高考英语作文达标常见训练方法课件.ppt

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高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】

高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
二、Examing the topic (审题)
审题,先审内容:1.列提纲,主要是选一个主题 进行分析 2.看字数,要求字数的20左右。 然后审时态:确定主要时态,建议不超过2中,时态越 多,越容易出错。 再审人称:写作时,不要搞混人称。 最后审题材:看是议论文,书信,还是图标类作文, 每种题材有一定的书写格式。
1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主 要内容,写了一些无关内 容。3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有 限。4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内 容的理解。5.较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。 6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
高考英语作文提分策略 课件 35张PPT【优秀课件】
求助信开头:I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor./I have no choice but to turn to your help. 咨询信开头:I'm writing to ask your some relevant questions. 告知信开头:I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details.
罗列要点,在句子之间加上连接词 结尾段:Hopefully,these suggestions would be helpful for you.If there's anything else I can do for you,please let me know.

高考英语高分写作指导(81张PPT)

高考英语高分写作指导(81张PPT)
英 语 书 面 表 达 指 导
Beautify your Composition
高考作文的华丽变身
遇遇 难易 心心 不更 慌细 ,。
1.所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活, 实际具有时代特点,紧扣与学生相关的 社会热点及学生的生活与学习。
2.词数要求100,既要求表 达事实信息,又要陈述个人观点,对考 生思维和表达能力的要求提高了。
1) Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first
prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. (用同位语改写)
,
, won the first prize in Men’s 110
Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级)
When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般)
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)
I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. (一般)
2、地道原则
[原文]Through traveling, I
learned a lot of knowledge. [修正]Through traveling, I gained/obtained a lot of
knowledge.
3、避免重复原则
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching television. [修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)

高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)

有效地使 用了语句 间的连接 成分
上下文的连贯; 语言的得体性
语言地道, 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面, 评分时,应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
4、词数少于100和多于 140的,从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差,以至影 响交际,将分数降低一 个档次。
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help

高考英语写作的训练方法精品PPT课件

高考英语写作的训练方法精品PPT课件

/silly /clever /smart /wise
/bright / diligent /intelligent
/lazy /hard working, etc.
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二, 高考英语书面表达高分策略: 从遣词,造句,谋篇三个方面分析。
2. 造句的原则:
常见描述人物性格,外貌和身体状况等的词语 /naughty /healthy
/be in good or poor condition
/fine/ well /strong-tempered
/bad-tempered /near-sighted
/far-sighted /foolish /stupid
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二, 高考英语书面表达高分策略: 从遣词,造句,谋篇三个方面分析。
1. 遣词的原则:使用高等级词汇及短语
介绍人物的影响及人们对人的评价:
1. He became famous for his new theory.
2. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
英语基本句型及造句:
主语+系动词+形容词
• Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth.
• He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed.
• Your explanation so, be fond of… hate,
dislike, be tired of, lose interest in…

高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)

高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)

二、忌次序混乱,连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后,不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容,却不能合 理地组织所给的材料,东一句、西一句,写得支离破碎, 文理不通,让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点, 在这个过程中,要考虑一下先写什么,后写什么,句与句 之间,不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子,如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等,使文章过渡自然、流畅,做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意:不能不 用,且不能少 用,但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西,很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方,因此,在答完卷时,至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查:(1)对照题目要求,看全部要点是 否都已包括进去,有无遗漏或误解;(2)文体格 式是否正确规范;(3)词语使用是否合适、正确, 有无语法与用词上的错误, 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯;(4)单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误, 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话,对书面表达应尽量做到:不跑题,不 漏点,语言精简合习惯,灵活表达要规范,书法 整齐词有限。

高考英语写作指导课课件(69张PPT)

高考英语写作指导课课件(69张PPT)

They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
have studied
written
English very well.
is
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!

高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】

高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】

高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT) 【优秀 课件】
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁,书写清楚 2、 构思简单,少犯错误 3、 中心突出,层次分明 4、 重在变化,宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下: 第一段:现象背景介绍+引出话题(公众观
点+大概理由); 第二段:关于话题的相关因素(影响,作
用,好处,危害或原因等); 第三段:陈述自己观点或预期未来。
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.

高考英语训练专题写作训练图表式作文写作指导带课件

高考英语训练专题写作训练图表式作文写作指导带课件

高考英语训练专题——写作训练:图表式作文写作指导(带课件)《今年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试山东卷考试说明-英语》:第四部分书面表达第二节:写作,满分30分。

要求考生根据题目的提示(包括情景、图画、图表、提纲等)和要求,用英语写一篇120-150个单词的短文。

写作步骤1.仔细审题,把握主旨2.列出提纲,合理布局3.注重联系,适当发挥4.连词成句,连句成篇高考作文的核心任务:在15秒内取悦阅卷老师优秀高考作文应具备的六个基本特征:1.层次不乱2.句式多变3.亮点若干4.巧妙串联5.蠢错不犯6.整洁卷面命题特点纵观近年来全国各地的高考试题及模拟试题,图表类作文是写作部分的常见题型之一,体裁多为议论文和说明文。

议论文通常要求考生通过分析图表中的数据,就图表中所反映的问题阐述自己的观点,并得出自己的结论(如北京卷及湖北卷);说明类作文要求考生通过图表所列举的变化对比及产品介绍等,对图表进行描述(如浙江卷)。

图表式作文的几种形式:一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。

二是以图形形式:A 表示数据变化的曲线图;B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的条形图;C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图。

一、写作例题请根据下列图表及文字说明用英语写一篇短文,内容应包括中美高中生零花钱的主要来源、比例、差异及原因,并发表自己的观点和看法。

)1)美国高中生比中国高中生能获得更多的获得奖学金或打零工的机会。

_________________________________________________________________________________________ 2)美国高中生没有中国高中生那么依赖父母。

_________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 3:____________________________________________________________________________________ 3.选用恰当的连接词及过渡句,以使文章更有连贯性和逻辑性。

高考英语写作技巧方法.ppt

高考英语写作技巧方法.ppt
基础写作训练
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
• A. 如何处理或整理信息?
• 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, especially to the older people….
• 错误诊断: ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题,不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。
• I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
中的老人。
• John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.
The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists,especially to the older people.
• 5.建议应该多提供货真价实的购物场所。 • I suggest you can offer more and more

如何提高高考英语写作水平PPT课件( 36页)

如何提高高考英语写作水平PPT课件( 36页)

逻辑角度
⑴排序关系 ⑵并列关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺递进关系
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least
and; too; as well as; along with; together with
提高句子档次的小结:
1. 用高级结构和词汇 2. 用分词短语合并句子
用介词短语合并句子 用独立主格结构合并句子 用连接词连接句子 3. 用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句 4. 用不同结构和词汇 5. 合适的过渡性词汇
Improve this composition, try!
Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.
4.适当使用过渡性语句 如:The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. All roads lead to Rome. As the result/survey shows. We can draw an conclusion.等
Television is not only a convenient source of entertainment, but also a comparatively cheap one. But_e_v_e_r_y_c_o_i_n_h_a_s__tw__o_s_id_e_s___, television also has disadvantages, such as its effects on young people.
• 3. The flat is in a building on Beijing Road. It is not far from our School.

高考英语作文写作指导 PPT课件(共17张)

高考英语作文写作指导 PPT课件(共17张)

书面表达五步法
• Step1:审题 • Step2.抓要点 • step3.写草稿 • Step4.修改、整合 • Step5.抄写
• 第二节 写作(满分25分) • 假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国 朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假 里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。 请根据以下要点给他回封邮件: • 1.未及时回信的原因; • 2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志 愿者等)。 • 注意:1. 词数120-150;2. 可适当增加 细节,以使行文连贯。
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • •、聪明的人有长的耳朵和短的舌头。 ——弗莱格 2、重复是学习之母。 ——狄慈根 3、当你还不能对自己说今天学到了什么东西时,你就不要去睡觉。 ——利希顿堡 4、人天天都学到一点东西,而往往所学到的是发现昨日学到的是错的。 ——B.V 5、学到很多东西的诀窍,就是一下子不要学很多。 ——洛 克 6、学问是异常珍贵的东西,从任何源泉吸收都不可耻。 ——阿卜· 日· 法拉兹 7、学习是劳动,是充满思想的劳动。 ——乌申斯基 8、聪明出于勤奋,天才在于积累 --华罗庚 9、好学而不勤问非真好学者。 10、书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。 11、人的大脑和肢体一样,多用则灵,不用则废 -茅以升 12、你想成为幸福的人吗?但愿你首先学会吃得起苦 --屠格涅夫 13、成功=艰苦劳动+正确方法+少说空话 --爱因斯坦 14、不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹 -《真心英雄》 15、只有登上山顶,才能看到那边的风光。 16只会幻想而不行动的人,永远也体会不到收获果实时的喜悦。 17、勤奋是你生命的密码,能译出你一部壮丽的史诗。 18.暗自伤心,不如立即行动. 19.挫折时,要像大树一样,被砍了,还能再长;也要像杂草一样,虽让人践踏,但还能勇敢地活下去. 20.随随便便浪费的时间,再也不能赢回来. 21.成功是优点的发挥,失败,是缺点的积累.

高考英语作文高分写作技法(24页PPT)

高考英语作文高分写作技法(24页PPT)
home. • D、关于
E、处理, Settle, solve, deal with, cope with, handle,
do…with, manage..with, encounter F、忍受 Stand, bear, tolerate, put up with, suffer, endure G、喜欢 Care for I don’t care for baseball. Be fond of She is fond of playing the piano. Be crazy about Many football fans are crazy about
• (3)修饰语错位

I believe I can do it well and I will better know the
world outside the campus.
3、时态误用
• 对各种时态的概念不清
• 时间立足点把握不准
• 母语干扰 汉语无时态变化,学生大脑中缺乏时态概念
• 考场时间不够,来不及顾及时态、语态
6、词性误用 (1)将不及物当成及物Come the city, return the place
(2)形容词用成及物动词Please present on time. (3)可数用成不可数A good news, many informations
(4)形容词副词混用In the recently years, study hardly (5)将介词用成动词The road through the city.
闪光句式,就是用一些比较出彩的句式,比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中,运用到了非谓

高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料

高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料

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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
2
How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— (事例)
结论
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典型模板
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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转折
but yet while whereas when
It never rains but it pours.
I had just fallen asleep when someone knocked at the door. John plays basketball well, yet his favorite sport is badminton.
Are students growing interested in the time-consuming subject, English?
并列复合句梳理
关系 联合
连词
and not only-but also neither nor
举例
Neither does he work hard, nor does his brother. Give him an inch and he will take a mile. Not only is he himself interested in the subject, but also his students began to show interest in it.
A man that doeshieve much.
that which who whom whose He wears the same coat as I like. It is the way that
when why where
he speaks English that is similar to a native’s.
高考英语作文达标 常见句法整合训练
基本句型回顾
种类 主谓 主谓宾
特征 谓语vi. 谓语vt.
主谓宾宾 双宾
主谓宾补 补充
主系表
be remain prove taste
举例
Walking every day worked eventually.
Which childhood friend did you call on recently? To solve the matter, I’ve promised a flexible way to them. We didn’t find him standing outside the classroom alone.
4.《试题写作要求》内容充实 结构完整 详略得当 语意连贯
Words Phrases Sentences
Sentences
英语写作的核心是(写好句子)。
知彼知己 百试不爽
写好句子(造句)的办法 Solutions to Sentences
Sentence Solutions to the Assessment Criteria for NMET Writing
选择 or either
otherwise
Either you didn’t understand this problem, or you were not careful enough.
Be careful, otherwise/or you will break your neck.
因果 for so
Welcome to my class
Assessment Criteria for NMET Writing
1.《课标写作要求》要点完备 语意连贯 结构完整 主题突出 措辞适当 文体恰当
2.《大纲写作要求》准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的 句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。
3.《说明写作要求》覆盖所有写作要点,陈述充分; 应用不同语法结构和词汇;语法结构和词汇方面 有个别错误,主要表现在较复杂语法结构或常用 词汇层面;语句间有效使用连接成分, 全文结构紧凑;达到了预期的写作目的。
as that
The car whose make is Benz is in the possession of a teacher.
in case although unless where Whether they come here or we go there, our discussion topic
We didn’t find him standing outside the classroom alone.
句子结构对比 简单句不简短复合句不繁长
类别 简单 结构
并列 结构
主从
结构
举例
词数
To solve the matter, I’ve promised a flexible way to them.
11
Are students growing interested in the time-consuming subject, English? 9
as if because what which championship encouraged us all greatly.
who whom whose whatever It doesn’t count whether they come here or we go there.
wherever however whenever My question is whose car we will borrow for our picnic.
We stayed at home, for it was raining. It was cold, so we decided to stay at home.
主从复合句整理
种类
连词
举例
N. 从句
Adj 从句
Adv. 从句
that whether/if as though
The news that our women volleyball team had won the
no matter wh when as so that
will remain unchanged.
because than the moment Where there is a will, there is a way.
whether-or if immediately Clever boy as he is, he can’t solve the problem.
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