高考英语写作教学 课件

Step 3: 回读全文，知悉各要点间的逻辑关系
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today’s stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of the world’s attention. Paparazzi (狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
e.g. the center of...--the focus of... Tip 2: 词性替换
e.g. worry constantly--constant anxiety Tip 3: 句型改写
e.g. Worrying about..., celebrities...
A possible version：
例：2016年10月份英语高考续写
1.明确故事主要人物： Jane & Tom (CP)
According to psychologist Christina Villareal, celebrities— famous people—worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. “Over time,” Villareal says, “they feel separated and alone.”
2013北京高考卷阅读C篇(Para.2)
Step 2: 分段阅读，划出衔接词和关键词句
At the center of the world's attention, today's stars face great pressure.
Celebrities worry constantly about their public appearance and eventually lose track of who they really are.
概要写作&读后续写 读写结合
读写分开
概要写作
对原文要点的理解和呈现情况； 对各要点表达的独立性情况。 应用语法结构和词汇的准确性； 上下文的连贯性
概要写作 21-25分
理解准确，覆盖全部要点； 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇； 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成
At the center of the world's attention, today's stars face great pressure. As a result, Celebrities worry constantly about their public appearance and eventually lose track of who they really are. Tip 1: 同义替换
Dear Lynn, Recently, I came across an article that impressed me deeply, so I feel a strong urge to share
it with you. First, I'll give you a brief summary of the article. As the focus of public attention, celebrities are faced with tremendous stress, which leads
As the focus of public attention, celebrities are faced with tremendous stress, which leads them to care too much about their public image, some even losing their true selves.
Step 2: 分段阅读，划出衔接词和关键词句
Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today’s stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of the world’s attention. Paparazzi (狗 仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature.
Dear Lynn, Recently, I came across an article that impressed
me deeply, so I feel a strong urge to share it with you. First, I'll give you a brief summary of the article.
them to care too much about their public image, some even losing their true selves.
From the article, I learn the lesson that everything
comes with a price. Many people envy the fame and
According to psychologist Christina Villareal, celebrities— famous people—worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people they were before everyone knew their names. “Over time,” Villareal says, “they feel separated and alone.”
2013北京高考卷阅读C篇(Para.1)
Step 2: 分段阅读，划出衔接词和关键词句
According to psychologist Christina Villareal, celebrities—famous people—worry constantly about their public appearance. Eventually, they start to lose track of who they really are, seeing themselves the way their fans imagine them, not as the people thheir names. “Over time,” Villareal says, “they feel separated and alone.”
内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键 词语；
所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些 许错误，但完全不影响意义表达；
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短 文结构紧凑。
Step 1: 明确故事主要人物 Step 2: 明确故事主要事件 Step 3: 研读所给的段首开头语及所标示关键词， 获取信息，结合文本内容，得出合理的结局 Step 4: 根据所想结局以及原文所标示出的关键 词进行具体情节的拓展构思
As the focus of public attention, celebrities are faced with tremendous stress, which leads them to care too much about their public image, some even losing their true selves. (29 words)
sacrifices.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
读后续写
与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接情况； 内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应
用情况； 应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； 上下文的连贯性。
读后续写 21-25分
与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段开头语衔 接合理；
After reading the article, I become aware that… __________________________________________ __________________________________________