【公开课课件】高中英语概要写作：Summary Writing
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“things” rather than protective habitats. Zoos teach people that it is acceptable to keep animals bored, lonely, and far from their natural bones.
Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species, but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals’natural behavior, intelligence, or beauty. Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages, and most signs only mention the species’ name, diet, and natural range. The animals’ normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos don’t usually take care of the animals’natural needs.
写作步骤
1. Read for topic and structure 2. Combine topic sentence and key words 3. Rewrite /paraphrase
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Read for Topic and Structure
Read for Topic and Structure
《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》
概要写作： 提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写
出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
评分标准 第五档（2ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้-25分）
1. 理解准确，涵盖所有要点 2. 准确使用相应的语法结构和词 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑 4. 完全使用自己的语言
How could we possibly think that keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment
purposes-is fair and respectful? Zoo officials say they are concerned about animals. However, most zoos remain “collections” of interesting
2
Read for Topic Sentence and Key Words
The animals are kept together in small spaces, with no privacy and little opportunity for mental and physical exercise. This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis. A worldwide study of zoos found that zoochosis is common among animals kept in small spaces or cages. Another study showed that elephants spend 22 percent of their time making repeated head movements or biting cage bars, and bears spend 30 percent of their time walking back and forth, a sign of unhappiness and pain.
Summary Writing
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1. be clear about the steps of writing a summary; 2. know how to get the topic sentence; 3. write a summary by using some techniques.
Furthermore, most animals in zoos are not endangered. Captive breeding of endangered big cats, Asian elephants, and other species has not resulted n their being sent back to the wild. Zoos talk a lot about their captive breeding programs because they do not want people to worry about a species dying out. In fact, baby animals also attract a lot of paying customers. Haven’t we seen enough competitions to name baby animals?
Actually, we will save endangered species only if we save their habitats and put an end to the reasons people kill them. Instead of supporting zoos, we should support groups that work to protect animals’ natural habitats.
Zoos claim to educate people and save endangered species, but visitors leave zoos without having learned anything meaningful about the animals’natural behavior, intelligence, or beauty. Zoos keep animals in small spaces or cages, and most signs only mention the species’ name, diet, and natural range. The animals’ normal behavior is seldom noticed because zoos don’t usually take care of the animals’natural needs.
写作步骤
1. Read for topic and structure 2. Combine topic sentence and key words 3. Rewrite /paraphrase
1
Read for Topic and Structure
Read for Topic and Structure
《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》
概要写作： 提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写
出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）
评分标准 第五档（2ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้-25分）
1. 理解准确，涵盖所有要点 2. 准确使用相应的语法结构和词 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑 4. 完全使用自己的语言
How could we possibly think that keeping animals in cages in unnatural environments-mostly for entertainment
purposes-is fair and respectful? Zoo officials say they are concerned about animals. However, most zoos remain “collections” of interesting
2
Read for Topic Sentence and Key Words
The animals are kept together in small spaces, with no privacy and little opportunity for mental and physical exercise. This results in unusual and self-destructive behavior called zoochosis. A worldwide study of zoos found that zoochosis is common among animals kept in small spaces or cages. Another study showed that elephants spend 22 percent of their time making repeated head movements or biting cage bars, and bears spend 30 percent of their time walking back and forth, a sign of unhappiness and pain.
Summary Writing
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1. be clear about the steps of writing a summary; 2. know how to get the topic sentence; 3. write a summary by using some techniques.
Furthermore, most animals in zoos are not endangered. Captive breeding of endangered big cats, Asian elephants, and other species has not resulted n their being sent back to the wild. Zoos talk a lot about their captive breeding programs because they do not want people to worry about a species dying out. In fact, baby animals also attract a lot of paying customers. Haven’t we seen enough competitions to name baby animals?
Actually, we will save endangered species only if we save their habitats and put an end to the reasons people kill them. Instead of supporting zoos, we should support groups that work to protect animals’ natural habitats.