2020年中考英语作文总复习题及答案解析(99)

2020年中考英语作文总复习题

1．Writer a passage of at least 60 words on the topic " _______Makes My life Better "．（以"

______使我的生活更美好" 为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号表不占格．）

要求：

补全作文标题

短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．

【分析】高分句型一：

When I started middle school，I was weak in English 此句是一般过去时的复合句．是由when引导的时间状语从句，意思是"当…的时候"，be weak in是一个固定短语，意思是：在某方面很差．因此此句可翻译为" 当我上中学的时候，我的英语很薄弱．"

高分句型二

I often wrote English stories．and shared them with my teachers and classmates．此句是一般

过去时的陈述句．运用短语share…with…"和…分享"，此句可翻译为"我经常写英语故事，并和老师与同学们一起分享它们．"

【解答】Learning English well Makes My life Better．

Although the life of junior three is tense，尽管三年的生活很紧张．but learning English well makes my life better．（要点一，点明要点）．Now my English has greatly improved．When

I started middle school，I was weak in English （高分句型一）．My English teacher

encouraged me and gave me some advice．my classmates helped me．Then I began to work hard on it and was fond of it．I often took part in some activities about English and enjoyed myself．I not only listened more carefully in class but also read a lot of books about English in my spare time，Besides，I often watch English movies on TV or computer．I can learn about the culture and the local condition all over the world．I often wrote English stories．and shared them with my teachers and classmates．（高分句型二）（要点二，如何学习英语的及学好英语使我的生活更美好．）．

Now I'm more interested in English and I get higher grades．I'm pleased with English and thankful to my English teacher and my classmates．I really feel that learning English well makes my life better．（要点三，学好英语的感受．）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务