13 社会正能量与志愿者招募 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析

13 社会正能量与志愿者招募

NO.1

（2022·重庆·中考真题）

科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。

要求：

1. 80-120词；

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息：

1. 起因，经过；

2. 结果，感悟；

3. ……

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【满分作文赏析】

A study shows that happiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood has an influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.

I have a good friend and her name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheer her up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy diet and do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident.

From this experience, I learn that happiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset.【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.2

（2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。

（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。

（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。

（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。

（4）人们过来帮忙。

（5）你认为……

参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down挡住block树枝branch树干trunk

要求：

（1）词数：80~100个。

（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear David,

How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.

Last Friday,

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Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua 【满分作文赏析】

Dear David,

How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.

Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.

I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.

Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.3