议论文的概括

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Task-writing
How to write the summary of an arguementation
议论文的概括
读写任务概括段的 命题特点与要求

用自己的话用30个字左右 (26-38) “改写” 给出文章的主要内容,不能直接照抄原文 中的句子,也不能增加与原文无关的信息.
Usually the beginning of a summary is:
1.The passage mainly tells us that … (talks about …) 2. The writer / passage states (陈述)that… 3. The passage gives the view (给予观点)that …
4. From the passage we can know that….
论点 Let children learn to judge their own work. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. 论据…… 结论 Let the student do it himself. ⒁ Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem
8-12反面论据

⑧ But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. ⑨ They do it all for him ⑩ Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. ⑾ They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. ⑿ Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. ⒀ Let the student do it himself. ⒁ Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.

gives the view that we The passage_____________ should have children learn to judge their own work and the teacher should because ________________their mistakes________ stop correcting correct their own faults by they can________ themselves. (32 words)
议论文的阅读短文,要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材 料的观点。
议论文的分类: 1、论点 --- 论据 --- 结论 2、不同观点列举或分析利弊式 3、解决问题型议论文
Skill: 议论文概括三步法(转述): 论点+ 论据+ 结论
如何找论点、论据、(结论)?
论点:首段或尾段的首句或尾句,若在文
中或段落中,常有提示词however, but 论据:中间各段落首句 结论:尾段(有时会和论点相呼应)
Although big cities provide people 练习 论点 with many conveniences, they certainly have their own disadvantages. 论据 1 Traffic is the first and often most serious problem. The majority of people spend a great deal of time on their way to work or coming back from work. During the rush time, all the streets are jammed with packed buses and endless lines of bicycles and cars, and almost avoidable traffic accidents occur, resulting in broken limbs and traffic deaths.

Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. ⑾ They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. ⑿ Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. ⒀ Let the student do it himself. ⒁ Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.
如何找??

① Let children learn to judge their own work. ② A child learning to talk does not 1论点 learn by being corrected all the time. ③ If corrected too much, he will stop talking. ④ He notices a thousand times a day the 2-7 difference between his language and others’ 正面 language. ⑤ Bit by bit, he makes the right 论据 changes to make his language like other people’s. ⑥ In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. ⑦ They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes..
13-14 结论
论点:(1): Let children learn to judge
their own work. 正面论据: (2)(3)(4)(5)(6) (7)
反面论据: (8) (9) (10) (11) (12)
结 论:
(13) (源自文库4)
议论文的概括: 论点+ 论据+ 结论
论点+ 论据+ 结论
Exercise





Although big cities provide people with many conveniences, they certainly have their own disadvantages. Traffic is the first and often most serious problem. The majority of people spend a great deal of time on their way to work or coming back from work. During the rush time, all the streets are jammed with packed buses and endless lines of bicycles and cars, and almost avoidable traffic accidents occur, resulting in broken limbs and traffic deaths. Air pollution comes second. Factories and moving vehicles are constantly giving off smoke and harmful gases. There is no way to get fresh air except to go out of the city on weekends or holidays. If the weather is bad, you’ll find the whole city overcast with smog. As a result, pollution induced diseases are now a common occurrence. However, noise and violence are to be found in every big cit and the situation seems to get worse year by year . In short, life in big cities is rather unnatural and unhealthy. To me, it is silly of people to choose to live in big cities.

① Let children learn to judge their own work. ② A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time. ③ If corrected too much, he will stop talking. ④ He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others’ language. ⑤ Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other people’s. ⑥ In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. ⑦ They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. ⑧ But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. ⑨ They do it all for him.
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