商志考研英语写作笔记(2014打印版)

大作文

第一段

How enlightening and compelling the above drawing is! It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help thinking:_____. (这句自己加完整，从宏观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的)

______while_______.(这句从微观上具体说明一下

图画要描述的矛盾点，必须找到矛盾点，用到while 这个单词) Simple as it looks, its intended(或者用implied) meaning goes far deeper what on earth（究竟）does the drawer（作者）really aim to convey.

第二段

What the image above vividly mirrors（名词用做动词）goes far more than a simple image, instead, it carries（有）a thought provoking social phenomenon:____.（本文的主旨）There are upsetting (如文章不是讽刺性的，就把upsetting删除) parallels today in our contemporary community, and an acquaintance of mine may serve as a good example.______.(用一两句话来举例)Another telling example is my former colleague, who___.（另外一个例子，如果字数够就不用再举）

第三段：

Much can be done. To begin with the schools and the mass media should develop noble and worthy values and qualities among people, doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this worsening situation.（of this worsening situation自己可以换成主旨的句子，如果不换，这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的，就把worsening删除）What is more, the authorities （当局）should play a dominant role in taking nationwide actions to curb(如文章不是

讽刺性的，就把curb换成promote) such practices. In conclusion ,all the society should actively more sustained（持续）and concerted （一致）offorts. Although we still have a long way to go ,a promising start has begun, and a happy, healthy and harmonious （和谐）society may be not be far behind.

注意事项：

1不要写题目

2要看清楚图画是一副还是两副，单数还是复数

3看清楚是卡通还是普通图画

卡通cartoon 也可以用以下几个picture image drawing illustration

图画Photo 也可以用以下几个picture image photograph

以前学过的,重复下: Dear sir\madam,

Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter and I'm writing to present my

complaint\inquiry\apology concerning sth. that……There's an array of factors contributing to this. For one thing,……For another,……

There are a host of aspects I'll offer here……

I'd be most grateful if you can reply me at your earliest convenience and any

favorable considerations will be greatly appreciated.

Yours sincerely, Li Ming

2009商志作文模板

大作文（单号版）（讽刺类型）

What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above,……in contrast,…….What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey? Simple as the image is, the implications mirrored are apparently far-reaching. Initially, such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused wide- spread social concern. Nowhere in the history has the issue of……been talked so much as in our society today. In the second place, the painting reveals an upsetting story and similar events happened and happening are heard or reported in nearly all aspects in our life. Additionally, the painter intends to convince us that a package deal of programs should be initiated to reverse the grim situation---launching a nationwide education campaign, setting up relevant laws and regulations, and the list goes on.

To conclude, it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases. And it is imperative actions be taken to curb such practices. There is reason to believe that as long as all the society, the authorities and the mass media and individuals involved, make concerted effort to strive hard, such upsetting stories will ultimately terminated or at least reduced.

如果是多个漫画，要改成复数。

如果是非讽刺的，第2段里的Additionally,到后面都删除，改成Let's come to an example

concerning an acquaintance of mine, which serves well as a good example to the point……

第3段的curb改为ensure

最后一句such upsetting……全删除，改为we can maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious

society as we all wish.