(英语)英语书面表达练习题含答案

（英语）英语书面表达练习题含答案

一、英语书面表达

1．安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。

提示：1. 体育锻炼

2. 上下楼梯

3. 交朋结友

4. 食品卫生

要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；

2．短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。

3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________

【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.

In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

2．书面表达

每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。

A（n） _________ I have

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I have

Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.

In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.

When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.

Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!

【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。

写作亮点：

这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。

3．共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。