【公开课课件】新人教版 必修一 unit1 Reading for Writing (共25张PPT)

1. Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice. Read her reply and discuss the questions.
10 September 2018
Date
suggestions / advice on ... 4. I am writing to express my views
concerning ... 5. I'm sorry (that) you are having trouble /
difficulty / problems in ... 6. Here are a few suggestions about ... 7. I am writing to offer you some advice about ...
正文（body）常用的句式和套话 1. I would like to suggest / recommend that ... 2. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the
following action. 3. When it comes to such a situation, I would
建议信的基本框架： 开头 (beginning) ---开门见山，引出话题，说明写信目的。（安 慰对方并提出自己的看法。） 主体 (body)---对所提出的问题进行陈述，提出合理的建议 并说明理由。（根据写作要点提示，提出建 议并说明理由。） 结尾 (ending) ---呼应开头，重申观点，表达祝愿。
Discuss his problems and list possible
suggestions and reasons.
Reason: _T_h_e_re__is_a__g_ir_l_I_l_ik_e_i_n_m__y_ _c_la_s_s,_b_u_t_I_’_m__to_o_s_h_y_t_o___ _ta_l_k_t_o_h_e_r_. ____________ Suggestion: _____________________ _____________________ _____________________
Dear Worried Friend, Greeting
You wrote that you are very worried about
your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite
well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
建议信是生活中常用的一种应用文文体。 建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建 议或忠告。有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到 的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是 写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提 出建议或忠告。 建议信的格式和普通信件一样，通常包括信头、 称呼、正文、结束语和签名五个部分。
2. Draft your letter according to the outline.
Write the date and greet the reader.
Show the reader that you know what the problem is. Tell the reader that you understand how he/she feels. Explain your reason(s). Tell the reader what you think will happen.
I think you should encourage your friend to
try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem
together? I am sure he will listen to you, since
you are his good friend . Body
All the best, Susan Luo
Close Signature
1. What is worried Friend's problem? His friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
You think that your friend plays computer
games too often and spends too much time
online.
Body
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot Body concentrate on school and family life.
Close and sign the letter.
___________ DYeoaur w__ro_t_e__th_a_t_, ___________ I understand that _________ I think __________________ because ________________. I am sure that B_e_s_t_w__is_h_e_s_, _ ____________
A. I know what the problem is.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
B. I understand how you feel.
D. I think my advice will help.
2. What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions? Circle them in the letter.
2. Study the organisation and language features.
1. Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points. A. I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s). D. I think my advice will help.
suggestions? Does the writer use commas and stops
correctly? Is the handwriting easy to read?
like to suggest that you should ... 4. As to ..., I suggest that you should ... 5. Why not…? 6. It would be better / a good idea if ...
建议信结尾常用句式 1. I do hope you will take my advice into account/ consideration. 2. (In the end, ) I do hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 3. I hope my suggestions will ... 4. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
Discuss her problems and list possible
suggestions and reasons.
Reason: _I_a_lw__a_y_s _fe_e_l_lo_n_e_l_y_a_ft_e_r_____ _s_ch_o_o_l_b_e_c_a_u_se__m_y_p_a_r_e_n_t_s ___ _w_o_r_k_i_n_a_n_o_t_h_er__ci_t_y.________ Suggestion: ________________________ ________________________ ________________________
Discuss his problems and list possible suggestions and reasons.
Reason: _M__y_p_a_r_en_t_s_w_o_n_’_t_li_s_te_n__w_h_e_n_I_t_e_ll_t_h_em______ _th_i_n_g_s_. ______________________________ Suggestion: ____________________________________ _______________________________have learnt to write a letter of advice to one of the teenagers below.
Work in groups. Choose one of the teenagers and discuss his/her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons.
2. Do you think Ms Luo's advice is useful ? Why or why not? Yes, of course, because......
3. What other kinds of advice would you give? I will encourage him to try new hobbies.
3. Exchange drafts. Use the checklist to Aregailvlethfeeepdarbtascokf aonletyteoruirnpclaurdtendera'nsddraft. organised in a good order? Does the writer give reasons for the advice? Does the writer use proper expressions to give
1. To get students to appreciate an advice letter. 2. To learn the structre and related words and
expressions. 3. To enable students to write an advice letter.
建议信开头常用的句式和套话
1. Thanks for trusting me. 2. You have asked me for my advice on ... and I
will try to make some suggestions. 3. It's my great pleasure to give you some