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九年级英语unit6作文指导及范文

九年级英语unit6作文指导及范文

Unit 6 I like music that I can dance to【单元话题分析】生活中,每个人都有自己的爱好。

中学生关于爱好的交流非常常见,是一个十分重要的内容。

即使同样喜欢听音乐的人,也会有不同的偏爱,有的喜欢古典音乐,而有点喜欢流行音乐。

本单元谈论的话题就是谈论个人偏爱(preferences)。

兴趣与爱好(Interests and Hobbies)这一话题是《英语课程标准》要求初中学生掌握的重点话题之一,也是这些年来各省、市地区中考命题的热点话题。

它涉及到的内容广泛,如体育运动、美术、音乐、旅游、集邮、绘画、收藏、爬山、垂钓、看书等。

本单元话题是在初二年级谈论兴趣爱好的基础进一步深入,帮助同学们更加精准、深刻的谈论自己的兴趣爱好,说出自己的兴趣爱好和它给你带来的无穷乐趣,感悟生活的愉悦与精彩。

该话题的命题形式通常采用“Guided writing”形式,有中、英文提示的形式,有图画、图表形式等。

通常采用记叙或描述性话题作文形式,写该话题时要注意文体,通过联想将这些画面的直观内容转换成传神达意的文字形式,用于反映图中所表现的思想内容。

写作时要重点突出,确定好人称和时态,记住一些固定的习语和句式的使用,培养遣词找句的能力并背诵大量范文,达到熟悉这些地道的句子结构。

【写作指导】1. 写作本话题常用的句型有:I like music that I can dance to.My favorite music is…I prefer … music.I like singers who write their own songs.I like groups that play quite and gentle songs.It makes me…It helps me to…It is good for…2. 开篇展示文章的主题,说清自己的爱好或偏爱是什么,下面的叙述内容就要围绕这个中心话题展开。

初三英语第6单元作文范文

初三英语第6单元作文范文

初三英语第6单元作文范文I woke up this morning feeling super tired. I really didn't want to get out of bed, but I knew I had to. I dragged myself to the bathroom and splashed some cold water on my face to wake myself up. 。

After getting dressed, I headed downstairs for breakfast. My mom had made pancakes, my favorite! I quickly devoured them and grabbed my backpack before heading out the door. 。

The bus ride to school was uneventful, as usual. I listened to some music and tried to wake myself up for the day ahead. 。

First period was math, my least favorite subject. I struggled to stay awake as the teacher droned on about equations and formulas. 。

At lunch, I met up with my friends and we chatted aboutour plans for the weekend. It was nice to take a break from the monotony of the school day. 。

After school, I had soccer practice. Running around the field helped wake me up and get some energy back. 。

RJ人教版九年级英语上册教学课件Unit 6 话题作文指导

RJ人教版九年级英语上册教学课件Unit 6 话题作文指导
九年级英语RJ版·上册
Unit 6
话题作文指导
授课人:XXXX
一、例文要求
假如你是一个商人,你有一项新发明。请以 A special…为题介绍一 下你的新发明,并将它推销给你的同学们。词数80-100。开头已给 出,不计入总词数。
This special pen was invented by Liu Jie. It has three colors and is used for ...
Hope you will have a good time.
五、参考答案
Hello, friends. I’ve got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I’d like to introduce tea. It has a long history. It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.
四、作业布置
要求:1. 从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动; 2. 短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥; 3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名; 4. 词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello,friends. I’ve got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I’d like to introduce_________________________________________________

人教版九年级英语全册Unit6写作课优秀教学案例

人教版九年级英语全册Unit6写作课优秀教学案例
(四)反思与评价
1.教师引导学生对自己的写作过程进行反思,思考自己的优点和不足。
2.学生通过自我评价,认识自己的写作进步和需要改进的地方。
3.教师对学生的写作进行评价,关注学生的努力和进步。
4.采用多元化的评价方式,如同伴评价、小组评价等,全面评价学生的写作能力和思维能力。
作为一名特级教师,我深知教学策略的重要性。在教学过程中,我将灵活运用情景创设、问题导向、小组合作和反思与评价等教学策略,以提高学生的学习兴趣和能力,培养他们的思维能力和团队合作精神。同时,我将根据学生的实际情况和需求,不断调整教学策略,确保教学效果的最大化。
4.反思与评价:教师引导学生对自己的写作过程进行反思,认识自己的优点和不足,并通过多元化的评价方式,如同伴评价、小组评价等,全面评价学生的写作能力和思维能力。这种教学策略有助于培养学生的自我评价和反思能力,提高他们的自信心和自主学习能力。
5.个性化的写作任务:学生根据自己的喜好选择自己最喜欢的节日进行写作,这种个性化的写作任务能够激发学生的创造力和写作兴趣,提高他们的写作动机和成就感。
(四)总结归纳
1.教师引导学生回顾本节课所学的词汇、短语和语法知识,并强调其在写作中的重要性。
2.教师总结本节课的学习内容,强调描述节日和阐述理由的方法和技巧。
3.学生进行写作练习,运用所学的知识和技巧,描述自己最喜欢的节日并阐述理由。
(五)作业小结
1.教师布置作业,要求学生根据自己的写作练习,修改和完善作文。
3.通过提问,引导学生关注节日与环境、社会的关系,思考节日意义。
4.鼓励学生提出自己的问题,培养他们主动思考和探究的能力。
(三)小组合作
1.学生在小组内分享自己的节日经历和喜好,进行互动交流。

人教版九年级英语U6-U10作文范文(含详细解说)

人教版九年级英语U6-U10作文范文(含详细解说)

九年级U6 When was it invented?典例1:话题:产品设计时态:一般现在时人称:第一人称体裁:说明文Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English video games and so on. It can make it easier for students to learn together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English learning. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills will greatly improve. Besides, they can also practice their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English by using this app.I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.【写作逻辑】(结构仅供参考,也可三段式)P1:首段具体介绍自己所设计app的理念及功能等。

(1) 名字是“快乐学英语”。

(2) 内容包括:英语新闻,英语电影,英语歌曲,英语游戏等。

(3) 功能:使学生一起学英语更容易;扩大词汇量;提高听力技能;通过唱英语歌和看电影来练习口语。

【人教九上英语写作专题讲解】unit6

【人教九上英语写作专题讲解】unit6

What does the passage talk about?
Basketball was invented by a Canadian doctor in the19th
what invention
who and where when
c could be played in the
what winter on a hard floor. The men was divided into two teams to
play. They work together to get the ball in the other team’s
basket. At the same time, they need to stop the competing team
invention
How is it played? What about the influences
Why was it invented?
and its development
What is it used for?
本单元的话题是“Invention (发明)”。“发明”包括发明家、 发明物、发明的历史、科技创新等几个方面。 写作内容通常要求根据图表或文字提示介绍发明物的相关 情况,或者针对生活中的实际情况,提出自己的建议。
the influences and development
Presentation
How do we introduce an invention?
Who was it invented by?
What invention is it?
When and where
was it invented?

九年级英语全册Unit6Whenwasitinvented第六课时同步作文指导

九年级英语全册Unit6Whenwasitinvented第六课时同步作文指导
Having a child fall asleep in your arms is one of the most peaceful feeling in the world. 让一个孩子在你的臂弯入睡,你会体会到世间最安宁的感觉.
Being kind is more important than being right. 善良比真理更重要.
1. 有感情地朗读课文,注意声调,争取背过。 2. 正确书写本课Words,并做好对应的练习。 3.读一些课外书。
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美好春天
The best classroom in the world is at the feet of an elderly person. 世界上最好的课堂在老人的脚下.
思路点拨: 开篇点题 ―→Here/This is my new invention.../My invention is a...
具体介绍 ―→·It looks like a normal one.../It has a special handle. ·The handle can be adjusted. 表达愿望 ―→...a large number of... It will be produced...
教材素材积累 ①…was invented… ②It is used for… ③It is very convenient/comfortable/important/useful. ④It's hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life. ⑤It's said that a Chinese ruler called Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink. ⑥Basketball has not only become a popular sport to play, but it has also become a popular sport to watch.

人教版九年级-unit6作文范文

人教版九年级-unit6作文范文

Unit6. When was it invented?课文范文This special pen was invented by Liu Jie. It has three colors and is used for taking notes quickly. It is very useful if you have a lot to write down. The pen comes with a microchip that can store a list of common words that you will use. You can program the words you will use often into the microchip’s memory, then assign a short from to each word. When you are writing, you just need to write the short forms with the pen, press a button, on the pen and all the short forms will change into the actual words. The microchip can contain up to 50 words and you can make changes to the list of words whenever you need to.介绍一种新发明I want to invent a special chairHello, everyone! As we all know, many great inventions have brought great convenience to our life. I think we students can also invent something.Today I’m glad to be here to talk about what I’d like to invent----a special chair that is good for students’ health. It will be made of wood. There will be two sensors in it—one on the seat, and the other straight, the chair will remind him. If he sits on the hair for over one hour, it will make a noise. It won’t be extremely helpful and useful for our health.That’s all. Thank you!电话的发明There are many inventions that have caused great changes in the world. Here’s a short introduction. For example, the digital camera was invented by Steven J. Sasson. It was invented in 1975 and it is used for taking photos. The telephone was invented by Alexander Bell in 1876. It’s used for communicating with others. The radio was invented b Gugliemo Marconi in 1895. It’s used for listening to news and music.电视的发明Good morning, everyone! Today I’m going to talk about inventions.Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.There are famous inventions like TV and the bicycle. TV provides with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world. We watch entertainment programs to relax ourselves. Besides, some learning programs help us with our study.The bicycle is very useful, too. We go to school or work by bike. It’s not so expensive that most of us can afford it. It makes no pollution, which is good for our environment. What’s more, bicycle riding is a kind of exciting sports which is quite good for our health.Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly. When we eat problems in doing our homework or taking exams, it will tell us how to solve them.That’s all. Thank you very much.假如你是茶文化博物馆的讲解员,明天你要向一批外国游客用英语介绍有关茶的发明历史。

人教版九年级上册)英语作业课件:Unit6 第六课Section B 单元同步作文指导

人教版九年级上册)英语作业课件:Unit6 第六课Section B 单元同步作文指导

经典范文展示
在第45届国际发明展上,太原市外国语学校高二学生王文鹤凭借作品 “外骨骼”获得金奖。这一耗时5个多月的发明是一种可穿戴的机器人,可 以应用到很多领域。请你根据以下表格中的相关信息,写一篇 90词左右的 短文,向人们介绍这一发明。
• 1、teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops.教师的影响是永恒的;无法估计他的影响会有 多深远。
人教版
Unit 6 When was it invented?
第六课时 Section B (3a3b)——单元同步作文指导

随着科技的进步,许多新的发明不断涌现,它们给我们的生活带来了方便。 本单元以“谈论重要发明”为话题,要求同学们学会介绍某项发明的用途、 特点等。近年来,介绍某项发明的用途或特点的写作题材在全国各地中考试 题中常有出现。此类文体属于说明文,最常用的时态是一般现在时。
• 7、is a progressive discovery of our ignorance.教育是一个逐步发现自己无知的过程。2021年11月24日星期三2时49分38秒0 2:49:3824 November 2021
• 8、is a admirable thing, but it is well to remember from time to time that nothing worth knowing can be taught.教 育是令人羡慕的东西,但是要不时地记住:凡是值得知道的,没有一个是能够教会的。上午2时49分38秒上午2时49分02:49:3821. 11.24
This important invention has changed the way people travel.It's the airplane.The first airplane was invented by the Wright Brothers from America. It was invented on December 17,1903.The invention makes the world into a small village and it allows people and goods to travel long distances in a short time.Modern airplanes have been improved a lot.They fly much faster and become much larger.What's more,seats in some airplanes can be changed into beds and passengers can even use the Internet in some situations!

2020九年级英语书面表达 Unit 6 如何写以“介绍发明”为话题的文章

2020九年级英语书面表达 Unit 6 如何写以“介绍发明”为话题的文章

如何写以“介绍发明”为话题的文章【例文1】假设你是李华,一直以来你都认为上课记笔记是非常困难的事情,你的亲戚上个月送给了你一只神奇的笔,请你根据下面的提示写一篇关于介绍这个新发明的英语短文。

1.你的新发明是一只特殊的钢笔,由Mr. Smith 在今年十月份发明的。

2.这是一只神奇的笔能够自动地(automatically)帮学生摘抄笔记,还能录下整堂课的内容3.它让你更加关注老师的讲解,并且课后复习正确的笔记对学习有益。

一.审题开头:由问题引出发明 I have problems in ...., because...,so I expected to...正文:发明的时间、人物、用途 It was invented by...It was invented in/on...It can be used for...结尾:总结评价 I think it is....I really enjoy_________三.遣词造句①词汇库神奇的magic ;特殊的special ;发明invent ;发明家inventor ;发明物invention ;发展develop ;改善improve ;期待expect ;喜欢enjoy ;复习review ;记录record②短语箱做...有困难have difficulties in doing;记笔记take notes;关注pay attention to;对...有益be helpful to;解决deal with;和...一样the same as;如此...以至于so...that;因此as a result;不仅,而且not only,but also③链接句型1.When was it invented?2.I think it was invented in/on...3.What was it invented by? It was invented by....4.What is it used for...? It is used for...5.It is really such a great invention because it can not only...but also it can...6.It is said that a Chinese ruler called Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink.7.I have a problem in doing...,so I expected to have a special invention...8.I think many students have the same problem as me.四.作文模板I have some difficulties in ________________during class, because____________. Therefore, I really want to have a special invention to help me. Luckily, I got an invention___________.It was invented by ________________ in _______________. It is such a special invention because it can not only __________ but also _____________________.In this way, I can_____________.I think many students have the same problem as me. Such a special ______________ can deal with it.五.参考范文I have some difficulties in taking notes during class, because our teachers often speak so quickly that I can’t follow them.Therefore, I really expect to have a special invention to help me to take notes. Last month, I got an invention-a special pen.It was invented by Mr.Smith in October. It is such a special invention because it can not only help me take notes in classes automatically but also it can record what teachers said during classes. When it takes notes on its own, I can get the chance to pay more attention to what teachers said.After class, reviewing correct notes can help me understand more about difficult points and important points. In this way, I can improve my grades.I think many students have the same problem as me. Such a special pen can deal with it.【例文2】请根据下面信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下计算机的发展历程及带给我们的变化。

九年级英语全册Unit6单元同步作文指导SectionB3a_3b人教版

九年级英语全册Unit6单元同步作文指导SectionB3a_3b人教版

②描述外
speak to it,it can provide different kinds of services. For example,形。
you can just say “Ding Dong,I want to listen to Cai Yilin's songs”,and it will play her songs at once. You can also ask it
It is said that tea was invented by Shen Nong. One day,Shen Nong was boiling water over an open fire. Some leaves from a tea plant fell into the water and remained there for some time. Shen Nong noticed that the water gave out a pleasant smell. He decided to taste the water and he found it delicious.
Unit 6 When was it invented?
单元同步作文指导 & Section B(3a~3b)
【单元写作目标】
本单元的话题主要是谈论重要的发明,要求学生能正确使用被动语态(如: be invented by/in…,be used for…)等表达来描述发明物的历史。常见话题: My favorite invention;How to become an inventor;I want to invent…;An inventor等。
③举例说明功能。
about weather or even your problems in study. Besides,it can

英语九上-Unit6教案(写作)

英语九上-Unit6教案(写作)

二、书面表达 某英语杂志社正在举办以“科学饮食,健康生
活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你以“The healthier, the happier” 为题写一篇短文,介绍自己的饮食习惯, 参加此次征文比赛。要点: 1. 以前的饮食习惯:很少吃早餐,经常吃快餐和垃 圾食品; 2. 现在的饮食习惯:按时吃饭,多吃蔬菜和水果; 3. 你的变化和感受。
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人教九年级英语上课件:Unit 6第六课Section B (3a3b)—单元作文指导

人教九年级英语上课件:Unit 6第六课Section B (3a3b)—单元作文指导
021 • 7、能培养独创性和唤起对知识愉悦的,是教师的最高本领2021年10月13日星期三3时3分2秒03:03:0213 October 2021 • 8、先生不应该专教书,他的责任是教人做人;学生不应该专读书,他的责任是学习人生之道。上午3时3分2秒上午3时3分03:03:0221.10.13
人教版
Unit 6 When was it invented?
第六课时 Section B (3a3b)—单元同步作文指导
随着科技的进步,许多新的发明不断涌现,它们给我们的生活带来了方 便。本单元以“谈论重要发明”为话题,要求同学们学会介绍某项发明的用 途、特点等。近年来,介绍某项发明的用途或特点的写作题材在全国各地中 考试题中常有出现。此类文体属于说明文,最常用的时态是一般现在时。
热点作文练习
(广州中考)假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖,被推荐参加 一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明,内容包括下图中 1~4 项。
注意: 1.参考词汇:轮子wheel;太阳能solar power; 2.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
写此类说明性文章应注意的事项:①写作时应采用一定的顺序;②具体、 清晰地说明该发明的用途、特点;③充分发挥想象力,谈谈自己使用的感受。
教材中出现的相关句型: ①…was invented… ②It is used for… 拓展常用句型: ①It is very convenient/comfortable/important/useful.它非常方便/舒适/重要/ 实用。 ②It's hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life.很难想象在我们的日常生活中,如果没有电脑会是什么样。 ③When was the telephone invented?电话是什么时候被发明的? ④Who was it invented by?它是被谁发明的?

人教版九年级Unit6-9作文(带范文)

人教版九年级Unit6-9作文(带范文)

U6作文(一)随着网络技术的不断发展,人们传递情感的方式也在不断变化,假如你叫王强,上周你就“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡片?”在班级展开了一项调查。

请你给China Daily报社写一封信,介绍此次调查的结果并发表你的观点。

Dear Editor,I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on “Using paper cards or e­cards?” in our class.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Wang Qiang参考范文:Dear_Editor,I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on “Using paper cards or e­cards?” in our class.About 30% of the students want to use paper cards.First of all, they are made by hand and they can express/show people's real feelings.Second, they are easy to take and can be kept for long.Third, people can read them without computers.However, around 70% of the students prefer to use e­cards.For one thing, e­cards can carry lots of information and people can send them quickly.For another thing, using e­cards can save paper so that our environment can be protected well.What's more, people can make various designs they like.In my opinion, we should try our best to use e­cards.They can not only pass our love quickly and conveniently but also protect our earth.Yours_sincerely,Wang_Qiang(二)发明创造改变了世界。

九年级Unit6Problems作文范文

九年级Unit6Problems作文范文

Unit6Problems【典型例题】在我们青少年的成长过程中,既有快乐,也有烦恼。

请用英文写一篇短文,内容包括:1.你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大的问题或烦恼;2.你解决问题或烦恼的过程;3.你的感想。

要求:1.词数:100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。

【优秀范文】My teenage life is colorful. During the school year, not only do I have happy times, but I have many kinds of problems. My biggest problem is that I have too much homework. Homework seems endless. It always makes me stay up late and I feel very tired every day, but I know the teachers are expecting us to be better.How can I deal with the problem? On the one hand, I should concentrate more on my study in class. On the other hand,I should do the homework as quickly as possible. Now, I spend less time on my homework, and I am not frustrated any more.As we all know, practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can’t help. Instead, we should be active to face our problems.。

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Unit 6 I like music that I can dance to【单元话题分析】生活中,每个人都有自己的爱好。

中学生关于爱好的交流非常常见,是一个十分重要的内容。

即使同样喜欢听音乐的人,也会有不同的偏爱,有的喜欢古典音乐,而有点喜欢流行音乐。

本单元谈论的话题就是谈论个人偏爱(preferences)。

兴趣与爱好(Interests and Hobbies)这一话题是《英语课程标准》要求初中学生掌握的重点话题之一,也是这些年来各省、市地区中考命题的热点话题。

它涉及到的内容广泛,如体育运动、美术、音乐、旅游、集邮、绘画、收藏、爬山、垂钓、看书等。

本单元话题是在初二年级谈论兴趣爱好的基础进一步深入,帮助同学们更加精准、深刻的谈论自己的兴趣爱好,说出自己的兴趣爱好和它给你带来的无穷乐趣,感悟生活的愉悦与精彩。

该话题的命题形式通常采用“Guided writing”形式,有中、英文提示的形式,有图画、图表形式等。

通常采用记叙或描述性话题作文形式,写该话题时要注意文体,通过联想将这些画面的直观内容转换成传神达意的文字形式,用于反映图中所表现的思想内容。

写作时要重点突出,确定好人称和时态,记住一些固定的习语和句式的使用,培养遣词找句的能力并背诵大量范文,达到熟悉这些地道的句子结构。

【写作指导】1. 写作本话题常用的句型有:I like music that I can dance to.My favorite music is…I prefer … music.I like singers who write their own songs.I like groups that play quite and gentle songs.It makes me…It helps me to…It is good for…2. 开篇展示文章的主题,说清自己的爱好或偏爱是什么,下面的叙述内容就要围绕这个中心话题展开。

3. 本单元话题谈论的是兴趣与爱好的日常话题,因此一般选用一般现在时。

表示兴趣爱好的持续,则用现在完成进行时,它通常和“for+段时间”或“since+点时间(也可以是从句)”的时间状语连用。

4. 提示性作文一定要按照题目要求去写,要做到内容完整,层次清晰,段落清楚。

5. 注意连词、代词的使用,行文连贯流畅,表意清楚。

【佳篇欣赏】AI like music that is quiet and gentle. When I am stressed out, I always listen to music to relax myself. My favorite music is country. This music is great,b ecause it has great lyrics. I don’t like music that is too loud. I can’t stand rock music. As for musicians, I prefer musicians who can write their original lyrics and I like singers who can sing the words clearly. So Jay Chou isn’t my favorite though he is great. My favorite singer is John Denver. You can listen to his songs at night with your bedroom light on. He is really wonderful, I think.BDifferent preferences bring about problemsMy brother and I like music very much. It seems that we have the same hobby. Actually, we also have a problem. I like music that is gentle and quite. My brother likes music that is loud and energetic.I always feel a bit tired after school, so I usually play Bandari’s CD to get relaxed. While my brother doesn’t like it, he says the music that I like makes him feel like sleeping. Whenever I play the CD,he would ask me to turn off the recorder. If I don’t agree, he will be angry with me. When I take out My CD, he will play his Rock-and-roll music very loud. Then he won’t listen to anybody speaking. I just can’t stand noisy music. But I don’t want to argue with him.I came up with an idea to solve the problem. I will buy a pair of headphones for my brother as a birthday gift.CMy Favorite BooksI like reading very much.,and I enjoy reading books that tell magic stories. Of course, Harry Potter series are my favorite books.In books, there are many unbelievable things. The imagination is really great. In the books, there are many strange animals, the brooms that can fly,magic hats and magic wands. When I was a child, I really wanted to have a kind of magic power, then I can do every thing. Harry’s magic world is every child’s dream. That is why teenagers are crazy about the books and it’s movies.In the books, Harry Potter is a courageous, honest and confident boy,and he is handsome. I like him very much, and I can learn something from him. Every teenager wants to be friends with him Now the new book is going to come out. I can’t wait to read it.【重点结构和句型展示】A.原汁原味(课本重点结构和句型)1. I like music that I can dance to. 我喜欢能跟着跳舞的音乐。

2. I prefer music that has great lyrics. 我更喜欢歌词很棒的歌曲。

3. I like musicians who write their own songs. 我喜欢能自己写歌的音乐家。

4. The music reminds me of Brazilian dance music. 这音乐让我想起了巴西舞曲。

5. What do you think of it? 你认为它怎么样?6. I can’t stand music that is too loud. 我不能忍受太喧闹的音乐。

7. ...they don’t interest me as much. ……它们同样唤不起我的兴趣。

8. I prefer quiet, traditional music so the concert suited me just fine.我更愿意听安静的传统的音乐,因此音乐会更适合我的胃口。

B.精彩例句拓展1. My father prefers swimming to playing basketball. 我爸爸喜欢游泳,而不喜欢打篮球。

We prefer living in the suburbs. 我们宁愿住在郊区。

I prefer to stay at home rather than go to the noisy party. 我宁愿呆在家里,也不愿去参加那嘈杂的聚会。

2. I like singers who sing clearly. 我喜欢吐字清楚的歌手。

3. The pictures remind me of my school days. 这些照片使我想起了我的学生时代。

Remind me to write to Mother. 提醒我给妈妈写信。

4. How do you like the fish? 你觉得这鱼如何?5. Can you stand the pain? 你受得了这疼痛吗?6. The story does not interest me. 这故事引不起我的兴趣。

7. The dress suits me well. 这衣服很合我身。

【原创习作点评】假如你叫Li Ming, 是一名中学生,经常收听由英国主持人Philip主持的音乐节目。

请给据内容要点提示,用英语给主持人写一封信。

内容要点:1. 你很喜欢这个节目,特别是节目播放的歌词很棒的英语歌曲;2. 你学习很忙,疲劳时,会打开收音机听这个节目;3. 从节目中你学到了很多新单词……;4. 告诉你最喜欢什么类型的音乐,请他帮你介绍一些相关的歌手和CD。

要求:1.意思连贯,符合逻辑,书信格式正确。

2. 不要直接翻译内容提示。

分析:这是一片提示性作文。

要求写四个方面的内容。

写作前应仔细审题,将这四个方面进行整合,可分三个层次来写:一、表达对节目的喜爱;二、节目对自己的帮助;三、请主持人给你介绍你所喜欢的音乐类型的歌手和CD。

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