第二次月考作文讲评---2016届高三(5)班

10.As an old saying goes,“ Every one should read books.”(陈愉)
Part Two
1. We can hold a book fair. It can not only open students’ eyes, but also make a good atmosphere where students can read books.(詹辉)
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1. There are many students read novels in class.(余 琪) 2. They think read novels can make them relax and happy. So they buried in novels.(余琪) 3. They can’t follow teachers’ steps which cause they feel bored in class.(余琪)
18分以上： 余琪，徐建康，陈洁凯，詹卫芳，蒋慧，周 林枝，余丽鑫，邹慧玲，刘琳，方芬芬，陈婷
4. Only in this way can we make progress in study, which is helpful to us…(詹卫芳，陈洁凯，余丽鑫， 郑希雅，柴璐仙，毛海燕，林中发，) 5. Personally, I think…(蒋慧，)
6. There are some suggestions as follows.(余丽霞，)
8. As an old saying goes, an opportunity missing is an opportunity lost.(徐建康，刘琳，)
9. As time went by, they are attracted in novels.(陈 杰凯，) 10. With the development of science and technology, our life will be better and better.(詹卫芳，)
7. As an old saying goes, do right things, don’t give ourselves a chance to regret.(杨栋梁，)
8. I would appreciate it if you take my advice into consideration.
I’m very worry about them.
17. Less students read a novel in order to write a composition.(陈杰凯)
18. Many students watch novels in class and don’t listen careful to the teacher.(张涵)
8. Not only it effort their study, but also waste times.(方芬芬)
9. What’s more, some students even reading in class instead of listening to the teacher.(陈婷) 10. There was a book fair happened in our school a few days ago.(古余敏) 11. Students read novels take that as a excuse.(郑希 雅)
5. The reason why they are crazy about reading novels is…(詹雲霞，徐子安，) The reason why I say so is that…(汪丽君，方芬 芬，)
6. There are two reasons for that.(姚超) 7. Why not communicate with them?(古余敏，余 成琦，)
12. Some students have tired of studying.(陈婷婷)
13. It also make our haven’t enough energetic tomorrow.(董凯勤) 14. I found many students read novels very much ,even though some students read novels at class.(徐子安) 15. As far as I concerned, there have many reasons.(毛海燕) 16. I find a badly phenomenon.(洪小良)
Part Three
1. There is no doubt that …(余琪，) 2. Not only does it improve Chinese and English but also it makes a good atmosphere at school.(余 琪，) 3. It’s strongly recommended that we should take action.(徐建康，)
2. I think you should catch the student who read novels in class.(徐勇) 3. As for me, I think reading can help me to improve writing.(徐旺)
4. The reasons are as follows.(毛海燕，徐秋蔚，郑 希雅，余琪，余丽鑫，)
4. I’m your’s student on Class 5.(陈洁凯)
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5. They find some good stories what make they feel sad but..(陈洁凯)
6. Novels can kill our time when we are so boring. (陈洁凯) 7. They don’t have interested in studying.(余丽鑫)
5. It couldn’t be worse.(余丽霞)
6. I find a bad phenomenon that some students read novels after class.(郑希雅) 7. People’s view on reading novels in free time vary from person to person.(姚超) 8. As we all know, our school held a book fair recently.(毛海燕) 9.As we all know, reading novels can improve our reading skills.(徐勇)
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Part One
1. I’m Li Hua who is in Class 5, Grade 3. (余琪) 2. The reason why I’m writing the letter is that…(詹卫芳,蒋慧，邹慧玲，陈婷，) 3. The reason why I’m writing this letter is to tell you that…(杨栋梁) 4. Most of them read novels in spare time while some of them read it in class from time to time.(余 丽霞)