科普版六年级下册《英语作文专项复习》课件
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范文二 • My Best Friend
• • I have a best friend. She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working. • She favorite season is summer,because it's hot ,she can eat ice- cream.She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs. • Who's she? She is my best friend ---Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name,too---Angle.
原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right. 修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.
2、写作技巧之二：删除诸如“who is”或“that is”之类的关系代词， 变从句为短语，例： 句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages. 修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages. 注：把句中的“three parts”改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必 要的单词“which is written in”。我们经常可以将关系代词如“that”去 掉，这只会引起最少的变动。 3、写作技巧之三：剔除你不需要的单词，例： Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. 写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和 "telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。
三大技巧
• 1、写作技巧之一：用介词短语替代从句，例： 原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
源自文库
三大误区
• 误区一：用中文思维串联英文词汇 解决之道：强化语法
• 误区二：过分“精雕细琢”而忽视了“大 局” 解决之道：用平常心表达平常事 误区三：文章冗长细枝末节过多 解决之道：理清思路，言之有物
英语作文小句子
• 英语常用的是一些小句子，我们写作文也最好从这些小句 子入手，收集了一些这样的句子 • I don't like asparagus. (我不喜欢吃芦笋。) • Don't be picky. (不许挑食。) • 谢谢您的款待。 • It was very delicious. Thank you. • It was a wonderful dinner. (谢谢您丰盛的晚餐。) It's time for dinner! (该吃晚饭啦!) • Breakfast/Lunch/Dinner is ready! (早饭/午饭/晚饭好 了啊!) • 该吃饭啦!It's time to eat. • It's time to eat. (该吃饭啦!)
范文一
• Myself
Hi!I am a happy and quiet girl.I am from Chin.I am twelve years old,I am a pupil,I am in Class Three Gread Four.I many good friends.I like many pet,the peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are lovely.I am tall ,I have around face,these are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face.I have a black long hair.I like eatting apple banana eggpiant chicken and...I like music sing run pinting...I often saying: book is my good frieng,I like it!Whate am I?Yes,my name is Lv Enhui. • Do you like me?
英语优秀作文附老师点评
• Beijing is changing
• Every body knows that Beijing is changing. From buildings to the public transportation, everything is changing. And Beijing is becoming better and better. Last year, Beijing has hold the 2008 Olympic Games successfully and has become the focus of the world. • Beijing change is inevitable, because China is developing, and the world is developing. • The better Beijing changes, the better china changes. Yesterday, the president of U.S.A has come to visit Beijing, that means Beijing has is developed better than before. If one day I have a chance, I will develop Beijing to be the best city in the world! • 老师评语： • 文章很好，所需语法点全部有!而且文章很有深度!这样写就可以得高 分!好!继续努力!
范文二 • My Best Friend
• • I have a best friend. She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working. • She favorite season is summer,because it's hot ,she can eat ice- cream.She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs. • Who's she? She is my best friend ---Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name,too---Angle.
原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right. 修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.
2、写作技巧之二：删除诸如“who is”或“that is”之类的关系代词， 变从句为短语，例： 句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages. 修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages. 注：把句中的“three parts”改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必 要的单词“which is written in”。我们经常可以将关系代词如“that”去 掉，这只会引起最少的变动。 3、写作技巧之三：剔除你不需要的单词，例： Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. 写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和 "telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。
三大技巧
• 1、写作技巧之一：用介词短语替代从句，例： 原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
源自文库
三大误区
• 误区一：用中文思维串联英文词汇 解决之道：强化语法
• 误区二：过分“精雕细琢”而忽视了“大 局” 解决之道：用平常心表达平常事 误区三：文章冗长细枝末节过多 解决之道：理清思路，言之有物
英语作文小句子
• 英语常用的是一些小句子，我们写作文也最好从这些小句 子入手，收集了一些这样的句子 • I don't like asparagus. (我不喜欢吃芦笋。) • Don't be picky. (不许挑食。) • 谢谢您的款待。 • It was very delicious. Thank you. • It was a wonderful dinner. (谢谢您丰盛的晚餐。) It's time for dinner! (该吃晚饭啦!) • Breakfast/Lunch/Dinner is ready! (早饭/午饭/晚饭好 了啊!) • 该吃饭啦!It's time to eat. • It's time to eat. (该吃饭啦!)
范文一
• Myself
Hi!I am a happy and quiet girl.I am from Chin.I am twelve years old,I am a pupil,I am in Class Three Gread Four.I many good friends.I like many pet,the peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are lovely.I am tall ,I have around face,these are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face.I have a black long hair.I like eatting apple banana eggpiant chicken and...I like music sing run pinting...I often saying: book is my good frieng,I like it!Whate am I?Yes,my name is Lv Enhui. • Do you like me?
英语优秀作文附老师点评
• Beijing is changing
• Every body knows that Beijing is changing. From buildings to the public transportation, everything is changing. And Beijing is becoming better and better. Last year, Beijing has hold the 2008 Olympic Games successfully and has become the focus of the world. • Beijing change is inevitable, because China is developing, and the world is developing. • The better Beijing changes, the better china changes. Yesterday, the president of U.S.A has come to visit Beijing, that means Beijing has is developed better than before. If one day I have a chance, I will develop Beijing to be the best city in the world! • 老师评语： • 文章很好，所需语法点全部有!而且文章很有深度!这样写就可以得高 分!好!继续努力!