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BEC Vantage Writing Test2

真题分析& 学生习作修改

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•You are a manager in a large company. You have been informed that a member of your staff often arrives late for work.

•●Write him a memo about the problem:

•●saying how often the member of staff arrives late

•●describing the effect on other staff

•●suggesting what the member of staff should do about the situation.

•●Write 40-50 words.

真题-1 PART 1

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•To: P. Jones

•From:

•Date: 21 November 2002

•Subject: Lateness

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•Dear staves,

•So many staves always arrive company late recently ,the phenomenon has aroused bad effect. If this issues can not be prevented ,other staves will feel unfair and follow it ,the consequences be unbearable to contemplate .Obey the rules of co mpany is staves’ responsibility, we suggest every members should be arrive here on time in this situation.

•Thank you very much.

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•I have been told that you often arrived late three times a week. And it has brought about very bad effect on any other staff. So in this case, you should resort to get up and leave home earlier so that you would not be late again.

•Thank you very much.

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•I am writing to talk to you on your late for work. I have been informed that you often arrive late two or three times every week, which will reduce the enthusiasm of the other stuff. Please be quicker in the morning from now.

•Thank you very much

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•I’m writing to inform you that the number of you arriving late every week is one or two. Seeing what you often do, more and more staffs tend to think arriving late is nothing seriously. I suggest that you should arrive on time at least in time.

•Thank you very much.

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•I have been informed that you arrive late for work about twice a week .Your late arrival will effect other staffs’ positivity as well as the progress of our programme. You should come to work punctually from now on and apologize to your colleague.

•Thank you ,

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•I want to inform you that you have been late three times in a week. This behavior will have a bad effect on the other staff and they will arrive late like you. You should find the reason why you are always late and arrive on time from now on.

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•I have been informed you are late for work for three days in a week. It has a bad effect on the other staff because they may consider this bad behaviour is allowed and also be late like you. You should find the reason for being late and arrive on time from now on.

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•Recently you have been late for work almost every day. Your behaviors in the past few days have set a bad model for the other staff. I would be glad if you can face your mistake and arrive for work on time since tomorrow.

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•I’m writing to tell you that you have arrived late for work four times a week. You’ve set a bad example of breaking our company’s attendance rule. Please obey the regulation and get to work on time everyday.

•Thank you very much.

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Sample of a good answer

•To: P. Jones

•From: Luisa Gambon

•Date: 21 November 2002

•Subject: Lateness

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Band 5

•Mr Jones,

•I have noticed that you often arrive late for work, especially on Monday mornings. As your colleagues are starting to complain about that, you understand that unless this habit changes, I will take disciplinary action against you.

•Come and see me tomorrow at 9 a.m. in my office.

•Thank you

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•You are the Managing Director of a company whose profits have recently increased and you would like to reward staff for this.