新高考英语作文写作指导和解读——高中英语应用文的训练思维(附高考英语写作提分四个训练步骤)

新高考英语作文写作指导与解读——高中英语应用文的训练思维

（附高考英语写作提分四个训练步骤）

对于高一学生的写作指导，基本围绕两个方面：基本句型的准确运用；思维逻辑的初步训练。

先说句型，鉴于这节课的学生英语水平比较薄弱，所以强化常用的套话，譬如it句型，there be句型。写作的顺序基本都从套话的模仿开始的。

再说思维，围绕：为什么，结果如何。

步骤：

1.学生的作文错误分析归类

2.实例指导

板书实例指导

这个指导过程也很有讲究的，因为我认为写作就是自然续写过程，遵守一般写作规律：列提纲和遣词造句。写作水平的提高关键就是两步：提纲中的思维的科学性；遣词造句要符合体裁的得体性。高级写作，还要关注写作的简洁性。

课堂实例的问题：

1.选择一个专业原因是什么？（1.专业的有用；

2.个人的兴趣；

3.就业的需求）

2.计算机专业的用处

学生回答：方便人们工作和生活，促进发展：

学生写：It makes people work conveniently.

这个句子没有问题，但是我们思考一下convenient更常见的表达是：make it convenient for sb to do...

3.介绍个人

我掌握了计算机的知识，所以我很适合。

I know a lot about computer science, so I am fit for the major.

措词上思考：掌握的常用表达；适合这里准确说是合格。所以我们要考虑申请信的常用的表达是：be qualified for...

所以润色后（擦掉初步的简易版本后板书）

I believe a good knowledge of computer science qualifes me for the major.

写作的教学遵守的模式非常多，无所谓高下，适合自己的风格就是最好的。就我而言，我开始摒弃体裁写作教学法（即先给例子和语料，然后模仿。这种写作方法伴随我十年的时间），原因是：这种方法容易禁锢学生的想象力，学生潜意识非要用上前面的知识，但往往写出的作文别扭，读起来很造作，更重要的是，脱离了真实的考场的环境和写作本质过程。写作过程就是：我把想到的东西组织好并表达清楚，然后在遣词造句上下点功夫。

我宁愿在写作的过程中去启发学生如何遣词造句，在这个过程中让学生发挥主动意识来积累相关语料，让他们有一种恍然大悟的感觉。这样的写作教学对于我而言才是一种享受。

题目

假定你是李华，准备明年高考后去英国某大学留学学习英国文学(或计算机科学），请写一封申请信。

内容要点：

1. 告知写信目的；

2. 你选择该专业原因和个人情况简介；

3. 表达信心和感谢。

注意：词数120左右。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir／Madam,

I am a Chinese high schoolstudent

_______________________________________________________________________________ _

Yours,

Li Hua

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I am writing to apply to get further education in computer science. There are three

reasons for my choice.

For one thing, it is known that computer science plays an important role in modern society, which makes it convenient and efficient for us to work. For another, the major can give me a competitive edge over others in seeking for jobs. This is because employers nowadays favor those with a good knowledge of computer science. Also, I have developed a strong interest in the major since my childhood.

As for me, I have achieved good academic performance in all computer science exams. I make it a habit to program every day. I believe that I am qualified for the application.

I would appreciate it if you reply to me as soon as possible.

I'm writing to apply to major in English literature in your university.

There are three reasons for my choice. To begin with, I have developed a strong interest in English since my childhood. Lost in English literature, I find a sense of satisfaction. What's more, it's known that English literature indeed plays an increasingly important role in our daily life. It not only enriches our mind but also establish cultural and emotional ties between us with foreigners. Last but not least, the major contributes to finding a good job. This is because most players favor those with a good understanding of English literature.

From where I stand, I have achieved good academic performance in all English literature exams. I