备忘录制作教学

例3
Directions: If you are the teacher of the students’ Counseloris office: P: steelpes, and you have received a letter for requesting for paid education leave from a student. Write him a memo to reply him including details:
1) The result of his requirement. 2) The reason for rejecting.
3)some suggestions
You should write about 100 words.
To: Records Section
From: P/ Steelpes, Career Planning Subject: Request for Paid Education Leave Date: May 22, 2004
备忘录 (Memo)

备忘录是一种录以备忘的公文。在公文函件中，它的等 级是比较低的，主要用来提醒、督促对方，或就某个问 题提出自己的意见或看法。在业务上，它一般用来补充 正式文件的不足。它的内 容可以分为以下几项：
书端（Heading）;
收文人的姓名、头衔、地址（Addressee’s Name, Title, Address）； 称呼(Salutation)； 事因(Subject)； 正文（Body） ； 结束语（Complimentary Close）； 署名（Signature）。

书端部分包括发文机关的名称、地址、发文日期，有的 还包括电报挂号、电传号、电话号码等。许多机关有自 己特制的信笺，在写书端时，其格式和标点符号的使用 与一般信件的相同。收文人（或收文单位）的姓名、头 衔、地址一项写在左上角编号处的下面，其格式与书信 的写法相同。 称呼从左边顶格写起，对一般机关、团体的负责人一般 用 Dear Sir， 对政府官员可用 Sir。

此篇是对一篇备忘录的回复。生产主管认 为实行打孔考勤制度（“punchin”system），有利于增加生产效率。但 督察却不这样认为。他认为“should give the employees more incentives to work faster”。
Thank You!
首先要注意本篇备忘录的格式很标准。 然后注意这个备忘录的个别词的用法，譬 如：be aware of 注意到、当心的意思， point out 指出,request for 要求，in response to 反馈。
Exersise

Directions: You are a supervisor of a big company. The chief of operations wants to adopt the“punch-in”system to increase productivity. Write a memo to talk about this:
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

这是一封备忘录，在写备忘录的时侯，一定要注 意它的格式，尤其要在开头写清楚是谁写给谁来 备忘的，用From: To：两个单词即可。文中的 “badly”是“非常的，迫切的”意思。短语 “in order to”同下句的“so that”意思是一样 的即：为了，目的是。不同的是前者后接动词原 型而后者常跟目的状语从句 ，类似的短语还有 “in order that”,用法与“so that”相同。
To: David Green, Chief of Operations From: Tony. Party , Supervisor
Subject: Comments on the “Punch-in” System
Date: March. 22, 2004
This is further to your memo dated March. 20, 2004, in which you proposed that employees adopt the “punch-in” system. I fully agree with you that we must increase productivity. As far as your proposal that if the “punch-in” system is adopted, we would have a tighter control over the employees is concerned. However, I don’t think so. I personally think that, to accomplish this, we should give the employees more incentives to Biblioteka Baiduork faster. I feel that if we ( the supervisors) could meet with you , we could discuss different possiblilities to create such incentiveness. Your consideration of this suggestion would be appreciated. Tony Party

例1 Directions: Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department and ask them to fix a telephone for each dormitory. MEMO August 16,2004 To:The leader of student service department From: Li Ming
1) Does the “punch-in”system benefit the company? 2) If the company doesn’t adopt it, what else can we do to increase productivity. You should write about 100 words.
Subject:Telephone
Dear Sir, I would like to remind you that we are in want of a telephone for each dormitory. As a university student, we need to cope with the daily increasing communications with teachers, friends and people outside the campus. We need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for us. Though most of us have mobile phones and e-mail address, a telephone in the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of communication. I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon as possible.


“事因”一项目前采用得较少。它可放在称 呼语之前，也可放在其后，前面可加 Re或 Docket, Subject。如果此项写在称呼语 之前，多从左边的顶格写起；若放在称呼 语之后，一般写在信笺正中。它多采用不 完整的句子，只需很少几个词，甚至一个 词，目的在于使收文人对文中的主要内容 一目了然，便于及时处理。 正文、结束语和署名等项与一般信件的 格式相同。
In response to your request for one year of paid education leave to take a degree in English literature, I have to inform you that we cannot authorize this leave. While we appreciate your desire to improve your knowledge, we feel that English literature is not directly related to your present position and to the goals of this organization. I am aware of your great interest in literature, and I would like to point out that you could gain advantage to apply for leave without pay. If you need another information on the above, do not hesitate to keep touch with me at any time. P. Steels
Regards. Yours，

“remind”一词用法比较多，可以在后面直 接接人或宾格，如“提醒我”译为please remind me.如果提醒某人某事则用remind somebody of something ，也可以在后面加 从句，即“remind sb that”,remind还有一个 意思为“使想起”同样用remind…of…的结构， 应注意与提醒某事区分。
MEMO
August 12,2004
To: Mr. Gates, leader of the supply section
From:Li Ming of the biological laboratory Subject:Microscope
Dear Sir, I’m a student of biology department and we are badly in need of an extra microscope in order to improve our experimental work. Our experiment will start on Friday, so please issue a microscope to us as soon as possible so that we can prepare better for the experiment. With kind regards.

例2 Directions:You are supposed to write a Memorandom of about 100 words to the leader of the supply section to borrow one more microscope for your biological experiment. It should include: 1) Why you need the microscope. 2) When you need it.