写作指导-话题 兴趣爱好

高三综合提高写作指导兴趣爱好

兴趣爱好是指“个人”对特定的“事物”、“活动”以及“人为对象”所产生的带有倾向性、选择性的态度、情绪、喜欢的想法。每个人都会对其感兴趣的事物给予优先注意和积极地探索，并表现出心驰神往。兴趣爱好的发掘、培养很重要。没有兴趣爱好就没有创造，就没有想象力和创造力。

【例题展示】

1．请根据右图写一篇120-150个单词的短文。

你的短文应包括下列要点：

1．简要描写图画内容；

2．说明图画含义；

3．表达你的观点。

注意：（1）短文的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）；

（2）请用第三人称进行表达。

Balance Creates Happiness

As is shown in the picture above, the student is struggling hard to balance his studies and hobbies. __________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________.

【思路点拨】这是漫画作文，属于图画作文的一种。英语漫画作文常以讽刺画和幽默画为主，要求学生认真审题，解读画面，展开想象，议论，从中受到启迪。漫画作文多为夹叙夹议文，一般议论为主，常用一般现在时态和第三人称进行写作。漫画作文写作主要通过三步完成：

1. 读图。认真观察，正确叙述画面内容。仔细观察画面中人物的形体，相貌，表情，语言，动作等，推测人物的思想面貌，尤其注意人物在干什么。观察周围环境，弄清事件发生的时间，地点以及和事件有关的情况，然后把这些信息连贯性地表达出来，使静止的画面“活动化”，平面的事物“立体化”。

2. 解意。通过画面所提供的内容，揣摩画意，辨明褒贬，揭示实质，明晰主旨。联系现实生活，由此及彼地加以联想与引申，在画面意义的基础上联想到另一层新的内容，发表自己的看法，可以提出一些建议和办法。

3. 谋篇。正如试题所提供的写作要点一样，漫画作文一般可分为三个部份。第一部份，简要描写图画内容(describe the picture)；第二部份，诠释图画含义(interpret its meaning)；第三部份，表达个人观点(give opinions)。

可用句型：

1. 描述图画内容

As is described/ shown in the picture, …

As we can see in the picture, …

The picture is talking about/shows…

The picture above is about …

2. 表达个人观点

I think/believe that…

As far as I’m concerned, …

In my opinion/ eyes, …

From my point of view, …

Personally, I …

In short/ conclusion/ a word, …

【参考范文】

Balance Creates Happiness

As is shown in the picture above, the student is struggling hard to balance his studies and hobbies.He wishes to concentrate on his studies, but meanwhile, he just can’t tear himself away fr om his favorite hobbies like football, computer games and music. In fact, he is not alone among us students in dealing with such a problem.

Hobbies are very important to a person, without which life wouldn’t be as colorful as it should be, but they also re quire time and devotion. As students, whose main task should be gaining knowledge, we must know which is the more important thing to do in different life periods. Otherwise in the future we would regret having spent too much time on them. So we can’t allow ourselves to be misled by our hobbies and should always put studies first. Only when we strike a balance between studies and hobbies can we truly live a happy life.

【范文点评】

文中围绕话题及试题要求组织语言，语言地道，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。

1. 从词汇及短语运用方面看，不少高级高级词汇及结构给文章增添闪光点，如：balance, concentrate on, meanwhile, surprisingly, tear himself away, require time and devotion, regret, strike a balance等。

2. 从句型运用方面看，文中复合句的正确运用能充分吸引评卷者的眼球。

Hobbies are very important to a person, without which life wouldn’t be a s colorful as it should be, but they also require time and devotion. 为主从复合句，but连接两个并列分句，在第一个分句中without which引导非限制性的定语从句，其先行词为person，定语从句中as it should be为比较状语从句。

As students, whose main task should be gaining knowledge, we must know which is the more important thing to do in different life periods.为主从复合句，句中whose引导非限制性的定语从句修饰先行词students，which引导名词性的定语从句作动词which的宾语。

Only when we strike a balance between studies and hobbies can we truly live a happy life.中Only修饰时间状语从句置于句首，主句中情态动词can放在主语前形成了倒装。

3. 文中过渡词、短语及结构(As is shown in the picture above, but meanwhile, In fact, As students, Otherwise, So, Only when等)让短文层次清楚、结构井然。

【佳句背诵】

1. If you can treat study as one of your hobbies, it will be more enjoyable.

2. Parents should take steps to help keep a sufficient balance between school and after-school activities for their children.

3. I played and watched movies but at the same time I made sure I devoted time to studies.

4. Hobbies bring many benefits that usually make them more than worth the time they require.

5. While school and work keep us busy, we also make time for our home life and other interests and activities.

6. Hobbies come in as many shapes and sizes as the people who enjoy them.

7. It’s not right for us students to let go of our interests and hobbies to meet the daily demands of life.

8. A hobby is like gold under the ground, it will not come to you unless you dig it out yourself.

【举一反三】

I. 完成空格(一空一词)。

1. 那时我有点急事要处理

I had something urgent ____ ____ ____ at that time.

2. 当时我轻易向他屈服了，到现在我一直后悔。

I simply gave in to him, and I ____ ____ it ever since.

3. 幸好我对学校作业还感兴趣，不然会疯的。

I'm lucky that I'm interested in school work, ____ ____ ____ ____.

4. 他能否专心学习并有所成就取决于他自己。

It was up to him to ____ ____ his studies and make something of himself.

5. 你得在睡眠和家庭作业之间找到一种平衡。

You have to ____ ____ ____ between sleep and homework.