2018年北京中考一模范文亮点表达汇总

2018年北京中考一模作文范文表达亮点汇总

西城一模

作文一（说明原因，给出建议）：1. as my target subjects.

2.They are chosen because I love them more than other subjects.（亮点：被动语态、比较级句型）

3.be attractive to sb

4.expand my interest in this subject

5.most importantly,

6.think independently （运用高级副词）

7.make great progress

作文二（遇见美）：1. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.

2.It is/ was as if（好像）+ 句子

3.setback n. 挫折

4.impressive adj. 令人印象深刻的

5.leave me a beautiful memory that I will never forget

东城一模

作文一（推荐参加毕业典礼的节目）：1. bring back our sweet memories 作文二（我爱我的班集体）：1. sign up for 报名参加

2.be busy doing sth、be busy with sth

3.make full preparations

pete against sb 与某人竞争

5.achieve the success

海淀一模：

作文一（祝贺信）：1. congratulate you on your wonderful performance

2.do a good job in sth、do well in sth

3.so+ 形容词/副词+that+句子：如此……以至于……

so that +句子：目的是……；所以……

4.speak fluently (高级副词)

5.feel/be proud of sb = take pride of sb

6.be surprised at sth

7.rich and meaningful contents

8.in order to do sth = so as to do sth 目的是……

9.It is + 形容词+to do sth.

作文二（自信）：1. Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do.

2.breathe deeply and relax myself

3.recall v. 回想起，记起

4.think highly of 高度评价

5.get much encouragement from

6.From then on 从那以后

7.To build/gain confidence

8.It is the most important that + 句子：最重要的是……

It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do.

9.make it = achieve success

朝阳一模

作文一（春游）；1. have a long-distance walking race from the school gate to the top of a hill

2.have prizes for beautiful pictures of the outing

作文二（My Dream Job）：1. It is so much fun doing sth. 做某事非常有趣。

3.Children are always creative and they surprise you all the time.

4.teach knowledge to my students

5.develop my communication skills

6.be able to do sth

石景山一模

作文一（自荐信）1. I think I am the right person because I have many strong points.

2.It’s great chance to widen my eyes.

3.It’s my honor to introduce our Chinese history and culture to foreign friends.

作文二（我最难忘的班级活动）：1. it was the first time for us to have a riding trip.

丰台一模

作文一（邀请信：英语读书会活动）1. have an English play

2.We strongly hope you will come and join us.

3.give us some precious advice on this activity

作文二（建设绿色校园）:1. take actions

2.not only ……but also……

3.collect the waste on the playground

4.It takes/ took/ will take sb + 时间+to do sth.

房山一模

作文一（邀请信：参加演讲比赛）1. topic

2.sign up by telephone or on the school website

3.prepare PPTs and printed paper for the teachers

4.finish your speech in 5 minutes

5.I wish you good luck.

作文二（My unforgettable journey）1. have a good / great / wonderful time = have fun = enjoy oneself

2.go boating/ swimming/ shopping/hiking/climbing/fishing/camping

/skiing/skating

3.eat seafood

4.The most exciting thing is to see the sunrise.

5.When the sun rose from the east,

6.They can be my best memories.

门头沟一模