralities and behaviors are constrained in a value system and the social stability can be maintained.In the perspective of individuals, education can enrich personal lives.Through education, we can eXplore different cultures and customs.Thus in this way education can open our eyes and broaden our mind.And education can also meet interests of each student.While of course, all the functions mentioned above haveone common prerequisite: one can make a living in the first place.For this society is practical, many university students have studied for four years, but their ability to deal with practical things is too low to be acceptable.So education should provide the basic general knowledge to university students, so that they can be get employed and make a living.And if a nation wants to develop and to compete with other nations,it needs skilled workers to support economic development and to maintain the people creative, which can only be achieved through education.So it has some sense to realize that students’ preparation for employment is the function of education, but it has far more function which should not be neglected.(280 words) 雅思写作高分范文:eXaminationYou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Some people think that eXaminations have some bad effects on both students and teachers.Some people say they do a good job in the evaluation of the students’ performance.What is your opinion?You should write at least 250 wordsYou should use your own ideas of knowledge and eXperience and support your arguments with eXamples and relevant evidence.From elementary schools to universities, students have to take many eXaminations.They even regard eXaminations as an indispensable part of their life.In most schools and colleges,eXaminations are used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in a subject.However, although they do the job efficiently, their side effects are also enormous.EXaminations are unable to evaluate one’s true ability.They can only test memory or the skill of working rapidly under pressure.Sometimes the future of a candidate may be decided in a single eXamination.How can one do his best when he is under the eXtreme pressure? In other words, it does not mean that all of those who get high scores on eXaminations possess creativity in dealing with various problems.There are many stories that eXaminations failures turn out to be great scientists or successful entrepreneurs.Another effect is that eXaminations encourage bad study habits.Students tend to lay emphasis on the content which will be tested.They are encouraged to memorize rather than to think.Moreover, eXaminations induce cramming during the eXam week.However after the eXamination,most children forget nearly all the information and facts they stuff into their heads.EXaminations lower the standards of teaching as well.Theydeprive teachers of all freedom.Since teachers themselves are often judged by eXamination results,they have to train students in eXam techniques instead of teaching their subjects.Furthermore, students are required to learn only what teachers tell them.In conclusion, even though eXaminations have been used in the past, they should no longer be used as the only means of evaluation.They cannot assess a student’s performance in learning and they also have negative impacts on both students and teachers.(290 words)雅思背范文(篇三)The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.雅思小作文范文:The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful waste.It is clear that in both the UK and Sweden, the majority of dangerous waste products are buried underground.By contrast,most hazardous materials in the Republic of Korea are recycled.Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 82% of the UK’s dangerous waste is put into landfill sites.This disposal technique is used for 55% of the harmful waste inSweden and only 22% of similar waste in Korea.The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far more than the other two nations.While 25% of Swedens dangerous waste is recycled, the UK does not recycle at all.Instead, it dumps waste at sea or treats it chemically.These two methods are not employed in Korea or Sweden, which favour incineration for 9% and 20% of dangerous waste respectively.(15(9)雅思背范文(篇四)Dear Mr.Wang,I am much grateful to be employed by you two months ago as an editor for your magazine Design & Fashions.I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and other colleagues.The eXperiences will be unforgettable throughout my life.However, as a young man whose primary interest is in computer science rather than fashion designing, I find my present job doesnt fall in with my previous training and strength.I therefore decide to quit this job for something else that may conform to my former preparation.Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience my leaving may cause.Yours truly,Li Ming雅思背范文(篇五)释义:给…加插图( illustrate的第三人称单数 ); 说明; 表明;(用示例、图画等)说明;Throughout, she illustrates her analysis with eXcerpts from discussions.自始至终,她摘引讨论内容来阐明她的分析。

新雅思8分作文范文(优选八篇)

新雅思8分作文范文(优选八篇)

雅思8分作文范文(优选八篇)5雅思8分作文范文(篇一)In many countries, the number of elderly people is increasing fast. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?Nowadays, owning to the improvement of living condition(这里习惯用复数), people can live much longer than before, which gives rise to the fast increasing number of elderly people. Some hold that this situation will result in a series of problems, such as social burden, population expansion and so on. While others insist that it agrees the development of modern society and brings many advantages. For my part, I take the latter side with(用for) the following reasons:(74words)点评:开头稍微写的有点长,不过内容写的还不错。

属于通过分析两种不同观点,较后阐述自己观点的写法。

(此种写法在雅思大作文的第一段比较常见)美中不足的是倒数第二句的错误比较明显!while是个连词,应该连接句子与句子,所以这里前面不应该是句号。

后面agree是不及物动词,不能直接加宾语。

Firstly, elder people(一会儿elderly people,一会儿又elder people,这不是自相矛盾么) are the fortune of our society. They have enough experiences and capabilities which are badly lacked and needed for our youth when dealing with all sorts of problems, they can still do well in their jobs. Especially(前面应该用逗号,然后这里小写) in some professions, such as teacher, doctor, scientist and so on, sometimes (前面应该用句号,然后这里大写)age means the authority and ability. When you see a doctor, do you prefer an elderly doctor with grey hair or a youth without mustache? (77words)Secondly, elder people(同上) are the happiness of our society. Increasing number of elderly people is also the embodiment of our improving living quality, which shows our society run(应该第三人称单数)to the right and healthy direction, we(前面句号,这里大写) have more chance and time to serve our elderly people, and it’s the happiest time of all our life to accompany with(accompany是及物动词) our parents, grandparents and great grandparents. (63words)Finally, elderly people are the lubricant of our society. They have good temper and enough patients(应该是patience吧) to do anything, they can help us to intercede(它是不及物动词,而且主要用人作宾语) social disputes, and they make our society much more harmoniouswhich(前面较好有个逗号)makes for the construction of harmonious society.(43words)正文段综合点评:此篇是典型的5段式作文的写作,正文段构思出三个分论点来证明自己的观点,的确在构思上花了不少心思。

雅思大作文高分范文(热门27篇)

雅思大作文高分范文(热门27篇)

雅思大作文高分范文(热门27篇)Though it is never easy to fix these feelings of unhappiness, there are possible measures to be taken to enhance the wellbeing of children who are under constant pressures. To begin with, parents have to draw a line on the expectations of theirchildren and find out their true potentials, rather than pushing them to unrealistic limits. Meanwhile, with patience and guidance, parents should keep an eye on their children who fall victims to online pressure through social networking. Simultaneously, the authorities should do more to regulate advertising that are intended for children who are anxious tobuy unnecessary things.雅思写作高分表达Point at 指向......Perspective 角度Reduce 减少;减轻Pleasure 快乐;愉悦Way too much 太过了Unrealistically 不切实际地Backfire 回火;事与愿违End up 最终落得个......Peer pressure 同龄人压力Intensity 强度Purposefully 有意地Afford 负担得起Fix 解决Enhance 提高Constant 长期的Potential 潜力(的)Keep an eye on... 关注......Fall victim to... 沦为......的牺牲品Simultaneously 同时Frankly 坦白地说Pessimistic 悲观的In the foreseeable future 在可见的未来Model Answer:From a middle class family, I was born in Hsin Ying, Tainan on October 10th, 1965. My father is a civil official at Tainan City Government. My mother is a house wife good at . Although I am the only child of my parents, I am by no mans a spoiled one. On the contrary, I have been expected to be . I study hard atschool. Besides texts knowledge, journalism is my favorite; whenever reading, my heart is filled with great joy and interesting.从中产阶级家庭,我出生在Hsin Ying,台南1965年10月10日。

剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类精选6篇

剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类精选6篇

剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类精选6篇剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类第一篇This bar chart analyzes the percentage of household waste recycled from 1992 to 2023. We can see that the percentage during 2023 increased all the way while other years fluctuated. In the various materials, paper and glass are the ones that with greater percentage that was recycled. In contrast, the plastic and cans had a lower percentage.From the graph we can see that during 1992 cans have the highest percentage about 17% and plastic has the lowest at about 10%. After that, in year 1997, paper and glass became major types of waste that were recycled, at about 31% and 29% respectively. In 2023, glass became the dominant type of waste that was recycled with about 48%. Meanwhile, plastic had grown least around 2% and glass had grown the most around 34% in these 10 years, and paper chasing behind with 26%. Cans were more stable, with ony about 6% total growth.剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类第二篇Topic: Your neigbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain the reasons for the noise Apologise Describe what action you will take 剑桥雅思小作文范文Dear James,I was very shocked to get your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you some distress. I am really, really sorry about that. I had no idea that you would be able to hear so much, so I hope you will accept my apologies.As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when I get home from work. Unfortunately it is all taking longer than expected and I have been having problems with getting things to fit properly. This has meant a lot of banging and hammering.As the kitchen is still not finished, I have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the next day or two. He will work only during daytime hours, so you won’t be disturbed in the evenings again, I promise.Sorry to have caused these problems.Bill.剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类第三篇Discuss the difference between fast food and traditional food, such as nutrition,and recipe?Living in a fast-paced society, the modern eaters are not longer interested in the contents of their food, but focused on whether a convenient meal is available at hand to devour. Statistics indicate that even housewives spend much shorter time at kitchen than their predecessors. This writing will compare and contrast advantages and disadvantages of fast food and traditional food.Traditional food has its unshakable position in the human culture both in the social and historical context. Historically, chefs have gone to all lengths to experiment on novelties, invent cooking skills to gratify guests' hunger. Hence, traditional food has secured its incomparable value with a complex of tantalising features, including the variance, flavour, and taste. Its unique charms can nurturesocial relations as well. A family is accustomed to prepare a traditional feast to serve their guests at weekend or on holiday,such as Christmas.Further, traditional food is favourably nutritious and balanced, compared with fast food. Dieticians have suggested audience through millions of televised courses that traditional food can retain more nutrition before being served on the table, for in general, they are cooked with a temperate heat. By contrast, the fast food are made at such a high temperature that nutrition has inescapably vaporised during the cooking process. Meanwhile, cooks pay more attention to the balance of recipe when preparing traditional food, such as combing meat with vegetable.Despite a range of advantages, traditional food is overshadowed by its fast competitor in terms of time. Traditional food can consume a considerable amount of time from choosing materials, to arranging your table for visual appeal. In contrast, fast food cannot be faster when making a five-minute trip to a store around the corner, or even dialling to a fast food company. Needless to say recently, a string of fast food companies have tried their hardest to enrich the menu. To summarise, traditional food has an irreplaceable role in our life, backed with various merits. However, its prevalence isdeclining for people are more and more time conscious.剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类第四篇There are many good reasons to cycle. Cycling is the mostefficient means of getting around London. Many journeys we make are shorter than two miles or less and these are usually faster on a cycle than travelling by car, bus, tube, train or taxi.。

雅思写作高分范文-媒体类7篇

雅思写作高分范文-媒体类7篇

媒体类1.We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we cannot trust the journalist. What do you think What qualities do you think a successful journalist should haveThe advent of the information age has bombarded the public with numerous news and many people spend a great deal of time going through news every day. Some people are suspicious of these news because they do not trust the journalists, while I am convinced that a successful journalist with certain qualities could provide true news reports.Admittedly, so much news on social media is fake and wrong, which has become one of the most concerning aspects of the media environment. According to a recent survey, only about two-in-ten Americans trust the information they get from local news organizations a lot, whether online or offline. The reason behind the low trust rate is that some sites are created with pre-existing views, and more than that, others present facts that are actually false or biased. However, in the fast growing information age, we as readers must develop skills and strategies to distinguish between real journalism and wrong ones. We cannot believe those so-called facts simply because they match up to our own preconceptions.Given that loss of public trust could be journalism’s greatest challenge, journalists worldwide should equip themselves with a number of good qualities. Firstly, they should have a strong desire to unearth the truth. In other word, a very passionate person is enthusiastic to get information, uncover scandals and inform people. Secondly, a good journalist must be an extremely disciplined person to be able to work strict deadlines. Staying punctual is significant or else people will not be able to trust the information reported. Thirdly, a journalist must be objectiveand accurate, no matter what the situation is. The reported story must be free of any prejudice and be reported as it is. Journalists may have their own choices with regards to political parties and leaders. However, it is important to keep them aside when covering a story. Moreover, journalists should be open to new ideas and views and should not cover stories with any preconceived notions. In addition to the above mentioned qualities, it is always better if a journalist has expert knowledge of the beat he intends to cover.In conclusion, the fact is the media is distrusted by lot of people all over the world. If the journalism industry wants to regain its reputation, journalists must do their job honestly and honorably.2.News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important Are their influences generally positive or negativeIn present-day society, modern people are interacting with all kinds of news media including print media, broadcast news, and more recently online newspaper as well as news blogs. These media are important and could cause both positive and negative effects to the society.It is undeniably that news media have played an indispensable role in modern society. Obviously, news media timely provide the public with vast amount of information. Communities and individuals are bombarded constantly with messages from a multitude of sources including TV, billboards, and magazines, to name a few. These messages promote not only products, but moods, attitudes, and a sense of what is and is not important.Given the popularity and importance of news media, people start to realize the associated positive impact. The media are credited with considerable power to shape opinion and belief, to change habits of life and to mould behavior actively. For instance, some finance news could influence the way people invest their savings. As fitness magazinesincreasingly highlight the risk of a sedentary lifestyle and obesity, more and more people set out to make their weigh-loss plans, develop healthier eating habits, and exercise on a regular schedule.Despite of the positive influence, news media?may cause detrimental effect to the society. With the arise of new media through social media, there has been an increase in fake news. For example, the use of Twitter and Facebook has made it easier for false or misleading articles to be seen. Coco-Cola, as an example, funds a front group by the name of The Global Energy Balance Network to confuse consumers about soda science and divert attention away from the mounting evidence showing that sweet beverages are a major contributor to disease associated with insulin resistance, such as diabetes. Given the erosion of trust in the media and the rampant spread of hoaxes via social media, it will become even more important for news organizations to scrutinize content that looks and sounds like the real deal.In conclusion, news media not only offer people information and knowledge but also exert good and bad effects on the society. In my opinion, those good effects could outweigh bad ones if the media could be used in a wise and appropriate way.3.Some people claim that newspaper is the best way to get the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagreeNewspaper has been a part of our daily life for several centuries. Some people argue that newspaper is the best access to latest information, while I would like to say that other forms of media are also important ways for the public to be informed of important events that are occurring around the world.Newspaper is still a major source of the general public for a variety of reasons. Firstly, general newspapers cover all topics, including politics, economy, celebrity news, and a collection of the latest events. Moreover, some might have good coverage of international events of importance, and others might concentrate more on national or local entertainment or sports. Therefore, readers have a wide range of choices. Secondly, in recent years, newspaper has adapted to the changing technology by starting to offer online edition to cater the needs of the public. As of 2007, virtually all major printed newspapers have online editions distributed over the Internet, which allows readers to search for their most interested topics conveniently.However, the availability of news via 24-hour television channels and then the availability of online social media posed an ongoing challenge to the business model of most newspapers. To begin with, reading at no cost is highly valued by a majority of readers. Television channels and a number of online news websites, such as Google news, are free to access, which is a comparative advantage over some charged newspapers. In addition, nowadays, the public, especially the younger generation, prefer to get news from social network. By just opening an app, such as Facebook and Twitter, they can learn about all the people who are signed into the same network. Moreover, they could make their personal comments and thoughts instantly and globally public, and then communicate with others.In conclusion, as more forms of news media become available, newspaper outlets face an increasingly serious challenge. Given that individuals have different areas of interest, it is better to have freedom to choose their favorite ways of getting the newest information.4.Advertising discourages people from different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagreeAdvertising is an essential factor in modern business methods, and it is also an industry that knows how to influence and change behaviour. Some people argue that advertising prevents people from pursuing their individuality and identity because it encourages consumers to blindly buy the same products. However, I am not convinced by this view.Admittedly, massive promotion campaigns are able to deliberately influence customers’purchasing decision towards several specific brands. Once increasing numbers of customers make the purchase of these commercial goods and products, it marks the success of advertisements in monopolizing the market and creating so called trends and fashions. To a large extent, advertisements impose a notion that the advertised subjects are famous. The reason why some people prefer to purchase these goods is that they pursue a style of being popular. Young people, especially those who still strive to find out who they are, would probably lose their individuality since they buy the same goods advertised constantly in media or they buy whatever their idols try out. For instance, if a star is invited to advertise for an article,some people will impulsively buy the goods which might be far more expensive than the same kind products under other brands.However, it is by no means to claim that commercials would force the public to such an extent that they all expect to do the same and look the same. After all, buying behaviour is a phenomenon that varies depending on a wide range of factors, such as demographics, income, social and cultural factors.The majority make their purchase decision based on personal preferences and affordability. As the financial crisis and economic downturn seriously dampens people’s purchasing power, many global companies face a major challenge in terms of the profitability and even survival. No matter how heavily some luxurious brands are willing to spend on their commercials, they can only attract those living in upper class rather than the common people who earn average incomes. The general public would not buy products only with stylish shapes since they prefer goods with practical functions as well as reasonable prices.In conclusion, advertisements could exert influence on our purchasing behaviors to some extent, but are not powerful enough to make all of us the same. Competitions among prestigious companies worldwide, on the contrary, will promote increasingly diversified tastes.5.People are surrounded by many kinds of advertising which can influence their life. Do the positive effects of this trend outweigh negative effectsBusiness owners know a smart marketing plan is essential to brand development and to the conversion of viewers into clients and customers. One aspect of a marketing plan is advertising. Yet there is a controversial debate over the effects of advertisements.It is undeniable that advertising do have its merits. Firstly, they help the consumers by giving them information about various products available on the market. Many readers appreciate advertising because it allows them to know the properties, functions, and prices of the products they want to buy at home. Secondly, given that numerous companies promote their goods and services on the same media, be it newspapers, magazines, TV, and the Internet, customers could compare thoroughly before they make their purchasing decisions.However, many advertisements make misleading claims and promise instant solutions to people’s problems in order to gain profits. For example, an advertisement may depict a pimply boy being surrounded by pretty girls as soon as he applies a particular brand of pimple cream. Though many know that this is an exaggeration, they may still cling to the hope that it may be true and rush out to buy the cream and try it out. When the claims are not matched in real life, it can cause a lot of disappointment and frustration. Another harm that advertisements could bring about is that they nurture superficial values in people. People lust for products they cannot afford and some even resort to illegal ways of getting money in order to obtain them. This in turn breeds a class of snobbish people who only respect others for the material things they possess.In conclusion, people in the modern society enjoy and value the conveniences and competitive prices brought by commercials. Therefore, although commercials designed by businesses sometimes could be misleading and pass materialism values, I am convinced that the positive effects outweigh the negative ones.6.Nowadays, there are many television advertisement aimed at children. What are the effects of these advertisements on children Should TV advertisements be controlledChildren are important targets of advertising campaigns. However, children have been found to be particularly vulnerable to negative effects of advertising, and protecting children from these effects is an important task of consumer policy.It is undeniable that commercials familiarize kids with the latest products in the market and inculcate some good habits in them like the ones related to dental hygiene. In addition, advertising could impart a set of good values and a sense of responsibility to children. For example, some public service advertising is designed to inform children of the importance of education, safety, and filial piety. However, some advertisements do have negative impact on children that cannot be ignored. Advertisers use all sorts of gimmicks to promote their own product. For example, fast-food restaurants promise attractive toys and prizes in scratch and win competitions. As a result, children badger their parents to take them to that particular fast-food restaurant, which in turn contributes to the problem of obesity. Moreover, a lot of advertisements difficult to understand for kids because the misleading tactics that advertisers employ is centered on the use of exaggeration. Claims such as "the best' or “better than" can be subjective and misleading; even adults may be unsure as to their meaning. They represent the advertiser's opinions about the qualities of their products or brand and, as a consequence, are difficult to verify.As children continually assume larger roles in their homes and are becoming more involved in the shopping habits of the household, TV advertisements should be controlled to some extent. Studies have shown that the impact on children of cigarette advertising is greater than one would imagine it to be. Because present advertising of cigarettes, already limited to non-TV media, has such a great impact on children, all advertising likely to influence children, even if not aimed at them directly, should be more carefully scrutinized.In conclusion, the influence of advertising has permeated much of what children do and see. Due to the fact that children do not have the same critical thinking and judgementas adults, TV advertisements, especially those associated with unhealthy food and lifestyle choices, should be controlled or even banned.7.Research shows that over-eating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, advertising for certain food products should be banned, in the same way as cigarette advertising is banned in many countries. To what extent do you agree or disagreeNowadays, as competition in the food industry becomes increasing fierce, food manufactures spend heavily on advertising their food products. Given more and more people suffer from obesity, some argue that food advertisements should be banned.Opponents of food advertising claim that for the sake of public health those advertisements should be prohibited. Certain food advertisements designed by manufactures shift people’s food choice towards junk food and exert bad influence on health condition and eating behavior. Consumers could have a higher levels of obesity and blood cholesterol when they eat food with excessive fat, sugar and salt. In addition, some advertisements employ exaggeration tactics to attract consumers and boost sales. Claims made in advertising can be subjective and misleading since they only represent the advertiser’s opinions. The case gets more completed when advertisers use a disclaimer to offset or counterbalance an exaggerated claim. For example, the claim that breakfast cereal has a health benefit may be accompanied by the disclaimer - when part of a nutritionally balanced breakfast. Readers, especially children, might have difficulty understanding these disclaimers. Instead, it may cause disappointment and frustration.However, advertising for food products do have its advantages. Firstly, it provides customers with information about a variety of foods and drinks available on the market. People can know about the nutrition content, the price, and the taste of their interested products at home, which saves a lot of time. By making comparison between various brands,individuals could ensure a balanced nutrition for their family members. Secondly, health concern is no longer a problem since more and more advertisements focus on nutritive value and disclose the way food and drinks are manufactured and the way they are prepared for the table to customers.In conclusion, although certain food advertisements are harmful and misleading, it is by no means to claim that all food commercials should be banned.。

雅思高分写作范文40篇

雅思高分写作范文40篇

雅思写作必背范文40篇-1Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?Happiness is very difficult to define,because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness to wealth and material success,others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.Yet others think that spiritual paths,rather than either the material world or relationships with people,are the only way to true happiness.Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways,it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone. However,if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge.A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy.Of course,factors such as loving relationships,good health,the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too.But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.Overall,I think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness.By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives(the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships,making other people happy,etc.)and what is not(a problem at work,getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.)Like self-awareness,this is also very difficult to achieve,but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.雅思写作必背范文40篇-2In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.In many countries,the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smallerwith fewer children.These children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this,but in more material ways.They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price,and to behave as they please.This means that the children grow upwithout consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.When they get to school age they have not learnt any self-control or discipline.They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation.But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children.If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social,responsible individuals,the whole community would benefit. Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this,and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support,because this is no longer a problem for individual families,but for society as a whole.雅思写作必背范文40篇-3In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel,but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.By contrast,those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent,which is a very important factor in academic study and research.,as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.However,there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age.Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment.They may think different from a university course.But overall,I think this is less likely today,when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons.That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why.Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.雅思写作必背范文40篇-4Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.Which do you consider to be the major influence?Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences.We now understand the importance to inherited characteristics more than ever before.Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual’s personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors(nature)or by the environment(nurture).Research,relating to identical twins,has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual’s life.But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development.It seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful,that they can boost or over-ride other influences,and there seems to be plenty of research finding s to confirm this.My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person’s life. Instead,the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting.It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates ow that personality develops.If this were not true,then we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person form the moment they were born.In conclusion,I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person,but that both have powerful effects.How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.雅思写作必背范文40篇-5Successful sports professional can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.As a result of constant media attention,sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities,and those at the top are paid huge salaries.Just like movie stars,they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair,especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists,or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However,sports salaries are not determined he or she holds.Instead,they reflect the public support that successful stars can generate.So the notion of“fairness”is not the issue.Those who feel that sports stars’salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few,and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be petition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career.The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.Personally,I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars,but at the same time,it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.雅思写作必背范文40篇-6Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Other,however,think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.This means that change is not always a personal option,but an inescapable fact of life,and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same,familiar things are living in denial.Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves,they cannot stop the world around them from changing.Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist,or that the‘safe’patterns of behavior are no longer appropriate.However,reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that‘change is always for the better’.Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted they have good impacts for the majority of people.A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few.This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes(such as in working conditions or property developments)that are in their own interests.In conclusion,I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves,but that all change, including that which is imposed on people,does not necessarily have good outcomes.雅思写作必背范文40篇-7It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in,for example,sport,art or music.Obviously,education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills,including those associated with sport,art or music.So from our own school experience,we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice. However,some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument,from those who become good players.In other words,there is more to the skill than a learned technique,and this extra talent cannot be taught,no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes.Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel,while more hare-working students never manage to reach a comparable level.But,as with all questions of nature versus nurture,they are not mutually exclusive.Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent.Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive,and without the training,the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.In conclusion,I agree that any child can be taught particular skills,but to be rally good in areas such as music,art or sport,then some natural talent is required.雅思写作必背范文40篇-8Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only.It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society.Therefore,this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.In order to be a good member of any society the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their community and share their cating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents.They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life,how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.However,learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home.Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home.At school,childrenwill experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society.This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill.It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.雅思写作必背范文40篇-9Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective?There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems,both in cities and on motorways everywhere.Solvingthese problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution,higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long.As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport,it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads.But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.I think to tackle the problem of pollution,cleaner fuels need to be developed.The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use.Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality,especially in cities. However,traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use.To do this,we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers.For example,if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities,then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.In conclusion,I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more,and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.雅思写作必背范文40篇-10Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Traditionally,children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school,but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools,with both positive and negative outcomes.The obvious argument in its favour is that young children pick up languages much more easily than teenagers.Their brains are still programmed to acquire their mother tongue,which facilitates learning another language,and unlike adolescents,they are not inhibited by self-consciousness.The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centred approach,thus maintaining learners’enthusiasm and progress.Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure,while learning other languages subsequently will be easier for them.They may also gain a better understanding of other cultures.There are,however,some disadvantages.Primary school teachers are generalists,and may not have the necessary language skills themselves. If specialists have to be brought in to deliver these sessions,the flexibility referred to above is diminished.If primary language teaching is not standardised,secondary schools could be faced with a great variety of levels in different languages within their intake,resulting in a classroom experience which undoes the earlier gains.There is no advantage if enthusiastic primary pupils become demotivated as soon as they change schools.However,these issues can be addressed strategically within the policy adopted.Anything which encourages language learning benefits society culturally and economically,and early exposure to language learning contributes to this.Young children innate abilities should be harnessed to make these benefits more achievable.雅思写作必背范文40篇-11Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population,with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle.Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time.If there were easy-to-reach local sports that could be offered would cater for all ages,levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.However,there may be better ways of tackling this problem.Interest in sport is not universal,and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit,not those who most need them.Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply,for example by installing exerciseequipment in parks,as my local council has done.This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.As well as physical activity,high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products,tobacco and alcohol,as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.Even improving public transport would help:it takes longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.In my opinion,focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results.People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.雅思写作必背范文40篇-12It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?One important stage in a child’s growth is certainly the development of a conscience,which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong.This skill comes with time and good parenting,and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this.Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement.To some extent the question depends on the age of the child.To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish,as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished.Once the age of reason is reached however,a child can be rewarded for good behaviour and discouraged from bad.This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments,which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents.To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong,teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behavior.After that,if sanctions are needed,the punishment should not be of a physical nature,as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones-an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others.Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.Rather,teachers and parents can use a variety of methods to discipline their young charges,such as detention,withdrawal of privileges,and time-out.Making the punishment fit the crime is a useful notion,which would see children being made to pick up rubbish they have dropped, clean up graffiti they have drawn,or apologize to someone they have hurt.In these ways responsibility is developed in the child,which leads to much better future behaviour than does punishment.雅思写作必背范文40篇-13Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?It is said that countries are becoming similar to each other because of the global spread of the same products,which are now available for purchase almost anywhere.I strongly believe that this modern development is largely detrimental to culture and traditions worldwide.A country’s history,language and ethos are all inextricably bound up in its manufactured artefacts.If the relentless advance of international brands into every corner of the world continues,these bland packages might one day completely oust the traditional objects of a nation,which would be a loss of richness and diversity in the world,as well as the saddisappearance of the manifestations of a place’s character.What would a Japanese tea ceremony be without its specially crafted teapot,or a Fijian kava ritual without its bowl made from a certain type of tree bark? Let us not forget either that traditional products,whether these be medicines,cosmetics,toys,clothes,utensils or food,provide employment for local people.The spread of multinational products can often bring in its wake a loss of jobs,as people turn to buying the new brand,perhaps,thinking it more glamorous than the one they are used to.This eventually puts old-school craftspeople out of work.Finally,tourism numbers may also be affected,as travelers become disillusioned with finding every place just the same as the one they visited previously.To see the same products in shops the world over is boring,and does not impel visitors to open their wallets in the same way that trinkets or souvenirs unique to the particular area do.Some may argue that all people are entitled to have access to the same products,but I say that local objects suit local conditions best,and that faceless uniformity worldwide is an unwelcome and dreary prospect.雅思写作必背范文40篇-14Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better.Do you agree or disagree?It is true that higher positions are prevalently held by aged members in many organizations these days.While some people believe younger people would demonstrate better leadership,it is in my opinion that senior managers possess more advantages over the young in leading a company.To begin with,it is usually difficult for the young to compete with the old in terms of experience.Those who have gained adequate experience can more effectively manage to lead the individuals of an organization than those who do not.The reason for this is that business matters often require the people in charge to have not only the knowledge of coping with problematic situations but also strong nerves to calmly find a feasible solution.As a result,years of experience in a relevant position tend to make the elderly better candidates than those who are relatively young and new to the tasks.Another advantage belonging to aged people is that they are likely to receive more support from the people in an organization.As the time spent working with the staff of the senior is often longer,they can understand their colleagues better,achieving more popularity.It isinterpersonal communication skills and approval of other people that can tremendously affect the success of a leader.Younger members,on the other hand,will need more time to make contributions over time to prove themselves worthy.In conclusion,I believe that critical positions of authority should be given to senior staff members for the certain reasons mentioned rather than the young.雅思写作必背范文40篇-15Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.People have different views about whether noise should be limited. While some individuals believe the level of noise being created should be strictly controlled,I would argue that people should have the right to produce noise if they want to.On the one hand,there are several reasons why the government should control the amount of noise produced.The first reason is that too much noise can significantly affect people's health.Living in a place that is too noisy can cause problems such as headaches,which can decrease thehealth levels of people,especially old ones.Additionally,noise can disturb people's work or study.For example,a university student will not be able to concentrate on his preparation for exams if his neighbours keep singing too loud.However,I believe people should be allowed make as much noise as they want because of some reasons.Firstly,producing noise is sometimes considered a type of recreational activities.For instance,singing or cheering for a football club can be relaxing,and everyone has the right to do those things.Secondly,as the world is becoming more modern, people have found ways to deal with the problem of noise.Scientists have invented walls and windows that can block out the noise,which allows individuals to focus on their work without being disturbed. Therefore,the problem of noise can be reduced and there is no need for people to keep quiet.In conclusion,while many people believe there should be controls about noise,I believe we have the right to create noise when we want to.雅思写作必背范文40篇-16It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment,such as the South Pole.Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?As technology has developed,people can now travel to remote natural areas.While this trend is beneficial to some extent,I would argue that its disadvantages are more significant.On the one hand,visiting isolated natural places has some benefits. Firstly,this is a newer and more interesting type of travelling.Since going to other cities or countries has been too common for most people,it might be more exciting for them to explore new places such as the South Pole or the Amazon rainforest.This gives them valuable experiences and unforgettable memories.Secondly,when visiting remote areas,people, especially scientists,might acquire more knowledge about the natural habitat.For example,when coming to the North Pole,scientists can learn about the life of polar bears which live far away from humans.On the other hand,I believe this development has far more drawbacks. The first one is that travelling to remote natural areas can be risky if the travellers are not sufficiently prepared.For instance,the temperature at the South Pole is usually very low,which adversely affects people's health.Travelling to forests can also be dangerous as people have to face the risk of being attacked by animals.Also,since visiting isolated places often requires a large amount of investment in researching and ensuring the safety of travellers,the costs of travelling tend to be high.Therefore,。

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科技类1.Some people think that robots are very important for humans'f uture development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.The field of science and technology has advanced throughout the past decades and has changed our perspectives of life. Among those advancements, robots have become significant by trying to get close to human lives. While some people argue that though these robots have managed to solve most of our day- to-day problems, they canstill create problems, I believe that robots are significant for humans ' current and future development.It is normal for people to be worried about the rise of robotics in every aspects of our lives. In workplace, one of the real impacts humans face is the loss of jobs and the economic displacement of workers. As prices continue to drop for advanced technology, the result is that robots cost less than a human does to complete the same job. Consequently, wages are slashing and pay inequality is worsening. Moreover, when societies become too dependent on robots, humans become lazy and begin to lose the skills that they has replaced. Last but not the least, it 's not a stretch to imagine that untrustworthy rotbso may cause over-trust issue and deception. As anthropomorphic robots come to the physical world, people, children particularly, are susceptible to telling their deepest, darkest secrets to these robots whose cute faces may hide exploitative code.Nevertheless, the benefits that robots bring about could outweigh these potential risks. Many robotic solutions have been introducedin order to help disabled people. For example, wheelchairs, robotic arms, and many other robotic devices are created to help the disabled to perform their day-to-day tasks. Moreover, some of the greatest technologies are now in medicine, particularly with robot surgeons. In addition, robots are used in many high end factories to make their production lines more efficient and time saving. Compared with humans, robots rarely make mistakes and are more precise. As long as they have power, they can work continuously without any pauses or breaks and does not get tired as humans.In conclusion, there are good aspects as well as bad aspects about robots being a part of our lives. As long as humans remember that it is we who should decide on how much we let them control our lives, we could enjoy the life with robots around.2.Today, advanced science and technology have made great changes to people's life, but artists such as musicians, painters and writersare still highly valued. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?Almost every aspect of modern human life has been influenced by science and technology. One area where technology is already having a profound impact is the world of art. Art is one affected and redefined by technology in a new way. Yet, some people argue that even with advance technologies that enable faster creation of works, artists are still high valued. I totally agree with this idea since efficient creation does not necessarily mean highly appreciable works.Admittedly, technology is shedding light on the ability to duplicate and create arts. For example, pianist robots are created to sit in front of a piano center stage and move their fingers with great accuracy and speed to play a piece from Mozart. Additionally, sketching portraits of humans, spontaneously composing music, and writing traditional Chinese calligraphy are already possible in the world of robots. Further, digitizing artwork help to make it more accessible to a wider audience. Livestreaming opera performance, for instance, enables people to enjoy the show online at home instead of taking a trip. Lastly, advanced technology have also allowed contemporary artists to reduce time spent in the actual execution of artwork to a minimum thereby freeing them to focus more on contemplation, creativity and developing groundbreaking ideas, as well as sound preparation for artwork. Nevertheless, technology unavoidably surface a lot of works with less artistic value and will never outshine artists cr'ea tivity and imagination. The interpretation and creation of music is basically the expression of feelings. For example, when an artist sees beautiful scenery, he may immediately make a sketch, paint then, or just write a poem about what he saw. In contrast, machines that humans are used to operating as tools have little emotive understanding of the social,historical, psychological and physiological factors that inspire human artists, which makes it difficult to accept them as having the ability to be creative.In conclusion, contemporary art has been greatly influenced by the rapid development in digital technology. Given that these influences are inevitable, artists need to hone their skills and understandthese techniques well in order to translate their vision and creativity into great and distinctive art pieces.3.Nowadays, high-technologies such as mobile phones and internet are rarely used by old people. How should these technologies be usefulto old people? How to encourage old people to use the technologies.Seniors consistently have lower rates of technology adoption than the general public. Given that high-technologies and internet could certainly benefit the elderly, it is necessary to come up with solutions to encourage them to take advantage of technologies.Both technologies and internet are useful to old people in all aspects of their life. Firstly, the elderly could maintain constant contacts with their relatives, friends, and children via video chat services like Skype, or other Internetbased communication channels such as email and social media. Secondly, smart technologies can assist older people to live safely and live well at home. With certain devices like a watch, senior people could easily call for help in case of emergency with the simple push of a button. Further, there are video games designed to help seniors exercise physically and mentally. For example, owning a Wii or other video game system offer a fun opportunity for old people to engage in light physical activity from the comfort of their own living room. Lastly, smartphone apps and cloud-based health information tracking systems can help seniors and their family caregivers keep information such as medical history, physician contacts, medication schedules, and health conditions organized and handy.However, older adults do face some unique barriers and challenges when it comes to adopting new technologies and Internet. In order to make seniors become perfectly capable of using new devices and visiting digital world, it would be helpful to develop devices tailored to the aging population and provide them with the right training. Currently, the reality is that a lot of applications and devices are designed mainly for the young, which makesit hard for old people to utilize. Therefore, high-tech companies and organizations should take the unique features of seniors into account in the R&D process. Communities and governments should organize some public classes specifically for the aging citizens to train them how to surf online, use smartphones, and other useful devices and applications. The aging populating themselves should be open to new technologies and actively engage in the learning process.In conclusion, technologies generally lead to a healthier lifestyle by helping senior citizens stay in touch with people, maintain their health, manage diseases and conditions, and tract treatments. Old people themselves, communities, and governments should work together to increase the rates of technology adoption by seniors.4.Some people believe that computers and internet carry more weight than traditional education in children ' s study. Some others believe that traditionalschooling and teachers are still essential and more effective. Discuss bothviewpoints and give your own opinion.It is undeniable that computers and internet has played an increasingly significant role in education. More and more schools and institutions start to adopt such advanced technologies to educate children, but I believe that traditional schooling and teachers should still play the dominant role. Indeed, children can get a variety of benefits from using advanced computers and the Internet. Firstly, there are a wide range of information and knowledge that covers all areas, such as mathematics, literature, and geography, available online. In other words, children can now access information on every conceivable subject. Secondly, the Internet together with computers make education an equal opportunity for every child, especially for those who in impoverished and remote areas without any access to schools and teachers. Thirdly, computers allow students to have e-mail or other forms of internetbased conversations with experts on any subject around the world. No longer will students be limited by their own classroom or teachers. Lastly, the Internet has created a creative and interesting learning environment where children can explore, convey, create knowledge as never before.However, compared to computers and the Internet, traditional schooling and teachers are still important and more effective. To begin with, teachers know well about their students and normally impart them the most relevant and valuable knowledge. On the contrary, finding and retrieving information from a web site can be sometimes tedious and time-consuming. Moreover, children are too young to develop self-control and self-discipline ability. Therefore, the supervision and guidance from teachers become fundamental and necessary. Further, schooling provides children with a collective and interactive environment where they can learn not only from their teachers but also from their peers and classmates. Only in this way can they develop team work and cooperation skills which are essential and indispensable for their future life and career.In conclusion, despite the convenience and popularization of the Internet and computers, teachers and schools are still play an significant and irreplaceable role in children ' s education. Yet, educational experts andinstitutions couldtake advantage of these advance technologies to offer better education to students.5.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Distance learning has become increasingly popular, and Universities and institutions are offering an enormous range of Undergraduate, Postgraduate, as well as short-term courses. Some people argue that this development couldworsen the quality of teaching and learning, while I think there are many obvious advantages in using distant education.Online colleges have been criticized for a variety of reasons. Firstly, some say that the quality of online education cannot be comparable to face-to-face learning since the main driver for opening up online courses is to spend less on teachers and buildings. Secondly, there is no direct contact with faculty. Lack of personal interaction with teachers could affect the learning curve for some students. Thirdly, students, especially those lack of self-control and selfdiscipline, are likely to fail in courses since without teachers they will not take distance learning seriously. The last argument is that qualifications offered by distant learning are not valued by employers. Some employers will always prefer a candidate who has pursued a regular program over holders of the distance learning program qualification.However, the advantages of distant education outweigh the above mentioned disadvantages. One of the biggest advantages of studying from home is the cost comparative to studying full time at school. Internet-based education usually involves more affordable tuition than traditional college or university. In addition, part time distance learning students can work while studying towards their qualification. Also, with web-based classes, students are capable of saving time far more since they do not need to travel to schools for all classes registered. This enables those who have a job or have important personal responsibilities, like looking after family members, to get their degrees. Moreover, some accelerated programs enable students to complete their education in a short period and they can engage and pursue a career faster as well by completing a degree earlier.In conclusion, although distance learning is not suited for everyone, it does allow individuals who cannot attend regular education programs to get educated and gain their qualification.。

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(七分范文)Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion.When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma that whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career,young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result,university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.以上就是这篇雅思写作7分范文的全部内容,字数足够。

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Band 5Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the students’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace makes a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more modernization.Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, studentsare more easy to get a job, and this can make our coun tries’ economy strong.In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every university’s basic function.只能拿到5分的原因:一、这个题目中有两方的观点:some 及others的,很明显这位考生在后面的论证过程中完全忽视了others的观点,都在一味地论证some 的观点的正确性,于是考官给出的评语是:it does not address all parts of the question.写作建议NO.3:Do not neglect any part, or you will regret your mark.不要忽视任何东西,否则你的分数会让你很伤心。

二、这位考生在连接词和复杂句型上都表现得不错,可是他太偷懒了,knowledge andskill这个词组一共用了9次,这种高频率的repetition让这位考生付出了比较惨重的代价,所以看者希望你们能够汲取这样的教训,多注意Paraphrase的练习。

尤其是常考的考试主题所可能涉及到的高频单词更是要做好homework. knowledge and skill就属于top 3 的高频考题的教育类,所以这类的词汇一定是多多准备才对,如expertise, conversance, instruction, competence, aptitude, technique, prowess, dexterity 都可以拿来替换这两个词。

写作建议NO.4:Paraphrase helps you parachute into a higher band.改写能助你拿到高分。

Band 6Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather thancompete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for amonth instead of revise school work. If they have experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the greatest plus point to go to the famous well-known high school. Moreover, there are four big school exam and two national examinations to test student s’ level of studies. Generally, only the highest 40% can go to the good quality highschools and colleges children learn as much as they can, to win the competition to obtain good quality schools.On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and study individually with their own tutors, there are problems. They become selfish. They become careless and don’t help others a lot if it is about studies. There will be no co-operations for them. Then, why are there companies for many people to work in? each of them are clever, however, there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. To co-operate is to improve this part. People talk and listen towhat others thinking of and learn. That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher.In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each other. therefore, I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-operation, not compete and ranking them.问题分析:从论证大主题的角度来说,这一篇的最后的收尾是co-operation 更重要的成立的,但是这位考生在文字数量分配上缺乏规划,分配给competition的文字明显多于给co-operation的,这样就给了考官一个非常合情合理的借口扣分,实在是遗憾啊!写作建议NO.5:If it is your preference, give it more reference.如果你更认同那个观点,那就在这个观点上多写点吧。

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