高考英语百日训练之应用文写作(13)含答案详解

高考英语百日训练之应用文写作（13）含答案详解

【题文】

为了使同学们更加健康地成长,学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是张华,请用英语向校长写一封80词左右的建议信。所写内容必须包括表格中你对学校和老师的建议,并适当说明理由。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

要求：

(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

(2)必须包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；

(3)词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Dear Headmaster,

I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a be tter school life. Here are some of my suggestions.

_______________________________________________________________________________ __

_______________________________________________________________________________ __

______________________________________________________________________________ Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.

Yours

sincerely,

Zhang Hua

【答案】

Dear Headmaster,

I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.

First, I hope our school will open the library more often. Reading more books can help us open up our eyes to the outside world. Second, I think our school can organize more after-class activities. And I think we should be allowed to have longer vacations because we need more time to do things like volunteering.

As for our teachers, I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting. And if they can talk less but more clearly in class, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What’s more, I hope they will give us less homework and finish class on time.

Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Wei

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇图表类写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；为了使同学们更加健康地成长,学校决定向同学们征求建议。假如你是张华,请用英语向校长写一封80词左右的建议信。所写内容必须包括表格中你对学校和老师的建议,并适当说明理由。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be glad to（很高兴），more often（经常），after-class activities（课后活动）；as for（至于）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Reading more books can help us open up our eyes to the outside world.运用了动名词短语做主语结构；Reading more books can help us open up our eyes to the outside world.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【标题】江西省抚州市临川第一中学2019-2020学年高一上学期入学考试英语试题【结束】