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句式富于变化
3. I was careless. I lost a bag on the ground. (good ) ---I was careless and lost a bag on the ground. (better) ---I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. (best)
做题步骤
审
• 找: 表达的中心。 • 圈:要点 • 定:体裁、时态、人称等细节
列
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章 要点。
加
• 加首尾,使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总 分结构,开头或结尾的句子 注意简洁,漂亮。
如何写开头
1.开头常用词语: as far as we know 据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知 at present 目前 first of all 首先 To tell the truth 老实说
中考指导:
English writing
中考评标准:
作文一律按档给分。 影响作文分数的因素:
1 题目要求、内容要点;
2 句子准确、通顺; 3 层次结构清晰; 4 拼写、语法等错误; 5 卷面整洁度;
作文一般框架:三段式
1)综述(总):概括性强,最多2-3句话引入主题; 2)正文(主要内容)(分):层次性强,一定要有过 渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话; 3)结尾(总):紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
如何添加过渡句、连接词
• 补充说明 for example, besides, What’s worse! What’s more! • 转折 however, yet, but • 原因 thanks to, because of • 结果 so ,so· · · that
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• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲,考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型,要能根据自己的英语水平,尽量扬 长避短,避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时,就用同(近)义词或同义句代替,不 要使用没有把握的词句,并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合,语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后 写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要,重新排列组合已写成的 句子,划分 必要的段落,一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文,演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告,列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲,考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型,要能根据自己的英语水平,尽量扬 长避短,避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时,就用同(近)义词或同义句代替,不 要使用没有把握的词句,并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合,语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后 写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要,重新排列组合已写成的 句子,划分 必要的段落,一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文,演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告,列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
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well work well. (the ending)
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美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标::
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求:要求学生在15-20分钟内,根据所给提
示,写一篇语言正确、内容完整,语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点:1.贴近生活,贴近时代,有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标::
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求:要求学生在15-20分钟内,根据所给提
示,写一篇语言正确、内容完整,语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点:1.贴近生活,贴近时代,有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
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会,并在今年的暑假里打算为家里做什么。
• 提示词:family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称:第一人称 • 时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
(个别使用一般过去时也可。) • 主题:做家务 • 文体:记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己,家人,朋友,老师… 学习提高 学习的科目,遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生,食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划,学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
• 提示词:family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称:第一人称 • 时态:一般现在时,一般将来时
(个别使用一般过去时也可。) • 主题:做家务 • 文体:记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己,家人,朋友,老师… 学习提高 学习的科目,遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生,食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划,学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
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Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? (每一段的主要内容是什么?) 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?(作者的观点是什么?理由?) 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? (作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗?) 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!(有好词好句吗?请划住。)
正方: Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
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断句
Stage2: 抓
动词 短语语块
句式结构
(mind map)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)Βιβλιοθήκη (preview)审
书面 表达
连
(link)
抓 (focus) 扩
(expand)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
因并果列
顺序
Stage4: 连
观点 原句美化
Stage3: 扩
造句
Stage5、6:查改和誊写
Stage1:审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他(Jim)理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱,想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读,在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异,但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
第五档(13-15分) 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,表达
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• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
(正文) meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
点。要点一定要齐全,切勿漏掉。
(新)中考英语书面表达指导教学教 学PPT- (50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】
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列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
(新)中考英语书面表达指导教学教 学PPT- (50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
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列(list)
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
(正文) meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
点。要点一定要齐全,切勿漏掉。
(新)中考英语书面表达指导教学教 学PPT- (50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】
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列(list)
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
• 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲
(新)中考英语书面表达指导教学教 学PPT- (50页)-PPT执教课件【推荐】
travel stay at home
visit friends or parents
work
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列(list)
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
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中考英语写作指导课
肖营子初级中学 张丽东
• •
中考英语的写作
教学目标:
A 组学生了解公式法作文的框架,并 能学写简单的句子,逐渐连句成文 B 组学生要求掌握公式法作文的框 。 架,并能按规定要求结合公式法写作 文。
优秀的 文章
布局
层次 过渡 文采
• cross-questions(审题) Person (人称) Style(体裁) Tense (时态)
• 加谚语
文采
加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法
Joining the English club is a good way to study English
As the saying goes :Practice makes perfect. So Joining the English club is a good way to study English
to
general总
Practice:
Can you add a beginning, two other key sentences, some linking words and an ending?
My hobbies ( Beginning ): ___________________________________. I am a lover of reading ( Key sentence A):______________________. I often read in my free time. I read many kinds of books. And I like the stories that have good endings. (Key sentence B ): ______________________. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I can’t sing English songs well, I like them a lot. (Key sentence C ): _____________________.I often play ping-pong after classes. When I am doing sports, I forge all my trouble and worry. Of course it is necessary for students to play sports. (Ending) _______________________________________.
中考英语写作指导课
肖营子初级中学 张丽东
• •
中考英语的写作
教学目标:
A 组学生了解公式法作文的框架,并 能学写简单的句子,逐渐连句成文 B 组学生要求掌握公式法作文的框 。 架,并能按规定要求结合公式法写作 文。
优秀的 文章
布局
层次 过渡 文采
• cross-questions(审题) Person (人称) Style(体裁) Tense (时态)
• 加谚语
文采
加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法
Joining the English club is a good way to study English
As the saying goes :Practice makes perfect. So Joining the English club is a good way to study English
to
general总
Practice:
Can you add a beginning, two other key sentences, some linking words and an ending?
My hobbies ( Beginning ): ___________________________________. I am a lover of reading ( Key sentence A):______________________. I often read in my free time. I read many kinds of books. And I like the stories that have good endings. (Key sentence B ): ______________________. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I can’t sing English songs well, I like them a lot. (Key sentence C ): _____________________.I often play ping-pong after classes. When I am doing sports, I forge all my trouble and worry. Of course it is necessary for students to play sports. (Ending) _______________________________________.
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背诵谚语、格言、佳句并套用于作文中; 经典范文赏析; 做好作文讲评。
目的
实战限时训练,熟悉掌握写作基本步骤;稳步提升写作技能,让写作变得精彩!
完成2017中考预测作文
要求:1.词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。 2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。 3.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people.
课内训练为主
1. 限时写作(20分钟),在教师引导下,进行十句作文法,三段式写作。 2. 让学生参照中考写作评分标准(三人一组)互评作文。 1)打得分;2)找出文中错误;3)评分依据,改进意见。 1. 2. 教师二次批阅; 做好作文讲评。 每周一次作文训练
课外辅助内容 训练频率
课外补充内容
1. 2. 3.
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近五年遵义中考作文分析:
试题
2012
呈现形式
中文
内容
(日记) 学校生活
2013
2014 2015 2016
中文、图
中英文 中英文 中英文、图
(信件)感恩教育
家务事 健康生活 (故事)蚂蚁搬家
2017中考作文预测:
李克强总理将“全民阅读”写入了《政府工作报告》,倡导全民热爱阅读。请根据提示 用英文向English Post投稿,简述阅读现状及你对阅读的看法和打算。 阅读现状 你的看法 你的打算 一些国人不常阅读;有些人声称没空,有些人认为没用。 阅读很重要,因为……(至少两点) ……(至少两点)
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高级词汇替换 1.but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2.suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
A
B
We should protect the environment.
It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike
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中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他(Jim )的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他(Jim)理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱,想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读,在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异,但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Hale Waihona Puke 中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
……
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
Some classmates think that it is very strange for him to do so. But in my eyes, his behaviour makes a lot of sense to me. After all it is a traditional virtue to save money.
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.2: 抓
➢动词
时态
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.3: 抓
➢语块
p零oc花ke钱t money b从or-ro- w- -.借.from _p_更ref喜er欢to做d某o…事…__
From the point of my view, we are supposed to learn from him. Only in this way can we live a meaningful life.
要点
文 章 语言 的 评 价
行文
齐 全
语 法
准确
选
词
丰
连贯
富
连接词
过渡 性句
子
英文写作评分标准(部分)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 1: 审
➢体裁________________ ➢时态________________ ➢人称________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
Better Your Writing
Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich. Therefore, a lot of pocket money is given to him by his parents every day. But to my surprise, not like others, Jim tries his best to save money as possible as he can instead of wasting money. The reason is that he knows how hard they work to earn the money. Jim loves reading, and he buys books from the Internet. Sometimes he borrows books from the library in order to save money. Apart from that, he always brings water to school instead of buying juice. In addition, he never buys snacks with his pocket money.
第五档: (13-15分) 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要 点;语言基 本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。 语法、词汇、标点、大小写、时态准确 分段、连接词、复合句、高级词汇使用恰当
第四档:(10-12分)能写明全部或大部分内容要 点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达清楚。
第三档: (7 - 9分 )能写明大部分内容要点;语言 有较多错误; 尚能达意。
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他(Jim )的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他(Jim)理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱,想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读,在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异,但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Hale Waihona Puke 中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
……
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
Some classmates think that it is very strange for him to do so. But in my eyes, his behaviour makes a lot of sense to me. After all it is a traditional virtue to save money.
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.2: 抓
➢动词
时态
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.3: 抓
➢语块
p零oc花ke钱t money b从or-ro- w- -.借.from _p_更ref喜er欢to做d某o…事…__
From the point of my view, we are supposed to learn from him. Only in this way can we live a meaningful life.
要点
文 章 语言 的 评 价
行文
齐 全
语 法
准确
选
词
丰
连贯
富
连接词
过渡 性句
子
英文写作评分标准(部分)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 1: 审
➢体裁________________ ➢时态________________ ➢人称________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
(1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
Better Your Writing
Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich. Therefore, a lot of pocket money is given to him by his parents every day. But to my surprise, not like others, Jim tries his best to save money as possible as he can instead of wasting money. The reason is that he knows how hard they work to earn the money. Jim loves reading, and he buys books from the Internet. Sometimes he borrows books from the library in order to save money. Apart from that, he always brings water to school instead of buying juice. In addition, he never buys snacks with his pocket money.
第五档: (13-15分) 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要 点;语言基 本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚。 语法、词汇、标点、大小写、时态准确 分段、连接词、复合句、高级词汇使用恰当
第四档:(10-12分)能写明全部或大部分内容要 点;语言有少量错误;行文基本连贯,表达清楚。
第三档: (7 - 9分 )能写明大部分内容要点;语言 有较多错误; 尚能达意。