作文范文之雅思作文怎么算分

雅思作文怎么算分

【篇一：如何达到雅思大作文四点评分标准】

如何达到雅思大作文四点评分标准

考官范文一直以来都被认为是考生学习提高雅思作文的现成材料。虽然，对于绝大多数考生来说，我们几乎不可能达到考官九分范文

的高度，但范文中的一些高光点的确能够帮助我们了解雅思作文评

分标准，从而能更有针对性地去提高我们的写作水平。

本篇雅思培训，文都国际教育就为大家一起来分析一篇剑10中的考官范文，来看看考官是如何在各个评分点上都几乎完美地完成9分高度的文章的。

it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.

to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

to some extent the question depends on the age of the child. to punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behavior and discouraged from bad. this kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents.

to help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behavior. after that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones-an outcome which may well result in

the child starting to bully others. nor should the punishment

be in any way cruel.

rather, teachers and parents can use a variety of methods to discipline their young charges, such as

detention, withdrawal of privileges, and time-out. making the punishment fit the crime is a useful notion. which would see children being made to pick up rubbish they have dropped, clean up graffiti they have drawn, or

apologise to someone they have hurt. in these ways responsibility is developed in the child, which leads to much better future behavior than does punishment.

1. task response

写作任务回应这一点要求考生：1). 回应各部分写作内容;2). 在写作

中始终呈现一个清晰的观点;3). 呈现发展主要论点并进行论证，避免

一概而论的倾向性或缺乏重点。

这篇文章题目涉及两个问题：1). 在多大程度上你赞同或反对对小孩

子做惩罚是有必要的。2). 家长和老师应该用什么方式去惩罚孩子。

很显然在范文的body paragraph的前两段，作者完成了个问题，

而在最后一段讨论了第二个问题，因此充分完成了各项写作内容。

其次，作者在开头段最末写到therefore i have to disagree

almost entirely with the given statement. 这样在段就直接表明了

自己的立场。很多考生在写雅思作文时没有开门见山表达自己观点

的习惯，而事实上首段即表明立场更符合西方传统学术性写作的思

维习惯，也更容易被考官接受。而且只有你在开头段给出明确观点，考官才有依据考察你接来下的文章有没有和你给出的观点相一致。

我们接着看范文是如何给出论点并具体论证的。在第二段一开头作

者就简洁明了地给出本段中心观点to some extent the question depends on the age of the child. 惩罚和否取决于孩子的年龄。接

下来的三句话里，作者分别用两个不同的分论点来论证之前的那句