2018届二轮复习 短文改错专题10篇训练之一学案(8页word版)

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之一
【1】
Last year, I spent my summer holiday at my uncles in Beijing, which I stayed for nearly one month. In the first two weeks, I visited some places of interest such as the Forbidden City. In the following days. what interested me most was explore several op universities, including the Peking
University. Deeply attracted by the beautiful sceneries and academic atmosphere, I found myself greatly inspire to study hard to be admitted by one key university in 2018. Additional, one of the most interesting but meaningful things was to teach my cousin to learn English. Even though we had much difficulty at first, neither of us improved much both in knowledge and patience. I indeed
enjoyed that summer holiday, which have benefited me a lot from life and study ever since.
答案
【2】
In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they need a way to relax.
Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It suggested that textbooks be recycled so that we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a time on how to remove their pressure proper.
答案
In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from
that
high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find
for burying
the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they
and such
need a way to relax.
Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It/\suggested that textbooks be recycled so that
their is
we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a
trees
删除a
time on how to remove their pressure proper.
properly
【3】
Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!
答案
Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t
extremely
fit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the
in thoughts floating
campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the
seemed
a
lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness
who
Her
pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or
删除to and
you will find out people are more friendly than you think!
【4】
I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring. With no time for the breakfast, I rushed out of my house. I had intended to catch the 7: 30 subway, and I didn't make it. Have a little time left, I take a taxi instead. I arrived at the school only find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school where should have been full of students was empty. It was Saturday. However, our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end. When I returned home, I found myself lock out. I had forgotten to bring the key. Just my luck.
答案
第一句lately--late;第二句breakfast前the去掉；第三句and---but;第四句Have--Having,take---took 第五句find前加to,where---which;第六句at---to第七句lock--locked
【5】
I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.
From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.
答案
I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as ∧reporter last term. The
confidence a exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for
annually
interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One
interviewing them thought
lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing
and of
was more excited than communicating with people.
exciting
From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.
删除that
【6】
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And
others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.
答案
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some
mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And others
inspiring
talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe
their
that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had
have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are
lives
doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their respectable with
professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I
hard
must learn as much as I can ∧get into a good medical college, which I can prepare
to where
myself fully for the job of a doctor.
【7】
When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life, but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.
答案
71. ... a office worker. a → an
72. ... extreme thin. extreme → extremely
73. He paid ... paid前加was
74. ... eating a lot. eating → eat
75. ... photos of her ... her → him
76. ... a lot thin! thin → thinner
77. ... sorts of thing ... thing → things
78. ... worked as a ... worked → working
79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard
80. ... found out time ... 去掉out
【8】
The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.
答案
71. ... with parents. parents前加my
72. Arriving here ... here → there
73. ... round a zoo. a → the
74. ... pretty exciting about ... exciting → excited
75. ... made me to think ... 去掉to
76. ... enjoy live ... live → living
77. ... come in my mind ... in → to / into
78. ... he tells me ... tells → told
79. Maybe some days ... days → day
80. ... will have a ... have → be
【9】
Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.
答案
71. ... for the meal ... the → a
72. ... food is not ... is → was
73. ... a dish calling ... calling → called
74. ... turned out to ... turned前加which
75. ... and this meal ... and → but
76. ... was quite disappointed ... disappointed → disappointing
77. ... my families didn't ... families → family
78. Personal, I think ... Personal → Personally
79. ... enjoyed us more ... us → ourselves
80. ... have had plenty ... 去掉had
【10】
It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talk
about with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star. 答案
71. ... stayed at home ... stayed → stay
72. ... and does things ... does → do
73. ... put you touch ... touch前加in
74. Joining a club ... Joining → Join
75. ... of different group ... group → groups
76. ... a lot easy ... easy → easier
77. ... similarly interests. similarly → similar
78. ... with others people. others → other或去掉people
79. Find out that ... 去掉that
80. ... my favorite TV ... my → your。