(通用版)【高考专题辅导】高考英语专题检测卷(三十五) 短文改错

专题检测卷(三十五)

短文改错

(建议用时: 40分钟)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

1

(2013·宝鸡模拟)

Dear Worried,

I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestion. First of all, don’t be disappointing. Many students find difficult to write well. In my opinion, if you want to improve your writing, you can do the following thing: First, doing some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and then try to making some sentences with them. Second, read so much as possible. There are many things that can’t be learnt at a time. You must see them in books for many times. Then you’ll be able to use them correct. So, in order to write good, you must learn to read much. Finally, you’d better recite some good passages.

Good luck to you in your writing.

Yours,

Li Hua

2

(2013·兰州模拟)

Canada is second largest country with the largest number of lakes in the world. It has a population of about 35 millions and the majority of people lives in the central part of the country. Canada is high developed in economy. Fishing and forestry are of great important in the eastern part. In case of falling ill, people usually go to a clinic instead of a hospital, so it’s very expensive to seeing a doctor there. Therefore almost everyone buys healthy insurance. Right now most of international students chose to study in the east, which the tuition is relatively low.

3

(2013·大连模拟)

Before lunch Allen happened to see a man fished in a water hole about five meter outside a bar. Allen stopped curiously. All people passing over the man who was fishing regarded him like a foolish man. Therefore, Allen said kindly to fish-catcher, “Hello, will you please do me a favor and have a drink with me in the bar? ”The man gladly received his invitation. After buying the man several cups of soft drinks, Allen asked, “You are fishing there, right? May I know how much fish you have caught this mo rning? ”“You are the number 8, ”said the man humorous.

4

(2013·哈尔滨模拟)

Dear British friends,

Welcome to Beijing. I’m very pleased to tell you some arrangements during your stay in Beijing.

Our headmaster Mr. Smith were to meet you on Monday morning and she will say something about our school.

are to visit the Great Wall, about that Mr. Zhang will tell some extreme interesting stories. In the evening we are going to have a party in Room 402. The Chinese and the English students will give nice performance at the party, show their cultures respectively. At

9: 45 a. m. on Wednesday you’ll leave Xi’an by the train.

I hope you would have a good time here. Thank you.

答案解析

1. 答案：

Dear Worried，

I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestion. First of

suggestions

all, don’t be disappointing. Many students find ∧difficult to write well. In my

disappointed it

opinion, if you want to improve your writing，you can do the following thing: First，

things

doing some study with set phrases and sentence structures. Keep a list of them and

do

then try to making some sentences with them. Second, read so much as possible.

make as

There are many things that can’t be learnt at a time. You must see them in books for

many times. Then you’ll be able to use them correct. So, in order to write good，

correctly well

you must learn to read much. Finally，you’d better recite some good passages.

Good luck to you in your writing.

Yours,

Li Hua

1. 【解析】将第一句中的suggestion改为suggestions。前面有some。

2. 【解析】将第二句中的disappointing改为disappointed。主语是人，指不要灰心。

3. 【解析】在第三句中的find后面加it。it作形式宾语，不定式是真正宾语。

4. 【解析】将第四句中的thing改为things。下面提到几件事情。

5. 【解析】将第五句中的doing改为do。构成祈使句。

6. 【解析】将第六句中的making改为make。try to do sth. 尽力做某事。

7. 【解析】将第七句中的so改为as。as. . . as possible固定词组。

8. 【解析】将第九句中的for去掉。many times直接作状语。

9. 【解析】将第十句中的correct改为correctly。修饰动词use用副词。

10. 【解析】将第十一句中的good改为well。修饰动词write用副词。

2. 答案：

Canada is ∧second largest country with the largest number of lakes in the

the

world. It has a population of about 35 millions and the majority of people lives

million live

in the central part of the country．Canada is high developed in economy. Fishing

highly

and forestry are of great important in the eastern part. In case of falling ill, people