【高中英语写作指导】高中英语作文--道歉信解析

10. 更加小心
_b_e__m_o__re__c_a_r_e_f_u_l______
11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误
ma_k__e_s_u_c_h__a__s_tu__p_i_d_m__i_s_ta_ke 12. 应当受到责备 b__e_t_o__b_l_a_m__e___________
13. 承担责任 be responsible for/shoulder
carelessness
a thing will never happen again. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
诵读经典范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the
compensation(赔偿) for the missed book. I apologize again for any inconveniences or
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道歉的表达：
1. I feel sorry for my failureptiock…you up at the airport
2. I am awfully sorry that I cannot …
3. I am very sorry for
attend your party.
my rudeness/thoughtlessness /
my fault. 5. I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your
wishes.
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第四段：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望 以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。
1. Please accept my most sincere apology again. 2. I promise that I will never make such a stupid
will never happen again.
习作修改(做短文改错) Dear Sir/Madam,
I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.
borrowed
常用语块
1.因某事向某人道歉apologize to sb. for sth. / make a_n_a_p__o_lo_g_y__to__s_b_. _fo_r__st_h_.
2. 向……说对不起 _s_a_y__s_o_r_r_y_t_o_________ 3. 接受我的道歉 _a_c_c_e_p__t_m__y_a__p_o_l_o_g_y__ 4. 为某事原谅某人 _f_o_r_g_iv__e_s_b_._f_o_r__s_th__. __ 5. 并非故意做某事 h_a_v_e__n_o__in__te_n__ti_o_n__t_o_d__o sth.
第二段：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气 要诚恳。 1. Now let me explain what happened to me that day. 2. I had intended to … 3. I am afraid what I have done has caused much
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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习作欣赏
Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully (很;糟糕地)sorry to tell you that I have
lost the book I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found.
I promise to pay for the lost of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿) for the missed book.
写作三步曲
Step 1：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)
动作是什么时候发生的？ (when)
样题分析 第一人称 一封道歉信 说理的逻辑性
一般现在时
写信的一般要求
总结提升
1.内容要简单
对于题中所给的内容： 全面
inconvenience to you. 4. I am to blame for this silly mistake. 5.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 6.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know
mistake again. 3. I assure you that it will never happen again. 4.I sincerely hope you can understand my
situation/think in my position and accept my apologies. 5.Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.
道歉信写作4步走
Biblioteka Baidu对于自己发挥的内容：
简单
写熟悉的，会写的！ 2.结构要清晰
4.再次致歉望理解
开头段： 中间段： 造句能力 +高分套话
3.提出补救办法
结尾段: 3.语言要精彩：
2.说明具体原因
4.注意内容之间的连接 1.表示歉意
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Basic structure and expressions
第一段:简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意， 希望得到对方的谅解。
The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read them every evening and intend to finish it
it
the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I
when
on
afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿) for the missed book.
missing
I apologize again for any inconveniences or
inconvenience
trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such
A Letter of Apology
道歉信文体概述（Letter of apology) 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，
给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔 礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以 下三部分内容： 1. 开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。 2. 说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。 3. 再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语 言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。
came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the lost of the book.
loss
I know money cannot cover the loss and I am∧ blame. I will go to your place in Thursday to
bad manners.
4. I am writing to express my sincere apology
for my …
5. I regret to inform you that I am unable to …
6. I feel guilty for what I have done to you. 10
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Step 3：写作
道歉信模板一 Dear Bob,
I am truly sorry that _________（道歉的原 因）.
The reason is that_________（介绍的原 因）.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again.
习作欣赏
Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the
6. 弥补；赔偿
_m__a_k_e__u_p__fo_r__________
7. 赔偿；偿还
p__a_y_f_o_r__/_c_o_m__p_e_n__sa__te__for
8. 给你带来不便 _c_a_u_s_e__y_o_u__in_c_o__n_v_e_n_i_e_nce
9. 给你带来许多麻烦 _c_a_u_s_e__y_o_u__m__u_c_h__t_r_o_u_ble
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the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found.
what happened.
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第三段：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法， 希望能弥补过失，消除误会。 1. In order to remove our misunderstanding, I would
like to invite .. 2. To make up for my fault, I will…… 3. To compensate for your loss, I decide to .. 4. I wish you could give me a chance to make up for
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14. 难以接受的后果
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15. 下不为例
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