中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
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中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
well work well. （the ending）
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他（Jim ）的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Hale Waihona Puke 中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
……
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他（Jim ）的父母都有钱”
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Hale Waihona Puke 中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
Stage 2.4: 抓
➢句子结构 It’s … to do sth.
……
中考英语写作指导课件(共22张PPT)
因并果列 顺序
观点 …… 源句内化
Stage5:改
Stage4: 连
Stage1: 审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
Stage3: 扩
Stage2: 抓
断句 动词 语块
(mind map)
造句
结构
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语作文指导课件(79张 PPT)演讲稿.ppt
on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
课件
4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
课件
一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
课件
4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
课件
一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
初中英语中考作文指导 (共45张PPT)【完美版】
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
初中英语写作指导课 Let’s go for it!
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
初中英语中考作文指导 （共45张PPT）【完美版】
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可ed以ao sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crart开eiopno头?rtW.或e 结
（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
（正文） meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不 用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
初中英语写作指导课 Let’s go for it!
basic structure (基本结构的安排)
Let’s go for it!
Dear Mr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study. (the beginning)
初中英语中考作文指导 （共45张PPT）【完美版】
加(add)
• 加首尾，使结构完整。 • Hm•oawd可ed以ao sp采uerovp取eley 总sapned分ndh总etrhe结eiirs构voau，crart开eiopno头?rtW.或e 结
（t尾he的b句eg子inn应in注g）意简洁、漂亮。
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
中考英语写作公开课(共25张PPT)
写作第三步：
加
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂 亮。
Boys and girls，
Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.
a nice head
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
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中考英语作文指导 PPT课件(共38张)
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句) We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. ( 扩展句 ) If you would like to take photos, you’d better take a camera. (扩展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.mthe outing. (扩展句) Wish all of us have a good time. (结尾句)
要求：１、词数：８０个词左右；题目及文章的 开头已给出，但不算在词数内。 ２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当 增加细节，使行文连贯。 ３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称， 否则答案作废。 Notice Good morning, everyone! I’ll tell you a piece of good news. We are planning an outing. __________
中考英语 作文指导
——黄志林
中考英语作文指导教学课件(共22张PPT)
背诵谚语、格言、佳句并套用于作文中； 经典范文赏析； 做好作文讲评。
目的
实战限时训练，熟悉掌握写作基本步骤；稳步提升写作技能，让写作变得精彩！
完成2017中考预测作文
要求：1.词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。 3.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people.
课内训练为主
1. 限时写作（20分钟），在教师引导下，进行十句作文法，三段式写作。 2. 让学生参照中考写作评分标准(三人一组)互评作文。 1）打得分；2）找出文中错误；3）评分依据，改进意见。 1. 2. 教师二次批阅； 做好作文讲评。 每周一次作文训练
课外辅助内容 训练频率
课外补充内容
1. 2. 3.
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近五年遵义中考作文分析：
试题
2012
呈现形式
中文
内容
（日记） 学校生活
2013
2014 2015 2016
中文、图
中英文 中英文 中英文、图
（信件）感恩教育
家务事 健康生活 （故事）蚂蚁搬家
2017中考作文预测：
李克强总理将“全民阅读”写入了《政府工作报告》，倡导全民热爱阅读。请根据提示 用英文向English Post投稿，简述阅读现状及你对阅读的看法和打算。 阅读现状 你的看法 你的打算 一些国人不常阅读；有些人声称没空，有些人认为没用。 阅读很重要，因为……（至少两点） ……（至少两点）
中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
初中英语作文讲解 PPT课件(共29张)
修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!
六、誊写
（2004年陕西省中考试题） VII. 书面表达（共1题，计10分） 假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。 要求：1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2. 词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。 Dear friend, Hello！I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York. I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together. After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Bob Dear Bob,
中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)
高级词汇替换 1．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
A
B
We should protect the environment.
It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike
中考英语作文指导教学课件(共46张PPT)
• First, paper books are more convenient. And we can write notes in them.
• We should use e-books because we live in modern cities and we should share the result of the development of the technology.
河北省中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响
意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子
基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量
• However, paper books also have some advantages. With paper books, we can make notes easily. It is good for us to practice handwriting. It won’t do so much harm to our eyes as e-books do.
春天来了，容易患感冒，为了保持健康，某英语网
站正在征集有关保持健康建议的稿件，请结合以下
图表写一篇应征短文。
more water drink
…
more vegetables and fruit
eat less junk food
…
How to keep healthy
… others
run and do morning exercise
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断句
Stage2: 抓
动词 短语语块
句式结构
(mind map)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)Βιβλιοθήκη (preview)审
书面 表达
连
(link)
抓 (focus) 扩
(expand)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
因并果列
顺序
Stage4: 连
观点 原句美化
Stage3: 扩
造句
Stage5、6:查改和誊写
Stage1:审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
第五档（13-15分） 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达
清楚。 第四档（10-12分） 能写明全部或大部分内容要点；语言有少量错误；星闻基本连贯，
表达基本清楚。 第三档（7-9分） 能写明大部分内容要点；语言有较多错误；尚能达意。
提示：
1.不准吸烟
2.关闭手机
3.不准大声喧哗
4.禁止携带食物
5.不乱扔垃圾
Hello,everyone,
We’ll go to DaGuangming Cinema to see a movie tomorrow.I’d like to tell you the rules of the cinema.
turn off the phone. Two, you can’t speak loudly in the cinema. Three, you can’t take any foods to the cinema and not throw the rubbish everywhere. you should get to there on time. I think you can do all the thing. Have a good time!
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.________________________________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
__________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ________________________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
Stage 1: 审
➢体裁________________ ➢时态________________ ➢人称________________
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
Stage 2.1: 抓
➢断句
1.“他（Jim ）的父母都有钱”
Thank you for listening.
Hello,everyone, We’ll go to Daguangming Cinema to see a movie
tomorrow.I’d like to tell you the rules of the cinema. One, I will tell you: “Don’t smoke.” And should
中考英语写作指导
If you want to be a great writer like her, you must do a thing first.
English
根据学校安排明天你们要去大光明影院看电影，请你以班长的身份，根据 下面的提示，把电影院的规定讲给班里的同学们.并做适当发挥。字数要求： 80-100词。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT) 中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
These six steps may help to make your
composition better!
(transcribe)
抄 改 (revise)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
Stage 2.2: 抓
➢动词
时态
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
Stage 2.3: 抓
➢语块
po零ck花et钱money b从orr-o-w-…-借from __p更ref喜er 欢to 做do某…事…__
Thank you for listening.
What do you think of this composition?
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
1. simple sentences
｛ bad points
2. many mistakes 3. dull
4. Chinglish
Then what should we do if we want to write a beautiful composition?