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雅思写作7.0课程讲义

雅思写作7.0课程讲义

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲:刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分:7分或7分以上第一节的内容:1.雅思写作的整体介绍2.高分写作的要求3.解决问题的方案4.课程的总览一.雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别:task 2 议论文task 1 A:图表作文 G:书信评分:以Task 2 为主二:高分写作的要求评分标准:Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching(深远的), profound(深刻的), adverse(不利的), catastrophic(灾难的), damaging(破坏性的), devastating(破坏性的), dire(可怕的), disastrous(灾难的), fatal(致命的), tragic(悲惨的), severe(严重的),2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句:China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句:Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语:It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句:Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think有人认为,为了提高教育质量,我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估;别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

ielts写作——大作文写作讲义

ielts写作——大作文写作讲义

大作文写作讲义大作文写作步骤●审题——1分钟●提纲——3分钟●开头——5分钟●中间——25分钟●结尾——3分钟●检查——3分钟●总共:40分钟审题:●杜绝看不懂题目!●杜绝跑题!通扫所有大作文题目:●写作教程P94-182:●议论文题型分析●精彩范文●最新范文●白皮书P118-144:●题目+ argument●同黄皮书P34-43●Broad topic—topic—specific topicWith computers, people can now shop, bank, work and communicate from home. The danger is that people could become isolated from each other and lost social skills which help them to get along with others. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their opinion?科技——电脑——电脑与人际关系、社交技能●Circle/underline the key words!●写作针对specific topic! Otherwise it isIRRELEV ANT!例:There is an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. Analyze the possible causes of this phenomenon and offer some recommendations.●重点:原因分析——为什么越来越多跑题文章汇总:●教程●13●22●105●讲义●177●178●英文论文的写作原则●理清写作思路●确保清晰结构●论证有话可说1.文章风格2.结构3.POWER结构:●Beginning—view of point1.Background2.Transition3.View of point4.40 words-3 sentences●Body—supporting ideas: 2-31.Topic sentence2.Supporting ideas3.Transitional sentence4.180 words-10 sentences●Ending—repetition of the opening1.30 words-2/3 sentences注意点:1.There is no need for you to create a title; (讲义117)2.Be sure to present your view in the lastsentence of the first paragraph.3.Be sure the topic sentences can be identifiedas the first one of each paragraph in thebody.4. 3 to 5 complex sentences are indispensableif your want to get a band over 6范文阅读:●教程15—过渡痕迹明显●教程16●(讲义P171:专业招收男女生比例——聪明的借鉴)提高写作水平:1.Read extensively to broaden your horizon;(ideas + outline + 文章自读)2.Read intensively to learn sentence patterns;(范文阅读)3.Imitate to assimilate yourself to the westernstyle;4.PRACTICE!!!练开头/结尾练论证手法优秀句型造句Learn to summarize:●Many people believe that women makebetter parents than men and that this is whythey have the greater role in raising childrenin most societies. Others claim that men arejust as good as women at parenting.●Write an essay expressing your point ofview.1.Agree with the former.2.As a result of conditioning3.Less aggressive nature4.Better communication skills5.Conclusion提纲练习:●写作教程:choose 3 out of them●104——动物:肉乎?朋友乎?●118——汽车的作用●119——大公司/小公司?●128——科技导致文化趋同?●130——入乡随俗/我行我素?●137——体育与学习:孰轻孰重?文章阅读:●教程●35-38—比较阅读●18-太空研究值否?●26-大学学术/实用?●114-飞机的作用●126-女子学校?●127-科技与文化趋同●131-入乡随俗/我行我素●141-性格的形成●143-教育学术/实用●144-大学教育实用性●145-挑战权威●149-动物实验●150-动物园●153-老年人退休●156-竞争与合作●157-孩子犯罪谁负责●159-工作为钱/成就感●161-青年问题●162-女性参军●163-警察带枪●166-成功与理论知识●170-计算机的危害●174-全球化的利弊●176-动物还是人?●179-大学的功能●180-环境问题国际合作●182, 185, 186-广告文章欣赏:●教程●148——快乐的定义●160——能力与报酬●169——信息的审查●172——电子辅导●188——广告的作用●189——广告时代●可借用想法●不适合模仿Power●Plan●Outline●Write●Edit●RewriteBrainstorming●Many parents send their childrenabroad to study. Discuss theadvantages and disadvantagesabout this. Do you think whenwill be a suitable age to send themabroad.BranchingOutline:I.IntroductionII.BodyA. …1. …a. …i. …B. …C. …III.ConclusionBe sure that you have put two main ideas in different paragraphs.开头:●说明现状1.It is a fact of life that…2.It has been widely noted that…3.There is a growing tendencynowadays for some people to …●表明问题1.There is much discussionnowadays as to whether or not …2. A criticism often heard these daysis that…3.This raises serious doubts about…4.Some maintain…, whereas othersare convinced that…●作者观点1.To be frank, I am in high favourof …2.Personally, I am convinced that…3.For my part, I share the latterpoint of view and I will give twomajor reasons why this is so.4.Here I will discuss the pros andcons of the issue.结尾:1.重申2.让步3.谚语/格言4.建议5.All in all,6.To sum up,7.In a word,8.To cut a long story short,9.From what has been discussed above, wemay safely draw the conclusion that…10.Weighing the pros and cons of thedouble-edged sword, I’m inclined to agreewith the latter point of view.写作技巧:●Definition: happiness●Example:●Anecdote●Adage●Typical events●中国古代的例子不要出现●Comparison and contrast●Block to block●Point to point●Cause and effect●因果关系词●Statistics●Metaphor●My love is red, red rose.因果关系词:选5个造句Not because A but because BReading work:●写作教程P41-50:●关联词的运用●文章的连贯性不能容忍的错误:1.Plural and singular forms 单复数/主谓一致Nowadays anyone who study at university need to learn how to use computer.1.Part of speech 词性The develop of personal computers effect on people’s lives because small businesses can easy afford them and this makes their work more efficiency.1.Tense 时态The number of household utility consumption was rising between 1990 and 2000.1.Preposition 介词He appears to be very experienced with dealing with people.Have a knowledge and sensitivity of the culture of the recipient, and you will have an invaluable chance to earn respect and establish a durable relationship.5.及物/不及物动词He rose the matter at the meeting.6.副词的位置Success only can be achieved through hard work.6.冠词Horse is a useful animal to human beings.6.There be句型There are many people would agree with this statement.6.Spelling 拼写: monk—monkey7.Punctuation 标点The money should be spent improving facility in old homes, that will help provide a more comfortable environment for old people.(写作教程P21)不同句式:1.In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully andwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(副词短语+并列句)2.The goats grazed peacefully in the farm andwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(并列句)3.The goats were grazing peacefully in thefarm, unaware of the approaching hunter.(简单句+形容语短语)4.Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farmwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(现在分词+简单句)5.As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm,they were unaware of the approachinghunter. (原因从句+主句) 组成长句:The graph is about student numbers in the UK.The number of students in higher education has risen. The rise has taken place over the last five years.Students were asked how much they expect to earn when they start work.40 per cent of them expect to earn about 21,000.2 per cent expect to earn 40,000 or more.A typical police force in Britain has 2500 officers.A typical town has a population of 180,000.At any one time, there are only 10 officers patrolling the streets of a typical town.Drink-driving laws vary from country to country.In Poland it is illegal to drive with more than 20 mg of alcohol in your blood.In Italy it is illegal to drive with more than 80 mg of alcohol in your blood.1. A student acquires knowledge mainly fromthe textbook and in class.2.When he graduates from school he can donothing.3.Everything is different from what teacherstold them.4.He may be disappointed.5.He may be frustrated.6.He may be afraid to face the real world.7.Our universities have turned out people ofno use.1.Frans Mesmer was a physician.2.Frans Mesmer was from Germany.3.Frans Mesmer invented hypnotism.4.Hypnotism was invented in the eighteenthcentury.5.Hypnotism remained an amusing gimmick.6.It remained a gimmick for over a century.7.The gimmick was for nightclub acts.8.The gimmick was for parlor games.9.Physicians now use hypnotism.10.Dentists now use hypnotism.11.Psychiatrists now use hypnotism.12.Hypnotism is used to treat various ailments.13.Hypnotism is used to control chronic pain.14.Hypnotism is used as a replacement froanesthesia.用词:1.写不出想表达的词2.同一个词反复用3.好词但不知用法——放弃!!!e a simple substitute!5.Try another way:1.Negation vs. affirmation2.General vs. specific6.Abandon the idea and try for a new one.7.Accumulate your bank of vocabulary,especially of synonyms.●名词间的转化:higher education, senior education, advanced schooling, college education, academic study…●名词—动词:go to university/college, go for further study●形容词—副词:a good swimmer●变换句式:简单句/从句被动/主动语态非谓语形式倒装/虚拟/强调特殊结构:so that…, too…to, not A but B, A rather than B使用插入语注意点:1.使用齐头式:讲义176、1772.Make your writing as legible as possible;3.Make your paper as clean as possible;4.If you write task 2 in the wrong place, writedown on the margin:●Sorry for the inconveniencebrought to you because I havewritten task 2 in the wrongplace.e British English in spelling●Labour/behaviour●Metre●Cheque●Travelling etc.模仿:●Choose a topic and write an essay followingthe models provided on pages:●写作教程●95 opinion—科技与生活●97 discuss—医疗系统●98 problem + reason + solution—学校第一天●99 agree/disagree—不乖的学生●101 advantage/disadvantage—广告的利弊考虑问题的思路●经济决定一切(政治、文化、教育、基础设施)●生理走向心理(马斯洛需要层次:跳槽/养老院)●客观先于主观(全球化导致文化丧失)●有关对象排排号(孩子教育的负责人/环境治理)●内部关系先切断(国际性语言/服装与爱国/烟草)●两边谈谈折中走●正反论证好说话●追根溯源挖本质(教程19+27)●观点变态没关系●自圆其说为真理。

新东方雅思作文写作最全讲义分析整理版-Topics

新东方雅思作文写作最全讲义分析整理版-Topics

Topics of Task 2 (2008~2009.11.21)一、教育(共25题,占%)1. In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.01.26)不同意:中学教育是一个重要的德育阶段,如果在这个时候中断,带来的不仅仅是失业这样的问题,还有青少年犯罪等社会问题vital stage for moral education. If it was interrupted, numerous of social problem/headaches may create as juvenile delinquency. (正如马克吐温说:你每关闭一所学校,你就必须开设一座监狱。

Every time you stop a school, you will have to build a jail )教育能够帮助培养个人素质;提高劳动力的素质,从而提高生产效率,推动社会发展,从根本上解决失业的问题。

do a favor to/be beneficial(advantageous, preferable) to personal quality, enhance/boost/promote the quality of the labor force, thereby increase production efficiency, social development, solve the problem of unemployment从长远来看,如果受过更高的教育,则有更多的机会找到好的工作。

最新雅思写作讲义汇总汇编

最新雅思写作讲义汇总汇编

雅思写作精编2011上半年讲义——张凯轩目录I. 写作评分标准II. 小作文类型介绍III. 小作文线状图及变化IV. 小作文表格图及变化V. 小作文多图结合VI. 小作文地图流程图VII. 大作文类型介绍VIII. 大作文常用学术词IX. 大作文单边论现象题句型,思路及范文X. 大作文单边论观点题句型,思路及范文XI. 大作文双边观点题句型,思路及范文XII. 大作文原因解决论句型,思路及范文XIII. 大作文杂论(个性化议论文)句型,思路及范文XIV. 张老师2011年下半年总预测24题,部分题思路分解XV. 对学员的期待和继续学习的方法XVI. 附件一:小作文图集XVII. 附件二:大作文真题集写作评分标准以及考试要求知己知彼我们首先了解雅思写作考试方需要什么IELTS Writing 首先分2个sectionSection I: Figure Writing or Diagram or Maps通常评分比例:40%考试理想时间安排10-15minutes 最多耗时不超过20minutes 字数要求:150Section II:British Essay Writing通常评分比例:60%考试理想时间安排30-40minutes 最多耗时不超过45minutes 字数要求:250雅思作文有4大评分标准Task Response Coherence &CohesionLexicalResourceGrammaticalRange & AccuracyBand5.5 6 5 5 5.5average performance by Chinese participants6. 6 5.5 5.5 68 6 7 6 78 8 7 8 8Task Response就是回答问题,具体来讲,在最理想的状态下要做到以下3点1. 明确主题2. 全面论证3. 事实论证观点以下题为例2010-12-04: In the past, important knowledge about culture and history was stored in museums. Nowadays, information is freely available on the Internet. Therefore, there is no longer any need for museums.To what extent do you agree or disagree?明确主题:不太同意全面论证:有正方—确实有越来越多的‘虚拟博物馆’,他们还有好处…;另外也有反方—传统博物馆除了让人看,还保存文物,有些还是历史性或地标性建筑…。

雅思写作课程讲义

雅思写作课程讲义

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲:刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分:7分或7分以上第一节的内容:1.雅思写作的整体介绍2.高分写作的要求3.解决问题的方案4.课程的总览一.雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别:task 2 议论文task 1 A:图表作文 G:书信评分:以Task 2 为主二:高分写作的要求评分标准:Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构) Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据) Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构) 1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day. The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching(深远的), profound(深刻的), adverse(不利的), catastrophic (灾难的), damaging(破坏性的), devastating(破坏性的), dire(可怕的), disastrous(灾难的), fatal(致命的), tragic(悲惨的), severe(严重的), 2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do. Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句:China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streetsare teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句:Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语:It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句:Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense. Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为,为了提高教育质量,我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估;别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

雅思写作全解析(最全) PPT

雅思写作全解析(最全) PPT

2.8 小作文主体段顺序
2.9 小作文结尾段写法
Ending 轻松写
Ending 轻松写
• The line chart illustrates the data about people at a London subway station from 6 am to 10pm.
2.10 派图介绍
2. 小作文透析及派图解析
2.1 小作文总体审题特点
2.1.1 审题
2.1.2 构思
2.2 小作文写作必备能力
2.3 小作文考点热点
数据类图表为主导 派图:占有 线图:趋势,速度 柱图:比对 表格:数据分析
2.4 小作文综合预测
• 关注公共邮箱
2.5 小作文注意事项
2.6 小作文开头段写法
1.8 书写格式
1.9 评分标准说明
• Task Response • 是否涵盖要点;是否切题、合理 • Coherence and Cohesion • 句语句、段与段的衔接 • Lexical Resources • 用词的准确性和灵活性 • Grammatical Range and Accuracy • 语法多样性和准确性
1.4.1 非数据类图表题
• 9/48 19% • Map • Diagram • Flow
1.5 大作文基本情况
• 1.5.1 议论类 • 1.5.2 说明类
1.5.1 议论类
• Discuss both views and give your own opinion
• Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages • 怎样的观点“正确”? • 怎样写顺手?
1.1.1 官方信息来源

雅思写作语法全讲解

雅思写作语法全讲解

雅思写作语法全讲解Crack Your Grammar Puzzles Once And For All从5.5-6到6.5-7的变化前言雅思写作的低分可能是多方面原因的结果,包括词汇量有限,对题目内容没有想法,字体太丑,甚至人品太糟以至遇到了考官前天晚上和媳妇某方面不和谐!但是不管是哪个原因,写作的基本要求就是能写出正确和有逻辑的单句或复合句。

本课程的目标是为了拯救在语法部分挣扎折磨的考生。

你们也许已经重复了好多次系统语法的学习,各种复杂语法现象。

可是,你从来不知道那些语法书的内容是native speakers都看不懂的。

你报的高价班可能给你安排了基础语法课程。

可是,你从来不知道语法课的老师从来没想过好好教你,因为Ta觉得你无可救药,讲什么你都不懂,与其从你的角度来分析弱点,还不如把用了几百年的课件再讲一遍。

终于,我来了。

我通过批改几千份学生作业,挑选最具普遍性的语法错误,让你通过别人犯过的错误来提醒自己不要如此低级,从而保证自己的语法正确度。

我们能培养你母语一样的语法能力!目录第一章:主语错误 (2)第二章谓语动词错误 (7)2.1 缺少谓语(常见的情况是误用介词或者形容词当作动词) (8)2.2 太多动词造成谓语混乱 (9)2.3 时态问题 (12)2.4被动错误 (14)2.5情态动词使用错误 (16)2.6对Be动词毫无感情 (17)第三章修饰名词的错误 (20)3.1 第一种类型:形容词+名词 (22)3.2 第二种类型:名词(介词短语) (23)3.3 第三种类型:名词(定语从句) (24)第四章:比较级和最高级错误 (26)第五章:名词的错误 (29)第六章:从句的基本错误 (34)6.1 在前面的章节里我们已经讨论过了名词被修饰的情况。

其中一种方法就是使用定语从句来修饰名词。

这一节里,我们来看三个定语从句最基本的位置和形式。

(35)6.2. 从句经常出现没有主语的情况 (40)6.3. 经常出现的主句没主语的现象 (40)6.4. 从句之间标点错误 (41)第一章:主语错误出错可能:五颗星错误程度:低级到考官想弄死你俗话说得好:万事开头难!很多同学的写作和口语难以提高,主要问题就在于对一个完整句子的主语形式不够了解。

雅思写作7.0课程讲义精编版

雅思写作7.0课程讲义精编版

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲:刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分:7分或7分以上第一节的内容:1.雅思写作的整体介绍2.高分写作的要求3.解决问题的方案4.课程的总览一.雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别:task 2 议论文task 1 A:图表作文G:书信评分:以Task 2 为主二:高分写作的要求评分标准:Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching(深远的), profound(深刻的), adverse(不利的), catastrophic(灾难的), damaging(破坏性的), devastating(破坏性的), dire(可怕的), disastrous(灾难的), fatal(致命的), tragic(悲惨的), severe(严重的),2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句:China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句:Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语:It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句:Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为,为了提高教育质量,我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估;别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

IELTS-A类&G类大作文写作-讲义

IELTS-A类&G类大作文写作-讲义

雅思写作A、G类大作文讲义主讲:何刚欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材学术类写作共两道题目,写作任务1和写作任务2。

你必须回答这两道题目。

任务2比任务1分值比重大。

近几年中国学生雅思总分5.4---5.5,写作5.1---5.2雅思议论文How are Task 2 answers assessed?Examiners assess the answers according to these criteria:Task Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidate's position is clear and effective)∙Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organised and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked) ∙Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)∙Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)5分作文要求:对于任务的回应●只是部分回应题目要求,格式在有的地方不得体●有立场,但论证并不总是清晰,可能没写结论●提出了一些主要观点,但这些观点有限,论证不够充分;可能有无关细节连贯与衔接●信息的呈现有些组织,但缺少整体延续性●衔接手段的使用不充分,不准确或者过度●缺少指代和替换关系,导致重复●没有分段,或者分段不充分词汇资源●词汇有限,仅仅满足最低要求●在拼写和构词法方面有明显错误,以至于导致阅读的部分困难语法结构的范围和准确性●只能使用有限的句型●试图使用复杂句,但准确度不如简单句●语法和标点经常错误,这些错误导致阅读部分困难6分作文要求:对于任务的回应●回应题目要求,虽然有的部分涵盖不够完整●立场切题,虽然结论可能不清晰或重复●主要观点切题,但有的观点可能论证不够充分或不清晰连贯与衔接●信息和观点组织连贯;文章有延续性●衔接手段使用有效,但是句子内部和句子之间的衔接可能有误或过于机械●指代关系可能不能总是清晰、合理地使用●有分段,但不总是有逻辑性词汇资源●使用适当范围的词汇●试图使用较不常见词汇,但有一些不准确●在拼写和构词法上有错误,但这些错误不至于影响交际语法结构的范围和准确性●能使用简单和复杂句子结构●语法和标点出现一些错误,尽管这些错误很少导致交流障碍。

simon雅思写作讲义

simon雅思写作讲义

simon雅思写作讲义摘要:I.引言- 介绍Simon的雅思写作讲义- 讲义对于雅思写作的重要性II.Simon的雅思写作讲义概述- 写作任务和评分标准- 写作技巧和方法- 常见错误和解决方法III.写作任务和评分标准- 写作任务类型- 评分标准IV.写作技巧和方法- 观点陈述- 逻辑展开- 语言表达V.常见错误和解决方法- 语法错误- 词汇错误- 逻辑错误VI.结论- 总结Simon的雅思写作讲义- 强调讲义对于提高雅思写作成绩的重要性正文:【引言】在众多的雅思写作讲义中,Simon的讲义以其全面、深入和实用性受到了广大考生的推崇。

本文将对Simon的雅思写作讲义进行详细的介绍和分析,以帮助考生更好地理解和应用讲义,提高雅思写作成绩。

【I.Simon的雅思写作讲义概述】Simon的雅思写作讲义系统全面地阐述了雅思写作的任务和评分标准,以及应对这些任务和标准所需的写作技巧和方法。

此外,讲义还详细分析了考生在写作过程中常见的错误,并提供了解决这些问题的方法。

【II.写作任务和评分标准】在Simon的讲义中,写作任务主要分为两大类:议论文(Argumentative essay)和报告(Report)。

议论文要求考生对某一问题提出自己的观点,并通过论据和例证进行论证;报告则要求考生对某一现象或问题进行描述、分析和解释。

评分标准主要包括:任务完成(Task Achievement)、连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion)、词汇资源(Lexical Resource)和语法范围与准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)。

【III.写作技巧和方法】1.观点陈述:在写作过程中,明确自己的观点至关重要。

考生应在文章开头段落明确表达自己的立场,并在后续段落中保持一致。

2.逻辑展开:文章的逻辑结构是评分标准中的重要一项。

考生应学会使用各种逻辑连接词,如因果关系(cause-and-effect)、转折关系(contrast)和递进关系(progression),以使文章条理清晰。

雅思写作讲义汇总

雅思写作讲义汇总

雅思写作精编2011上半年讲义——张凯轩目录I. 写作评分标准II. 小作文类型介绍III. 小作文线状图及变化IV. 小作文表格图及变化V. 小作文多图结合VI. 小作文地图流程图VII. 大作文类型介绍VIII. 大作文常用学术词IX. 大作文单边论现象题句型,思路及范文X. 大作文单边论观点题句型,思路及范文XI. 大作文双边观点题句型,思路及范文XII. 大作文原因解决论句型,思路及范文XIII. 大作文杂论〔个性化议论文〕句型,思路及范文XIV. 张老师2011年下半年总预测24题,部分题思路分解XV. 对学员的期待和继续学习的方法XVI. 附件一:小作文图集XVII. 附件二:大作文真题集写作评分标准以及考试要求知己知彼我们首先了解雅思写作考试方需要什么IELTS Writing 首先分2个sectionSection I: Figure Writing or Diagram or Maps通常评分比例:40%考试理想时间安排10-15minutes 最多耗时不超过20minutes字数要求:150Section II:British Essay Writing通常评分比例:60%考试理想时间安排30-40minutes 最多耗时不超过45minutes字数要求:250雅思作文有4大评分标准Task Response就是答复下列问题,具体来讲,在最理想的状态下要做到以下3点1. 明确主题2. 全面论证3. 事实论证观点以下题为例2010-12-04: In the past, important knowledge about culture and history was stored in museums. Nowadays, information is freely available on the Internet. Therefore, there is no longer any need for museums.To what extent do you agree or disagree?明确主题:不太同意全面论证:有正方—确实有越来越多的‘虚拟博物馆’,他们还有好处…;另外也有反方—传统博物馆除了让人看,还保存文物,有些还是历史性或地标性建筑…。

雅思写作课程讲义

雅思写作课程讲义

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲:刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分:7分或7分以上第一节的内容:1.雅思写作的整体介绍2.高分写作的要求3.解决问题的方案4.课程的总览一.雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别:task 2 议论文task 1 A:图表作文 G:书信评分:以Task 2 为主二:高分写作的要求评分标准:Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken. They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching(深远的), profound(深刻的), adverse(不利的), catastrophic(灾难的), damaging(破坏性的), devastating(破坏性的), dire(可怕的), disastrous (灾难的), fatal(致命的), tragic(悲惨的), severe(严重的),2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句:China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句:Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语:It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句:Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为,为了提高教育质量,我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估;别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

新东方雅思写作讲义汇总

新东方雅思写作讲义汇总

新东方雅思写作讲义汇总别人的指导是我们成功路上的指路灯,为了帮助大家备考雅思写作,下面小编给大家带来新东方雅思写作讲义汇总,希望喜欢。

新东方雅思写作讲义1雅思写作的12个万能理由及写作思路分享十二大万能理由1 方便 convenience2 情感 feeling(or sensibility)3 经验 experience4 成就 achievement5 效率 efficiency6 健康 health7 节俭 thrift(or save money)8 安全 safety9 性格培养 character cultivation10 乐趣 fun11 耐久endurance12 环保 environment protection部分雅思命题写作思路1. SmokingFor:(means agree or advantages)1. it is pleasurable and relaxing2. it is one's right3. it is difficult to stop smoking6. it makes socializing easier7. it is an important source of tax revenueAgainst: (means disagree or disadvantages)1. it is harmful to one's health (e.g., heart disease, bronchialtrouble, lung cancer )2. it is harmful to those nearby4. it is addictive (i.e., nicotine)2. School UniformsFor:1. they eliminate class differences2. they allow students to better concentrate on their studies3. they are popular with parents and administrators4. they are inexpensive5. they are attractive and neat6. they eliminate the need to choose what to wear every day7. many countries have themAgainst:1. they are disliked by students (students like to primp)2. they create a military mentality3. they are an infringement on our freedom (different strokes for different folks)4. they are ugly and childish3. Legalized GamblingFor:1. it is a source of government revenue2. it is an old practice dating back thousands of years3. it is pleasurable (e.g., horse racing, casinos)4. many people play poker and mahjongAgainst:1. it can become addictive2. it can destroy happy families3. it can lead to suicide4. it is easily controlled by the Mafia (e.g., bookmakers )4. City LifeFor:1. it is exciting2. it offers the best schools, hospitals, and stores3. it offers many entertainments (e.g., swimming pools, bowlingalleys, and sports stadiums )4. it offers many chances of employment5. cities have an efficient public transportation systemAgainst :1. it is unhealthy (e.g., water and air pollution in industry )2. it is not a good environment for children3. it is noisy and dangerous4. it makes people nervous5. cities are overcrowded and expensive5. Informing Patients Of CancerFor:1. patient’s right to know2. it is wrong to hide the truth3. it gives the patient a chance to plan his last days4. doctors must do it (in some country like the U. S.)Against:1. it is heartless and cruel2. it may make the patient give up3. it causes depression4. it can lead to suicide新东方雅思写作讲义240个雅思写作常用插入语整理1. indeed 的确2. surely 无疑,3. however 然而,4. obviously 显然,5. frankly 坦率地说,6. naturally 自然,7. luckily (或happily)for sb. 算某人幸运,8. fortunately / luckily 幸好,9. honestly 真的,10. briefly 简单地说,11. strange to say 说也奇怪,12. needless to say 不用说,13. most important of all 最为重要是,14. in a few words(或 in sum, in short)简而言之,15. in other words 换句话说,16. in a sense 在某种意义上,17. in general 一般说来,18. in my view 在我看来,19. in conclusion 总之,20. in summary 概括地说,21. in fact 事实上,22. in the first place 首先,23. in addition 此外,24. of course 当然,25. to my knowledge 据我所知,26. for instance (或example)例如,27. as a matter of fact 事实上,28. strictly speaking 严格地说,29. generally speaking 一般地说,30. judging from... 根据...判断31. to be sure 无疑,32. to sum up 概括地说,33. to tell the truth 老实说,34. I am sure 我可以肯定地说,35. I believe 我相信,36. I wonder 我不知道,37. that is 也就是说38. it seems 看来是,39. as I see it 照我看来,40. what is important (serious) 重要(严重)的是,新东方雅思写作讲义31-The discrepancy between...and...remains.差异依然存在。

雅思写作高分讲义

雅思写作高分讲义

第一章雅思写作话题范围分析——写作话题范围的固定性•老百姓话题•政府话题•人与周围世界的关系雅思写作要求考生在限定时间内就给定的话题以英文表达自己的想法,目的是考察考生的英文写作能力和分析问题、逻辑思维能力及论证能力。

因此所给的写作话题不带任何专业色彩,是为广大考生所熟悉的话题。

雅思作文G类题目都很简单,就是大家日常生活中经常接触的话题;A类作文80-90%的话题与G类相同,只是问题方式难度增加,另外还有一些话题,如国家之间的关系问题,只出现在A类题目中。

实际上A类话题更广泛、更学术一些。

尽管雅思作文题层出不穷,纵观数学考题,我们可以把所有题目归纳为以下三大类话题;•老百姓话题•政府话题•人与周围世界的关系考生一旦了解这些常考话题,平时就可以随时有针对性地积累写作素材,为考场的写作做充分的准备。

下面我们就具体地分析一下各大类话题所覆盖的题目,使考生全面了解范围。

一、老百姓话题上述三大话题中出题数量最多,考题最贴近考生生活的是关于老百姓的话题。

仔细分析,这部分话题又可以做出如下的划分:1.个人一生中各个年龄段遇到的需求权衡利弊、全面考虑之后做出抉择的问题。

我们一生当中,在各个阶段会遇到不同的棘手问题需要我们费心思考、花时间和精力解决。

这些问题和我们的生活密切相关,因此完全是大家熟悉的话题,当然也是雅思写作常考话题。

备考的学员可以按照人从小到老的顺序,想一想哪些问题需要我们个人解决,哪些大事需要我们决定。

如此一想,雅思作文2/3的题目已经在大家的准备之中了。

从成年人的视角来看,在孩子上学之前,最大的麻烦事找人看孩子、送孩子入托的问题。

这个问题在现实生活中是如何解决的?在我们国家,很多家庭是有爷爷、奶奶、姥姥、姥爷们帮忙把孩子带到上幼儿园的年龄。

但这种做法的利与弊雅思作文并不考,原因很简单:西方国家不存在这种现象。

不能依赖老人帮忙,还能怎么解决呢?于是不少母亲放弃职业在家带孩子(考题),也有越来越多的家庭把很小的孩子就送去上幼儿园(考题)。

雅思写作大作文专用讲义

雅思写作大作文专用讲义

第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点(Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test)难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习) 1. Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写)2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. (英式美式拼法不能混用)3. We must do our best(utmost) to protect (preserve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩)4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopardy) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas.6. In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet.7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式,语法)8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构)9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard tofight crime! (不应该带感情色彩)10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, "Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated." (文化背景,圣经不可用)难点二: No specific topic pool. 题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法对策: 雅思写作"语法的七宗罪"改错练习1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee. (n.可数不可数)2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. (v.原型不可做主语)2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. (被动语态)Poor children can face problems when they grow up.2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. (主谓一致)2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. (时态)3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 副词4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 介词4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed. 逗号7. These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系(Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence)Cause and effect因果关系标志词1)表示原因的because, as, since, due to, owing to (画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2)表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染.Exemplification 举例关系标志词…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As an illustration…(作为例证…)e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. TakeChina for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films. 亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影. Comparison and contrast 对比关系标志词While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contraste.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could oftenperform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧X,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务.e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.Concession 让步关系标志词Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的.2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械.3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.Definition 下定义关系标志词A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察.Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals.Supposition假设论证, 标志词provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that…e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued.e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside.Modification 修饰关系标志词that, which, whoIn this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly likethe buildings our ancestors built.Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.补充资料IELTS 写作考试的常用模板和句型进步类1) In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas.=in many fields. 在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展.2) Today we have embarked upon the …era. 今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked on the information era. –he has embarked on the road of committing crimes.3) Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent of the information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句 2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate.倒退类4) But A is accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction of many lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡.5) Accompanying all the advantages brought about by the profound social changes have come some sufferings; and …is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个.Please analyze causes of traffic congestion, and give some solutions. Accompanying all the conveniences brought about by violent social changes have come some negative effects, and traffic congestion is the most pressing one / the most serious one.6) With the incidence(发生率) of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. …的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.Traffic offenses have become a problem confronting modern people, please give some suggestions of how to deal with it effectively.With the incidence of traffic accidents hovering at high level, many people, especially sociologist and anthropologist, have shown great concern.7) In this day a nd age, it is standard practice for … to do something. 今天,某些人做某事是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush around all day busying themselves with their work. Many of them cannot spare some time to take care of their children,which has led to some serious social consequences. This essay will make some analysis concerning this phenomenon.8) Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注.Juvenile delinquency is an issue/topic worth our concern / discussion / analysis.Efforts will be made to analyze this topic in this essay.9) The issue of … has been thrown into sharp focus. …引起了人们的强烈关注.例句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into public attention / widespread concern.10) Howev er, there is no consensus on …yet. 或者people hold divergent /contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法.Some people hold that the experimentation on animals is justified. However, others believe that this practice is a reflection of cruelty. From my perspective, it is advantageous to some degree whilst its drawbacks can never be overlooked. / As for some experiments, animals are irreplaceable subjects but I think we should be kind as possible as we can when carrying out these experiments. /I think this practice is to some extent cruel and unjust to animals but at least in the near future we cannotget rid of it completely.11) Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate. Accompanied by the dramatic development of society, women crimes have been growing at an alarming rate. Such a grave situation has aroused widespread concern, especially sociologist and educationists. In essay attempts will be made to explore the causes of this issue and provide some feasible solutions.12) Whether…has triggered /aroused heated debate / discussion.是否应该…引起了激烈的辩论Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者Whether…is a controversial issue. 例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers' performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题.13) Some (people) assert/ argue/hold/maintain/claim/assume that… 有一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法.14) …is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lowercosts.IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型前进类1 profit fromPeople throughout the world can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.Flight to transport fruits to places where there is no such fruits or not in season.Mobile phones can bring about some drawbacks such diseases. Whether we should avoid using mobile phones.People throughout the world / in every corner of the world can profit from the advancement of information technology. Nowadays we can keep in touch with each other and communicate with our friends or clients quickly by means of mobiles phones. However, some research reveals that mobile phone may cause some medical complaints and thus it is suggested that we should cease using them. In my viewpoint, the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages.2 A is an integral /indispensable part of BAdvertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.3,S omething plays a pivotal /key role in …It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.4, Enable /allow somebody to do somethingCultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new societysuccessfully.5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt toNew immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.6Someone can have access to something 或者can access something 或者can utilize somethingIn this day and age, many individuals can have access to the Internet via /by means of computer or mobile phone.倒退类1…is attended by /…is accompanied byThe staggering advancement of technology is attended by severe pollution of the ecosystem.2The more…the more…The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur.3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from AThe proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.4be afflicted with/be plagued withIn present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.5deprive someone of somethingModern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.6something prompt/impe ls somebody to do…Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology. 其中We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保…我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶.The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.With the acceleration of living tempo, modern people are confronted with many physical and psychological problems. Among them, stress is the most prominent one. This has brought about numerous negative social consequences and aroused widespread concern especially among psychiatrists and sociologist. This essay focuses on exploring the causes and providing some ways to relieve stress.快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远.8A recent study conducted by the organization / association / institution /union / scientist reveal that…如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and GreenpeaceA recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today.9 be addicted to /preoccupied with somethingIn present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various forms of gambling.10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of …The population explosion is the chief culprit in water scarcity.11be confronted with somethingIn contemporary society, we are confronted with a large number of violent and pornographic TV shows.12 present/pose a threat to…In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a grave threat to humanity.13 be awash with/be inundated with somethingThe media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage.14 if…something will ensueIf parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue. 15With the incidence of … hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.16something is unwarranted /unjustifiableExperimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/unjustifiable.中间类1…on the grounds that…Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on somethingIn this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live,play and learn.3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance BThe advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages.4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B. Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas.5 A is a key determinant of BIn an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that…It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries.解决类1 give priority to somethingThe government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.2 dedicated A to BThe government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable toWithout proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵) Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned ratherthan condoned.5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ essential that… 或者something is of paramount/ overriding importance.To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately.6 abide by/ comply withIt is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law.7 something requires/ necessit ates /call for…The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nations on the globe.8 distinguish between A and BMany youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.9 must ensure thatParents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring.结尾段常用模板1) based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基于以上的讨论,我确信…2) In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾段) 作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看… 3) The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something,prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊(如果弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了)IELTS 作文常用同义词人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强)影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about积极的,好的beneficial, advantageous消极的,坏的baneful, detrimental好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit无处不在的prevalent, pervasive大量的a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数)增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call for第二讲十大全真版本X文,词汇与模板Education 类Some peoplethink students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' job performance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss and give your own opinion.开头段(不少于4句)In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill out performance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work. But when it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students, people hold divergent views. Some argue that students should be allowed to do so. Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate their teachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit.主体段1(不少于5句)Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers' work. First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthless or even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluation responsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some students criticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job. Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling.主体段2(不少于7句)However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. In the first place, it is an effective means of motivating theteachers to improve their lectures.Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of the student. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balanced ideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher to have accurate assessment of their own teaching. In the third place, a measure of students' autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life. The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking.结尾段(不少于3句)In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers' performance might have some potential drawback. However, by averaging out student's appraisal and encourage them to evaluate responsibly can eliminate the downside of this practice. On balance, I am convinced that allowing students to evaluate their teachers is in the best interests of students, teachers, school administrators, and the society as a whole.教育类8分X文Children who grow up in families without large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree题目点评:这道题目是IELTS writing task2当中比较少见的"看着容易写好太难"的题目(很多IELTS作文题目看起来很难,写好却不一定特别难).首先要注意到区别"families without large amounts of money" 和"poor families" 这两个概念的差异,前者不仅仅指"low-income families" 还包括"middle-income families", 所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的"穷人的孩子早当家不同";另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国的文化比较贴近,很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是忽略了推理,论证缺乏深度.从论点上看,考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情,肯定是totally agree 更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿出生的(不过美国的富豪的孩子当中牛人还是出了不少,四十三位总统里面也有大量的富家子弟,从整体上看西方有钱的家长更舍得让自己的孩子经历风雨).既然观点写一边倒,那么结果当然就是五段式――开头段转述题目+主旨句,主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力,主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性,主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格,几位段总结上三层意思.Thesis statement 和topic sentences (X文里用横线标明) 关键词:income gaps 指收入差距income inequality 指收入不均intergenerational 两代人之间的turn the table 是个idiom, 有点像中文说的"打翻身仗" offspring 孩子counterpart 相对应的人(或事务) meritocratic society 说白了就是"凭本事吃饭的社会"self-restraint 自制能力infancy 婴儿期frugality 勤俭financial strains 说白了就是缺钱,名词well-off/affluent (adj)/ well-to-do/ well heeled/ wealthy 自己管理自己,名词initiative 主动性well-acquainted 对某事很熟悉,mitigate缓解,要说解决问题,雅思里面词汇也特多tackle/ address/ solve resolve grapple with /combat 再加题目里面的deal with,大家挑着用啦It is widely accepted that we have been living in a "the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer" age in terms of income gaps within a generation. However, to this day, there has been no consensus yet over the extent to which income inequality is intergenerational. Some contend that the offspring of low-income and middle-income parents can largely grow up manifest better problem-solving abilities during adulthood than their high-income family counterparts thereby turning the table socially and financially. Personally, I believe this is generally the case in any meritocratic society. (Thesis statement) First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint. These individuals learn from their infancy onward that not everything they crave will become theirs instantaneously. Every so often their wishes go beyond their parents' means and they have to come to terms with the resulting sense of frustration or rejection. Throughout the childhood and early adulthood years they are tempered by the repeated experiences of parents' denial of their requests and frugality is inculcated into their minds as a virtue. Consequently these children, for the most part, are apt to interpret scrimping and saving, emotional uneasiness, not infrequent financialstrains and menial first jobs as an integral part of life rather than a devastating ordeal. Hence they end up being better able to manage stress in their adult years and less likely to panic or get daunted when problems occur.11Further, children brought up by parents of low or middle economic status often grow up to be physically, mentally and professionally more independent than children brought up by affluent parents. It goes without saying that children whose parents are not particularly well-off are more likely than children of affluent households to know how to get the most out of a modest allowance, if they ever get such a thing at all. To the former group of children most desirable things in life have to be "earned"—that is, more often than not they must put forth great effort before their desire is fulfilled. On the other hand, busy, low or medium salaried parents translate into more autonomy and initiative on the children's part. This originally disadvantaged group becomes spontaneous and handy through crafting toy on their own, resourceful by cooking their own meals, tactful with coaxing their parents into buying them gifts, intelligent thanks to the absence of private tutors, savvy in doing summer jobs, and above all, unrelenting in pursuing their dreams. Lastly, non-wealthy parents typically have higher and more definite aspiration for their children than well-to-do parents. Well-acquainted with all thedisadvantages a meager or fair-to-middling bank account generates, many non-wealthy parents pin their hopes on their children to get their families upwardly mobile. These adults mostly have high behavioral, educational and (subsequently) occupational expectations for their children. As a result, they cannot afford to be permissive parents. Spoiling their offspring rotten is the last thing they care to do and they are always ready to discipline their children when they misbehave. They keep tabs on their children's grades at school and do not spare the rod when their offspring do not measure up academically. The odds of children raised in such rigorous environments having good problem-solving skills are apparently better than children raised otherwise. To conclude, the chief determinant of individuals' problem-solving skills is not the amount of money their parents can amass when they are little. Rather, hands-on experience in comprehending, analyzing, resolving, mitigating or circumventing problems is more essential to the cultivation of problem-solving abilities. Hence, I am convinced that families without great wealth are more advantageous to the development of individual capacity to tackle problems.Education 类词汇Education:1) 培养(某种素质)cultivate/ foster/ nurture(vts)促进学生身心发展promote the student's physical, mental (或者用intellectual) andemotional development 心理健康psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare(nouns) 学习能力(先天就有的)aptitude/ talent 学习能力(后天学习到的)ability/ skill 学生接受的学校教育(名词)schooling(noun) 儿童接受的家庭教育(名词)upbringing(noun) 给学生以动力give the students motivation to do something 或者motivate (vt) the student to do something 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths2) 传授知识impart(vt)/inculcate(vt) knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观念instill(vt) high moral values (注以values 复数比试价值观) 给学生以灵感stimulate the students; thought 或者give the students inspiration 家长教育子女的方式(名词)parenting/ upbringing 教学法teaching methodology/ pedagogical methodology 适应(动词)adapt to do something/adjust oneself to do something/ become accustomed to do something 适应能力adaptability 学生对老师所教授的知识的掌握students' grasp/ command(nouns) of what has been taught 就业技能employable/ marketable skill 3) 限制创造力的发展extinguish(vt)/ stifle(vt)/ constrain(vt) creativity(noun) 打击学生的积极性dampen/sap(vts) the students' enthusiasm 或者frustrate the students 产生不不要的压力beget/ create undue pressure 塑造某人的性格mould(BrE,vt) one's character 责任感a sense of obligation 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器student should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas. 死记硬背learn thing by rote.4) 记忆方程式,公式,定理,定律memorize equations, formulas,theorems and laws(nouns) 应用apply (vt) 盲从follow something blindly/ indiscriminately(adv) 用填鸭式教学教育学生force-feed(vt) the students 为了记忆而记忆memorize for memorization' s own sake 5) 把学生分开教育(比如根据智力或者课堂上的表现) segregate(vt) students 来自于其他同学的压力peer pressure 逆境adverse circumstances /adversity 团队精神team spirit(noun) 独立思考: think independently(adv) 6) 在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 鼓励学生用辨证的眼光看问题encourage students to think critically(adv) 学生的反馈students' feedback 或者students' input 学生评价老师的教学students appraise / evaluate their teachers' performance7) 学生学习的各门功课加在一起curriculum(noun) 具体的一门课的内容syllabus 课外活动extra-curricular activity 学校是社会的缩影A school is society in miniature 不遵守纪律(名词)indiscipline/ misbehavior/ mischief (nouns) 不遵守纪律的(形容词)学生disruptive/ unruly students 8) 理论只是theoretical knowledge 通才generalist 专才specialist 全面发展的well-rounded /versatile 为社会健康发展做贡献contribute to societal well-being/ welfare (注意这里welfare不是"福利"的意思)9) 大学学科的分类可以分为:人文学科(包括文学,历史,语言学等)humanities 社会科学(包括政治,经济,社会学等)social sciences 艺术(包括音乐,雕塑等)arts 文科的总称也可以称为liberal arts 或者liberal studies 理科(包括物理,化学,生物等)sciences 工科(包括工程,自动化等)engineering 大学里的任何一个学科都可以叫做一个discipline 基础科学basic sciences 应用科学applied sciences 小学教育primary-level education 中学教育secondary-level education 大学教育tertiary-level education 职业教育vocational education/ training 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youthsEducation 类模板1 In this day and age, it is universally acknowledged that education is one of the key determinant of individual success. 众所周知,在当代教育是一个人成功的决定因素之一.2In contemporary society, education plays a pivotal role in individual development. 在当代社会,教育在个人发展中扮演着至关重要的角色.Technology & media 类科技类2/26 people today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole开头段(不少于3+1句)The interactivity of the Internet and the mobile phone has enabled a multitude of people to purchase their desired items or pay their phone bills without stepping out of their offices or homes. And many others can even register for tests or sign contracts online. This。

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2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲:刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分:7分或7分以上第一节的内容:1.雅思写作的整体介绍2.高分写作的要求3.解决问题的方案4.课程的总览一.雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别:task 2 议论文task 1 A:图表作文 G:书信评分:以Task 2 为主二:高分写作的要求评分标准:Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken. They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day. The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching(深远的), profound(深刻的), adverse(不利的), catastrophic(灾难的), damaging(破坏性的), devastating(破坏性的), dire(可怕的), disastrous (灾难的), fatal(致命的), tragic(悲惨的), severe(严重的),2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do. Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句:China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句:Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语:It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句:Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为,为了提高教育质量,我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估;别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

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• 题目确定A不确定C: 拓展结果 • 阐述一个问题或者一个好处:特定化 • 题目出现两个不同的事物 或者凑字数的时 候:对比 • 名词复数:举例 • 任何时候,都可以多解释原因和背景
• 情况1:确定A • Do you think it is a positive or negative development? • Do advantages outweigh disadvantages? • What effects does it cause? • 和部分do you agree or disagree的题目, Discuss Both views的题目 • 结构:A+思前+B+想细节+C+想后
混合题
• 报告类和观点类混合一起考
• • • • • 譬如说 Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? NB 有时候,雅思会问 What problems does it cause? What are the solutions to this problem?
十大军规
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新东方雅思写作讲义

新东方雅思写作讲义新东方雅思写作讲义第一部分:写作基础知识介绍(500字)1. 什么是雅思写作?雅思写作是雅思考试的一项重要组成部分,涵盖了一系列的写作任务,包括图表描述、图表解释、观点阐述等。

写作考试的目的是测试考生的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力和写作组织能力。

2. 准备雅思写作需要注意的事项- 掌握基本写作技巧:如如何概括图表信息、如何展开论述、如何论证观点等。

- 增强写作词汇量:扩展词汇储备,提升表达准确性和多样性。

- 阅读大量范文:学习优秀范文的写作结构、句式使用和观点论证方式。

- 练习写作:进行频繁的写作练习,提高写作速度和思维流畅度。

3. 雅思写作评分标准雅思写作总分为9分,分为四个维度对写作进行评分:任务响应(Task Response)、语言表达(Coherence and Cohesion)、词汇使用(Lexical Resource)和语法准确性(Grammar Range and Accuracy)。

考生需在这四个方面都达到一定的水平才能取得高分。

第二部分:写作技巧及范文分析(1000字)1. 图表描述类写作图表描述类写作是雅思写作的常见形式,考察考生对图表信息的表达能力。

常见的图表形式有柱状图、饼状图、折线图和表格等。

在写作时,考生需要概括图表信息并进行详细描述,同时还要注意使用适当的语言连接词来连接句子和段落。

范文分析:柱状图描述了1990年至2000年间英国人口变化趋势。

从图中可以看出,英国人口总数在这十年间一直在增加,但增长速度有所波动。

具体来说,1990年英国人口为52.4百万,而2000年则达到了58.6百万,增长了大约11.8%。

在这十年间最大的增长出现在1997年,而最小的增长出现在1991年。

因此,可以看出英国人口的变化是不稳定的。

2. 图表解释类写作图表解释类写作是考察考生对图表信息的解读能力。

此类题型通常以饼状图、表格或流程图为主要形式,考生需要从中找出关键信息,并进行准确解释。

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Topics of Task 2 (2008~2009.11.21)一、教育(共25题,占%)1.In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.01.26)不同意:中学教育是一个重要的德育阶段,如果在这个时候中断,带来的不仅仅是失业这样的问题,还有青少年犯罪等社会问题vital stage for moral education. If it was interrupted, numerous of social problem/headaches may create as juvenile delinquency. (正如马克吐温说:你每关闭一所学校,你就必须开设一座监狱。

Every time you stop a school, you will have to build a jail )教育能够帮助培养个人素质;提高劳动力的素质,从而提高生产效率,推动社会发展,从根本上解决失业的问题。

do a favor to/be beneficial(advantageous, preferable) to personal quality, enhance/boost/promote the quality of the labor force, thereby increase production efficiency, social development, solve the problem of unemployment从长远来看,如果受过更高的教育,则有更多的机会找到好的工作。

In a long run/term, if pupils could receive better education, they may have far more opportunities to find better jobs.教育的作用不仅仅应当局限在找工作,而是为了将来更好的发展。

The function of education should be not only focused on \limited in job hunting, but also for a better development.**失业的原因是综合的comprehensive/complicated,例如经济原因:经济衰退或者不景气economy recession/depression,就业岗位剧减,导致市场对于劳动力的需求整体下降 a fall in the overall demand for labor;社会原因,个人原因等2.Most countries spend much money on education, as they start to realize the importance of education. In your opinion which subject is the most important for young people and which one is the least important?Subjects: Literature Sports Mathematics Economy Physics History Music Geography (08.03.01)整个题目可以分为理论科目和实践科目两种:理论科目的好处:智的角度实践科目(音乐、体育)的好处:美、体、劳的角度E.g.: What does sports benefits your academic? Any sport will have a positive effect on academic performance simply because exercise is good for the brain, and teamwork and strategy that are focal to most sports are applicable as well to many academic areas.理论科目的坏处:枯燥、单调、需要长时间的学习、结合实践时较为困难体育、音乐的坏处:需要天赋;需要大量时间和金钱的投入;就业范围小,职业生涯短3.Schoolteachers used to be the source of information, however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before as the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion? (08.04.24)和以前一样重要:(也就是说老师的重要性)学校教育更加有利于学生的道德培养,尤其对于年龄较小的学生。

老师可以帮助学生建立自信心,培养能力,塑造良好的性格最终成为一个有利于社会的人。

Teachers could help the students to build up confidence, shape upright character and ultimately grow a full man beneficial to the society.通过老师的讲解,能够更加容易接受知识。

By lectures, students are more easily to receive knowledge.可以根据学生的需要而改变teach students in accordance with their own characteristics and differences学生在学校里能够参加体育锻炼,有利于身体的健康和成长学校教育给了学生一个交流、沟通、合作的机会,有利于团队精神team spirit、合作精神cooperation、创新能力innovation的培养foster/cultivation。

其他信息途径的好处(远程教育的好处)提供了一种更为新颖有效的教育形式an original and effective educational model;增加人们接受教育的机会increase the opportunities of being educated;提高参与者的科技能力develop technology competencies、拓展技术面broaden skill set,从而提高就业机会job opportunity。

为地处偏远和行动不便的人、工作时间不稳定的人提供了受教育的机会those with restricted mobility, such as elderly, disabled, injured, irregular work schedule.可以同时和全国各地甚至全世界各地的人进行交流和学communicate and interact with students all over the country or even the world文档和资料容易储存、易提取、打印和阅读documents and materials are easily recorded, retrieved, printed and read远程教育的缺点:缺乏和老师面对面的交流lack of in-person contact with faculty members很难及时接受到老师的反馈wait for a long time before receiving feedback about assignments不能像传统教育那样和同学之间更多地接触,没有机会提高口头交流能力和合作能力等have no chance to enhance oral communication skills and cooperation skills精力和注意力会被很多东西分散many distractions at home并不是所有的行业都承认网络教育的学历,缺乏就业认可。

not all work industries acknowledge online degrees4.Schools should teach children some academic subjects, which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (08.05.22)同第2题5.University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To whatextent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.06.05)学习多个科目的好处:目前很多大学都倾向于专业学习(specialized or vocational education),很多专业都是以就业为本(career-oriented or vocation-oriented)而最近的潮流是重新注重全面教育(general education),注重学生的技能,在不同学科上的应用。

很多学科是交叉的interrelated,学习多种科目有利于了解更多的知识widen scope of knowledge,加深对于专业科目的理解be beneficial/advantageous/preferable to the understanding/comprehension of specialist subjects毕业之后有更多的工作选择increase employment opportunity,增加竞争力competiveness当求职市场竞争日趋激烈的时候,在不同专业领域涉猎、对于跨学科学习具备经验的学生有望占据一个主导地位。

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