BEC中级十二套作文

WRITINGAll content points are covered, using natural sounding language and a consistently appropriate tone.All the content points are covered, though at times the register is not always entirely successful. There is evidence of an adequate range of structures and vocabulary for this level, but with some non-impeding errors.Band 4There is a satisfactory range of structures, with some errors, but these do not impede understanding. The content points are adequately covered, and the register is appropriate. The information is generally well organized, using headings and other discourse markers.Band 2The organization of the report is reasonable, as is the register and format. However, not all content points are adequately addressed, a limited range of language is used, and there are some distracting error.WRITINGAll points are adequately covered and developed. There is an adequate range of language, though with some repetition.Band 2All the content points are addressed, although poor control of basic structures, e.g. ‘was make’, ‘opportunity to add the salary’, obscure the message at times.Band 4All the content points are covered and are well organized. The range of language is good, and though some errors occur, these do not obscure the message. The register is appropriate.Band 2An attempt is made to address all the language points, but this is not always successful. Generally the range of language is fairly limited and basic error occur.WRITINGBand 5All the content points are successfully addressed, with a controlled, natural use of language, and evidence of a wide range of vocabulary and structure.Band 3The email is reasonably organized and the range of vocabulary and structure is adequate. However, the third content point is not clearly addressed.All the content points are adequately covered and satisfactorily organized. As well as achieving an appropriate register, the candidate demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, e.g. ‘key findings’. There are, however, a number of spelling error.The content points are addressed, using a satisfactory range of language. However, the message is obscured by poor organization and coherence.WRITINGBand 5All the content points are covered, with controlled, natural use of language.Band 3All content points are addressed. The range of language is adequate and errors are non-impeding.Band 4The content points are more than adequately addressed. A range of discourse markers and linking devices is used. Both the register and format are appropriate to the task, and the language is generally accurate.Band 3The content points are covered adequately, and the format and register are satisfactory. While the organization and cohesion are generally satisfactory, there are instances where the reader is not clearly informed.WRITINGDue to omission of a content point and poor language control, the target reader would not be clearly informed. Otherwise, the format and register of the email is appropriate.Band 5All the content points are clearly addressed, and the language is well controlled and concise,making use of a range of suitable expressions.All the content points have been covered and the report is appropriate in terms of register and format. There is clear evidence of organisation and good use is made of discourse markers. There are a number of language errors, but these are relatively minor and do not impede communication of the message.Band 4All the content points have been addressed with reasonable attempts at development. The report is generally well organised and it is cohesive and concise. Overall, the language used is accurate and includes a good range of grammar and vocabulary.WRITINGPART ONE Sample ABand 2All the content points are addressed, and the format of the memo is appropriate. However, there are several language errors which are distracting and these would tend to have a negative effect on the target reader.All the content points have been addressed relatively clearly, and an attempt has been made to expand upon the prompts and avoid lifting language from the question paper. Some language errors occur, but these are relatively minor and do not obscure the message.All the content points are addressed, the organisation of the report is generally satisfactory, and the writer uses a range of cohesive devices. However, there is repetition at times and the register is not always consistent. Frequent errors are likely to have a negative effect upon the reader.All the content points are clearly covered and the report is easy to read, making use of a good range of expression, including linking devices and phrases. The use of language is ambitious for the level, and although there are some errors, these tend to be relatively minor and do not detract from the clear communication of the message.WRITINGAll the content points are addressed and the information is reasonably well organised. Due to the inclusion of irrelevant information, the answer exceeds the target length and there is some repetition. The presence of several errors tends to distract the reader and create a negative effect.Band 4All the content points are clearly addressed, and the email is concise and clear, showing evidenceof a good range of vocabulary. There are some errors, but these do not impede communication or detract from the overall positive effect on the reader.Band 5All the content points have been addressed and the target reader would be fully informed. The report is effectively organised, making use of headings and discourse markers. The range of vocabulary and grammar is good, and where errors occur they are minor. The register and format are consistently appropriate.All the content points are covered and despite a number or language errors, the message is clearly conveyed. The report has been organised into sections, although at times paragraphing is in need of attention.WRITINGBand 5All the content points are covered and there is evidence of a wide range of vocabulary and good language control. The email is clear and concise and the register is appropriate.Band 2Whilst all the content points have been addressed, the message is not clearly conveyed due to the frequent errors which distract the reader. At times, the register of the email is not entirely appropriate.Band 4The letter addresses all the content points and these are expanded upon appropriately. The register and format are consistently appropriate and the content is well organised. Good language control is demonstrated, and a wide range of vocabulary and grammar structures is used.All the content points are covered and the organisation of the information is satisfactory. A reasonable attempt has been made at a letter format, although the opening and closing formulae are missing and at times the register is not wholly appropriate.WRITINGApart from the fact that one of the content points has not been addressed, the answer contains frequent errors which are distracting, and which have a negative impact on the reader.The answer contains all the necessary information, yet is concise, and the language used is generally accurate. Overall, the impression on the reader is positive.Due to misinterpretation of the task, the answer contains irrelevant information and the reader is not adequately informed. Whilst generally being organised satisfactorily, with an adequate range of grammar and vocabulary, there are several errors.Band 5The candidate’s answer is effectively org anised, covers all the important information clearly and contains a wide range of vocabulary and structures. There are few errors, and language is well controlled and natural sounding. The overall effect on the reader is very positive.WRITINGBand 3All content points have been addressed, and the organisation and register of the email are on the whole satisfactory. The range of vocabulary and grammar is adequate, and although there are a number of errors, these are minor and do not prevent the message being clearly conveyed.Band 4All points are addressed, and the register and format are on the whole appropriate. The range and accuracy of language are generally good, and the reader would be clearly and fully informed.Band 2The report is considerably longer than the recommended word length and does not cover all the content points. Although the report is adequately paragraphed, cohesion is weak. The register and format of the report are not always appropriate; errors are numerous and impede clear communication of the message.All content points are clearly covered, and the report is well organised with good cohesion. Both the register and format are consistently appropriate. Generally, the language used is accurate, and a good range of structures and vocabulary is demonstrated.WRITINGBand 3The candidate has addressed all the content points. The answer is concise, and although it contains a number of errors, these do not impede communication. The overall effect on the reader is satisfactory.The candidate has fully addressed all the content points. The language is natural and well controlled in its usage. The overall effect on the reader is very positive.Band 2The candidate has attempted to address all the content points using an appropriate register andformat. However, due to poor language control and numerous errors, the message is not clearly conveyed. The overall effect on the reader is negative.Band 4The candidate has addressed all the content points, using a good range of appropriate vocabulary and structures. The report is well organised and generally accurate. The overall effect on the reader is positive.WRITINGBand 3All content points are covered, and the range of language is satisfactory. Both the format and register are appropriate, and although there are some errors, these do not obscure communication of the message.All points are covered, and language is controlled and concise, and demonstrates a wide lexical range. The register is consistently appropriate, as is the format.Band 2The point concerning relative costs has not been covered, and therefore the target reader would not be fully informed. Otherwise, the language range and cohesion are satisfactory, as are the format and register. Although errors do occur, these do not prevent the message being conveyed.Band 4All content points are covered, and the report is well within the recommended word limit. Language is generally accurate, and good range is demonstrated. Both register and format are appropriate and the report is well organised.。