公开课--话题作文写作课件

4.Handwriting is of great importance.
The outline of the writing: beginning … 感谢他的关注
雾霾的影响 Point 1…
supporting 1 effects onidea health supporting effects onidea life 2
Body Point 2… 你的建议
How to protect yourself supporting idea 1/2/3… /the environment…
Ending …
Let’s improve it:
ASSESSMENT Is the essay divided into parts? structure Does each part have a topic sentence? Are all the details included?
Requirements:
1.Your composition should be divided into paragraphs. 2. A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences. 3.You’d better use some linking words.
Measures:
Plant more trees. /Increase the green area. shut down some factories. develop clean energy. take green transportation. establish law and regulation to punish and fine…
What can we do to fight against haze? Structures:
1. To …, we should/must… 2. In my opinion, it’s our duty to… 3. It’s important/necessary for us to … 4. It would be better if we… 5. Use passive voice.(被动语态)
Dear David， I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your concerning about the weather. Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog. Smog has cause great trouble to us. First, more and more people are suffering from respiratory diseases, such as bad coughs, sore throat or even lung cancers. As a result, hospitals are crowded with people. Second, it has brought much inconvenience to our daily life like traffic jam, road accidents. Meanwhile, flights and ships have to be cancelled or put off. What’s worse, students have to stay at home because schools suspend classes. In my opinion, during the haze weather, we’d better wear masks and reduce outdoor activities. In the meantime, measures should be taken to protect the environment. We should take green transportation, develop green energy as well as plant more trees. Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas. Yours Li Hua
Improve your letter after class and write it again as your homework.
人有了知识，就会具备各种分析能力， 明辨是非的能力。 所以我们要勤恳读书，广泛阅读， 古人说“书中自有黄金屋。 ”通过阅读科技书籍，我们能丰富知识， 培养逻辑思维能力； 通过阅读文学作品，我们能提高文学鉴赏水平， 培养文学情趣； 通过阅读报刊，我们能增长见识，扩大自己的知识面。 有许多书籍还能培养我们的道德情操， 给我们巨大的精神力量， 鼓舞我们前进。
cough
sneeze sore throat lung cs life:
1. Traffic is affected.
(More traffic control./High ways are closed.) 2. Flights are put off/cancelled. 3. Schools suspend classes. …
Topic writing 话题作文的写作
雾霾
fog + smoke =smog 灰霾：haze
What causes haze?
What effects does haze have on us? (health, life)
Effects on people’s health:
respiratory diseases (呼吸道疾病)
假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目 前中国出现的雾霾天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。 请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下： 1.感谢他的关注。 2.简介雾霾对人们的影响。 3.谈谈你的建议 。 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅; 开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数; 词数：120左右 Dear David， I’m glad to receive your letter. ______________________________________ Yours， Li Hua
A city in haze is neither beautiful nor suitable for living. In 1952, a severe haze in London led to the death of 12,000 people, the majority of whom are children and people with respiratory diseases . It took 20 years to solve the haze in London.
How to protect ourselves in haze weather? wear masks. We’d better… reduce/stop outdoor activities. We can… stay indoors. We’re advised… do not open the windows. buy air purifiers. Keep more green plants in the house. …
content
Is everything to the point(切题)?
Does the writer use any linking words?
Are there any spelling mistakes? Language Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）? Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）?