雅思写作开头段写作技巧

句型总结： In this highly competitive society, In modern-day society, Along with technological boom,
同意：be in favor of, reasonable, sound, advisable, be for 不同意：be skeptical about, irrational, unreasonable, be against
例题7 (剑8T4) In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Mass media, ranging from books, magazines to TV programs, enable people to have a broader way to gain knowledge. Extensive reading, some suggest, is superior to watching TV, in view of cultivating one’s imagination and linguistic ability. Personally, I am in favor of such a point of view.
例题4 (13-1-5) Some people think that people who prefer to read for pleasure will have better imagination and language skills than people who like watching TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
a. 交待出题背景 Along with an increase in the living standard, a great many people heed their health and fitness.
According to a survey conducted by WHO, most of humans’ life expectancy has extended to a large degree.
例题5 (13-5-11) Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What are the causes and solutions?
首段必备三要素： a. 交待出题背景(introduce) b. 改述题中现象(paraphrase) c. 表明写作目的 (present your purpose)
c. 表明写作目的 This essay will examine reasons for this phenomenon and point out effects on individuals and society.
This essay aims to analyze causes of this problem and discuss the possible effects on individuals and society.
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炫酷语法
我们不能忽视计算机带给我们带来的负面影响。 On no account should we ignore the negative influence brought about by the computer.
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ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu
写作≠翻译
带有历史文化价值的老建筑总是令人流连忘返。 The old buildings with historical values are attractive to individuals. A与B毫无二致 A is a mirror image of B. 完全不懂……. be ignorant of sth.
分析原因：discuss/analyze/examine reasons for/cause of 提出对策：propose/suggest/point out solutions to/measures for
雅思写作，激活你的灵感
真正拿分的“遣词造句”实战技巧
避免“俗词满天飞”；换词；句式多元化；炫酷语法； 写作≠翻译
In this essay, I will discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some effective solutions.
例题6 (13-4-13) Most citizens tend to live an individual life and they prefer a small family unit. What are the reasons of this case? What are the effects on both individual and society as a whole?
b. 改述题中现象 Some suggest that the tendency brings about huge influence on individuals and society as a whole.
Some deem that this family unit reflects a change in modern humans’ values.
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句式多元化
参加志愿服务活动对于大学生来说是至关重要的。 It is important for university students to participate in the volunteer service. The volunteer service plays an important role in university life.
b. 改述题中现象 However, some feel that their physical health are getting worse and worse and average weight has increased more than they expected.
c. 表明写作目的 In this essay, I will analyze some reasons for this problem and propose feasible solutions.
a. 交待出题背景 In my country, a growing number of people tend to move into large cities.
Modern metropolises are attractive to average people.
b. 改述题中现象 However, the quality of life in these cities is going from bad to worse.
, but the quality of life in urban areas is not as desirable as expected.
c. 表明写作目的 In this essay, I will analyze some reasons for this problem and propose feasible solutions.
In this essay, I will discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some effective solutions.
句型总结： As is reported by mass media, It has been constantly covered by mass media that… … has absorbed great attention from average people.
a. 交待出题背景 In my countries, a small family unit enjoys a large following.
More and more citizens tend to live a private life, without too many family members living together.
考官喜欢的“文章观点”
符合实际生活+满足基本道德+容易展开
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避免“俗词”满天飞
现如今，越来越多的孩子沉迷于电脑游戏。 Nowadays, more and more children are addicted to computer games. In this era of information explosion, a growing number of children abandon themselves in computer games. In this highly competitive society, In this multicultural society,
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雅思写作，激活你的灵感
真正拿分的“遣词造句”实战技巧
避免“俗词满天飞”；换词；句式多元化；炫酷语法； 写作≠翻译
考官喜欢的“文章观点”
符合实际生活+满足基本道德+容易展开
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雅思写作开头段写作技巧
“agree or disagree” 题型首段写法 “causes and measures”题型首段写法 首段常见句型总结
首段必备三要素： a. 交待出题背景(introduce) b. 改述题目观点(paraphrase) c. 表明我方立场(present your standpoint)
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句式多元化
参加志愿服务活动对于大学生来说是至关重要的。 Nothing is more important than to encourage students to participate in some volunteer services. Words fail to express the importance of the volunteer service for a university student.
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换词
互联网已经成为人们获取信息和知识的一个窗口，人们可以通 过网络拓宽自己的视野。 the Internet the net / network / the computer information highway the kaleidoscope of knowledge