中考作文范文赏析

中考记叙文

写人记叙文：

1.写作指导写人时，首先要确定文章的中心，然后再选择典

型事件来写。

2.写作注意要点 1. 角度要新 2. 角度要小

3. 角度要集中

4. 角度要典型

3. 得分策略

叙事记叙文：

1.写作指导叙事记叙文一般是开门见山，直接交代时间、地

点、人物、事件等，然后详细叙述事件发展的原因、

过程和结果等。

注意：一个事件的组成包括许多细节，要选择与作者

意图相关的主要材料。

2.写作注意要点：1. 主题要明确 2. 勿漏五要素

3. 合理运用顺叙、倒叙和插叙等记叙方法

4. 注意人称、数以及时态的一致性和连贯性

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2013中考真题北京卷

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

上学期间，学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆，如教室、阅览室、

操场等。某英文报纸正以”My Favourite Place at School”为题征文，请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方，并请说明原因。

提示词语：classroom, reading-room, playing ground, bright, quiet, large, help, improve

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My Favorite Place at School

I find the library to be the best place in school. I like the quiet atmosphere in the library, which makes me deeply absorbed in my study .There are a great number of books there that I’m interested in. I usually sit there quietly, enjoying my books with a piece of light music. Besides, there are reference books in the library which provide ready guidance to help me solve my problems.

The library is really a wonderful place to study school work and to expand my knowledge. Sometimes, I can even make new friends who loves reading too.

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My Favorite Place at School

My favorite place in school is the fantastic library from which I borrow books. In a quiet reading room, I can better

concentrate and study more effectively. Besides, there are all kinds of books, magazines and newspapers in a library which provide us with a great deal of useful knowledge. When we want to borrow books, the library is open every afternoon, I love reading, and I really enjoy it. It is a part of my life. It’s a good place to read books. The library helps me a lot with my study.

标准范文

My Favorite Place at School

Our school has a lot of places students like to hang out, such as playground, art room and computer room etc. My favorite place is library. In library, people know how to behave more politely, and the bright reading room is a good place for you to read plenty of novels and study your own subjects, I used to hang out in library after school. It is a good place for you to meet some friends who have something in common and we can share experience on study or other subjects. It’s really good to have such a quiet place!

2013中考真题天津卷

假定上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。

要点提示：

1.邻桌年轻人大声说笑、吸烟。

2.你请他们不要那样做。

3.他们不听，反而嘲笑你。

4.你认为：①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。

②年轻人是天津的未来，应该……

参考词汇：嘲笑 laugh at

要求：

（1）词数：80~100个。

（2）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Last Saturday evening，all my family had dinner in a restaurant________

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Last Saturday evening，all my family had dinner in a restaurant. When we were enjoying the delicious food, a group of young men who were beside our table bothered us. They were talking loudly and smoking, The noise was so loud that I could not bear it. So I decided to stop them. To my surprise, however, they not only refused to listen to me but also laugh at me. Personlly, it’s wrong to do so in public. Besides,young people are the future of Tianjin. We are expected to be polite and try our best to make it more beautiful.

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