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大作文

注意：1字数可以多，但不能少，尽量多一点。

2分一二三段，不要写太大，也不要太小，最好写2/3大

3写错的话改的话，最好不要涂，字尽量写好一点

4标题最好不要写，写错扣分。注意，小作文更烦模板。

5.考场上尽量减少自己写的次数，多用老师的。老师反感的时比较太常见模板

回去之后狂背，背完后默写。一定要背熟！！！

6，第一段漫画描写部分，都是自己写的，不需要描写太细节话，字数不要太多，如果某个词不会用，换个词替换。语言要简单，少出错。阅卷权重方面不是特别重要15%左右评分。

一．2010年作文18分样卷

In the picture above is a large hot pot .(此处用了倒装，是个加分点there stands a large huoguo ,or hot pot).But different from the traditional Chinese hot pot(but unlike 表示不同)，in which you see beef or lamb ,luncheon meat(午餐肉)，mushrooms ,and a variety(diversity) of vegetables,in this hot pot are various “culture foodstuffs”of both Chinese and foreign origins:Cononfucius,Aristotle,andShakespeare;Taoism,Greek mythology,etc..(不扣分)

What lies behind the picture(cartoon),or “buried” in the hot pot ,is all too clear:for the Chinese culture now and the future (the days to come),materials of both Chinese and foreign (overseas)features are indispensable(something that we can not do without)考试时，短语优先，还可以增加字数。

We are living in an age(era) when economic globalization is not only but also(also可以省略) seen and felt in the reality of our daily life.No nation or country can maintain its wellbeing(指好的)

by living on and by itself .The history of China in the second last half of the 20th century has provided(the second half of the 20th century has witnessed) a whole pack of vivid and convincing experiences, both of successes and failures , in that consideration. Only from the various and varied sources of the other nations, together(coupled) with our own,can we obtain sufficient nutrients for a Chinese culture worth her pride and her leadership in the present and the future world.

A fairly compelling picture jumps(leaps) off the page when I cast a glance over(take a look at) the test paper. As is graphically depicted in the above drawing,( 图片内容注意:漫画中经常有人，人的表达要注意a young adult/an old folk/a middle-aged man/a lady in her late years / )

It is abundantly clear that the creator of this picture strives to highlight(stress) the supreme importance of ( 模板部分optimism/being optimistic )，high on the list of traditional virtues glorified by our ancient philosophers(thinkers).

Unquestionably , ( 内容) matters much to achieveing (winning/scoring/tasting) success. Stated in another way ,one stands a remote chance of staying ahead without this desirable quality. Consider Michael Jordan a legendary basketball player (who is

now) recognized as a most influential figure in NBA history.His outstanding(stunning) success stems in large part from his relentless emphasis on ( 主题词).And he also once was quoted as saying that (主题词)powers and accelerates （加速）one‟s success. Indeed ,a wealth of top achievers (top performers/low achievers/underperformers) take(harbor) the view that it is this very spirit that empowers them to stay well(far/way) ahead of average folks.

On my personal level ,for people in the hope of making some achievements in her or his life journey,(主题词) is one of the most basic standards of behavior .It is no exaggeration to say that placing a high priority(value) on cultivating(fostering/nurturing) this spirit will yield (generate/substantial ) returns (rewards). I am hopefully looking to a future in which (主题词)permeates(penetrates into )every corner of life.

The picture impresses me with its striking(vivid/unforgettable) illustration of ( 主题漫画内容)

Undoubtedly (It is beyond doubt that), the picture is just aimed at enlightening us as to the significance of (主题词),which is firmly anchored in our traditional values . It is virtually impossible to imagine how an individual lacking in (主题词) succeeds in his