写作句法的正误解析

• 七、主谓不一致（单复数问题）
• 1) I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English. • I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English. • 2）Once one have money，he can do what he want to do. • Once one has money,he can do what he wants to do.
写作句法的正误解析
一、主语错误 1. 主语缺失 • • • • • 1)In our country feels very free. People feel free in our country. 2)In my hometown aren’t very busy. People in my hometown are very busy. 3）Now is the golden time for us to attain a fair command of English. • Now it is the golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.
– There are more and more people are sent to the old people’s house. • There are more and more people sent to the old people’s house./ • There are more and more people who are sent to the old people’s house.
– There are an increasing number of aged people are in urgent need of professional care. • There is an increasing number of aged people (who are) in urgent need of professional care.
• 2. 多重谓语
• --Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad. • Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad. / • Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad. / • Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad. / • Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty. • --It really makes me can’t study and rest in the dorm. • It really makes me unable to study and rest in the dorm.
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五、表语从句的应用错误
– The reason why I want to join the club is because I am a sports fan. • Revised: The reason why I want to join the club is that I am a sports fan. – One of their reasons is the old buildings have a long history. • Revised: One of their reasons is that the old buildings have a long history.
– Many old buildings would collapse in a sudden, cause injures and deaths to people. • Many old buildings would collapse in a sudden, which would cause injures and deaths to people. • Many old buildings would collapse in a sudden, causing would cause injures and deaths to people.
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三、There be 结构 使用错误
– There are more and more people go abroad nowadays. • There are more and more people going abroad nowadays./ • There are more and more people who go abroad nowadays.
– There are 70% children think the main aim of their education should be to develop themselves. • 70% children think the main aim of their education should be to develop themselves. • --There are many students are playing basketball on the playground. • Many students are playing basketball on the playground.
形式宾语 – A newly-arrived international student feels hard to adapt himself to the new environment. • Revised: • A newly-arrived international student feels it hard to adapt himself to the new environment.
• 二、谓语错误 • 1. 非动词作谓语 • 1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it. • Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.
• 2)It is said that the place worths touring. • It is said that the place is worth touring.
– I live at No.126 Shanghai Road where near the chemical factory. • I live at No.126 Shanghai Road, which is near the chemical factory. – I would like to know what kinds of facilities in your sports club. • I would like to know what kinds of facilities there are in your sports club.
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九、句子不完整
• There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV, radio,newspaper and soon. • There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper.
四、从句的使用错误:
– I would say that the house owner used a gun to kill the burglar was illegal. • I would say that the house owner who used a gun to kill the burglar was illegal.
– I am a student lived in room 808. • I am a student living in room 808./ • I am a student who lives in room 808.
• -The girl is standing over there is from a big city. The girl standing over there is from a big city.
六、 it 做形式结构词
形式主语
– College students grasp a foreign is a must. • Revised: • It is a must that college students grasp a foreign./ • That college students grasp a foreign is a must.
• 3. 主谓错位
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1)Reading books can acquire knowledge. People can acquire knowledge from books. 2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV. Now people can’t do without TV.
• They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them. • They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them. • I am afraid of that it’s going to rain. • I am afraid that it’s going to rain.
• 八、词性误用 • They earn some money so that they can independence. • They earn some money so that they can be independent. • Along with the society development, many new ideas and concepts flux into our minds. • Along with the social development, many new ideas and concepts flux into our minds.
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2. 非名词主语 1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life. Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life. / Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
• 2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. • Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
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句型单调
• 句子与句子之间缺乏过渡 • 一篇文章如果简单句过多，句型单调，即使语法错误较少，思 路较清晰，看后也会使人感到乏味。 • 应学会单句、复句交替使用，经常变换句型，尝试使用一些较 复杂的语法结构及句型，适当运用过渡词，使文章更加连贯。
• 例：They sleep fewer than eight hours every day. It has great influence on their health. • 改为：Actually, they sleep fewer than eight hours every day, which will,no doubt, have great influence on their health.