英语写作指导课件
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Body: （正文） the ways to introduce or recommend yourself: 1) show your interest and willingness 2) show your qualification，competence (ability) or strengths 3) show your confidence and appreciation C) closing（结束语）: express your wish
Ｂ）More importantly, By the way
Ｃ）I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students about the custom in your country.
Thus I’m so grateful to you for what you’ve done when I live in UK.
Ｅ）sth make it + adj. /n. for sb to do You are expected to
Ｄ）Britain – in your country
Ｆ）happy and satisfied your help and kindness beautiful scenery and friendly people
期待回信的句型模板： （1）I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. （2）I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest
convenience. （3）Your attention to my application would be highly
By the way, two photos taken with you are attached to the letter, which, I am firmly sure, will remind you of the happy time we spent together.
You are expected to come to China soon.
Ｇ）which, I am firmly sure, will
Ｈ）have a better understanding of
remind you…
remind you of
Keys 1- C 2 - F 3 - D 4 - G 5 – A 6 - E 7 - H 8 - B
STEP 5 GRAMMAR CORRECTION based on students’ writing
I would appreciate it if……
The training course I took makes it easy for me to work as an English broadcaster.
7. 短语优先原则； I believe that = I hold the belief that 8. 语篇连接词的巧用； moreover 9. 运用不同句式的表达；
STEP 3 [实例2]
假定你是李华， 暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在
房东Linda家中， 回国后给房东写一信表示感谢， 要点如下：
1、安全抵家
2、回顾英国游学体会
3、感谢房东的帮助
4、附寄两张合影
5、表达愿望
注意：1、词数100左右。
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
STEP 4 写作策略： （关于感谢信的作文模板）
Letter of thanks
Beginning (开头) to report your safety/ present situation Body: （正文） 1) express your feeling and benefit 2) express your gratitude 3) inform other things C) closing（结束语）: express your wish
• To write a composition in the limited time
STEP 1 写作策略（关于自荐、应聘、竞选类的作文模板）
Letter of application
Beginning(开头) : to introduce yourself briefly and the reasons to write this letter.
put……into practice. 6. I am good at …… 7. I hold the belief that…… 8. I would appreciate it if…….
Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m Li hua in Class 8, grade 3. From the notice put up on the wall in our school, I have learned that our school radio station needs an English broadcaster. Here I was writing to you to recommend myself.
课堂活动2：对号入座（将范文中的英文表达Ａ－Ｈ句与写作技巧１－８点匹配）
Writing Skills 1. 延伸法； 2. 叠加法； 3. 替代法(同义词)； 4. 添词法；5. VING/ PP/ TO DO做
定语、状语； 6. 句型的巧用 7. 短语优先原则； 8. 语篇连接词的巧用；
Ａ）taken with you Looking back to
So I hold the belief that I am quite suitable for the post. I would appreciate it if you give me the chance to work for our radio station.
Look forward to your replay soon.
Writing Skills – to add more details
1. 延伸法； (various clauses)
I have attended the course about the skills in broadcasting where I have received some professional training in the five past five years.
I take interest in broadcasting and am willing to work as a volunteer program host. Moreover, the training course I took makes it easy for me to work as an English broadcaster./ I have attended the course about the skills in broadcasting and taken some professional training in the past five years. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice/ I am eager to have the opportunity to work as a broadcaster so that I can apply what I learned to practice. I am particularly good at spoken English.
I am (particularly ) good at spoken English. 5. VING/ PP/ TO DO做定语、状语；
From the notice put up on the wall in our school 6. 句型的巧用；（sth make it + adj. /n. for sb to do sth ）
2. 叠加法； （and， as well as）
I take interest in broadcasting and am willing to work as a volunteer program host.
3. 同义词替代法；
Have the opportunity to do; give me the chance to do 4. 添词法；
I would like to put what I have learned into practice
= I am eager to have the opportunity to work as a broadcaster so that I can apply what I learned to practice
Dear Linda,
I’ve come back home safely. Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot. I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students (about the custom in your country). More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there. Thus I’m so grateful to you.
appreciated.
STEP 2 [实例1] 假如你是李华，你从学校的布 告栏(notice board)中看到通知，学校广播站打 算招一位英语播音员，请你根据下列要点，写封 自荐信，介绍自己。
要点：1．写信原因； 2．受过广播方面的专业培训，擅长英语； 3．希望获得该职位。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语和结语已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam， I am Li Hua, a student in Class 8,Grade 3.____
Teaching objectives
• To learn the templates of two kinds of letters and some strategies of how to add more details
• To do the grammar correction based on a student’s writing
I'm looking forward to your earபைடு நூலகம்y reply.
课堂活动 1： brainstorming and discussing 1．写信原因—
从学校的布告栏中看到通知，学校广播站打算招一位英语播音员； 2．受过广播方面的专业培训，擅长英语； 3．希望获得该职位。 1. From the notice board ….., I have learned that …… 2. Here I was writing to you……. 3. I take interest in ……..and ……. 4. Moreover, the training course …… Or: I have attended the course about…… 5. Now I would like to …… Or I am eager to …… so that…… I can…… apply……to /
Ｂ）More importantly, By the way
Ｃ）I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students about the custom in your country.
Thus I’m so grateful to you for what you’ve done when I live in UK.
Ｅ）sth make it + adj. /n. for sb to do You are expected to
Ｄ）Britain – in your country
Ｆ）happy and satisfied your help and kindness beautiful scenery and friendly people
期待回信的句型模板： （1）I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. （2）I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest
convenience. （3）Your attention to my application would be highly
By the way, two photos taken with you are attached to the letter, which, I am firmly sure, will remind you of the happy time we spent together.
You are expected to come to China soon.
Ｇ）which, I am firmly sure, will
Ｈ）have a better understanding of
remind you…
remind you of
Keys 1- C 2 - F 3 - D 4 - G 5 – A 6 - E 7 - H 8 - B
STEP 5 GRAMMAR CORRECTION based on students’ writing
I would appreciate it if……
The training course I took makes it easy for me to work as an English broadcaster.
7. 短语优先原则； I believe that = I hold the belief that 8. 语篇连接词的巧用； moreover 9. 运用不同句式的表达；
STEP 3 [实例2]
假定你是李华， 暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在
房东Linda家中， 回国后给房东写一信表示感谢， 要点如下：
1、安全抵家
2、回顾英国游学体会
3、感谢房东的帮助
4、附寄两张合影
5、表达愿望
注意：1、词数100左右。
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
STEP 4 写作策略： （关于感谢信的作文模板）
Letter of thanks
Beginning (开头) to report your safety/ present situation Body: （正文） 1) express your feeling and benefit 2) express your gratitude 3) inform other things C) closing（结束语）: express your wish
• To write a composition in the limited time
STEP 1 写作策略（关于自荐、应聘、竞选类的作文模板）
Letter of application
Beginning(开头) : to introduce yourself briefly and the reasons to write this letter.
put……into practice. 6. I am good at …… 7. I hold the belief that…… 8. I would appreciate it if…….
Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m Li hua in Class 8, grade 3. From the notice put up on the wall in our school, I have learned that our school radio station needs an English broadcaster. Here I was writing to you to recommend myself.
课堂活动2：对号入座（将范文中的英文表达Ａ－Ｈ句与写作技巧１－８点匹配）
Writing Skills 1. 延伸法； 2. 叠加法； 3. 替代法(同义词)； 4. 添词法；5. VING/ PP/ TO DO做
定语、状语； 6. 句型的巧用 7. 短语优先原则； 8. 语篇连接词的巧用；
Ａ）taken with you Looking back to
So I hold the belief that I am quite suitable for the post. I would appreciate it if you give me the chance to work for our radio station.
Look forward to your replay soon.
Writing Skills – to add more details
1. 延伸法； (various clauses)
I have attended the course about the skills in broadcasting where I have received some professional training in the five past five years.
I take interest in broadcasting and am willing to work as a volunteer program host. Moreover, the training course I took makes it easy for me to work as an English broadcaster./ I have attended the course about the skills in broadcasting and taken some professional training in the past five years. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice/ I am eager to have the opportunity to work as a broadcaster so that I can apply what I learned to practice. I am particularly good at spoken English.
I am (particularly ) good at spoken English. 5. VING/ PP/ TO DO做定语、状语；
From the notice put up on the wall in our school 6. 句型的巧用；（sth make it + adj. /n. for sb to do sth ）
2. 叠加法； （and， as well as）
I take interest in broadcasting and am willing to work as a volunteer program host.
3. 同义词替代法；
Have the opportunity to do; give me the chance to do 4. 添词法；
I would like to put what I have learned into practice
= I am eager to have the opportunity to work as a broadcaster so that I can apply what I learned to practice
Dear Linda,
I’ve come back home safely. Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot. I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students (about the custom in your country). More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there. Thus I’m so grateful to you.
appreciated.
STEP 2 [实例1] 假如你是李华，你从学校的布 告栏(notice board)中看到通知，学校广播站打 算招一位英语播音员，请你根据下列要点，写封 自荐信，介绍自己。
要点：1．写信原因； 2．受过广播方面的专业培训，擅长英语； 3．希望获得该职位。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语和结语已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam， I am Li Hua, a student in Class 8,Grade 3.____
Teaching objectives
• To learn the templates of two kinds of letters and some strategies of how to add more details
• To do the grammar correction based on a student’s writing
I'm looking forward to your earபைடு நூலகம்y reply.
课堂活动 1： brainstorming and discussing 1．写信原因—
从学校的布告栏中看到通知，学校广播站打算招一位英语播音员； 2．受过广播方面的专业培训，擅长英语； 3．希望获得该职位。 1. From the notice board ….., I have learned that …… 2. Here I was writing to you……. 3. I take interest in ……..and ……. 4. Moreover, the training course …… Or: I have attended the course about…… 5. Now I would like to …… Or I am eager to …… so that…… I can…… apply……to /