读后续写100句
读后续写精彩句型100句
Group one (1-10)
01. Noticing Susan’s unhappiness, Rose secretly suggested making a crown with flowers to please her.
02. As the family walked to the door to leave, the mother came running back, gave me a hug and whispered, “Thanks for being our angels today.”
03. Feeling familiar with the voice, she turns round and saw…
04. A small smile may make a big difference.
05. It was this unique experience t hat made me understand whatever difficulty (= no matter what diff iculty) we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.
06. What happened today made me realize that f orgiveness is a kind of virtue.
07. She explained that her mother was badly ill last night, which contributed to her fault.
08. I will treasure/value our friendship forever.
09. Jennifer’s sleepy eyes opened wide and her face wore a smile that brightened up the whole room.
10. She understood that her daughter meant much more than anything else in the world.
Group two (11-20)
11. Dad cleared his throat and said in a serious voice, “….”
12. Hoping it could be sent to one who badly needed it.
13. At that time, you were badly in need of money to pay the fee and you had
to….Then why didn’t you keep it for yourself?
14. Although I don’t have much money, I can live happily; but if I lose honesty, I won’t be happy any more. In a long run, I will be a loser.
15. I kept avoiding eye contact with him, ….
16. I made up my mind to find out/figure out how to fit in with them/how to get along with them.
17. The teacher is paying particular/close attention to Mary, who is constantly putting forward questions in class in order to rank among the best pupils.
18. It took her great courage to tell dad that….
19. This will be a great financial sacrifice for her parents who have already been paying for her college.
20. I left the site in tears. In a split second the drunk driver had torn the passer-by into pieces.
Group three (21-30)
21.One person, on losing a job or a special relationship, may feel as if it is the end of the world and sink into terrible suffering for months, years, or even a lifetime.
22.Nothing can replace what we have lost, the fresh air and the blue sky.
23.And the spirit of generosity behind the project appears to be spreading.
24.I put aside my uneasiness and said, …
25.“There couldn't be anything that's more incorrect，”Merrigan said.
26.He was so proud of his success that he refused to listen to advice.
27.Life can be so wonderful, full of adventure and joy. It can also be full of challenges, setbacks(挫折) and heartbreaks.
28.No invention has received more praise and abuse than the Internet.
29.Dozens of cases show that willpower is one of the most important habits for a person's success.
30.With the help and encouragement of her mother, she overcome many difficulties and succeeded in learning….
Group four (31-40)
31. After learning what situation I was in, my teacher, Michael encouraged me to step out of trouble bravely and confidently.
32. There is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
33.Good understanding among friends makes each other’s life richful, career successful. A true friend may share your sorrows as well as your happiness.
34.Happiness is in the mind,not in outside events and circumstances.
35. Beautiful things happen when you distance yourself from negative thinking.
36.It’s so easy to be negative when things go wrong, or blame others for negative outcomes in your life. But do negativity and blame change anything for the better?
37.If you want to make a difference in the world, start with the world around you.
38.Sometimes you have to walk away from people, not because you don’t care, but because they don’t.
39. It’s a tough pill to swallow,but it’s necessary medicine.
40. Most of the successful people were not born into success; they simply did, and continue to do, things that help them realize their full potential.
Group five (41-50)
41.Success is not final, and failure is not fatal（致命的）. It is the courage to continue that counts/matters.
42.No matter what happens, always have the belief that the things you desire may not happen today, but they will happen.
43.Continue to do your work and, eventually, someone will praise and appreciate what you do.
44.I woke up this morning to, and walked out to experience a sunrise of astonishing beauty.
45. Immediately, I feel the urge to share this breathtaking moment with sb….
46. The most beautiful sunrise I’d ever seen was slipping through my fingers.
47.When you set goals and take action in your life, you will eventually learn that there will be times when you succeed and there will be times when you fail, and both are equally important in the long run.
48. Anything worth achieving takes great effort.
49.There is no exercise better for the heart and soul than reaching out and lifting others up.
50.W hile I’m not against buying new products that add value to our lives, most of the money we spend on things will not make us any happier in the long run unless we’re investing in our personal growth and taking action in the meantime.
Group five (51-60)
51. Obviously, that was something she should not go through alone. All of
a sudden，a warm feeling of sympathy rose up in my heart.
52. Her words still hurt, “The trouble with you is that you won't put yourself in my place. Can't you see things from my point of view？”
53. I shook my head stubbornly.
54.However, when something did interest me, I could become absorbed.
55. A heavy rain ruined the dinner.
56.Our own experience working together on health, development, and energy the last twenty years has been one of the most rewarding parts of our lives.
57. When asked about happiness, we usually think of something extraordinary, an absolute delight.
58.Over the next 17 years, he became one of the staff's most valued contributors.
59.Literature is a beautiful, richly furnished room where you might find many an hour of rest and refreshment.
60.We all know that the cost of education will continue to be a significant burden on the family budget.
Group five (61-70)
61. Responsibility is the price every man must pay for freedom.
62. If you break the rules, you will be fined.
63.Mothers' devotion to children can hardly be calculated.
65.One day, mentally exhausted, I wrote down all the reasons why this problem could not be solved.
66.I left my seat quietly, giving him some privacy to finish his conversation.
67.His appearance created an atmosphere of tension.
68.I learnt that shouting and threats of punishment would result in a disaster.
69.Years ago, a critical event occurred in my life that would change it forever.
70. And it is proving to be an increasingly powerful tool in encouraging people to purchase.
Group five (71-80)
71.Research findings seem to indicate that the creation by a great artist is as permanent an achievement as the discovery by a great scientist. 72.As long as the building in question is pleasing and does not dominate(影响) its surroundings too much, it often improves the attractiveness of the area.
73. Two years ago, while Cathy was watching the Olympics, a dream came into her sweet little head—to be a swimmer.
74.Enjoying the beauty of nature benefits one's health.
75. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.
76. I am very moved that the driver took so much trouble to send it to my school, which will always remind me to be kind and helpful.
77. … in the belief that everyone should have the right to perform，and they did so in a public house disused for years.
78.Library computers on the ground floor are for those who want to access the wi－fi.
79.Students' respect is the best reward for teachers.
80. They've grown accustomed to it, …
Group five (81-90)
81.Sometimes when I feel lost，I lie down and shut my eyes, and I go home.
82.… the murderer got away with the crime.
83.…and parking in such spots can result in a fine.
84.One way children seek more attention from parents is by making themselves different from their brothers.
85....women are far more likely than men to seek social contact when they
are feeling stressed.
86.They may phone relatives or friends, or ask directions if they are lost.
87.Don't miss the chance of lending your warm hands to help others!
88.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
89. I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.
90.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Group five (91-100)
91.... because they're surrounded by the digital world.
92. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter.
93. He kept walking up and down restlessly,his face pale, and his hands shaking slightly.
94.From dawn to dusk, he works countless hours …
95. This will give you the confidence you need to get you through the afternoon and go home feeling accomplished.
96. Cars have become a popular means of transport，bringing great convenience to our life.
97. However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
98. But it is useful to bear in mind that all such changes come from the technology ...
99.How can I reward my beloved mom so badly, who has sacrificed everything, even one eye, for her only son!
100.On learning the truth, I totally dumbfounded(completely shocked). In a split second, my heart started to be aching and countless things flashed through my mind.
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2)give a jump in the air 跳到空中（表示开心） 3)Jump to one’s feet 跳起来（表示震惊） 4)make a running step back 跑着后退 5)dash back 冲回 6)Pace restlessly 不安地走动 7)aimlessly 无目的地 8)pop down a hole 跳入一个洞 9)dig into one’s pocket 插入口袋 10)Press one’s hand upon one’s heart 用手压住胸口（表示惊吓） 11)stand a few moments without saying a word 无话可说地站在那里 12)...flashed across her mind 闪过脑海 13)start to one’s feet 站起来 三、句子赏析 1．Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me. 2．Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me. 3．She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently. 4．Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic. 5．The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at（动作） the factory. 6．Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop. 7．Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door. 8．Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family. 9．Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears. 10．And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless. 11．Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables. 12．I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room. 13．I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted. 14．The elderly man fled away with great panic. 15．The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.
读后续写 万能金句(微技能)
高二英语金丽 读后续写万能套句 表伤心： 1.“If you are willing to do…, will you….?”she said in a choked voice. “Absolutely!” he replied. 她用哽咽的声音说“如果你愿意.., 你可不可以…?”他回答“当然可以。” 2. Tears sprang to his eyes. 泪水涌上了他的眼睛。spring（sprang，sprung）涌出；生长 3. He began to sob at this, for he felt lonely among all these strange people. After a while, he took out his handkerchief to wipe his eyes. sob (sobbed; sobbed) 呜咽；啜泣 表开心： 1.“I…....”he said in a hopeful voice, a huge smile spreading on his face. “我……”他用满怀希望的声音说，脸上露出大大的微笑。 2. A huge smile spread on his face, which lights up my gloomy afternoon. 他的脸上展开了大大的笑容，照亮了我阴郁的下午。 3.The heavy clouds haunting over him were eventually blown away. 笼罩在他头顶的乌云最终被吹散。haunt vt.笼罩；困扰 4.He gave a jump in the air, and then danced with delight, thinking of nothing. 他跳了起来，然后高兴的跳起舞来，脑中什么也不想。 表感动： 1.Tears were sliding down her cheeks. She pulled me close and mumbled “Thank you.” 泪水留下他的脸颊。她把我拉近，含糊的说“谢谢！” 2．On that unforgettable morning, we..…together. 在那个难以忘怀的早上，我们一起…. 3. Never will I forget the experience with Mr. X. （倒装句） 4. Relief laid in our heart and happiness emerged on face. 心理松了一口气, 脸上浮现了幸福。
(完整)高考英语读后续写解题技巧
读后续写 （2017.6浙江卷）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）. Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He was a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 The car abruptly stopped in front of him. _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ___________________ Paragraph 2 A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. _____________________________________________________________________
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