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Now I have made great progress The food it has
studying hard to get will feel
My lifMe iys lcifoemcboimnebdinwesithahpappinpeinsessws iathndsasdandensesss Making
固定搭配
I have trouble in math (I have trouble with math/ I have trouble in studying math) my speaking English (my spoken English)
语言运用
My life combines with happiness and sadness (My life is combined with happiness and sadness/ My life combines happiness with sadness) It is sparing no efforts in studying can make a progress (It is sparing no efforts in studying that makes progress/ Sparing no efforts in studying can make progress)
拼写错误
I’m pleased to tell you about my self (myself) I think doctor is a very pround work (proud) painess (pain)
Direwenku.baidu.comtions
Read English texts every morning Write neatly and beautifully Practice often Avoid Chinglish Use different types of sentences Use transitional words Divide the composition into 3,4 parts No mistakes
词性混用
nearly condition (recent/present/current condition) Finally, I will success (Finally, I will succeed) But now, my study is not well (But now, my study is not good)
Write a composition on the topic “I have a dream”
时态问题
There was a time when I got bad grades, which make me feel sad (There was a time when I got bad grades, which made me feel sad)
语态问题
First, I think my life is not changed too much so far. (First, I think my life has not changed too much so far)
medicine
interest
单复数&可不可数问题
make a progress (make progress) informations (information) The foods in the canteen is tasty (The food in the canteen is tasty)
istpiasrsinpgarninogenffooretfsfocratns tmhaktemgarkeeast gprreoagtrepsrsogress
recent
information myself
proud pain suncoetIegIhdohaoavdveetrtorouubblele(iwn)itshtumdaymtinhagkme aptrhogCroeussld
“By othTerhs’efayulct,awniswe mrietnecborerettcet trheir own” 它Y山ou之石ca，n可w以r攻ite玉better
has not changed which made me
I’m still busy with
to tell I feel happy everyday I read my spoken English
studying hard to get will feel
My lifMe iys lcifoemcboimnebdinwesithahpappinpeinsessws iathndsasdandensesss Making
固定搭配
I have trouble in math (I have trouble with math/ I have trouble in studying math) my speaking English (my spoken English)
语言运用
My life combines with happiness and sadness (My life is combined with happiness and sadness/ My life combines happiness with sadness) It is sparing no efforts in studying can make a progress (It is sparing no efforts in studying that makes progress/ Sparing no efforts in studying can make progress)
拼写错误
I’m pleased to tell you about my self (myself) I think doctor is a very pround work (proud) painess (pain)
Direwenku.baidu.comtions
Read English texts every morning Write neatly and beautifully Practice often Avoid Chinglish Use different types of sentences Use transitional words Divide the composition into 3,4 parts No mistakes
词性混用
nearly condition (recent/present/current condition) Finally, I will success (Finally, I will succeed) But now, my study is not well (But now, my study is not good)
Write a composition on the topic “I have a dream”
时态问题
There was a time when I got bad grades, which make me feel sad (There was a time when I got bad grades, which made me feel sad)
语态问题
First, I think my life is not changed too much so far. (First, I think my life has not changed too much so far)
medicine
interest
单复数&可不可数问题
make a progress (make progress) informations (information) The foods in the canteen is tasty (The food in the canteen is tasty)
istpiasrsinpgarninogenffooretfsfocratns tmhaktemgarkeeast gprreoagtrepsrsogress
recent
information myself
proud pain suncoetIegIhdohaoavdveetrtorouubblele(iwn)itshtumdaymtinhagkme aptrhogCroeussld
“By othTerhs’efayulct,awniswe mrietnecborerettcet trheir own” 它Y山ou之石ca，n可w以r攻ite玉better
has not changed which made me
I’m still busy with
to tell I feel happy everyday I read my spoken English